The Moons Gift Comments

  • Christy G

    Ya Damon to the rescue!

    11/04/2020 04:37

  • Tania Bouca

    omgg yes i was hoping for damon to show up and save the day 😏

    11/04/2020 03:14

  • Erin Marie Storbeck

    The moon goddess needs to make an appearance and knock some sense into the elders. I was hoping Damon would show up! He seems very team Marcus & Olivia and the elders did mention his alpha ceremony.....

    11/04/2020 01:26

  • NA💕

    omg!! things are about to go down!! it's fight time lol 😆!!

    11/03/2020 23:49

  • Reader-671139

    Marcus should demand that they look into Tyson and Samantha’s minds and find out what they have been doing!!! I keep screaming ‘Come on Marcus, turn the tables on them, be smart’

    11/03/2020 00:42

  • Christy G

    No no no no! They can't reject each other. Tyson and Samantha need to be found out.

    11/03/2020 00:10

  • Tania Bouca

    I'm hoping someone will come and stop this like maybe get some back up help from the dragons 🤣 but they cant reject each other 🥺❤

    11/02/2020 21:31

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    Please don’t do it!! do not make them reject each other!! no please

    11/02/2020 19:41

  • Reader-781148

    So I guess we now know who the ally is. Please tell me someone will stop this and that Tyson and Samantha will be found out as well?

    11/02/2020 19:39

  • NA💕

    nooooo! don’t force them to reject each other 😭! can’t they fight the council? kill them all lol...such suspense!

    11/02/2020 19:28

  • Reader-781148

    I can’t get to the next chapter????

    11/02/2020 17:39

  • Reader-781148

    no problem. looking forward to reading it.

    11/02/2020 00:58

  • Amanda Steel

    Sorry lovlies had some unexpected issue with my laptop as it decided to have its own mind and deleted the chapter so need to restart it again...So ,sorry for delay, as it will be later today due the issue and well its late hours. ill try to make it fast 😊

    11/02/2020 00:54

  • Reader-781148

    I believe it’s Tyson and Samantha but please tell me it’s going to come out that their mates and have mated please

    11/01/2020 00:22

  • Reader-671139

    Tyson and Samantha as witnesses??? or is there a twist coming??? (Such a great story)

    10/31/2020 23:45

  • Andie Richardson

    the next chapter won’t load for me. deviastated! hopefully will have by the morning

    10/31/2020 23:31

  • Erin Marie Storbeck

    I hope it's Tyson and Samantha and they get discovered as mates too. If Marcus and Olivia's scents combined then wouldn't theirs too?

    10/31/2020 21:16

  • Reader-781148

    I want to cry. I love the love they have for each other. I hope the council will change their laws after seeing how much they love each other. I’m excited for the next chapter

    10/31/2020 01:10

  • NA💕

    😭😭😭 god, the way Marcus loves Ollie! I loved this chapter. can’t wait for the next update ❤️❤️

    10/30/2020 20:01

  • Reader-781148

    ok so was I the only holding my breath waiting and wondering what was going to happen. Great chapter looking forward to the next chapter. what’s up with that necklace?

    10/30/2020 01:16

  • Christy G

    Oh my God! This is insane! Please, please let them end up together. They need each other. If you ever decide to publish this book, I will buy it...just saying. ❤❤❤❤

    10/29/2020 23:34

  • NA💕

    oh no!! please don’t separate the two of them!😭😭🥺

    10/29/2020 18:37

  • Christy G

    Oh my goodness. Poor Ollie. I think the council knows she's Marcus's mate. 😳

    10/29/2020 18:32

  • Andie Richardson

    I need the next chapter. well. I need the whole story. I’m far too invested. I snuck off at work to the toilet not feeling well to read the latest chapter. 😂

    10/29/2020 18:09

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    Wow i feel bad for Ollie !!

    10/29/2020 16:54

  • Reader-781148

    thank you

    10/29/2020 16:31

  • Reader-781148

    OMG, can’t wait for the next chapter

    10/29/2020 16:31

  • Reader-781148

    not a problem. hope you feel better

    10/29/2020 12:58

  • Reader-781148

    no update today?

    10/29/2020 00:31

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    what happened with today’s chapter?😔

    10/28/2020 23:56

  • Reader-781148

    Thanks. It’s going well. I’m over excited for the next chapter.

    10/28/2020 23:02

  • Reader-781148

    ok so I got a little behind in reading the chapters due to school work. just read the last three chapters and every one of them were good. So I think Damon’s father is the ally? Can’t wait for the next chapter

    10/28/2020 00:17

  • Christy G

    So looking forward to reading the next chapter 😀

    10/27/2020 00:35

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    Amazing!! i can’t wait to onow what is gonna happen now

    10/26/2020 23:04

  • Amanda Steel

    Hello everyone 😊 First I would love to thank you all for being such supportive and amazing readers I honestly couldn't wished for better ones ❤ Your positive inputs and support encourages me daily to write more and do better, and as that is said I would like to apologize for a little later delay on today's update, but the chapter I meant to post I honestly didn't like it so am doing it all over again. But for that I will be posting tonight two new chapters, just please be patient with me to finish up with the current one. Thank you all and am sending you all lots of love 💖💖 Stay always amazing as you all are 💖

    10/26/2020 18:53

  • Reader-671139

    Great chapter! Can’t wait to see Samantha’s reaction. Have a feeling that she isn’t going to take being pushed aside. Maybe she will double cross Tyson????

    10/26/2020 01:22

  • Reader-781148

    He is working with Tyson 100%.Sneaky sneaky sneaky great chapter and looking forward to the next chapter

    10/25/2020 21:01

  • Christy G

    Oh shoot! Marcus's dad is totally suspect.

    10/25/2020 20:21

  • NA💕

    soooo much suspense!! one more chapter pretty please 🥺🙏😊

    10/25/2020 19:25

  • Reader-781148

    I can not express how happy I am that they got caught. Thank you for this chapter and I can’t wait for the next chapter

    10/24/2020 23:28

  • Alisha Kurio

    yesssssss. I am loving this book

    10/24/2020 17:01

  • Christy G

    Awesome update! So looking forward to the next update. ❤❤❤❤❤

    10/24/2020 16:16

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    oh yeah!! Samantha and Tyson will be in for a big surprise!! i can’t wait!

    10/24/2020 16:14

  • Christy G

    Oh my goodness! Marcus and Olivia can not be separated! They love each other. Please have Tyson and Samantha get caught soon. My heart can't take it!

    10/24/2020 01:17

  • Reader-781148

    Can Tyson and Samantha please please please get caught instead of Ollie and Marcus and can it happen quickly. I hate Tyson

    10/24/2020 00:49

  • NA💕

    No please!! they are trying to separate them!! don't believe him Ollie...go to war against the council! 😂 one more update please...💕

    10/23/2020 20:40

  • Christy G

    That was beautiful! Finally...now he just needs to mark her. ❤❤❤❤❤❤

    10/23/2020 01:39

  • Erin Marie Storbeck

    The way Marcus expressed his love to Olivia☺ He seems to have matured while he was away. Thank you for 2 chapters😁

    10/22/2020 23:27

  • Reader-781148

    I’m so excited. Finally it happened and I can’t wait to see what comes next. Thanks 😊

    10/22/2020 22:06

  • NA💕

    oh yeah!!! I’m so happy, I had a feeling it would happen! so thankful we got two chapters! can’t wait for the next one! loving this story more and more 💕💕😊

    10/22/2020 20:53

  • Reader-781148

    That was beautiful. Enjoyed this chapter as well and looking forward to the next chapter

    10/21/2020 20:46

  • NA💕

    I love their moments together!! I wonder what’s going to happen at silver rock? 😉 being all alone and away hehe can’t wait for the next update!

    10/21/2020 18:57

  • Reader-781148

    wow, I think he’s the ally too. I’m proud of him for standing up to his father. I hope he finds a way for them to be together. Good chapter, looking forward to the next chapter

    10/21/2020 00:06

  • Erin Marie Storbeck

    I can see Marcus' father being the ally. my question is if he us then he must know that his mate is a siren? I hope Tyson and Samantha end up together, that conniving twosome deserve eachother😠 I love love love how Marcus is willing to leave his position and pack for Olivia😍💕 I hope she gets to know that

    10/20/2020 23:20

  • NA💕

    I really think the secret ally is Marcus father! he’s pushing the whole ceremony a lot. I love that Marcus is not going to let anything separate him from Ollie 💕😍. can’t wait for the next chapter.

    10/20/2020 21:07

  • Reader-781148

    I’m trying to figure out who could be his ally? looking forward to the next chapter

    10/20/2020 03:28

  • Christy G

    I cannot wait for Tyson and Samantha to be caught.

    10/19/2020 21:58

  • NA💕

    Oh hell no! they better not do something to separate Marcus and Ollie!! it took 2 years to get them together!! please noooo 😫 one more update pretty please 🥺💕

    10/19/2020 20:07

  • Reader-781148

    I can’t stand Samantha. I wish in the next chapter that her and Tyson get caught. Everything else in this chapter I loved. I wish the law will get changed soon

    10/18/2020 22:24

  • NA💕

    I am so happy that they are together 😂😭😍!! always looking forward for an update!! @Amanda Steel loving your work 💕

    10/18/2020 21:32

  • NA💕

    I’m so happy!! so exited and looking forward to the next chapter! hopefully tomorrow 💕💕

    10/18/2020 03:48

  • Reader-781148

    I can honestly say you are by far my favorite writer 😊

    10/17/2020 19:04

  • Reader-781148

    OMG, you have literally made my day with these two chapters and I can’t wait for the next one. Yah woohoo...

    10/17/2020 19:03

  • Reader-264357

    I honestly love this book! always on edge waiting for the next chapter.

    10/17/2020 16:12

  • NA💕

    omg!!! I can’t stop reading!! looking forward for the next chapter...hopefully today!!! 💕

    10/17/2020 14:40

  • Christy G

    More! Please, I need more!

    10/17/2020 01:48

  • Reader-781148

    thank you so much! I can’t stop smiling and sleep peacefully now. Looking forward to the next chapter

    10/17/2020 00:19

  • NA💕

    the moment I’ve been waiting for!! 😭😭💕💕...please tell me he will be there at club and will not reject her? can’t wait for the next update!

    10/16/2020 21:46

  • Reader-537518

    ughhh I just want Marcus and Olivia to be together already. Please please please it’s killing me!! lol

    10/16/2020 19:44

  • Reader-781148

    that was intense, but it’s getting interesting. I can’t for the next chapter and I’m hoping for an extra one today. please please please

    10/16/2020 17:13

  • Reader-781148

    Love it but you are killing. I was holding my breathe waiting for them to run into each other. please please I can’t wait I need more

    10/15/2020 22:57

  • NA💕

    No no no!! please, I can’t handle the suspense...😭. one more chapter today pretty please?😅 (Marcus deserves to see that!!)

    10/15/2020 21:17

  • Christy G

    Ok, I need another chapter please!

    10/15/2020 21:04

  • Reader-781148

    I am dying here please another chapter soon. I going crazy waiting please please please. Great chapter as always

    10/14/2020 23:21

  • NA💕

    Oh god!! the suspense is killing me!! 😅. will Marcus see Ollie with Tyson? omg omg please let there be another chapter today!! 💕

    10/14/2020 15:44

  • Reader-671139

    Looking forward to the next chapter.Hopefully we will find out about Lizzie and Logan too.

    10/14/2020 00:04

  • Reader-781148

    Yes, please let some find out about Tyson and Samantha soon. Looking forward to the next chapter

    10/13/2020 22:50

  • Amanda Caruana

    ohhh I want Tyson & Samantha to be found out.... they make me so mad!!!

    10/13/2020 07:10

  • Reader-781148

    wow! I feel for her. can’t wait for the next chapter

    10/13/2020 05:27

  • NA💕

    😭😭😭 poor Ollie....I hope Marcus regrets it!...please one more chapter today lol 😂

    10/12/2020 22:44

  • Reader-781148

    Lol! I can’t wait for the next chapter. Can we please have 2 chapters at a time? Please

    10/12/2020 15:57

  • NA💕

    OMG!! such suspense!! one chapter is not enough 😩😢. cannot wait for the next update!! 💕

    10/11/2020 23:29

  • Reader-781148

    enjoyed this chapter as well looking forward to the next chapter

    10/11/2020 00:10

  • Reader-781148

    Every chapter keeps me coming back for more. Enjoying the book and looking forward to the chapters

    10/10/2020 02:00

  • NA💕

    I love seeing the “update” sign!! so excited for the next chapter!!! thank you @Amanda Steel! loving this story!! 💕😊

    10/09/2020 17:43

  • Reader-781148

    I’m loving every chapter. if you can the next two chapters please

    10/09/2020 01:46

  • Reader-781148

    omg, I need the next chapter please

    10/08/2020 02:47

  • Hege Slettebø

    i can’t wait for next chapter. start reading this nigth, and i love it

    10/07/2020 21:06

  • Reader-781148

    I’m enjoying reading this book can’t wait for the next chapter

    10/07/2020 13:49

  • NA💕

    I can’t wait for the next chapter!! 💕I love this story so far. I hope that you update a chapter soon! 😊

    10/02/2020 22:23

  • Reader-781148

    every chapter gets better than last and I’m enjoying this book. can’t wait for the next chapter.

    10/02/2020 10:23

  • Shelly Hay

    currently rooting for Ollie to reject Marcus and choose damon! damon+Ollie! keeping writing, you're a great author😊❤

    10/01/2020 18:19

  • Reader-781148

    I love this story please keep updating as soon as you can. Looking forward to the next chapter

    10/01/2020 00:35

  • ashley greene

    i just finished the last chapter 😭😭😭😭😭 when will you update again? please say soon!!!!

    09/30/2020 01:17

  • jackie c

    when is the next update? I'm dying to continue reading this story. thanks author!

    09/27/2020 21:02

  • Dottie Martin

    you advertise this app as free, but I started reading it and then it locked up on me. I really don't have much money, do I downloaded this app. I'm now going to have my son close it. Regretfully yours, a disabled senior citizen

    09/27/2020 15:44

  • NurseAimz18

    I am enjoying this book so much. This is really different from others I have been reading. I can’t wait for an update. Do you have any other books like this?

    09/27/2020 10:52

  • cait

    I love the book so far. Can't wait to read on.

    09/27/2020 10:30

  • Amanda Steel

    Dear readers, First and foremost I want to thank you all for showing me your support and I apologize for the errors due the grammar as it is being edited and will be corrected soon as possible. Please be patient a little but I'll try to fix them soon as possible. I appreciate your comments and pointers and hope that you all still enjoy the story as it goes. Thank you all for understanding and wish you all a wonderful day ❤

    09/27/2020 10:28

  • Mira El Saleh

    Dear Amanda, I am sure you will try ur best to edit your grammatical errors, but if u need any help proofreading I would be happy to assist.

    09/27/2020 05:14
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