The Dragon Brothers Comments
Megan Phillips
r2e9 Reading the introduction for this story turned me off immediately unfortunately I am not interested in an abusive story line.
04/09/2023 02:44
nasnas
r2e9 I don't like the normalisation of abuse and therefore I don't want to read this. to each thier own
04/08/2023 21:27Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
r2e9. Another hard to put down once you start reading it story. Looks like a very good story to read.
04/08/2023 19:29Debra Sykes
r2e9 I don't know if I will read this book as also been a an abusive relationship but I will keep it in mind but not going to read as many comments say this hopefully it is a good book
04/08/2023 16:13
Reader-529162
#r2ef# Never did like a story where man felt it was ok to lay their hand on woman… Shall consider~
04/08/2023 15:27Lindsay Ameel
r2e9 interesting
04/08/2023 09:44
Kitty-694016
r2e9. I get the comments about “punishment “ as I was in an abusive relationship with my first husband. I went beyond that though and read the entire thing. The story is there and I agree it seems like the story isn’t over.
04/08/2023 08:06pinkturtle
r2e9 Not sure I can get behind him both punishing and loving her.
04/08/2023 04:53
Joele G
r2e9 very interesting intro so far; wondering if there’s a second book; seems to be a cliff hanger
04/08/2023 00:59Diyanne Crete
it started of well, but I'll be damned. I refuse to read any more books where a man who Loves a grown ass woman Punishes her. A spanking? I'm tired of this.
09/11/2022 04:01Peggy Pender
ok so far, but what is the backstory that makes her so eager to escape already?
07/29/2022 17:55Reader-582539
need to put the series together so you can find them
07/20/2022 16:38Patricia DeMorrow
Wish if it would say if the princess is a super or a human and how old she is. She is acting like a spoiled kid not a princess.
01/25/2022 02:01Khadejah Bey
Enjoying each chapter
01/24/2022 19:31
OceanQueen
first chapter i loved, but their was some switching between first and third person alot which kindof was a little hard to read.
12/13/2021 13:06amber sweet
willow was defiantly one of my faves to
10/19/2021 17:12amber sweet
why didn't any of the brothers turn into their dragons and whoop their ass and fire them up
10/19/2021 16:41amber sweet
when emily is telling wolf what happened you acedently sayed emily was thinking of emily instead of molly
10/19/2021 04:06amber sweet
loving the story Iam hooked. I hope it doesn't end
10/18/2021 08:25amber sweet
so I hope the king whoops that ass
10/17/2021 02:18amber sweet
amaizing story
10/14/2021 19:30amber sweet
ohhhh i hope ambrose and rose work out
10/13/2021 16:59
Emily Maine
this first sex scene feels a tad rushed she just broke her ribs she would be in excruciating pain if he loves her why is he pushing any intamacy with her?
10/12/2021 14:15amber sweet
sorry Ill be damed if some egotistical asshat whoops me for being by myself no matter the danger
10/09/2021 09:18amber sweet
starting to really enjoy
10/08/2021 19:34Samantha Dogan
I love interacting with my readers so what sites do y'all use? Instagram, Ko-fi, discord, Facebook, something else? If I was to post short stories, background on characters, or quoted material. Where would you like to see that?
09/12/2021 23:52Tonia Strachan
she's 9 months how is she having a miscarriage
08/30/2021 01:04Lisa Essler
Sammie, you've made a great start, but please keep it either in first or third person pov because you swap between them. It's annoying when you do that and will lose readers.
08/23/2021 04:00Samantha Dogan
So I'm starting a new book called 😈 Her Demon His Angel 😇 I only have the first chapter written out but check it out when you can
07/23/2021 23:37Reader-342460
I’m confused she’s saying that she can’t swim but in the first chapter when she tried to escape she swim
07/23/2021 03:04
Bella Jersey 2
Lieutenant Harms was a good man. I hope he is avenge properly
07/22/2021 08:27Bella Jersey 2
oh poor molle the head server is right as much as I hate him. he works in palace he know what servant must do. but Lucian and Viola need to look in their own house. something is really wrong how servants are treated
07/22/2021 08:06Bella Jersey 2
could it really be poison or epilepsy?
07/22/2021 08:01Bella Jersey 2
looks like lord forest will have a collar for a while
07/22/2021 07:55Bella Jersey 2
this should be fun who challenged a dragon. he could still beat him in hunan form
07/22/2021 07:45Bella Jersey 2
I like that thank you very much for your opinion. now you can enjoy some time in dungeons. I heard their very comfortable only thr best stay there
07/22/2021 07:42Bella Jersey 2
why did Elena ran away from lord Forest?
07/22/2021 07:36Bella Jersey 2
I’m sorry Viola’s dad was not a good man as we thought
07/22/2021 07:30Bella Jersey 2
that was beautiful filing in the crack with gold. is that a real thing?
07/22/2021 07:26Bella Jersey 2
two brothers coming and two dates
07/22/2021 07:25Bella Jersey 2
I wish they ask if the children wanted Viola and Lucian as their mom and dad
07/22/2021 07:22Bella Jersey 2
what will be Molle answer?
07/22/2021 07:12Bella Jersey 2
she won’t like it but Viola should not be left alone
07/22/2021 07:04Bella Jersey 2
for Elena that had to be so hard
07/22/2021 07:00Bella Jersey 2
me nit picking your the author just my thoughts. it should be message of queen. I’m not so sure the messenger should of read it. wouldn’t they want to protect her dignity
07/22/2021 06:56Bella Jersey 2
can’t wait for this visit I hope he takes tea before he arrest them
07/22/2021 06:51Bella Jersey 2
the girls under 14 being used as sex slaves is going to be hard finding families for them.
07/22/2021 06:50Bella Jersey 2
slice and dice lord garbage bad and his tiny meat. I think that scared her more
07/22/2021 06:47Bella Jersey 2
I’m glad for the chapter of postpartum depression. it is a real it happens to woman that have their babies and lose them. please please I implore you get help. it does not make you bad mother if you can’t bond with your baby. it makes you a smart mom to realize something is wrong
07/22/2021 06:46Bella Jersey 2
yes Lucian let’s burn down some brothels it will be fun.
07/22/2021 06:32Bella Jersey 2
he came to rescue her but before that I’ll strip naked. we can see somebody’s mind has went bye-bye
07/22/2021 06:31Jana Kloppers
chapter 5 dont want to.open now
07/21/2021 10:40Samantha Dogan
My apologies for the long author's notes. I really didn't realize how long they were. I try to keep the chapters between minimum of 1,500 and a maximum of 2,000 words. But I'll take that into account on future works.
07/18/2021 22:40Vicki Trewella
Please stop putting you extremely long Authors note at the bottom of each chapter please. We're paying for that!
07/18/2021 21:40Vicki Trewella
I gave really enjoyed the story, however after reading the last few chapters, it feels as though it's being rushed & the chapters are much shorter. Stop putting your VERY long Authors note at the bottom of each chapter please... we're paying for that! I'd prefer a longer chapter than a rushed one, with a long A/N.
07/18/2021 21:38
call me Woody
okay, so I just started reading this book and in chapter 4, the it doesn't make any sense. like her ribs are cracked but that is the moment they choose to have 1st sex. and talk about being whipped and acting normal like that is perfectly normal behaviour. I think I pass this book. not a fan
07/17/2021 05:36Selene Murf
Mmmmm,.. That battle cry, for the men of the west... IS IDENTICAL TO ARAGONS' BATTLE CRY FROM RETURN OF THE KING... but still LOVE THIS STORY, cant seem to put it down
07/14/2021 03:51Samantha Dogan
who is everyone's favorite brother?
07/07/2021 00:07Faith Stringfellow
the third person thing is making it a little confusing but still love the story line . well done
07/06/2021 08:14Reader-742236
ok so there has to be a book two
07/01/2021 23:55
Claire O'Sullivan
as much as I would like to read the story.. the grammer, and the way the story is told is shockingly bad. sorry but I'm done
07/01/2021 10:47Laura Chimelis
yes!!!❤love it: Dragon Brothers
06/27/2021 20:56Ashley Sisson
I would love to read more!
06/27/2021 02:49Reader-742236
is this the first book of the series
06/27/2021 01:23Samantha Dogan
I'm bringing Dragon Brothers to a close would anyone like for me to continue with stories about the other brothers Cyprian, Wolf, and Quentin?
06/26/2021 05:30GRETEL LACOUR
when is the next update?? how many more chapters will the book have?
06/25/2021 03:46Jennifer Larimer
I am loving this book so far.
06/16/2021 01:11
Krys Spencer
I love your story ❤
06/12/2021 03:56Tristan Lynn Maness
Character growth has nothing tangible behind it. Relationship growths are unexplained. Also the saying is now or never. And she was a virgin, yet she was so super easily into all of that? Had neeevvverrr even been kissed before. But just immediately gunna start talking dirty? oKaY.
06/11/2021 03:03Kate Maiden
so are Ambrose royse true mates because it's never mentioned but she can fly on his back when he's in his dragon form?
06/10/2021 23:59Bella Jersey 2
i am gonna have so much fun watching him be taken down. I wonder if Jillian knew about this?
06/03/2021 08:43Bella Jersey 2
lord garbage is delusional 34
06/03/2021 08:37Bella Jersey 2
lord garbage is so disgusting. I mean honestly does he think her seeing him naked will make her quiver with lust and run into his arm 34
06/03/2021 08:34Bella Jersey 2
let’s nail some worthless balls to the wall
06/03/2021 08:27Samantha Dogan
I've started a new story called Prince Justus and the Rogue based on the king and queen werewolf in this story.
06/01/2021 19:13Bella Jersey 2
oh no trouble to our land of happiness
05/30/2021 08:50Bella Jersey 2
that’s one way to handle a meeting. but sometimes that doesn’t get best results at least in human history the Czars are a famous example of that
05/30/2021 08:43Bella Jersey 2
wait till he finds out she hasn’t eaten. oh Jillian and all her friends are in trouble
05/30/2021 08:33Bella Jersey 2
the first miscarriage cause it was so far along has weakened her body
05/30/2021 08:26Bella Jersey 2
all 3 men’s ladies are in trouble
05/30/2021 08:23Bella Jersey 2
please wolf hurry back I don’t want lord stupid anywhere near her
05/30/2021 08:20Bella Jersey 2
I want Cyprian to hurry his ass to castle. I don’t want to save her per say I just want him to know what’s going on
05/30/2021 08:12Bella Jersey 2
oh god he really stupid
05/30/2021 08:09Bella Jersey 2
let’s see this fight happened
05/30/2021 08:07Bella Jersey 2
I see why Lucian did what he did but it was mistake. trapping a busy person to their bed is the worst mistake you can make. unless he’s gonna manage the kingdom from home for the next 9 months a dumb decision
05/30/2021 08:04
Kiara_Smites
In chapter 3 Royse is “the redhead with the curly hair and beautiful green eyes”. But in chapter 6 she has “long blond hair and beautiful blue eyes”. Just thought you should know, it’s a little confusing on what she looks like.
05/29/2021 11:40Samantha Dogan
I updated chapters 6-10 with an addition at the end about Ambrose. It might help make chapter 45 make more sense.
05/29/2021 03:53Bella Jersey 2
woah never saw that coming. he’s crazy if he thought he ever had a shot
05/27/2021 14:02Bella Jersey 2
can we be hopeful Viola and Lucian again?
05/27/2021 13:50Bella Jersey 2
Wolf with Emily is welcome treat. he’s this guy going on and on trying to impress Wolf. he rather talk to Emily about selling eggs. now to lord or sir whatever if that not a HUGE clue you are not winning the new king over. then you are just dumb and he DOESN’T want you on his team
05/26/2021 07:56Bella Jersey 2
I’m surprised Avila behavior. but Jillian and Avila are in trouble once Cyprian comes home
05/26/2021 07:52CuntasaurusRex..
okay so I'd like to point out the fact that it's impossible to tell the timeliness here, is this late middle ages where they didn't have guns or is it modern? also, I hope if you write a book after this one, that the female character isn't so ridiculous and childish.
05/25/2021 17:42CuntasaurusRex..
chapter 2 you keep jumping between I and her. just incase you weren't aware
05/25/2021 06:51Bella Jersey 2
my critique about that last chapter we bounced around to many worlds
05/18/2021 01:05Bella Jersey 2
I was surprised we didn’t get some new rugs in palace. I sure Lucian was gonna skin a few
05/18/2021 01:04Bella Jersey 2
I like how Wolf is being with Molle for the most parts. he has a lot of hard work to make that kingdom livable
05/18/2021 01:00Bella Jersey 2
Lucian showed a greedy side. he came to to tell his his wife her father is DEAD. can’t you keep it in your pants?
05/18/2021 00:50Bella Jersey 2
Cyprian made a mistake here
05/17/2021 10:44Bella Jersey 2
Wolf is gonna kill Lucian for making him king
05/17/2021 10:31Bella Jersey 2
I want to see if molly is so acceptant of being a royal dragon’s mate
05/17/2021 10:29
