Untouchable (The Moonlight Avatar Series Collection) Comments

Pklj Ghj

nub tycoon game but I have a lot

Ta1sha

I’m so nervous for kiya and how things will go when Nero sees her

Ta1sha

I love halimas attitude towards getting better. I hope this is good coming her way finally

Reader-983354

I have forgiven Neron he has changed and I want them together. He is doing his best to show that he’s changed and he is a better person and he loves her. There will be no one else for Kiya the mood goddess herself handpicked him for her. I hope they get together real soon. Kiya needs some real loving to erase the past from her mind.

oh my goddess!!!! It’s about that time for Kiya and Neron to solidify their bond!!!! I wonder if Aloha Johnathan will be brought back as their undoing by Apophis? just a thought

Rose

hmmm I am a bit suspicious of Allha Johnathan. something tells me that at least 1 of those “omegas” is actually his daughter. but he doesn’t have high views of women and see them as weak. and he probably punishes Liberty for not bearing a male.

Ta1sha

wait no warning on the name change or did I miss something halima= kiya now

Ta1sha

wow I’m glad Nero is sorry and others to but I still don’t think he has earned her respect or forgiveness. can’t wait to read on

Ta1sha

aww I was wondering what happened to Diana.

Ta1sha

yay thank you for the info of how she changed her name Awsome. I got inpatient I should have known you got this

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

im excited to read your next book. the first two were great! it was a great ending for the 2and book.

Ta1sha

wow that was a powerful chapter I’m even in more tears than the previous chapters.

Selene Murf

Great chapter, finally after 3 yrs they can hold and smell each other. Gave me warm fuzzies. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Cant wait for more.

I hated Neron at first, as I'm sure everyone did. however now he's changed so much and I stg I will be entirely heart broken for months to come if this book closes without them together in the end

pushing wet strands of my hair behind his ear.? I think that would be difficult if not, painful to do...

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

Sabrina Surillo

is kiya the same person as halima

Fale

😂 here goes Onyx again 🤣

mercy A

finally!!

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

Loving the updates!

Mavis Gugumi

love the book. but hate the app..it does not work.

Kaelan McLaren

yay I can finally get a chance to do some theorising while not being on catch up. so my theory based on the last chapter - the nightmare- Nerons mother is about to reveal that they are related to a seer (or this world similar version) and the dreams they have been having real late prophetic.

Victoria DeCuir Stewart

so no resolutions or aswers for a whole book. not even anything on the owl, was she marked, did they find out she was assaulted… all those chapters and I can’t figure out what can to an actual ending point.

Sara Rastellini

already 100xs better than the alphas virgin tribute!!!

Victoria McCormick

this is haha down one of the best stories I have read since twilight! such a good story! such an amazing author!

Antoinette Robinson

now she knows she should not have went to the bathroom and by herself at that. it’s an emergency go home right away!!😫

Selene Murf

Unbreakable... Yusssssssss. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Thanx can't wait for more!!! 😁

XcaosxX

wonderful story thank you 😊

Nina072

if you dont understand trauma and its effects on an individual that's fine but do not make cold and callused comments and think nothing of it. just goes to show how little some people know about trauma. cold, callused and so unbelievably rude fictional character or not. person who made that comment, you deserve a knock upside the heard for that comment. and I'm being nice. "it's been eight years.....blah blah blah". unfrackingbelievable.

Suspiro Vega

very good book cant put it down

this is one of the best storys I have ever read . hope you let these two have a love together and peace soon . I don't know why but I feel their pain as if it is my own . very emotional.

Jenny Fox 🦊

Wishing you the best for your new Story Marii!! 💕

Antoinette Robinson

keeping her friends in the dark is putting everyone in danger

Nicole Fisher

After reading this, I am speechless. I'd like to read more.

Toya Spalding

What is the update time-line please?

can someone pleaseee help me understand the order of the books for the storyline. I know there two books in unbreakable and another one being starred but does unhinged come before or after the new one being started?

Sara Rastellini

goddess this story tugs at the heart strings bravo 👏

Amy Krohn

thank you for you author's note.

Carla McGuire

Am really enjoying your writing.

Sharon Taylor

when is the new book

Prudin Bernier

hoping new chapters are added soon. love this story.

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

Katie Frew

I'm still finding it hard to believe a whole pack of people believe a 9 year old killed a massive luna wolf and child. I understand you saying they just wanted someone to blame. But still that part to me is a little far fetch, a 9 year old child that can't turn into a wolf so has no strength. You get where I'm going with this...

thank you for standing up and supporting the survivors. it means the world.

is this the end of the story or will there be more..?? I wanted Kiya n Neron to be mates so badly..

Abigail Ross

why does her name suddenly change??

Michelle F. Rivera

whose kiya??? last couple chapters are titled that. but no name in story matches

Sintia

This book had me crying!!!! 😭

mercy A

how often are new chapters released? can’t wait to know what will happen at the alphas gathering...

Latoya Doctor

this book hart breaking

Lori Platz

I hope she doesn't go to Neron, what they did is unforgivable, mates or not

Alexus Winder

what is the update period?

I take that back, there’s 2 orisha mentions!!! 🥰🥰🥰

Catherine Thompson

loving this so far

Novalore

chapter 52 made me lmao oh no he took off his shirt. oh hell

Blue Eyes

how long before unbreakable comes out

HNW TK

can't wait for book 3

Heather P

Do do you think pigeons have feelings? hahaha 🤣🤣🤣 I literally laughed out loud

Ta1sha

already on chapter 31 so nervous

I finished this a little over a month ago, can you give us an idea when Unbreakable will be released?

bisaayanna

I think it is the uncle they thought they killed and he has created a puppet clone

Kate Carney Taylor

when will book 3 be available

I hope that kiya & nueron get together in there end. great story so far though.

Selene Murf

Guessing the mate bond will need to be made between Luna and Alpha, to get rid of Osrisis

Luna Gudine

there's so many number issues, lol, i like the story but the yrs don't add up... 😅

Ta1sha

Nero deserves to suffer so does everyone in that pack no pity for their guilt. Guilt does not make everything ok. They could better themselves and learn from it.

Tanesha Gillespie

update on when you post new chapters please

Aiiyah Montero

This story is sooo inspiring 💓 and has brought me to tears more times than I’d like to admit lol! I literally love this book 😍

Fale

😂 here goes Onyx again 🤣

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his father is a straight jerk and I hope that he gets exactly what's coming to him. he has absolutely no remorse for his actions against Halima

Reader-205517

I like this story. But your comments at the end of the chapter are very annoying. A professional author does not do that.

Marissa Margarida Raymer Alves

are you going to finish the book?

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them

Cecelia Humphrey

I don't believe in abusive men that treat women like s*** you need to delete this book and I will never read anything from you again or any of your books that you have written I will not read this book any longer

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

Riley

This is a spoiler question but I have to know: is there a chapter where her name gets cleared?

Rule 30

I too was of poor opinion of that book because of the abusive introduction in the details page. But it seemed well written and I gave it a shot. Now I regret it because I HAVE WORK TO DO AND I CAN'T QUIT READING IT !!!

Magdolna Szabo

I hope you dont put them back together!!!!

it’s the Uncle and witches

FloA

Superb writing. I cannot wait for more.

Kaelan McLaren

as a major Lindsey Stirling fan. I appreciate this quote. also excellent book. can’t put it down.

i love this story. Some of the filler gets a little monotonous but overall the story line is great. It definitely gives a very accurate and true understanding of what people with trauma experience. I have never read a book that captures those emotions so well. I have a feeling that maybe Nerons emotions have been being played with by O for quite sometime. Maybe he's the reason every turned on Halima in first place. I can't wait to find out. ❤

Stacey Demeritt

I would love to know what happens to Halima after sirus got a hold of her the second time.

Rachel Z

This should definitely be a printed book series and a movie, amazing stuff!! I can’t wait to read the rest of it!

is this book complete?

Lisa Walton - Evans

I love it so far! Very well done

sara moore

is the 3rd book out ? I love how this books shows that hurt people hurt people. I do hope they end up together.

Vera

Hi Marii, I am a fan. I speedread your books for plot development and am now rereading the books to savour your fantastic writing. I have a question. In chapter 83 of Untouchable, Kiya comes face to face with an unknown female werewolf at Osiris’ facility with brown eyes, hair and a Cupid shaped face who demands her to go “on her knees”. Something tells me this woman is related to Odessa, could it be… Odessa’s aunt?

Chelsea Fortier

ok. just finished "Unhinged" is that really the end? or is there more to come?

why can she never catch a break, i enjoy a good story line but its constant destruction no happiness... was conpletely hooked and unboard until this.... great writting just extremely dark

Ashley Marie Yost

I've been waiting for updates with bated breath 🥰 I love this story so much 🤩

Belle

I love your books. I'm so excited to see what the rest of the chapters is going to be and can't wait for book 3. Keep up the great work! You are so creative and talented.