Rogue to Luna Comments
Reader-818529
I did enjoy the book. The ending seemed a little rushed. I really hope she continues the story but with cole and winter. I never really like it when decades get skipped. And whatever happened with the journal?
04/11/2023 22:00
Mirela
2s3d I already finished the book. It was really good. From being a rogue to become a luna was a long and difficult way with many challenges and ups and downs. I'm happy she had powers and Cole accepted her as her mate and Luna even if she was a rogue.💗🐺💗
03/29/2023 13:41
Sammy
2s3d So far it's got me hooked to read more. Story is slow at first but gains momentum thereafter. Looking forward to read more.
03/29/2023 10:58
Jan T
#2s3d 2s3d I'm going to add this book to my list of books to read. the story likes addictive. I'm excited to start reading!
03/29/2023 10:43Nini A
2s3d love me a good rogue story plus she even has gifts from the moon goddess. I’m definitely going to be hooked, can’t wait to see how it ends
03/29/2023 10:31Carrie Nelson
2s3d. So far this book is well written. A little slow at first and typical biases about rogues. once you have time read the book.
03/29/2023 10:31Jill Robinson
2s3d Poor Winter is all alone after her family and pack are killed. She's survived and is smart and strong can't wait to read more she's just found her mate.
03/29/2023 10:17Marisha Joseph
#2s3d# I don't know how I missed this book but I am going to fix that. It definitely feels like a book I wouldn't be able to put down. Can't wait to start reading this.
03/29/2023 10:11Gemma Butler
2s3d I loved Audrey Fairbourn’s work in ‘Daughter of Death’ and have read some amazing reviews about this book. just started it and I’m already hooked. Can’t wait to see what happens
03/29/2023 10:08Sumriti Singh
2s3d i love the princess to rogue to Luna transformation it's strong to weak to extremely strong good writting i m still reading so can't tell WT it will entail in da the end bt a good read from the start surely....
03/29/2023 10:06Kat Waters
2s3d well u never know who your mate is going to be dont listen to the one that wants what is yours fight for your love
03/29/2023 10:06
nasnas
2s3d I heard great things about this book and will definitely give it a read once I have the time. I always love a story that sucks you in and makes you want to keep reading all the way to the end
03/29/2023 10:05Bonnie J Krisanda
love this story so far. it lures you in and makes you want to read a n
03/24/2023 02:41Linda G
can't she smell Charlotte on him? he needs to say something b4 it goes sideways and Charlotte tells her some lies
10/22/2022 23:47Shirley Humphrey
I love this book,great work on the hunt
08/29/2022 17:13Debra Weyrauch
this is a good book I would like to read more of it in stead of one chapter at a time
07/14/2022 01:03Debra Weyrauch
good work
07/10/2022 23:30Star Catlin
had to delete the book you made the alpha seem weak...
07/09/2022 11:27
Sheila Anderson-Keeley
Enjoying the book but I'm sorry but you need to use spell check or have have a proof reader. It takes away from the story when you have to go back and read a sentence again. You use the word women all the time that is the plus re al for woman.
07/05/2022 00:26Debra Weyrauch
I like what I have read
07/04/2022 23:00Reader-601715
this has been pretty good reading, however need to watc
06/26/2022 00:49Reader-986725
can’t wait to read next chapter
06/21/2022 02:48Debra Weyrauch
good book want to read more
06/05/2022 02:09Reader-438245
so much sex it’s getting old..just saying
05/27/2022 22:43louise hayward
Is this book complete or is there still updates?
05/27/2022 15:25Corrina Brodburn
wow up to chapter 11 and loving it
05/19/2022 04:58Corrina Brodburn
Chapter one what a start to a book, can't wait to see the adventures in this one
05/19/2022 04:07Reader-953930
so far I'm enjoying this book
04/19/2022 02:12Ali Bee
I really loved this book. Especially for it being the authors first book. Definitely, want more. I think at least 100 chapters would have been good. I'd have liked to read more about memories from her pack. More details on the female training. Gender reveal. AND not have quite so rushed an ending lol (I remeber being on like 67 and thinking there's no f*cking way it can end in just 3 chapters lol) and I think those details could be done with an extra 30 chapters lol but honestly overall I enjoyed it and am happy that I purchased this book. It was difficult to put it down lol Thank you for writing it!
04/18/2022 20:10Michelle F. Rivera
I can't... there are just too many errors and it is so... I don't even know the right words to describe the flow of the story. she's here or she there and Cole is all over the place too. too many errors to read thru and too many to stop and correct them constantly. sorry. I'm done
04/14/2022 11:42Kathy Kinsley
sent should be scent
03/26/2022 15:05wy z
ghvhghv1245678
03/23/2022 06:39Reader-623095
love the story cannot wait for next chapte
03/11/2022 05:29Jenny Fritsch
so I just finished this and it's good but I feel like it leaves off with a cliff hanger... so the complete is BS!
02/24/2022 02:48Pat Mashburn
slaughter
02/17/2022 14:03Nina Schwandt
I muss say: the grammar id the worst
01/22/2022 20:53kashiqua25@hotmail.com
Is it a standard staple in these books where there is an obtuse shewolf trying to get the attention of the alpha? They get the eye rolls everytime then a laugh when the luna kicks their dumb Butt.
01/21/2022 08:47
Jennifer L. Giambrone
I just go back and reread the sentence and correct it in my head I know what they're trying to say. yes she might need an editor but it doesn't mean the story is bad. I've already read this book and it was awesome!
01/17/2022 17:38Merry Lux Ward
There are many words in the English language that sound alike, yet are spelled differently & mean something totally different (but:butt; roll:role; there:their) these are just a few as example. Please, please have someone proofread for the correct term. When I come across these errors I have to re-read to get the correct word. Thank you. I love the story.
12/03/2021 23:49
Olympe Jacquel
Please, Author, don't take this the wrong way, I just want to be honest and point you out on where to progress if you want to : the storyline is interesting and catchy, but the writing is a bit lacking somehow. The style is redundant, the tense changes every few sentences, sometimes even in the very same sentence (the switch between past and present tense tends to irritate readers like me), and as in every first draft or story unedited by a professional, there are syntactical, grammatical and orthographic errors to correct (not judging, just pointing out). I am not saying your book isn't nice, you must have enough fans to reassure you on this point. I'm saying that if you want, you can up your game. Best of luck 😊
10/25/2021 09:32Jennifer
Loved the book. Thanks!
10/16/2021 18:08Denise Corey
wolves, not wolfs...
10/07/2021 16:16Jannetta Grant
nice
09/30/2021 21:29Jannetta Grant
nice
09/30/2021 21:29Eva Guzman
yes,it would be nice to have a part 2 !!
09/29/2021 14:43
Michele
think the ending could use some work. what happened to the women’s training? the mil? the women and children of the pack she just destroyed?
09/27/2021 23:31Sami
So I think this story was great, unfortunately I think the ball was really dropped in the end. For me it was disappointing there were so many ideas that could have made a WOW ending and it wasn’t. Develop a relationship with mother in law or discover why she was so mad and be like well you had it all wrong mil the whole time or why the other pack did what they did. It just felt like the author didn’t know what to do and rushed the ending.
09/25/2021 22:11
Bella Jersey 2
I like getting all this information that’s good. but we still don’t know who is danger to Winter 26
09/15/2021 16:18Bella Jersey 2
right now they are a couple of horn dogs 26
09/15/2021 16:11Bella Jersey 2
they had a lot of fun 25
09/13/2021 23:40Bella Jersey 2
that was cute scene 24
09/13/2021 23:29
WatUpG
Great story you need an epilogue what happened to the wolves she didn't kill how did her she wolves get on with their training etc just my thoughts 💜🙏
09/08/2021 22:45Brenda Jiggetts
Oh I love the story. I love you that winter was true to herself but I think she needs to incorporate both cultures. The boys should truly embrace their heritage. I really enjoyed it
09/05/2021 21:12
Heather pittman
let Cole kill that bitch
09/04/2021 22:50Camie Michelle Smallwood
werewolf's should be werewolves
09/04/2021 15:19Camie Michelle Smallwood
defiantly should be definitely
09/04/2021 15:14Camie Michelle Smallwood
women s plural or meant for more than one. should be woman when referring to one 😊
09/04/2021 15:10Camie Michelle Smallwood
wolf's should be wolves. need room proofread also some grammar errors but so far a good story
09/04/2021 14:59Bella Jersey 2
Oops phone fell it’s broken now
08/28/2021 10:17Bella Jersey 2
her pack did exist. I still nervous did anybody care that her pack destroyed? 19
08/27/2021 06:14Bella Jersey 2
that was sad cause you can see how at least his mom does not respect him as alpha 18
08/26/2021 09:51Bella Jersey 2
damn Winter can kick some ass you go girl
08/26/2021 09:45Bella Jersey 2
I don’t think they are getting our girl so easily 16
08/24/2021 18:16Bella Jersey 2
I want to see if he can keep up with her training 15
08/24/2021 18:10Bella Jersey 2
dinner was interesting some rudeness not to much 14
08/24/2021 18:03Bella Jersey 2
what is she feeling about all of this?
08/23/2021 21:57Bella Jersey 2
at least Marcus wasn’t rude
08/23/2021 21:49Bella Jersey 2
love he wanted that one perfect moment with his mate. and Athena can’t connect with her mate yet must be agony
08/23/2021 21:40Yolanda Williams
These grammatical errors are bad. I have to reread it just to get a smooth reading. sigh
08/22/2021 23:23Bella Jersey 2
I’m crossing my fingers
08/22/2021 05:25Bella Jersey 2
I repeat total badd ass 8
08/22/2021 05:12Bella Jersey 2
yes your mate is a total badd ass 7
08/22/2021 05:07Bella Jersey 2
yes you definitely have to talk to Winter find out her story 6
08/20/2021 20:59Bella Jersey 2
Winter keep the faith girlfriend 5
08/20/2021 20:51Bella Jersey 2
I think that’s a very smart way to approach her and realistic. I hope she waits 4
08/18/2021 21:34Bella Jersey 2
Cole seems willing to want to find out more about Winter. added bonus he wants to listen to her story 3
08/18/2021 21:28
Rashelle Aukema
lots of grammar mistakes and missing words but so far a good story
08/17/2021 11:23Norma j Hardy
no not dead just beat up
08/17/2021 11:15llozza10
I really hope there is a sequel! I’m so bummed out it’s over! I thought it would go longer than it did
08/10/2021 12:27Phyllis Neel
Correct... No mother she can do as she "sees" fit.
08/05/2021 05:37CJ Pirscher
I agree with Jen Harrell. I'm an avid reader with a plethora of books. I feel that this was an amazing story. Truly looking forward to the sequel 💗🌹🐉
07/26/2021 14:03CJ Pirscher
I absolutely loved this story. I hope that you do write a sequel. Thank you so much for an enthralling story and for your fabulous writing. The only suggestion I have is to check for grammatical errors but even with them it was a truly great book. 💗🌹🐉
07/26/2021 13:57Phyllis Neel
mating as in having a husband, matting as in 1. the filling of a mattress, 2. hair that hasn't been brushed in a long time.
07/25/2021 01:53Liv
IDK Chap 20haf to be the most frustrating chap to read. I understand she has been isolated for some years at a young age, but she wasn’t that young. She was old enough to know how civilized life worked that one would need more than one set of clothes and undergarments. she would know that a Luna could not traipse around in jeans and bare feet to formal functions. The chap makes it sound like her pack lived like menonites or quakers or something. While the earlier chaos made it seem like they were a fully modernized pack.
07/24/2021 20:36Krisley Brenda Rodrigues
the idea of the story is sensational, the loneliness of being a rogue to later alpha but unfortunately the writing lacked, the story misses a lot of connection of one event to another, and the writing itself needs some editing! nevertheless, the creativity is awesome as well as the storyline and I can’t wait to read more from you!
07/22/2021 21:22DeeBee
plucking out leg hair hurts so bad omfg
07/22/2021 15:07Jessica Driver
this story is very interesting
07/21/2021 01:03Reader-533555
I like the story
07/20/2021 10:23Phyllis Neel
please correct all the there/their mistakes it takes away from your wonderful story. ( I found the keys over there, they're going to meet us there, but they are (they're) having car problems so their parents will drive them.)
07/18/2021 22:30
Gracie Mackintosh
Ah, I do not like her so far, but I never tend to like the female characters so I’m willing to see how she changes/grows — if she grows at all.
07/16/2021 20:06Rina Lane
no let her live
07/14/2021 21:33Phyllis Neel
This story is good, but it could be better than good if it was proof read. Please consider doing so, it deserves to be offered to the public properly.
07/14/2021 15:16Erin Griffin
anyone consider that the issue could be in the translation between languages?
07/08/2021 18:45
Davina Harrison
This was a great story. My only slight criticism is the ending felt very rushed, but otherwise a great read.
07/06/2021 12:50Jennifer L. Giambrone
I thought you did a great job! loved the story, even with grammatical errors. I'm sure your next one will be even better!🤗
07/04/2021 04:12
Dani Udelhofen
Thank you so much for this story. It was a good storyline. Have you decided if you were going to write the sequel of the kids yet? jw Thank you for the time you put in to write this. It was pretty good for your first book. Keep going you were amazing! xoxo look forward to more of your work
06/26/2021 22:41Katy Jane Murray
Good story, good plot
06/25/2021 01:25Jen Harrell
omg yall need to stop being so critical of some of these authors grammar mistakes when I am sure most are teens and young adults. so what if u need to reread a certain part. if u want perfection go read actual published authors! not ones trying to make it through school, college, and whatever else they have going on in their life trying to get their amateur work seen and published, luckily their are apps like these that will publish their work for us to read! I for one have loved what the author has written so far and look forward to any and all updates and any future books she may write!
06/23/2021 02:51sophia moses
To read the whole book is bloody 46 pounds.. What wrong with this app for God's sake?
06/20/2021 14:51
miasiacheyenne
this is poorly written like I can’t even force myself to read this
06/10/2021 17:37
