The Moons Gift Comments

  • alona mercado

    I am just bothered with the errors in grammar which seem to be more than minimal, I mean i thought this should have undergone some proofreading

    09/27/2020 04:55

  • Jennifer Christensen

    I'm kind of leary of paying for this story since in the blue/intro I've found multiple errors. I know this service is built to get new and established writers in front of readers, but I don't understand why an author wouldn't at the very least thoroughly read their own intro to ensure errors aren't posted. If I have to choose between purchasing a book where the intro has no errors and one that does, I would certainly choose the error free intro book.

    09/27/2020 00:15

  • Jennifer Christensen

    I haven't begun to read this yet, however on the blurb for the book is, "Girls lay under his feet as he is very know as a player.". I'm guessing the author meant known as a player, but whether it is or not, I'd love to see the author edit this so it is corrected. I love to read and I am an extremely voracious reader, often reading up to a book a day, however, and read ARCs and Beta for many authors. I don't know if I key on errors due to being an ARC & Beta reader or if it just happens to be a personal pet peeves, however, of I was the author I'd want to know errors to found by readers in my work, to give me an opportunity to correct them.

    09/27/2020 00:07

  • Amanda Caruana

    this is SO good!! like nothing I've read so far. can't wait to see where this book goes

    08/31/2020 00:53
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