The Alpha's Vixen Comments

  • Thenightingale

    also here is the link to my author profile https://m.anystories.app/authors/5f4b757cc5defc0015b4a381/thenightingale?utm_source=af_app_invites&inviter_id=5f4b757cc5defc0015b4a381&inviter_af_id=1648465729336-6385016668964555679

    09/10/2023 07:45

  • Thenightingale

    hi everyone! so I have been in the process of writing another novel. The title of it is Mated to the Lycan King. I tried to use the link for it but it doesn't seem to work. you can view it by clicking on my author profile and scrolling to the bottom. if you still cannot find it, let me know! looking forward to hearing your thoughts!

    09/10/2023 07:44

  • Jules Marie

    x8d9 I read ... or started reading this a long time ago. I found it wasn't my cup of tea. Kudos to the author for the efforts.

    04/02/2023 02:40

  • Kimberly Wong

    x8d9 Great storyline. I was glued to this book and had to finish it. So many different characters and backgrounds. Love it.

    04/01/2023 18:18

  • Jan T

    x8d9 #x8d9 oooooo this story sounds HOT just by reading the introduction. I can't wait to read it but I think I need to read it in private with no one around

    04/01/2023 15:00

  • Bianca Yetzke

    x8d9 i couldn’t put this down. this is my kind of book. can’t wait to read more of it.

    04/01/2023 14:36

  • zira

    x8d9 this story is awesome...i want to commend the writer...welldone author..i cant drop this book..ill follow this author from now on

    04/01/2023 09:04

  • Danield

    I gotta say you had me at the mark on her neck. Always a sexy look frm: Papi

    02/05/2023 03:19

  • Amóra Banks

    how long til we get to see anyone else POV so far its jush Jasmine..

    01/15/2023 18:18

  • Thenightingale

    Hi everyone! If you'd like to see what I am currently working on and would like to keep in touch, follow my IG: thenightingale_01

    12/13/2022 17:46

  • Vikki Woolley

    damn that's a good story really well written! gutted it's ended!

    12/02/2022 00:46

  • Thenightingale

    I'm in the process of editing! the chapters which are numbered have been edited!✨

    11/25/2022 11:49

  • Thunsula Soni

    good so far

    09/29/2022 20:38

  • Ukeme Nsi

    ❤️

    09/12/2022 02:07

  • Tracy Davis

    this is get good i need to read more

    09/11/2022 22:28

  • Amanda L B

    I have a bad feeling Macy is playing this game with Andrew and Lucien! She’s just as bad as they are. watch an see

    05/17/2022 22:37

  • Ke'Londa Escalante

    she definitely overreacted.

    01/22/2022 06:36

  • Dorla Gill

    very good with correct grammar

    01/21/2022 19:51

  • Emily Chamberlain

    the chapter titled Landon's heartbreak is missing a chunk of info.....Landon is going to take a shower and tells Jas that he lives across the hall....when she asks him what it skips to the diner scene.....do we find out why he moved in across the hall??

    01/17/2022 19:25

  • Amanda Dickinson

    this is when she needed to call her mate to help. 2 is better then one

    01/14/2022 00:33

  • Denette Gibson

    she needs time to get herself together and regroup to get the job done.

    12/27/2021 18:58

  • Bridgette Montpetit

    I am wondering what happened to your story "Her Birthright"?

    11/06/2021 07:42

  • Chenenigans

    I really enjoyed this book and can't wait to read about Lucien.

    10/15/2021 02:13

  • Cristina Mattera

    i agree. he is an ass.

    09/30/2021 19:17

  • Jourdan Coleman

    he’s an ass 🤣🤣🤣🤣

    09/14/2021 01:14

  • Scot MacGregor

    my

    09/13/2021 17:11

  • Jenilee D

    farther noose

    09/13/2021 10:06

  • dr.penguin

    damon is a little weird 🤣

    08/26/2021 22:30

  • Shuru

    I grabbed the 1st thing I see,"a black pen" 🤣🤣 seriously? 😂😂

    08/24/2021 02:30

  • Fiso Tusitala

    love it thanks a lot

    08/23/2021 01:37

  • Jasmin Prunkl

    I was dreading that Jared comes back... how could you do that nightingale??? I loved Damon sooo much, he clearly is a completely different person than he was at the beginning of the story. He is pure and gold and loveable. Lucien on the other side is tainted black and red, he's disgusting and disturbing... I'm truly terrified now... I don't know who should win... But Loren already "died" they saw her off, maybe it's ok if she dies, no it's not ok of course but it would be maybe simpler bc Jared and Landon just got together... they deserve it. Loren has no one and Oliver can be dismissed anyway and Jasmine is with Damon. So... OMG!!!

    08/21/2021 23:36

  • Jasmin Prunkl

    Damn, you're killing me, dear author!!! 😳☠️ I'm really scared and shaken what's about to happen... Jade wasn't Jade and Nancy is also after Damon?? Is she also a Vixen of Lucien? You're twists are unpredictable and unforeseeable, goddess help me.

    08/21/2021 22:49

  • Jasmin Prunkl

    Ohhh nooo!!! That bitch!!! What are they up to now??? Is she kidnapping Jasmine?? OMG, I'm so thrilled... these different varieties of wolfsbane are also getting on my nerves now... urgh... I'm sure Macy helped Oliver to escape and use this sedative... But I'm still wondering since when she's a werewolf?? 🤔🤔 She had even Damon and Landon fooled... so did she work for Lucien from the beginning or did she just changed allegiance after her kidnapping?? I love those Vixen is punishing Damon aka the bad boy/slut/bitch very much... amazingly written. But this game is tormenting me... poor Damon... and then this false snake Jade... urgh... 😒🙄🤬 now they're having a fight and he's not with her while all this madness is happening with Macy. Damon is going to hate himself for this/not protecting her enough... 😪😔😓😢😭

    08/21/2021 22:14

  • Megsh826

    between Operation Movie Night and I Love You, they went from walking around the mall to the bedroom with no transition.

    08/21/2021 18:36

  • Jasmin Prunkl

    WOW!!! Just WOW!!! You described their first time so perfectly. Thank you so much!!! I love stories where I can feel when it gets hot, when I also feel this knot in my stomach... just amazing... 🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️

    08/21/2021 09:02

  • Jasmin Prunkl

    This chapter was heart wrenching... 💔💔💔 I'm soooo sad. She shouldn't have died. But it seems the victim turned into the assaulter. I hope they catch her fast and make her regret!!! Didn't saw this twist coming though...

    08/20/2021 21:41

  • Jasmin Prunkl

    I'm soo sad, dear author. I'm crying... 😭😭😭 why is this so sad? why can't she just give in? I understand where she's coming from but so many things changed. Will they really not get back together??? My heart is breaking right now 💔💔💔

    08/20/2021 18:49

  • Jasmin Prunkl

    Wow, it's super thrilling and I'm so proud that she mastered to run away of those evil wolves Damon and Lucien. But I'm wondering if Damon knew everything about her and utterly controlled her how could he not know about Lucien and her Vixen job? And why was he mad at her about this? She was more or less like forced into this, right? And to the present: is she killing ppl as an assassin disguised as a Vixen? And who is this mysterious woman she gave the note to? Her new boss or more like a purchaser? She's definitely an alpha and it's so cool... will Damon and Lucien somehow come back into her life? Will Damon change and fall in love with her??

    08/20/2021 10:27

  • Jasmin Prunkl

    OMFG!!! Did he bit her in order to change her or is this bite a mate mark??? I'm confused...

    08/20/2021 08:44

  • Jasmin Prunkl

    Holy moly, the third chapter is amazing... I laughed so hard... dang!!! She's screwed anyway... hahaha... LOL... 🤣🤣🤣

    08/20/2021 08:35

  • Tallia Alapati

    Damon is annoying but so far, I'm liking it.

    08/19/2021 16:51

  • Joe O'Neal

    Really enjoying your work, I just hope Jasmine doesn't let her "mate" talk down to her ever again

    08/18/2021 06:41

  • XxYoomfie LuvrxX

    bruh I was rlly expecting him to be face down ass up getting pegged by her HE PLAYED MEEEE

    08/18/2021 05:10

  • Jody Carroll

    Very nice work

    08/18/2021 03:19

  • Ofa Leka

    I like having Damon’s perspective. Thanks for this chapter.

    07/26/2021 19:34

  • SOPHIA IDE

    May I ask how this app works will I be able to read the locked chapters with out buying them

    07/08/2021 06:09

  • Terri

    I'm crying now at him seeing his mom in the kitchen, I'd love if that could happen for me.

    06/14/2021 00:45

  • Terri

    4 words? I don't understand

    06/12/2021 20:36

  • Karen Cool

    I don't think she loves Lucien. I think she sees him as her savior for saving her. she had Stockholm synonym cuz of it. if anything Lucien forced his love onto her. When I comes to Damon he never pushed her to love him if anything he tried to push her away. they allowed the mate bond to get them closer and in away what they r going through now with the game is backfiring against Lucien because it's making them even stronger.

    05/22/2021 21:58

  • wh0.Ash1

    I think she should’ve put a wig on before she went out like come on now you can’t have people know what you look like

    05/22/2021 17:01

  • 440

    Omg I so cried over the loss of Loren. I really liked her character and am sad that she will no longer be in the book. But so far I love your book its very well written, good job. I cant wait to read the rest !!!!

    05/19/2021 03:46

  • CuntasaurusRex..

    This is the the most eloquently written book on this entire app! THANK YOU FOR EDITING!!!!!! but even if you hadn't edited, it's a very good story ♡ please keep writing!

    05/17/2021 00:27

  • Nadima Zen

    just a magnificent story. applause. love it.

    04/26/2021 21:45

  • GawviQ

    whaaaaat???? 😱😱😱 I'm absolutely engrossed with this story. I can't put it down. thank you author for a very well written detailed story!!

    04/16/2021 14:33

  • Fixer

    You should have made her more confident. because if he would have said that to me. I would have told him if I dicust you so much you can get your own dam coffee. I Quit and walked out. and on the way out called him and aragant jackass.

    04/12/2021 11:20

  • loyvlty

    i've read a few chapters and now since the new update they all closed again and i need to sign in to continue what is this.... 🤦🏾‍♀️

    04/08/2021 08:44

  • Emma Booker

    Don't know yet.

    04/06/2021 04:28

  • Nikki-1701

    on chapter “starting over”. and I love to read and must say not many books have made me angry, laugh and cry but “Alphas Vixen” has, sometimes in the same chapter, I love it. I find the cost per chapter fair based on other books I’ve read here and on other apps. I do wish that comments were per chapter and not for the whole book, it would allow for more specific dialogue with other readers and the writer without giving away spoilers.

    03/21/2021 20:29

  • Liz Mendez

    ok so how much is each chapter worth?? 2,000 for 1 Chapter?? ridiculous

    03/20/2021 15:58

  • Reader-891000

    loved this story! thought you did a great job with the surprises and storyline. thank you so much!

    03/17/2021 22:04

  • Suresh Suresh

    hi

    03/16/2021 06:51

  • Josie MacPherson

    Just by some of these comments I'd pay to see this in theaters. No doubt about it

    03/15/2021 02:34

  • MD MUSKAN

    hii

    03/14/2021 20:46

  • Eirini Zannetti

    This book should be a movie!!! A trilogy even!!!!! It's awesome!!!

    03/10/2021 06:03

  • Cheryl Browning

    also sounds like they are switches, not dom/sub since they seem to enjoy both sides, dominating and submitting.

    03/08/2021 02:34

  • Cheryl Browning

    in and dom/sub relationship, the sub has ALL the actual power. the dom may behave as tho they’re in charge but if the sub says their safeword, the scene ends no judgements or guilt trips. Tho they never set their soft and hard limits either. telling them say stop isn’t considered a safeword. it’s supposed to be something you don’t commonly say so as to be clear. even using green for yes, yellow for nearing their limit and red to end is better than saying stop or no. but I do love read bdsm books. and this is a really good one!!

    03/08/2021 02:33

  • Minnie Mouse

    Omg this book is soo good!!!!!

    03/03/2021 21:10

  • Mel Zettee

    😭😭😭😭Loren was my favorite.....why!?

    02/18/2021 21:08

  • Stephanie Hedgcorth

    chapter “saving him” isn’t loading

    02/13/2021 07:23

  • Victoria Brinson

    I really wish this app would let people comment on the chapters instead of on a full thread of the book....

    02/11/2021 20:31

  • Victoria Brinson

    she is probably the most difficult woman there is 😂

    02/11/2021 20:18

  • Amanda Neville

    thank you for sending this to me i loved it

    02/09/2021 20:25

  • Darcel Redman

    amazing work of art thats what this book is i love it keep up the grat work will be reading your other books

    02/07/2021 19:43

  • Thenightingale

    important! I have changed the title of my novel "Teaching River" to "Teaching the Bad Boy"

    02/07/2021 15:14

  • Thenightingale

    A special message to all of my treasured readers: We have reached 100K on this book and I am soooooooooo HAPPY! I know that perhaps it's not as many reads as other books but I personally think it's a number to celebrate so THANK you all for your endless support on this novel. Thank you for your patience and thank you for all your amazing comments that kept me going and got me to completing this novel! Thank you for your theories and for answering those little questions I ask in some of my chapters! I really appreciate and adore every single one of you!❤️🌹

    02/06/2021 09:37

  • Leo18

    Okay - I know the book is done (I think), but I still have a ways to go. I just came to express my extreme frustrations with Jasmine in the “saying goodbye” chapters. She is so infuriating! Everytime someone wants to help her, she assumes it’s because she is weak and pathetic, or that Damon is trying to ‘control’ her. Sometimes people need to be told what to do and I feel like Damon has been respecting her a lot lately. The only time he told her what to do was because she was acting like an insane person 🤯 ... people need others to bring them back to reality sometimes. And, yes, Damon is an Alpha too, but damn he has a whole pack there to help him when he needs it - even he isn’t alone. The woman better learn how to accept some GD help from people who love her or I may not have any hair left to pull out by the end of it. To answer the q at the end of the chapter where Jasmine gets all upset that she was “lied to” - she definitely overreacted. It’s one thing to be upset that she was kept out of the loop for so long, but she needed to come back to reality and realize that she wasn’t lied to. That’s a bit extreme ... her friends thought they were doing what was best, they realized their error, and they fessed up. And I would have been way more stoked if I was her knowing Damon knew now. She didn’t have to be so isolated! I was getting tired of her saying she couldn’t be with him because he could never know what she does 🙄 And then she went and blew it all up. I don’t see a huge difference in Damon keeping this from her and her keeping it from Damon. She says it’s different because lil Timmy got hurt, but I don’t really think it would have helped if she just ran to a new town. Andrew was bound to go after everyone she was connected to anyway. Lastly, I don’t get why she doesn’t have that big of a mate-pull-desire to be with Damon. I know it’s been hinted at that she needs it with her health and all, but she basically needs him around to be her strongest and she can resist him a lot easier than she should be able to. The woman needs some serious trauma therapy 😂 Okay, rant over. This is in no way a hit at the author or story. I love this book. I just needed to express my frustrations because I am so invested in this dang book and I need Jasmine to find some happiness and stop sulking in a pit of despair she put herself in 😂😂😂 I have hope. But mannnn did I need to get that out. ALL LOVE 🖤

    02/06/2021 07:01

  • Debbie Adams

    loving the bonus chapters I have missed them so much

    02/04/2021 17:01

  • Jenny Best Camacho

    so far, so good

    02/04/2021 15:01

  • Thenightingale

    Have you seen? The first Valentine's Day bonus chapter has been released!

    02/03/2021 23:18

  • FayeLadybug

    Why the f@#$ did she go back to work there?!?! I would have moved, changed my name, and appearance. WTF?!?!?!

    02/01/2021 05:21

  • Thenightingale

    A reminder to check out the sequel, "Seducing Lucien"🌹. I realise I didn't put up a link so here it is: https://anystories.page.link/oDGQ

    01/29/2021 08:11

  • Kayla Swick

    okay this might be a long comment. first of all, FINALLY I can finish this amazing story now 5hat I have coins. and finished it I did. and cried like a flipping baby whose bottom was just slapped as well. I kinda always liked lucien. i love her smart ass comments for sure. I have a feeling he'll be hilarious in the sequel. he was a bit screwed up, but who wouldn't be with a father like ambrose. speaking of which, I had a feeling that little that waffle had a bigger role to play in the devastating lives of these characters. I still say that lucien is mixing up his love for Jasmine. I still think its platonic even with everything he said. just as he was her first hand, she was also his. they gave each other hope when they didn't see or think they would have it. yes what lucien did was fucked... literally fucked and in many different positions with different intensities as well. but that wasn't him. just as Jasmine said, both Damon and lucien are idiots. you can actually see the similarities between then. you wouldn't not be able to tell they are brothers. minor stupidity clearly runs in the family. you even see it with London from time to time. at the end of the day, it was all Ambrose. Ambrose marked his kids in nightmarish ways and they all processed it differently. as for the surprises, i.e. Loren being alive, I did not guess that and am so damn happy shes alive. I'm happy they all are. I cried thinking all of those people died. pissed even. but it was so good too. overall, I really loved this story and can't wait to start reading the sequel. I swear if Ambrose somehow isn't dead and comes back to do harm to his kids, I'll kill him myself... little asshole.

    01/23/2021 08:10

  • Lauren Rendero

    oye...a warning that this was turning into psychotic horror woulda been nice....

    01/16/2021 18:58

  • Thenightingale

    Ooops I put this up on the wrong book. apologies. this book is complete so it will have no more updates, ignore my previous comment.

    01/14/2021 21:02

  • Thenightingale

    Hi everyone, updates will resume tomorrow, it's just been a little bit difficult for me these past few days💕✨

    01/14/2021 21:01

  • Justmee

    I really enjoyed Damien P.O.V.!!! Great chapter. Hopefully they're more from his side of the story. I really want to like him 😅😂🤷🏽‍♀️

    01/13/2021 15:04

  • XxKarnaxX

    Damnit the cliffhangers that might not even be cliffhangers make me need to read the next chapter but I'm trying so hard not but look at me going to the next....

    01/12/2021 11:11

  • Justmee

    Well, I usually never make it pass the first chapter. Its very hard to find good writers on here. I must say I'm impressed. Chapter 2 here I come.

    01/12/2021 11:08

  • XxKarnaxX

    ... I nearly shed years... So uncool XD

    01/11/2021 08:23

  • Ger Xiong

    this is getting more interesting. loving it.

    01/10/2021 06:37

  • Thenightingale

    Exciting news!! "Seducing Lucien" has been released!!!! you can find it by clicking on my profile at the top of the blurb of this novel or by simply searching for it in the search bar 🌹❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    01/09/2021 14:45

  • Esessanee Wallace Moten

    in the beginning it was wonderful but now it's just to much and its getting rather boring it seems as if it's never gonna get to where they fight together and not apart just too much

    01/08/2021 09:18

  • Debbie Boston

    Wednesday hurry up

    01/05/2021 21:17

  • shannon p

    So good,can't wait for book 2! I hope you get well soon!💕

    01/04/2021 23:37

  • Thenightingale

    IMPORTANT!! hi everyone! I hope you are all well! as I said in the comments section of my other novel, I am unwell... it turns out I am very unwell and as such I will be delaying the release of my new book to perhaps this weekend. I will give you more information as the week progresses. stay safe! stay healthy! sending you all my love❤️🌹

    01/03/2021 07:03

  • Kayla Swick

    thoroughly annoyed that I haven't been able to read this since my last comment... I ran out of coins! NOOOOO! So I'm seeing chapter titles and I'm dying over here. the wait will make reading it all the sweeter though. I'm just scared to see what happens!

    01/02/2021 02:12

  • terri4388

    love this book and so excited for book 2

    01/01/2021 18:44

  • Debbie Adams

    Happy New year, truly love this book and I can't wait for the next one I just want to make sure that Damon and jazz has babies. LOL

    01/01/2021 00:55

  • Amanda Caruana

    I bloody LOVED this book!! can't wait for book 2!!

    01/01/2021 00:46

  • Thenightingale

    happy new year!!! Wishing you an amazing and successful 2021!🌹❤️💕🌠🌠

    12/31/2020 22:43
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