Alpha of Alpha's Comments

  • Lauren Degnan

    I would love more chapters if chapter "Naked" isn't the end. I love love love this and my heart doesn't want it to be over lmao or a sequelllllll!!!!! Pleaseeeeee

    07/17/2023 05:36

  • Gojos Purple Queen

    I absolutely loved the warnings and how,,, well realistic they are. I love when an author is like that realistic yet entertaining. even in fiction ppl tend to expect the dumbest shyt to be real then say the dumbest shyt! I realized ppl do tht bc they’re lame, slow, have no voice or presence irl so they take on fiction life and when the author doesn’t write what they want lol they go crazy. if thts you, go get a damn life or heal or both!!!

    07/09/2023 18:05

  • miss foodieeee😋😋😋

    ok am I the only one or she warning threats are the main reason why I actually wanna read the book? 🤔🤔😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 but yea thanks for the warning but justake sure you updated recently and I hope this book finishes before I finish my other books am literally adding this book to library PLEASE don't disappoint by disappearing then update it after ages pleaseeee

    07/01/2023 21:34

  • Kyra

    I'm not sure if this is the book for me, but I love your warning in the intro ❤😄👍🏼

    05/07/2023 23:17

  • Faribach

    edit: Alpha of Alphas (plural, not possessive)

    05/06/2023 06:03

  • Sam Mcguinness

    love the book so far, why can’t I read other chapters???

    11/05/2021 16:00

  • Paige Savard-Orr

    why can’t I read the last chapter 🙃

    07/13/2021 21:38

  • miasiacheyenne

    ok so what do I go to read the ending to this book cuz this can’t be it

    07/11/2021 02:18

  • Lin

    No strong female submits without a fight. Unbelievable! SMDMFT

    06/26/2021 11:48

  • Grace Dalley

    So is this going to be reposted when the chapters are shorter or is it now gone for good?

    05/31/2021 21:10

  • Reader-148264

    what the heck? is this the end ???

    05/30/2021 14:34

  • Samm Murphy

    I've had the notification saying this is currently unavailable for days now. When will it be resolved?

    05/29/2021 04:33

  • Holli Winter

    FYI The Alpha's Virgin Tribute sounds an awful lot like this book... just a heads up..

    05/25/2021 19:54

  • Yanelies Gonzalez

    Hi author, why does the app says that the book is currently unavailable? I'm confused

    05/25/2021 04:14

  • Margie Armitage

    I am actually enjoying this book and I’ll be really annoyed if I can’t finish it after buying coins/points

    05/24/2021 23:38

  • Kezia Chrestotesia

    why is it says that the book is currently unavailable?

    05/24/2021 15:40

  • reader2121

    I’m retreading this currently and I just have to say the change in Deimos and lumina is remarkable! so well done even though I was frustrated during that period of time...it makes more sense now.

    05/24/2021 05:22

  • Dr Megha

    even though I have not started reading this book till now- which I will surely do once done writing the comments .. I loved the way the author has given the warning. I am so impressed the way the author wrote about the "mean comments". really looking forward for this book...

    05/23/2021 13:38

  • Angel Kowal

    This love story was well written and evoked emotions! The description of feelings and points of view was not whiny but clear and relatable however I sometimes had a hard time getting a clear visual of the sex scenes had to re-read it as it didn't flow smoothly at times and also had to stop to figure out the timelines as they jumped without notice. Would love to know if a book is in the works about Cronus, him finding his mate? Maybe a human mate? 😘❤

    05/22/2021 16:22

  • Deb Warren

    this is an amazing book. I love it!!

    05/19/2021 22:49

  • MaryRosa

    this is probably one of the best books I’ve ever read. I’m so happy she accepted him♥️♥️♥️♥️

    05/18/2021 03:28

  • BluezCluez

    so cute!! i’m glad things worked out for deimos and lumina, to where they are sharing a dinner table and interacting as a family. kal is so adorable

    05/17/2021 22:15

  • olliesea_bengals

    this was such a beautiful chapter. 😭😭😭 happy tears!!

    05/16/2021 05:44

  • Donna DeNardo Grogan

    So Beautiful. ❤

    05/15/2021 23:43

  • Roni S

    You write so beautifully. Your words have stirred anger, joy and everything in between. Your work is a gift we gratefully receive. Thank for sharing your talent with us.

    05/15/2021 21:45

  • miasiacheyenne

    is this the end? cuz I have never been happier

    05/15/2021 21:31

  • reader2121

    this was a beautiful chapter! I cannot wait for Phobos!

    05/15/2021 18:16

  • Lidiane Barros

    I have just re-read the whole book in antecipation of the end .... I can’t wait but I am also sad this is finishing 😢❤️🙏🏻

    05/11/2021 17:12

  • Donna DeNardo Grogan

    please let the last 3 be Happy. This story made. Happy mad .So sad I cried .I got such a knot in my stomach every time a new Chapter up loaded. Now just want Happy tears. You did a Great job making you feels what they feel❤

    05/09/2021 14:04

  • Zaida

    I've said it before and I'll keep saying it your writing gives me chills and I love it! Such an amazing chapter!

    05/07/2021 15:35

  • Holli Winter

    Is Let me love you the end? This is such an interesting book, it definitely sparked some strong emotions!!

    05/05/2021 02:57

  • Mel West

    beautiful and most amazing storie! i tried reading the edited version but my screen just goes black?

    05/03/2021 15:34

  • Cassi1234

    lizzy Fatima this is such a great book I have read many werewolves novels and so forth and I love how you have created something didn’t especially how you announce them as Female and Male I just love it good work 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼

    05/03/2021 09:46

  • Lidiane Barros

    beautiful!!! oh I said it last week that they needed a little girl pup and I was right!!! yes they need another pup a little girl ! I love them thank you

    05/02/2021 20:49

  • reader2121

    great chapter...it made up for all the difficult ones but I am glad that she stood up for her worth. hopefully now the way he loves her will change her person for the better.

    05/01/2021 13:31

  • reader2121

    when will you start updating Phobos?

    05/01/2021 13:25

  • Sandie

    is it just me or do lumina always find a problem or something she can be mad about or bring up all the time so Deimos can get mad or frustrated! just be happy, patient and be grateful! with that said, then I like the story a lot (except for what I just wrote).

    05/01/2021 01:50

  • Kayla Swick

    I could die of happiness for them right now. I'm scared the story is coming to an end and it feels like their true love has just started. I don't want it to end! not yet!

    04/30/2021 22:08

  • Melody Cawthra

    I absolutely love this story & the way you write. there is real emotion in the words that pulls me in and relates to the characters.

    04/30/2021 21:43

  • Lidiane Barros

    can’t for the next update i wished I had waited to start this book its so beautiful... i love Deimos they beed to be back and have a little girl next to strong as her Mum 🥰

    04/30/2021 09:41

  • Fatima

    Is this the edited version of the original?

    04/28/2021 18:58

  • Blue Fish

    OMG I am in love with this story. You're very gifted at story writing. Can't wait for the update. I recently lost my husband and your story really hit home for me. Thank you.

    04/20/2021 19:43

  • Jennifer Larimer

    I absolutely love this story. just wish the updates came more often

    04/20/2021 04:55

  • Zaida

    Aww I'm so happy for her and the direction they're heading. This was such a sweet chapter. I'm glad her wolf was able to bond with him

    04/19/2021 14:46

  • olliesea_bengals

    Best update a such a good well thought out long chapter. I love it.

    04/17/2021 20:55

  • Bella Jersey 2

    Deimos is observant. he expects total truth but him and the rest are keeping secrets. I hate her wolf crying

    04/13/2021 04:33

  • Bella Jersey 2

    there was some wise words spoken here

    04/13/2021 04:14

  • Binge Reader

    He has finally taken a right step toward earning her back. He has set the future right for their son.

    04/11/2021 03:56

  • miasiacheyenne

    she does not deserve him

    04/11/2021 03:38

  • Donna DeNardo Grogan

    I saw another post from someone. I starting reading from the beginning. They were right it has only been a few months I was mad at her for not forgiving him . But at the beginning he hurt her so much.She cryed and poured her heart out to him for so long. And than with Cronus Sister. etc. I am glad they are getting there now.

    04/11/2021 03:21

  • Jesi

    Ahhhh! So good! I’m always so sad when a chapter ends, haha. I’ve read this book to where it’s current, 3 times now. Can’t get enough! As someone mentioned previously, it really is like reading poetry. So unique and beautifully written. Fantastic author, truly brilliant! Always looking forward to the next update!

    04/11/2021 03:09

  • Lola Nicole Lopez

    is the book over or is there an update coming soon?

    04/08/2021 19:50

  • Holli Winter

    When is she going to go into heat again? That made a dramatic change in character relationships.

    04/06/2021 13:31

  • Mel Rock

    Also for those saying Lumina is selfish, remember this, it took "years" for Deimos to accept her even though she kept showing him her love for him. Shes only pushed him away for 5 months and I think we all can tell shes close to breaking and taking him back. Plus talk is cheap, with what he did this chapter he has shown her he puts her first. She will accept him again after this...I know it😊

    04/05/2021 22:18

  • Mel Rock

    I dont think Lumina is selfish. She was betrayed by him and regardless if he did it to protect her and their child, he hid it from her and hid the women of sin from her which would be another stab and the chosen even says "he cared enough to hide me from you". I dont think Demois cared about her but it would be another blow to me. She felt he always chooses his traditions over her his mate his partner. Lumina is afraid to let him back in, afraid to be hurt by him again and shes angry with him, rightfully so. It's only been 5 months so that's not much time to heal and move past it. I do want them back together, I love Deimos but he has to show her with his actions that her heart is safe with him.

    04/05/2021 22:07

  • Mel West

    I feel Lumina is being a real selfish brat, he didn’t even sleep with the chosen and she killed her. yes he should have told her, but she is not giving him a chance. she waited for him she knows him why does she keep fighting and making things so sour?

    04/04/2021 17:07

  • Zaida

    Now thatsa huge step and I'm here for it! Also random question, has she ever shifted into her wolf?

    04/04/2021 16:13

  • Roni S

    I noticed many commenting on the FL's selfishness. But I see her actions are stemming from her fears. Every time she opened her heart to receive him, he broke it. Her forgiveness repayed with an even greater transgression. If she decides to do so again, and he betrays her, will she have anything left to repair her brokenness? She fears being that vulnerable to him again, with reason. Earning trust when you have repeatedly betrayed someone is not easy. You must earn it. The ML lead is finally demonstrating worthiness through concrete actions. But is it too late?

    04/04/2021 15:26

  • Lidiane Barros

    Great chapter he did so much for her already and this was the last thing he needed to do so if now she doesn’t start giving in I will be utterly disappointed... he will suffer anger from his own pack for her she needs to stand by him now !!! its about time before she truly loses him for thr other girl.....

    04/04/2021 08:48

  • HollandDaze

    great chapter !!!! so glad for the update!

    04/04/2021 03:14

  • Carol Dionne

    I understand her being pissed but this is over kill..Literally nothing happened 🙄 she is just being a B at this point..over her and her attitude..maybe he should do something so she can have something to be mad about 😒

    04/04/2021 02:38

  • miasiacheyenne

    this is just beyond ridiculous with her. she is incredibly selfish and refuses to acknowledge she’s the problem not him

    04/04/2021 00:15

  • Mawusi Ford

    omg l love Deimos he has changed so much 😭😭😭 he is trying

    04/03/2021 22:33

  • Elin Kähäri

    Im sooooo sad this cant be 😩😭😭😭

    04/01/2021 23:54

  • Sandra Aguayo

    this book is sooo good I’m hooked any ideas as to when the next chapter will be

    03/30/2021 21:16

  • Carol Dionne

    so you mean to tell me you traveled 5 days slept in a truck washed in a cold river only to get to him and not let him kiss you?!?! wow

    03/30/2021 02:08

  • Zaida

    I'm so torn! I'm still on her side with wanting to be hesitant because every time and I mean EVERY. TIME. she let's him in and forgives him another pain filled bucket is dumped on her and I'm tired for her! I see and acknowledge his efforts, I truly do, but unless he's ready to lay everything on the table and and continue this momentum of being open with her....I'm not sure. I want them together I do but I want her heart to be safe with him above all else

    03/29/2021 00:54

  • Bobbi Saunders

    loving the story lizzie keep me coming, keeping on the edge of my seat

    03/28/2021 14:43

  • Lidiane Barros

    even seeing him on that state all he thinks about is her and she still trying to be cold ans push him away .... come on let it go now

    03/28/2021 04:03

  • miasiacheyenne

    she does not deserve him at this point. shes incredibly selfish

    03/28/2021 02:57

  • reader2121

    at this point, is she truly deserving of him? she’s getting on my last nerves.

    03/27/2021 20:36

  • reader2121

    at this point, is she truly deserving of him? she is getting on my last nerves.

    03/27/2021 20:35

  • Mawusi Ford

    Beautiful update l love the real ness of your writing

    03/27/2021 19:39

  • Bella Jersey 2

    my protection: I think he enjoyed the punishment too. I think he was scared she protected or helped not out of duty. she went to help her mate cause she loves him.

    03/26/2021 07:32

  • Sandra Aguayo

    damn this book was great it had me crying laughing all emotions hope you have another book I give prompts to you author great book

    03/25/2021 18:19

  • Bella Jersey 2

    Seduction and punishment: that is sad lonely life lead. to be loved by other. but when you get home the one that’s supposed to love you want nothing to do with you

    03/25/2021 07:32

  • Bella Jersey 2

    my king: she is one of those woman that knows which battle to choose

    03/25/2021 04:25

  • Samantha Kaylan

    I have been binge reading for the last 3 days. My heart has been hurting 💔

    03/23/2021 01:16

  • Drea Harper

    is there supposed to be pictures in this novel? cause I dont see any.!?

    03/23/2021 01:08

  • Zaida

    My soul breathes.....I got goosebumps from that line

    03/22/2021 18:20

  • ingrida dapkute

    how often updates are coming? just finished reading, don’t wanna check everyday for updates so would be nice to know when can expect for next update

    03/21/2021 14:31

  • Bella Jersey 2

    choices and new beginnings: I’d be getting in lot of trouble

    03/21/2021 08:16

  • MaryRosa

    I love this damn book so much. I love them together

    03/21/2021 01:53

  • Renae

    When is the next update? I love this story, your diction, the plot twists and turns. You are a great writer

    03/21/2021 01:20

  • Mìtsy

    Naah she is getting me mad, I can’t read it no more... she is getting on my nerves. will it be necessary for him to die so she can remember she loves him? 🤦‍♀️

    03/20/2021 15:06

  • Lidiane Barros

    alright im losing the interest not just because updates take long I can wait but mostly because this game she is playing with him is taking too long now I thought this last chapter was the turn point but she is still saying no to him so why invite him there ? nah I lost it....

    03/20/2021 13:19

  • Bella Jersey 2

    alpha of alpha’s: what could she do? I think he chose this time on purpose. be careful Deimos this is only round 1

    03/19/2021 21:52

  • miasiacheyenne

    I swear if she doesn’t get over her shit after this last chapter I’m lose it. Deimos is everything! I want a Deimos

    03/19/2021 20:19

  • Eve Courchene

    *Snap Snap Snap* You tell em!! I am not going to lie, the reason why I am going to read this book is because of the authors "Stright to the point" additude. I can tell even before I read this book that's it going to be awesome. Now if you excuse me I am going to binge read this baby!! lol

    03/19/2021 05:31

  • HollandDaze

    I’m so in love with this story; so bittersweet! I really hope they can figure things out and enjoy each other. it’s so frustrating that they can’t communicate with each other! Also, I hope we hear more about his brother and his mate soon!!!!!

    03/18/2021 16:26

  • MaryRosa

    I love how she’s such a badass at the beginning of the story but now I picture an immature 18 year old girl. weird

    03/18/2021 11:24

  • Bella Jersey 2

    alpha: I hope what ever happened to that she wolf she will get over it

    03/18/2021 00:54

  • Prettymoon

    I luv luv luv the book Lizzie!!

    03/17/2021 19:04

  • Zaida

    Thats not funny! You had me bawling my eyes out! And I've gone through half a box of tissues!

    03/16/2021 14:57

  • Shannon Kirkpatrick

    To be perfectly honest the updates are taking so long that I've lost intrest. I was emotionally invested, very good story line and I had a hard time putting it down but now I have moved on.

    03/16/2021 03:19

  • kittyXO

    I can’t handle the sadness :( I just finished the last chapter and it upsets me so much. I don’t understand why she cannot move past this! he didn’t do anything wrong! she is putting him through hell :( but I will say I absolutely love this book so much and I feel a connection to the characters. I would love a story about Cronus and his mate or even Luminas beta. thank you for sharing this wonderful world with me :)

    03/13/2021 14:33

  • Randy rat

    when are you going to update?

    03/12/2021 17:46

  • Beverly Leech

    good so far

    03/12/2021 08:50

  • Vernita Carter

    She makes me sick she worry if he speaks the truth when she refuse to do so

    03/12/2021 05:41

  • Jennifer Koski

    Love this book, very beautifully written ❤

    03/12/2021 04:05
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