Alpha of Alpha's Comments

what the heck? is this the end ???

Bella Jersey 2

Deimos is observant. he expects total truth but him and the rest are keeping secrets. I hate her wolf crying

Bella Jersey 2

there was some wise words spoken here

I feel Lumina is being a real selfish brat, he didn’t even sleep with the chosen and she killed her. yes he should have told her, but she is not giving him a chance. she waited for him she knows him why does she keep fighting and making things so sour?

even seeing him on that state all he thinks about is her and she still trying to be cold ans push him away .... come on let it go now

this is probably one of the best books I’ve ever read. I’m so happy she accepted him♥️♥️♥️♥️

Holli Winter

Is Let me love you the end? This is such an interesting book, it definitely sparked some strong emotions!!

I have just re-read the whole book in antecipation of the end .... I can’t wait but I am also sad this is finishing 😢❤️🙏🏻

Carol Palmer

I don’t know if I’m allowed to say this but Aragon and Elariam are cockblockers..lol

when are you going to update?

Bella Jersey 2

alpha: I hope what ever happened to that she wolf she will get over it

Vernita Carter

She makes me sick she worry if he speaks the truth when she refuse to do so

Fatima

Is this the edited version of the original?

she does not deserve him

I absolutely love this story. just wish the updates came more often

reader2121

when will you start updating Phobos?

Bobbi Saunders

loving the story lizzie keep me coming, keeping on the edge of my seat

Lola Nicole Lopez

is the book over or is there an update coming soon?

Carol Dionne

so you mean to tell me you traveled 5 days slept in a truck washed in a cold river only to get to him and not let him kiss you?!?! wow

Jennifer Koski

Love this book, very beautifully written ❤

Reader-837079

hi i love this book but I want to ask if there will be any cheating involved reading further? I just want to stop before I go ahead if there is seeing as that is a subject that heavily triggers me and I wouldn’t feel comfortable continuing.

Nichole83pa

Wow... Just WOW! This story is AMAZING! Can you tell me how often you do updates? I love this story and have read it twice in the past week. The suffering is just so heartbreaking and you can feel the emotions of both of them. I do hope Lumina can forgive him. I think they have suffered alone enough. Give us some happy chapters soon! Kal needs a sibling ASAP!!

Mel Rock

Lizzy Fatima I love your book. You're a wonderful author. I was half way through my Stephen king book when I started yours now I'm on the 3rd reading of yours and my other book sits untouched. I've never chosen another author over my favorite Stephen King until yours. I cant wait for the next update. Have you written other stories?

Reader-659559

empty bladder not uterus when urinating

reader2121

at this point, is she truly deserving of him? she is getting on my last nerves.

Great chapter he did so much for her already and this was the last thing he needed to do so if now she doesn’t start giving in I will be utterly disappointed... he will suffer anger from his own pack for her she needs to stand by him now !!! its about time before she truly loses him for thr other girl.....

Bella Jersey 2

alpha of alpha’s: what could she do? I think he chose this time on purpose. be careful Deimos this is only round 1

Edie Gyorki

love this story

Shannon Kirkpatrick

To be perfectly honest the updates are taking so long that I've lost intrest. I was emotionally invested, very good story line and I had a hard time putting it down but now I have moved on.

Madison Fears

Is itme or have I missed the female protagonist's name?

Jesi

I’m upset because I’m all caught up and devoured this book over the last couple days. It’s SO good, what a talented author! Is there a regular schedule of updates? I shall be checking religiously! lol.

Quinisee

I haven’t even read the book and I already know I’m going to love it. just by reading the whole intro. I love dark romance so excited

Fari

why doesn’t anyone uses her name? he always say mate

Thats not funny! You had me bawling my eyes out! And I've gone through half a box of tissues!

Kim Stewart Blankenship

I love this story and am looking forward to updates!! Hopefully they will be here soon🙂I really hope that Deimos and Lumina find they’re way back to each other

Hernandez Giuliana

This book is amazing , such a beautiful soul you are!! the way you write i love it.. and i want Cronus to be with her! you cannot hurt someone you love

kittyXO

I can’t handle the sadness :( I just finished the last chapter and it upsets me so much. I don’t understand why she cannot move past this! he didn’t do anything wrong! she is putting him through hell :( but I will say I absolutely love this book so much and I feel a connection to the characters. I would love a story about Cronus and his mate or even Luminas beta. thank you for sharing this wonderful world with me :)

when do we know when a year has passed?

this is too much! she is being a drama queen now the guys is doing all he can he is broken he became a shell the least she ca do is try and actually talk to him just not accusations talk through it the tradition etc make him change things he has proved himself and now she is the one being a B!

I am a movie and book enthusiasts and many movies have made me cry, but never a book. The emotions and feelings in this book blew me away. I can't wait to finish reading it.

Kayla Swick

I've noticed that some people are saying she's too harsh or too cut throat for what she's doing to Deimos, but in a sense, I get it. 1) they appear to me to have more animalistic natures than human even if the two souls are separate. 2) lumina isn't the only one hurt, but her wolf as well. yes he wolf misses him and wants her mate, but she's also angry. it makes sense that Lumina's anger is as bad as it is, not to mention as an Alpha, she is offended. and 3) Deimos has constantly hurt Lumina. whether it be the way he was rejecting her in the beginning, making her believe (at first) that he cared for her when all he wanted was an heir from her or what he's done recently which was keep secrets from her knowing that when she did find out, it would hurt her. he's lied, and in a sense emotionally abused her. doesn't mean what she's doing is right, but it makes it easier to understand why she's acting as she is. I believe they will work it out. lumina feels betrayed yet again. how many times can someone feel as though they have been betrayed and not lash out as she has. not to mention, the feeling of betrayal wasn't leaving as Deimos refused fo send his chosen away once more after getting a male heir. he let her stay knowing her very presence was causing Lumina turmoil. I don't like or dislike how lumina is acting. to me, it comes off as kind of realistic. if it were me, I'd be just as harsh after everything she's been through.

Ashlee Swafford

love this so much. my heart is broken for them both and I’m hoping to see some happiness come after all the hurt and pain they have both had. can’t wait to read more!