Alpha at the Door (Edited Version) Comments
kitty5127
if she’s an angel why does she need glasses to see?? she says she heals herself from injury so again why the glasses?
06/25/2021 21:11Megan McClure
ate there going to be any updates soon? I've been waiting for four days to see if there will be an update...
06/19/2021 18:27
Nicolette
this plot is indentical to 365 days..along with the 'baby girl' and everything. it's almost like a werewolf version of it. between the story copy and terrible grammer, I don't want to waste money further... please put it in as a disclosure for future readers.
06/17/2021 10:45
박시헌
ttt
06/16/2021 01:16
Reader-924037
Ares and Troy are hilarious 😂. Loved this chapter. Actually I’m really enjoying this book so far👍😃😃
06/15/2021 04:16
wolfcreeklady
I'm loving this book!
06/15/2021 00:04Reader-148264
I am not worried s out the mistakes I would just like updates as it is a great story💜
06/13/2021 19:36
Melissa Conaway
please update soon!
06/11/2021 15:31Rachipouuuu
I recommend using grammerly to correct 75%-85% of the mistakes
06/11/2021 01:43Destiny Bozeman
@RainHero21/Author-Ive seen your comment that English is not your first language. So far I’m loving the book and will continue reading till the end! However the grammar mistakes are making my head hurt 😅😅. Have you thought of using the grammarly app? It will automatically check for grammar mistakes and also help to give you different verbs, nouns ie if it notices you using the same words and wld very much help improve you writing/grammar! Just wanted to suggest it. ☺️ Love the book, can’t stop reading and wish you much love, health, and happiness! ❤️
06/08/2021 17:33Joanne Baker
The best part of this story, Troy the werewolf!!!!
06/08/2021 03:33
Bonnie
this book is very entertaining. I read the book in 2 days. but when is the rest coming? or is it continued in a second book? I NEED to know what happens too Leo!
06/08/2021 01:18Reader-945758
uh this is the exact plot of 365 plus werewolf.
06/07/2021 08:24Reader-577217
So many mistakes and it's almost as if English wasn't the first language.
06/06/2021 04:22tristian smith
Does this happen to be on another reading platform?
06/06/2021 01:00
Alyssa
when the wolf started singing Ludacris 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😩
05/31/2021 19:48Margie Armitage
I’m loving this story so far! but it’s amputated, not decapitated :)
05/31/2021 06:52Donna DeNardo Grogan
I am enjoying this book. Love Matoe he makes me laugh.His personality is the best.
05/17/2021 13:54GiniLeigh
I am really enjoying this book; however, I am curious how this is an edited version since there are a lot of grammatical errors and mixed up wording. I wish I could edit some of the stories I have read.
05/12/2021 23:49Wendy Virginia
loving this book! keep up the amazing work
05/09/2021 00:06
Wcha
wow intriguing first chapter
05/05/2021 16:22
supergirl
This is the edited version? It is littered with errors
05/04/2021 03:46PAMELA BUNKLEY
RainHero21 this book is part of my top 5 reads, but is there a schedule for the updates???
04/29/2021 02:47
Tenesia Tee
so this is the same as the 1st version, just revised. so same characters place time and events, right? it’s not like where V is the were (queen/ druglord) and he is the human that saves her lol. that would be worth the read. the roles reversed. lol.
04/26/2021 20:21
RainHero21
Hi Guys new chapter is now up. Red Tenshi, thankyou all for your support ❤ 🙏
04/18/2021 16:29
Tarnisha Brinson
@RaibHero21 love this book.. when will u be updating i can't wait to see what happens nexr
03/30/2021 06:23Wendy Sparks
I love it
03/30/2021 03:31memory cloud
I saw that there are two versions and read your comments about version 2 being better. Which one is version 2; the one made on 3/2021 or 6/2020? The contents look the same roughly...
03/29/2021 09:58Cindy Campbell
@RainHero21 I noticed there are 2 stories on this app by you with the same title but different content. Is one version better to read than the other?
03/27/2021 17:48
Brenda Foreman
Loving this book so far.
03/27/2021 08:08
Andrea Clennon
I wanna read this soo bad!!! ... but I can't read something that isn't completed 😥 my ocd and need to know the ending keeps me from reading 😭😭
03/27/2021 03:25
Tritana Graham
When this book finally comes to an end. I am going to seriously miss ("TROY")🐺. He needs to be in three to five more ALPHA novels. Troy has made me laugh so much and his love of much I must say is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 my favorite is Chris Brown "Take Down"
03/24/2021 21:32RainHero21
Hi everyone, please follow me on twitter, I just signed up today, Rainhero21. So far I have 0 followers 😭😭😭
03/20/2021 18:37
Cristin Ronqvist
Hi just a point you know chapter 18 is publisch 2 Times? Same text in chapter but first is just named 18 and sscund is named 18. Give me the dame Phone. Just want you to know Great story so far 👍🌹❤️
03/18/2021 23:47Tritana Graham
RainHero21 Please write another ALPHA werewolf book with characters werewolf characters like them. and put Troy with another ALPHA like Ares. I am going to miss this story. I was truly entertained from being to the end. you did a superb job!
03/18/2021 20:10Tritana Graham
UUUHHHHMMMMMM I been throughly entertained and I must say werewolf version of 365 IND. 💋💋💋💋
03/16/2021 23:09
R.L.Marcelain
Not sure how I feel about this book. It reeks of Stockholm syndrome in Veeras case. it's evident that she's his soulmate but, he did not have to kidnap her and sexually take advantage of her for months. I have read a number of shifter books and none of them kidnapped the girl and seduced her into submission. I do find it hilarious when his Grandmother beats his ass. What is the point of turning her friends? when is the next update? I am curious about the Tenshi, to see what happens with that part of the story.
03/14/2021 15:12Donna Medders Holt
I never heard of the word teasefully before. Is that new ?
03/13/2021 01:45Brandy Hunter
love the book want to know when the next update to the next chapter is
03/11/2021 12:58
