Alpha of Alpha's Comments

Visitor

love this book so far ,but can they get back together now..

Visitor

very nice book so far

Visitor

not bad he's a bit of a asshole.

Sharon D'souza

is this the same as alphas virgin tribute?

Lauren Degnan

I would love more chapters if chapter "Naked" isn't the end. I love love love this and my heart doesn't want it to be over lmao or a sequelllllll!!!!! Pleaseeeeee

miss foodieeee😋😋😋

ok am I the only one or she warning threats are the main reason why I actually wanna read the book? 🤔🤔😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 but yea thanks for the warning but justake sure you updated recently and I hope this book finishes before I finish my other books am literally adding this book to library PLEASE don't disappoint by disappearing then update it after ages pleaseeee

Kyra

I'm not sure if this is the book for me, but I love your warning in the intro ❤😄👍🏼

Faribach

edit: Alpha of Alphas (plural, not possessive)

Sam Mcguinness

love the book so far, why can’t I read other chapters???

Paige Savard-Orr

why can’t I read the last chapter 🙃

ok so what do I go to read the ending to this book cuz this can’t be it

Grace Dalley

So is this going to be reposted when the chapters are shorter or is it now gone for good?

beautiful and most amazing storie! i tried reading the edited version but my screen just goes black?

this was such a beautiful chapter. 😭😭😭 happy tears!!

so cute!! i’m glad things worked out for deimos and lumina, to where they are sharing a dinner table and interacting as a family. kal is so adorable

reader2121

I’m retreading this currently and I just have to say the change in Deimos and lumina is remarkable! so well done even though I was frustrated during that period of time...it makes more sense now.

Donna DeNardo Grogan

I saw another post from someone. I starting reading from the beginning. They were right it has only been a few months I was mad at her for not forgiving him . But at the beginning he hurt her so much.She cryed and poured her heart out to him for so long. And than with Cronus Sister. etc. I am glad they are getting there now.

Jesi

Ahhhh! So good! I’m always so sad when a chapter ends, haha. I’ve read this book to where it’s current, 3 times now. Can’t get enough! As someone mentioned previously, it really is like reading poetry. So unique and beautifully written. Fantastic author, truly brilliant! Always looking forward to the next update!

reader2121

great chapter...it made up for all the difficult ones but I am glad that she stood up for her worth. hopefully now the way he loves her will change her person for the better.

Melody Cawthra

I absolutely love this story & the way you write. there is real emotion in the words that pulls me in and relates to the characters.

Kezia Chrestotesia

why is it says that the book is currently unavailable?

Carol Dionne

I understand her being pissed but this is over kill..Literally nothing happened 🙄 she is just being a B at this point..over her and her attitude..maybe he should do something so she can have something to be mad about 😒

This love story was well written and evoked emotions! The description of feelings and points of view was not whiny but clear and relatable however I sometimes had a hard time getting a clear visual of the sex scenes had to re-read it as it didn't flow smoothly at times and also had to stop to figure out the timelines as they jumped without notice. Would love to know if a book is in the works about Cronus, him finding his mate? Maybe a human mate? 😘❤

Samm Murphy

I've had the notification saying this is currently unavailable for days now. When will it be resolved?

Holli Winter

FYI The Alpha's Virgin Tribute sounds an awful lot like this book... just a heads up..

Deb Warren

this is an amazing book. I love it!!

she does not deserve him at this point. shes incredibly selfish

Donna DeNardo Grogan

So Beautiful. ❤

He has finally taken a right step toward earning her back. He has set the future right for their son.

can’t for the next update i wished I had waited to start this book its so beautiful... i love Deimos they beed to be back and have a little girl next to strong as her Mum 🥰

Kayla Swick

I could die of happiness for them right now. I'm scared the story is coming to an end and it feels like their true love has just started. I don't want it to end! not yet!

I've said it before and I'll keep saying it your writing gives me chills and I love it! Such an amazing chapter!

Donna DeNardo Grogan

please let the last 3 be Happy. This story made. Happy mad .So sad I cried .I got such a knot in my stomach every time a new Chapter up loaded. Now just want Happy tears. You did a Great job making you feels what they feel❤

My soul breathes.....I got goosebumps from that line

reader2121

this was a beautiful chapter! I cannot wait for Phobos!

Naah she is getting me mad, I can’t read it no more... she is getting on my nerves. will it be necessary for him to die so she can remember she loves him? 🤦‍♀️

Victoria Brinson

Cronus is so sweet to me! He is there to cheer her up and the only reason the alpha is showing interest is bc he is jealous right now! smh

Blue Fish

OMG I am in love with this story. You're very gifted at story writing. Can't wait for the update. I recently lost my husband and your story really hit home for me. Thank you.

alright im losing the interest not just because updates take long I can wait but mostly because this game she is playing with him is taking too long now I thought this last chapter was the turn point but she is still saying no to him so why invite him there ? nah I lost it....

Elin Kähäri

Im sooooo sad this cant be 😩😭😭😭

Reader-962428

Good book. Very well written.

Drea Harper

is there supposed to be pictures in this novel? cause I dont see any.!?

Bella Jersey 2

Seduction and punishment: that is sad lonely life lead. to be loved by other. but when you get home the one that’s supposed to love you want nothing to do with you

is this the end? cuz I have never been happier

Bella Jersey 2

my king: she is one of those woman that knows which battle to choose

beautiful!!! oh I said it last week that they needed a little girl pup and I was right!!! yes they need another pup a little girl ! I love them thank you

Now thatsa huge step and I'm here for it! Also random question, has she ever shifted into her wolf?

Carol Spriggs

Read this book, you will not want to put it down.

Prettymoon

I luv luv luv the book Lizzie!!

reader2121

at this point, is she truly deserving of him? she’s getting on my last nerves.

She is being too much right now. I mean I understand what he did was wrong but she is not trying at all to see his side, and she is an Alpha as well so she should understand and talk to him to try overcome this situation but she just pushes him away... bringing up the way he treated he in the start seems like a low move at this point I mean if they have come this far and she still brings it up maybe she has been this whole time just pretending she forgave him 🙄 I don’t understand how she hates him so easily and says it to him... I am dying to see him stop chasing her so she can learn that everyone has a limit and she should stop taking him for granted!

i understand that she was hurt but nos its for us to see happiness again I want tonsee them as a family now. its time for forgiveness she showed him the tradition was wrong and they shall adapt but enough of them being apart now she is crossing a line now hurting him way too much.

Cassi1234

lizzy Fatima this is such a great book I have read many werewolves novels and so forth and I love how you have created something didn’t especially how you announce them as Female and Male I just love it good work 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼

Selena Vega

I hope her and Deimos can find a way to each other. The moon goddess obviously put them together for a reason.

I’m so in love with this story; so bittersweet! I really hope they can figure things out and enjoy each other. it’s so frustrating that they can’t communicate with each other! Also, I hope we hear more about his brother and his mate soon!!!!!

I love how she’s such a badass at the beginning of the story but now I picture an immature 18 year old girl. weird

Bernice Faloon

wish to finish this....

Brandy MacKenzie-Pennington

when will the next update be, love it

Sadee Chavez

Oh my goodness I'm so hurt for her.

Bobbi Saunders

loving it so far

Holli Winter

When is she going to go into heat again? That made a dramatic change in character relationships.

Beverly Leech

good so far

Dr Megha

even though I have not started reading this book till now- which I will surely do once done writing the comments .. I loved the way the author has given the warning. I am so impressed the way the author wrote about the "mean comments". really looking forward for this book...

Best update a such a good well thought out long chapter. I love it.

How many years have they been together?

Carol Palmer

I like her better strong not crying behind this dude..like you are the Queen sis hold your head up!!

Beautiful update l love the real ness of your writing

I'm so torn! I'm still on her side with wanting to be hesitant because every time and I mean EVERY. TIME. she let's him in and forgives him another pain filled bucket is dumped on her and I'm tired for her! I see and acknowledge his efforts, I truly do, but unless he's ready to lay everything on the table and and continue this momentum of being open with her....I'm not sure. I want them together I do but I want her heart to be safe with him above all else

Holli Winter

This book is great, any chance of an update soon?

I feel like her hate is TOO much. I mean I get it, but at the same time he has done EVERYTHING for her and I do mean everything and yet she gives nothing. like she doesn’t even bother to see things from his side, take in what Cronus has said about his upbringing, traditions that were imbedded into him and forced into. she has literally done nothing but demanded everything. then she goes and says she hates him knowing that is the final straw? idk I’m over her character and her selfishness. not once has she tried to see anything from his side but demands everything. doesn’t even bother try to help change the laws/traditions nothing. just cause a whole lotta hate and pain towards Deimos and Ragon. the way it goes he will always lose no matter what, especially when all he does is put her first.

Maneka Mathews

I hate the way she has treated him in these last few chapters. no he is not perfect but you of all should know that traditions are imbedded. she did not stop until she broke him and even though she saw what he went thru I feel she didn’t care. my heart hurts for him and his child that she did keep away from him.

Mel Rock

Also for those saying Lumina is selfish, remember this, it took "years" for Deimos to accept her even though she kept showing him her love for him. Shes only pushed him away for 5 months and I think we all can tell shes close to breaking and taking him back. Plus talk is cheap, with what he did this chapter he has shown her he puts her first. She will accept him again after this...I know it😊

Aww I'm so happy for her and the direction they're heading. This was such a sweet chapter. I'm glad her wolf was able to bond with him

Sandra Aguayo

this book is sooo good I’m hooked any ideas as to when the next chapter will be

Victoria Brinson

she expects Cronus to stay with her when he is feeling the same way she is. She isnt his actual mate but he cares for her. selfish! lol but I do like this story!!

Bella Jersey 2

my protection: I think he enjoyed the punishment too. I think he was scared she protected or helped not out of duty. she went to help her mate cause she loves him.

Edie Gyorki

how often does this update. I binge read and now check for updates all day every day.

Laura Lea Camutin Garcia

Cronus is an idiot!!!

You write so beautifully. Your words have stirred anger, joy and everything in between. Your work is a gift we gratefully receive. Thank for sharing your talent with us.

how often updates are coming? just finished reading, don’t wanna check everyday for updates so would be nice to know when can expect for next update

Mel Rock

I dont think Lumina is selfish. She was betrayed by him and regardless if he did it to protect her and their child, he hid it from her and hid the women of sin from her which would be another stab and the chosen even says "he cared enough to hide me from you". I dont think Demois cared about her but it would be another blow to me. She felt he always chooses his traditions over her his mate his partner. Lumina is afraid to let him back in, afraid to be hurt by him again and shes angry with him, rightfully so. It's only been 5 months so that's not much time to heal and move past it. I do want them back together, I love Deimos but he has to show her with his actions that her heart is safe with him.

great chapter !!!! so glad for the update!

Bella Jersey 2

choices and new beginnings: I’d be getting in lot of trouble

Samantha Kaylan

I have been binge reading for the last 3 days. My heart has been hurting 💔

Laura Lea Camutin Garcia

Cronus leveled the playing field, yes!!!!

Renae

When is the next update? I love this story, your diction, the plot twists and turns. You are a great writer

Sandie Egholm Svare Petersen

is it just me or do lumina always find a problem or something she can be mad about or bring up all the time so Deimos can get mad or frustrated! just be happy, patient and be grateful! with that said, then I like the story a lot (except for what I just wrote).

SweetThang

I enjoy dark romance (fav) hope it's worth reading and dark enough for me.

Eve Courchene

*Snap Snap Snap* You tell em!! I am not going to lie, the reason why I am going to read this book is because of the authors "Stright to the point" additude. I can tell even before I read this book that's it going to be awesome. Now if you excuse me I am going to binge read this baby!! lol

Allison Underdonk Peterman

I havent even read this yet and I also can handle dark stories but cheating for some reason is a real rough trigger for me so I'd like to know ahead of time. I like how realistic and up front you were in the description this was the only part that wasn't included. if it doesn't I think this book will be what I am looking for in a story

Derek Bryant

wow you really captured the emotions of them. Bravo

Donna DeNardo Grogan

She is getting me mad. But please let them finally be Happy. .

Donna DeNardo Grogan

come on He is pouring his heart out. Now she is getting me mad.

erinkate33

did I miss when he bought her the necklace at the market?

Tiffany Bryant

I really like this book. it's different from the others. very well written

Leeanne Donaldson

This is a fantastic read love it 😍📖👌

Susan Anderson

I have never had a book hit me as hard as this one has. I found myself crying several times because I felt Lumina's pain. Very good book!

rajahh_

love this, when will there be an update?

Samantha Dogan

Just out of curiosity what defines a dark romance?

No strong female submits without a fight. Unbelievable! SMDMFT