Untouchable (The Moonlight Avatar Series Collection) Comments

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

    09/19/2021 21:14

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them

    09/19/2021 21:14

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them

    09/19/2021 21:14

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

    09/19/2021 21:14

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

    09/19/2021 21:14

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

    09/19/2021 21:14

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

    09/19/2021 21:14

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

    09/19/2021 21:13

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

    09/19/2021 21:13

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

    09/19/2021 21:13

  • Suzee Kirk

    it’s the Uncle and witches

    09/18/2021 23:58

  • Latoya Doctor

    this book hart breaking

    09/13/2021 00:19

  • mercy A

    how often are new chapters released? can’t wait to know what will happen at the alphas gathering...

    09/12/2021 13:08

  • Jimmy Willis

    pushing wet strands of my hair behind his ear.? I think that would be difficult if not, painful to do...

    09/06/2021 17:00

  • Christina George-Lawhead

    im excited to read your next book. the first two were great! it was a great ending for the 2and book.

    09/04/2021 07:12

  • blocartil

    Really excited about the updates!😁

    09/02/2021 21:29

  • Tanesha Gillespie

    update on when you post new chapters please

    09/02/2021 11:51

  • Alexus Winder

    what is the update period?

    08/30/2021 20:29

  • Christina George-Lawhead

    I hope that kiya & nueron get together in there end. great story so far though.

    08/30/2021 07:54

  • Toya Spalding

    What is the update time-line please?

    08/28/2021 11:19

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    I am really holding they get to get her early on in this 3rd book. been there done that on there we want each other but are scared stuff. I want to read some acceptance of love. it’s a struggle I want to see them do.

    08/25/2021 13:11

  • blocartil

    Loving the updates!

    08/24/2021 19:04

  • Sabrina Surillo

    is kiya the same person as halima

    08/24/2021 14:41

  • Prudin Bernier

    hoping new chapters are added soon. love this story.

    08/23/2021 23:25

  • Jane Glick

    this is one of the best storys I have ever read . hope you let these two have a love together and peace soon . I don't know why but I feel their pain as if it is my own . very emotional.

    08/23/2021 12:21

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    finally now go to his room and talk and let that guard down!!

    08/23/2021 11:01

  • Selene Murf

    Great chapter, finally after 3 yrs they can hold and smell each other. Gave me warm fuzzies. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Cant wait for more.

    08/23/2021 09:59

  • Antoinette Robinson

    now she knows she should not have went to the bathroom and by herself at that. it’s an emergency go home right away!!😫

    08/20/2021 23:32

  • Antoinette Robinson

    keeping her friends in the dark is putting everyone in danger

    08/20/2021 02:51

  • Shedrika Frinks

    love it so Far

    08/19/2021 22:17

  • Kaelan McLaren

    yay I can finally get a chance to do some theorising while not being on catch up. so my theory based on the last chapter - the nightmare- Nerons mother is about to reveal that they are related to a seer (or this world similar version) and the dreams they have been having real late prophetic.

    08/14/2021 17:18

  • Amy Krohn

    thank you for you author's note.

    08/13/2021 05:59

  • Jenny Fox 🦊

    Wishing you the best for your new Story Marii!! 💕

    08/12/2021 17:39

  • Abigail Ross

    why does her name suddenly change??

    08/11/2021 16:06

  • Selene Murf

    Great chapter, cant wait for the reunion! How will that play out? Wish we could skip the pleasantries and get down to business! 😁 ❤️ 🤠 ❤️

    08/10/2021 11:40

  • Ashley Hauck

    can someone pleaseee help me understand the order of the books for the storyline. I know there two books in unbreakable and another one being starred but does unhinged come before or after the new one being started?

    08/10/2021 04:04

  • Selene Murf

    Wow can't wait for more, but the app sais complete, i guess because its under untouchable, i wish unbreakable was under complete... May be misleading

    08/09/2021 01:28

  • Katie Frew

    I'm still finding it hard to believe a whole pack of people believe a 9 year old killed a massive luna wolf and child. I understand you saying they just wanted someone to blame. But still that part to me is a little far fetch, a 9 year old child that can't turn into a wolf so has no strength. You get where I'm going with this...

    08/08/2021 22:54

  • Selene Murf

    Unbreakable... Yusssssssss. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Thanx can't wait for more!!! 😁

    08/08/2021 06:38

  • Ashley Hauck

    so I just started this book and I'm actually livid. her whole pack and family better get their karma. cause damn 😢

    08/07/2021 18:10

  • Jimmy Willis

    I've rarely gotten chills from reading, but after reading the end of chapter sixty seven, chills swept my back and arms. It's about goddamn time!

    08/05/2021 18:11

  • Nicole Fisher

    After reading this, I am speechless. I'd like to read more.

    08/04/2021 04:56

  • Jeanette Naugle

    I finished this a little over a month ago, can you give us an idea when Unbreakable will be released?

    08/04/2021 02:26

  • Blue Eyes

    how long before unbreakable comes out

    08/03/2021 18:37

  • Sara Rastellini

    goddess this story tugs at the heart strings bravo 👏

    08/03/2021 16:25

  • Leah

    wait. there are 2 Untouchable books under your name.. what is the difference? i notice the bottom one only has 86 chapters and this have 96 chapters?

    08/03/2021 13:15

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    so no resolutions or aswers for a whole book. not even anything on the owl, was she marked, did they find out she was assaulted… all those chapters and I can’t figure out what can to an actual ending point.

    08/03/2021 03:29

  • Michelle F. Rivera

    whose kiya??? last couple chapters are titled that. but no name in story matches

    08/02/2021 23:30

  • Vera

    Hi Marii, I am a fan. I speedread your books for plot development and am now rereading the books to savour your fantastic writing. I have a question. In chapter 83 of Untouchable, Kiya comes face to face with an unknown female werewolf at Osiris’ facility with brown eyes, hair and a Cupid shaped face who demands her to go “on her knees”. Something tells me this woman is related to Odessa, could it be… Odessa’s aunt?

    08/02/2021 12:35

  • Stephanie Johnson

    i love this story. Some of the filler gets a little monotonous but overall the story line is great. It definitely gives a very accurate and true understanding of what people with trauma experience. I have never read a book that captures those emotions so well. I have a feeling that maybe Nerons emotions have been being played with by O for quite sometime. Maybe he's the reason every turned on Halima in first place. I can't wait to find out. ❤

    08/02/2021 02:26

  • Jessica Manhout

    why can she never catch a break, i enjoy a good story line but its constant destruction no happiness... was conpletely hooked and unboard until this.... great writting just extremely dark

    08/01/2021 19:56

  • Kaelan McLaren

    as a major Lindsey Stirling fan. I appreciate this quote. also excellent book. can’t put it down.

    08/01/2021 16:18

  • Carla McGuire

    Am really enjoying your writing.

    07/31/2021 04:01

  • Mavis Gugumi

    love the book. but hate the app..it does not work.

    07/30/2021 09:00

  • sara moore

    is the 3rd book out ? I love how this books shows that hurt people hurt people. I do hope they end up together.

    07/30/2021 04:22

  • Suspiro Vega

    very good book cant put it down

    07/28/2021 13:12

  • Sara Rastellini

    already 100xs better than the alphas virgin tribute!!!

    07/28/2021 07:56

  • dr.penguin

    I unlocked this book completely now it says I didn't. has anyone had this issue?

    07/27/2021 22:06

  • Reader-925672

    is there a way to just buy the book?

    07/26/2021 17:32

  • Catherine Thompson

    loving this so far

    07/24/2021 01:03

  • Reader-433126

    i love the book so far but I don’t want neron gets to be with her after all he deserves to suffer

    07/23/2021 18:51

  • Belle

    Another well written book, Marii! I love your books and this series! Great job and keep up the great work. Looking forward and very excited for book 3.

    07/23/2021 05:58

  • Novalore

    chapter 52 made me lmao oh no he took off his shirt. oh hell

    07/21/2021 19:36

  • Selene Murf

    Guessing the mate bond will need to be made between Luna and Alpha, to get rid of Osrisis

    07/20/2021 07:31

  • Victoria McCormick

    this is haha down one of the best stories I have read since twilight! such a good story! such an amazing author!

    07/20/2021 03:23

  • Sel Murf

    Chapter 58...loved that writing style!! 😁 Love it all, but was well done and didn't notice how it was written till you mentioned at the end. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Im a first time writer too, and the scariest thing for me is, which POV, to angle my stories in. You've helped. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠

    07/18/2021 11:17

  • Carol Murray

    how long for book 3

    07/14/2021 21:07

  • Aiiyah Montero

    This story is sooo inspiring 💓 and has brought me to tears more times than I’d like to admit lol! I literally love this book 😍

    07/14/2021 16:48

  • Narida I.

    I hope Kiya moves forward with a happy life with a new man. Not with the abuser.

    07/12/2021 22:35

  • Kate Carney Taylor

    when will book 3 be available

    07/11/2021 15:33

  • Heather P

    Do do you think pigeons have feelings? hahaha 🤣🤣🤣 I literally laughed out loud

    07/10/2021 13:21

  • Angie Wooley

    I really hope that Neron and Kiya end up together. yes he was her abuser at one point. but I genuinely feel as though he is an entirely different person, the same way she is to an extent. And I hope Darien gets a 2nd chance mate. Odessa means him no good and he deserves better then that

    07/10/2021 12:54

  • Reader-205517

    I like this story. But your comments at the end of the chapter are very annoying. A professional author does not do that.

    07/10/2021 01:59

  • XcaosxX

    wonderful story thank you 😊

    07/09/2021 04:13

  • Jennifer Larimer

    thank you for standing up and supporting the survivors. it means the world.

    07/08/2021 14:40

  • Sharon Taylor

    when is the new book

    07/08/2021 06:02

  • Pelenita Malaita Mokatose Tulisi

    is this the end of the story or will there be more..?? I wanted Kiya n Neron to be mates so badly..

    07/07/2021 17:41

  • Riley

    This is a spoiler question but I have to know: is there a chapter where her name gets cleared?

    07/06/2021 07:10

  • Riley

    please clear her name some how

    07/06/2021 07:02

  • Sintia

    This book had me crying!!!! 😭

    07/06/2021 02:31

  • Jonneka Harris

    I’m a bit sad she chose not to have a second chance mate, though. But I understand, Halima, girl 😭😭.

    07/03/2021 19:26

  • Rachel Z

    This should definitely be a printed book series and a movie, amazing stuff!! I can’t wait to read the rest of it!

    07/02/2021 19:49

  • bisaayanna

    I think it is the uncle they thought they killed and he has created a puppet clone

    07/02/2021 16:34

  • Luna Gudine

    lol i don't know how i read pass the identical twin thing before... it's not possible for a girl and boy to be identical... even if they look alike they are still fraternal

    07/01/2021 20:17

  • Simply, Nikki J

    his father is a straight jerk and I hope that he gets exactly what's coming to him. he has absolutely no remorse for his actions against Halima

    06/30/2021 00:35

  • Magdolna Szabo

    I hope you dont put them back together!!!!

    06/27/2021 18:13

  • Lori Platz

    I hope she doesn't go to Neron, what they did is unforgivable, mates or not

    06/25/2021 11:19

  • Melissa Cotis

    🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

    06/25/2021 06:57

  • Pelenita Malaita Mokatose Tulisi

    what’s the difference between the 2 separate books and the collection series.. do they have different chapters?? or is it 2 books combined together??? I did read the note..

    06/24/2021 18:04

  • Pelenita Malaita Mokatose Tulisi

    when is the next book coming out ??

    06/24/2021 13:12

  • Reader-492460

    is this book complete?

    06/23/2021 23:33

  • Areleen Torres

    "Did you use that leg trick again?" I literally lol 😂

    06/23/2021 23:24

  • practicedsmile

    I really want to applaud your work. I would love the option to opt in for all your book in full. I love the book and will continue reading anything you write. Just a side note I would love to see you in Amazon, Barnes and Noble, etc to buy hardcover editions. Keep being creative, wonderful, and your best writing self. Thank you.

    06/23/2021 19:02

  • Pelenita Malaita Mokatose Tulisi

    did hamila change her to kiya?

    06/22/2021 18:51

  • Reader-237016

    this is a really good book! I am hooked!

    06/22/2021 17:42

  • HNW TK

    can't wait for book 3

    06/21/2021 02:40

  • Rule 30

    is there a link between Artemis and Diane, or are those two names here by coincidence ? 😮😮😮

    06/19/2021 13:02

  • Luna Gudine

    there's so many number issues, lol, i like the story but the yrs don't add up... 😅

    06/17/2021 04:49

  • Chelsea Fortier

    ok. just finished "Unhinged" is that really the end? or is there more to come?

    06/16/2021 09:13

  • Ashley Marie Yost

    I've been waiting for updates with bated breath 🥰 I love this story so much 🤩

    06/15/2021 20:31
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