Alpha at the Door (Edited Version) Comments

  • Rebecca Babygirl

    very entertaining story I'm loving it also very funny ❤️

    07/30/2023 16:29

  • Reader-245557

    wow ❤️❤️❤️

    05/29/2023 15:17

  • Awurabena Afriyie Asare

    f5g9. I think am already in love with this book. I hope to enjoy it and leave good reviews. keep it

    04/21/2023 16:37

  • Vicki usher

    f5g9#Thought I would choose to read the edited version as there are more chapters. looks good so far

    04/21/2023 07:38

  • Debra Sykes

    a6t8 I really liked the first chapter even with grammar issues but I already had this saved to my library so had to have been interested in it

    04/08/2023 08:46

  • Liliana

    a6t8 I am looking forward to this story. I want to wait for it to be a bit more edited so I'll wait a while but I like the first few chapters.

    04/08/2023 00:28

  • Reader-262316

    a6t8 Great start. But I think I’ll wait until some more editing is done. I don’t want to get pulled out of the story due to grammatical issues.

    04/07/2023 20:40

  • Reader-472492

    a6t8 seems like a good story but the grammar is a little hard to get past.

    04/07/2023 19:55

  • Rafael

    #a6t8# I like the introduction. it seems an interesting story and I will add in in my library. hope to be a fun read.

    04/07/2023 19:42

  • Bonnie Solivan

    a6t8. I have to agree with other comments. there is a good and the story flows and even brings you in but I get stuck on the grammar. i speak two languages and the grammar is the hardest in English.

    04/07/2023 19:07

  • Bianca Bratu

    a6t8 I like the start of this story but I will wait until it is finished so I can read it completely seeing as I don’t like to wait for updates

    04/07/2023 17:30

  • Terrin Garis

    #a6t8# The author has brought us wonderful characters. The story is action packed and flows smoothly.

    04/07/2023 14:24

  • Megan Phillips

    a6t8 this book was already in my library and apparently I like it then,I'll have to give this one another read.

    04/07/2023 13:46

  • Me Myself

    a6t8 interesting start for this book. I hope it is complete so we can enjoy it to the end without waiting for updates

    04/07/2023 13:04

  • Jan T

    a6t8 #a6t8 the introduction is very interesting.it will be amusing to see how the story turn out. I like what the comments are saying.

    04/07/2023 11:49

  • Robin Brummett

    a6t8 added to my library. I will be reading this is right up my alley.

    04/07/2023 11:41

  • John Robinson

    a6t8 this story looks interesting and I have read the beginning. although there are a few issues I will still be reading more.

    04/07/2023 10:15

  • pinkturtle

    a6t8 to be honest, some of the grammatical and syntax errors are really distracting.

    04/07/2023 02:27

  • Anjola

    a6t8. such a. great book!!!

    04/07/2023 01:03

  • Christina

    a6t8. such a good start to a book. I’m completely hooked. I have to know what happens. will be adding to my library for sure!!!

    04/07/2023 00:34

  • Vicki usher

    a6t8# I read the introduction and it's made me so curious I have had to add the book to my library.

    04/07/2023 00:12

  • Erna Nuna

    the is story is good, but still need a lot of editing.

    09/14/2022 07:37

  • Julia Svärd

    I really want you to do a new story about Matteo and Karina! If they are really mates and how he will to make her fall in love in him! Pretty please!!!!!!

    07/02/2022 01:35

  • NAQUITA H

    Troy got me over here laughing loud asf 🤣 😂 💀

    05/19/2022 05:58

  • Reader-148264

    this has been a awesome read🙌🙌 I’m so ready for Taken by the Alphas to continue if it’s anything like this one I won’t be disappointed ♥️ Still think Matteo and Katrina should have a story 🤣🤣🤣♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

    04/29/2022 22:52

  • Reader-096329

    is it ever going to be updated

    04/27/2022 06:29

  • Portia Swigelaar

    loving this story💕💕💕

    03/17/2022 21:24

  • RainHero21

    Hi everyone Alpha at the Dooris now complet, thankyou so much for the support 🙇🏻‍♀️🙇🏻‍♀️🙇🏻‍♀️ ❤❤❤ I have now started on my next werewolf story Taken By The Alphas hope you enjoy the next read 😘

    02/28/2022 18:12

  • amber sweet

    when's the next chapter update come on

    02/20/2022 00:16

  • amber sweet

    I think while editing you mix two pages together when she's talking to the receptionist about booking another room and then Leo's duffle bag

    02/13/2022 03:21

  • Kimberly Defeo

    I like this book. So far exciting

    02/13/2022 01:32

  • Jacqueline Johnson

    Seriously? 5 mistakes in just the description?!

    02/11/2022 03:40

  • Tini Rodriguez Paul

    Soooo.. Are you ever going to finish this book? And NOT leave it open for another book that we'll have to wait for??

    02/07/2022 00:04

  • Reader-573867

    hey how often do you update?

    01/18/2022 02:17

  • Reader-148264

    I love love Matteo and Karina ♥️♥️

    01/13/2022 19:57

  • Reader-096329

    it’s been awhile since we had an update, when will the next chapter be done ??

    01/06/2022 03:15

  • Maria Hadjioannou Georgiou

    Wow... Just finished the released chapters and I can't wait for more...

    01/02/2022 15:06

  • Donna Grogan

    The cliff hangers are killing me😢😢😢Yes Katrina and Mateo and Maybe Leo . She can have two mates🤔

    12/18/2021 21:48

  • Tini Rodriguez Paul

    Soooo.. No updates??.. 🤦🏽‍♀️

    12/13/2021 04:38

  • Reader-148264

    I’ve loved this story from the beginning 💜 I so want Matteo and Katrina together

    12/07/2021 01:06

  • Rose

    anyone here do that subscription for Anystories? Does it include ALL the stories? or just select?

    11/24/2021 11:14

  • Sarah Gates

    This story still needs proof reading and revisions. I can't imagine how bad it must have been to being with to say that this is the "edited " version. If English is not the author's first language then it being rough the first time is to be expected. I would suggest that the next draft of this book or any other books written by this author, be edited by someone who at the very least can write at a first year of college level, before trying to target adults as the intended age group. I would have to guess that either the author or the editor is around the middle school age group for the lack of complexity of the writing and sentence structure. If these types of reworks or revisions are made I will happily give this book another chance.

    11/17/2021 07:22

  • Reader-746238

    Shocking grammar needs proof reading

    11/15/2021 10:33

  • Reader-770107

    OMG! I’m loving ALL theses characters!

    11/08/2021 22:21

  • Jennifer Hake

    I love this book I am so engrossed in it most of the day that sometimes I forget that I'm living in the real world

    11/03/2021 01:50

  • Jessica Carr

    I am so invested in this story!!! When is the next update? 👀👀

    11/02/2021 01:06

  • Pída El

    ok should I read this version or the other.?? which is better because I started reading the first version and got hooked now I’ve started this and also hooked haha

    10/30/2021 04:15

  • Jourdan Coleman

    rain you’re doing a great job

    10/29/2021 03:48

  • Tini Rodriguez Paul

    If this is the edited version, meaning there is already a written story, why are the updates so DEVASTATINGLY AND AGONIZINGLY SLOW??.. 🤦🏽‍♀️

    10/29/2021 02:43

  • Reader-148264

    updates are unbelievably slow….

    10/24/2021 00:14

  • FayeLadybug

    This dude is coming across as a psycho. So help me, she better just fall for him. If he truly decided on her, he better have waited.

    10/22/2021 18:52

  • Jenn

    When will more chapters be released? Can't wait to see what happens next.

    10/11/2021 04:41

  • Reader-148264

    they are such an interesting couple😁

    10/04/2021 12:18

  • Jana Kloppers

    i am by chapterc46 now alpha at the door edited of version and i love reading mystorie for my self

    10/01/2021 22:18

  • Jana Kloppers

    i am by chapter 46 now and i love reading mystorie for my self

    10/01/2021 22:16

  • Charell Poole

    good story so far, but please use the right or proper pronouns. Need a better editor

    10/01/2021 22:12

  • Crystal Beauford

    I am only at chapter 24 and I am already tired of the back and forth and Veera being afraid of everything 😒🙄. please tell me this ends soon 😪

    10/01/2021 15:46

  • Mary Boone

    I'm enjoying the story so far can't wait to see where you take it

    10/01/2021 00:42

  • Phyllis Neel

    I am enjoying your story very much, but it needs a good proof reader and editing. In the prior paragraph there were mistakes distinguishing his, her, he, his, hers, etc... plus missing words. This story is original and unique and deserves to be proof read, edited and published. Hugs

    09/30/2021 19:18

  • Reader-096329

    when will the next chapter been updated ??

    09/27/2021 07:36

  • Stephanie Diekmann

    this story is getting boring.. stupid cat and mouse game us dumn. if she was his mate she would know....ugh...

    09/24/2021 10:39

  • Rosetta Smith

    fix quote for big but cannot lie- song is by sir mixalot

    09/22/2021 00:40

  • Jessica Carr

    will there be an update?

    09/17/2021 12:03

  • Tini Rodriguez Paul

    The end of chapter 58, is super jumbled.. Very confusing. 🤨

    09/09/2021 13:50

  • Jessica Carr

    when will there be an update

    09/09/2021 01:15

  • william Harrington

    lots of misspelled words

    09/08/2021 05:10

  • Reader-315492

    please update

    09/06/2021 09:31

  • Courtney Martin

    Hello, I just seen that I have 2 books with same name but chapters don't match up exactly and the one I just found has less chapters but has different chapter names after the chapter I just finished on one book. what is going on with this?

    09/02/2021 23:18

  • Reader-148264

    Matteo and Katrina are so funny they have came a long way slowly 🤣🤣🤣

    08/26/2021 23:00

  • Sheyrena

    receptionist instead of receiptinist

    08/25/2021 22:39

  • Reader-315492

    why have there not been any updates

    08/24/2021 07:23

  • Jenny Best Camacho

    excellent book

    08/21/2021 03:51

  • Reader-315492

    I love this story but there hasn’t been any updates

    08/19/2021 07:28

  • J.S. Teal Ribbon

    Not edited

    08/14/2021 01:32

  • Monica Linder

    if you can't be bothered to use correct grammar and word usage, I can't be bothered to read your book!

    08/13/2021 10:10

  • Karen Unger

    I believe you are looking for the word amputated instead of decapitated when removing an appendage of someone. decapitated means removal of head and or spine.

    08/13/2021 03:51

  • Bonnie Dishman

    how many more chapters until this book is complete

    08/13/2021 03:04

  • Megsh826

    There’s a typo in the initial preview and from the look of the comments the book isn’t much better off. For the love of god, spell check and grammar check are not difficult.

    08/13/2021 02:30

  • Laraib Yousaf

    This book gives 365 days vibes lmao the kidnapping scene, the drink where she spits it on him, sicily lmao

    08/11/2021 16:49

  • Jana Kloppers

    i am dust read chapter 19 now and i am by chapter 20 now when will alpha at the door edited version will open

    08/03/2021 14:05

  • Jana Kloppers

    i dust read chapter 19 now i what for chapter 20 to open alpha at the door edited version now

    08/02/2021 21:28

  • Jana Kloppers

    when is chapter 20 open now alpha at the edited version

    08/02/2021 14:06

  • Jana Kloppers

    alpha at the door edited version chapter 17 is not open yet 💜💜💜💜 Dear God bless the people around us and be there from them

    08/02/2021 13:32

  • kitty5127

    chapter 104. how can Judy yell out when her mouth was duct taped

    08/01/2021 21:25

  • Jana Kloppers

    chapter 17 is not open yet ek wag tot chapter 17 to open god love you all and god will be with you all trust in god and he will be there for you all jana

    08/01/2021 17:22

  • Angela Castellanos

    is there going to be an update soon

    08/01/2021 06:44

  • Sara Rastellini

    I like the story but you grammar is atrocious!

    08/01/2021 06:29

  • Jana Kloppers

    when is chapter 16 open alpha at the door edited version open now🙏🙏🙏🙏

    07/31/2021 10:02

  • Jana Kloppers

    when is alpha at the door edited version open now

    07/30/2021 14:04

  • Jana Kloppers

    when is alpha at the door edited version open now

    07/29/2021 10:20

  • Jana Kloppers

    when is next next chapter open.

    07/28/2021 16:32

  • Jana Kloppers

    when will alpha at the door edited version open chapter 11

    07/27/2021 17:15

  • Somaria Spriggs

    Hoping there will be updates really soon.. Love It!

    07/17/2021 18:00

  • Rebecca Crawford

    yes I loke it but cant buy it ty for how much I could read

    07/13/2021 23:42

  • Amber Perry

    I'm only just getting into the 8th chapter but I really don't understand, how can he Mark her as his if he has a mate? or is it meant that he has a potential mate? cuz it really makes no sense to me! Anything I've ever read werewolf they could only have ONE mate

    07/13/2021 16:57

  • Reader-148264

    I hope updates are soon, your a great writer and I look forward to many new stories. I am able to read through the spell check as it happens to many writers on every book site…keep up the great writing 💜💜💜

    07/12/2021 13:21

  • Phyllis Neel

    Dear Aurhor this story is good, but in desperate need of editing and spell checking. It's good enough to deserve to be presented to the public properly. I am new to this site and haven't been able to find a way to mark mistakes... however, please change princess to prince were it describes Ares.

    07/10/2021 23:41

  • Reader-167247

    lmao parts of this are exactly like the 365 days movie

    07/04/2021 01:51

  • Reader-148264

    up dates ?? is there a schedule on upcoming chapters?

    07/02/2021 12:50

  • kitty5127

    chapter 19. why does she need his phone if they are going to a hotel room? isn’t there one in there she can use?

    06/26/2021 15:44
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