Rogue to Luna Comments

  • Cassandra Kane

    I'm starting to think that grammar is in the process of extinction. Do they not have a word check for this writing platform? I have yet to read a well written story void of any errors. There are so many creative writers, but most of these writers lack basic grammar skills. Please read your stories before you publish.

    06/08/2021 18:41

  • Reader-814413

    this was a great story I could t out it down!! I love it so much I really hope u do or have done another I’ll def read it thank u

    06/05/2021 18:54

  • Bella Jersey 2

    let’s give he the benefit of the doubt

    06/05/2021 09:38

  • Ellen Leibfrid

    I don't think Cole knows she is the alpha's daughter yet.

    06/04/2021 20:29

  • frex

    omg its hard to get into the story when I have to stop midway through (not threw) a sentence and try to make sense of the grammar. Do ur self a favor and fix the grammar, please

    05/31/2021 11:43

  • Bella Jersey 2

    awww poor little girl

    05/30/2021 09:27

  • Dotti Bridges

    love the book so far. as for Charlotte she shouldn't die. what she needs is respect then bend over backwards to show winter how she feels. jade was in on the burning of winters pack, i just feel it.

    05/28/2021 10:39

  • S. Alkinbee

    How many times do we need to be told that Winter has a tight vagina? Did a man write this?

    05/25/2021 02:51

  • S. Alkinbee

    I am glad that you wrote Winter as a strong, independent woman. Way too many writers make their she-wolves meek, week and in constant need of help. So, thank you for making her strong.

    05/25/2021 02:17

  • S. Alkinbee

    Why for the love of the Goddess do you have that poor girl plucking her legs and pussy. She has been rogue for 5yrs, she should be a proud hairy woman.

    05/24/2021 23:54

  • Sarah

    terrible grammar 🙄🙄 needs fully editing

    05/23/2021 17:21

  • Doris Cole

    Love the story do far

    05/23/2021 03:13

  • Amanda Jackson

    so far the story line is good, but definitely needs an editor....I’m struggling to follow along with all the errors.

    05/21/2021 19:40

  • Jessica Buck

    i feel like his mom knows something. Does she know what happened to her pack or was she part of it?!

    05/13/2021 23:35

  • Michele Kampf

    Read it in less then 24 hours. Wonderful book. And amazing story line

    05/10/2021 23:46

  • mona

    Hope you will give us more stories to read. This was n good book. Thanks.

    05/09/2021 10:39

  • Nikki-1701

    on chapter 22 and enjoying the book so far. I already don’t like or trust Coles mom. please edit at some point, for a smoother read, this is a good book.

    05/05/2021 00:05

  • Wendy Virginia

    loved this book! and yes please make #2. it’d be amazing 🤩

    05/01/2021 07:26

  • mona

    I do like this, please write more Audrey. Thanks for a great story.

    04/27/2021 12:43

  • Devon Burnett

    when are you updating the next I love the story.

    04/23/2021 15:15

  • Tabitha Nichols

    how often do you update? I know that you have a life outside of this story but, I completely forgot what this book was about by the time the update came around.

    04/19/2021 02:44

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    I hope you feel well , it is been already so long g since last update .

    04/14/2021 13:29

  • Chris Brewster

    man I hope the hunters didn’t get her prego

    04/04/2021 17:57

  • Reader-036379

    I would let Charlotte and Coles mother die

    03/22/2021 00:01

  • Michele

    Hoping you feel better soon!

    03/11/2021 04:20

  • Audrey Fairbourn

    I’m so sorry to my readers I have not posted any new chapters as of yet. I plan on releasing some more when I get over this sickness.

    03/07/2021 20:45

  • Laureanne Johnson

    awww the last chapter was great. they are going to be parents. more chapter's please.

    03/05/2021 15:04

  • A'smile Alexander

    last chapter was awesome!!! hopefully this will slow her down

    03/05/2021 12:24

  • Michelle Kretz

    great story update please

    03/03/2021 09:25

  • Laureanne Johnson

    I am really enjoying this book... I am hooked. More chapter's please.

    03/03/2021 04:23

  • A'smile Alexander

    I really think the fl need a reality check. I understand her pack was different but she is in a different pack. everyone dont want their mates to be seen by other ppl. I'm glad her fight got messed up with sex no less bc she need to learn to control her wolf. I hope this teaches her a lesson and again she is only 18.....she needs a reality check fast

    03/03/2021 01:22

  • ThePokétato

    oof I would never want a guy that much older than me, but... My neighbors (13 ys ap) and my Mom (11 ys ap) seem to like the gap.

    03/02/2021 20:09

  • A'smile Alexander

    whats the 'thing' with these huge HUGE age gaps? she could've been mid 20s or something but you are taking a barely legal child and mating her to a grown a$$ man.....WHY?

    03/02/2021 15:25

  • inue windwalker

    I really dig this, it’s cute! 🥰 I can’t wait to see how this turns out!!

    03/02/2021 02:42

  • amy.

    glad I found this story it's such a good read! only on chapter 20 & I can't wait to see where you go with this😁 love a badass lead woman & a supportive alpha mate

    02/27/2021 19:58

  • Ashley Sweet

    I'm so excited for the next update. I'm really enjoying this story so far!!

    02/24/2021 00:38

  • Neva Dat

    always here for u girl can't wait for the updates

    02/24/2021 00:22

  • Gayle Wilson

    This my first read in this app and I have not been able to put the story down. I can't wait to read what you have coming next. The question about Charlotte is interesting because she, herself, just seems to be a waste of space. I, personally, am not at all interested in her so dead or not ... meh. Jade's problems with Winter are another situation. It seems crazy that she has gotten away with her behavior no matter that she is the former Luna. How was she able to have Winter thrown in the dungeon? How were the so-called warriors who beat their Luna and followed Jade's orders not severely disciplined at the very least? I am hoping your upcoming chapters have some answers to those questions. It has been such a pleasure reading your book! I look forward to seeing what more you have in store for us.

    02/08/2021 21:31

  • nupur kedia

    I really loved the storyline so far👏 when are you updating next chapter?

    02/07/2021 17:54

  • Hollstar

    I’m quite enjoying your book, however I would like to offer some friendly constructive critique, hope you don’t mind? I would suggest you check spelling and grammar, I believe there are some apps for this even? Also, whilst I love the ideas and the story you are trying to tell, I think you could slow a few things down a bit and expand on them? Maybe blend things a little more as it feels a bit like things happen too quickly or jumps from one thing to the next a lot? As for Charlotte, I would keep her alive but make her grow as a character, learn some respect from this latest incident and stop listening to Jade who is obviously egging her on in her hopeless endeavour to win Cole over...

    02/02/2021 07:30

  • Miranda White

    let Charlotte live because it gives more dynamic and conflict within the pack

    02/02/2021 01:46

  • Jamesia Shepherd

    let Charlotte live

    01/31/2021 21:12

  • Ingeborg Stokkenes

    Let Charlotte live

    01/31/2021 07:47

  • Audrey Fairbourn

    please readers I need help! I have not decided to let Charlotte live or die. so I would value your input as it is holding up me realsing more chapters.

    01/29/2021 18:47

  • Audrey Fairbourn

    because she craves power I think!

    01/29/2021 18:46

  • Aissatou Gaye

    I love the story! Why Cole's mom so mean to Winter?

    01/27/2021 20:39
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