The Dragon Brothers Comments
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Viola took thr money out of the lord’s pocket they didn’t like that. the mason lord at lest with it
05/17/2021 10:27Bella Jersey 2
I don’t know how fast the men are gonna go about her orders. lol they think when Lucian comes back he’ll be on their side he WON’T
05/17/2021 09:19Bella Jersey 2
I can’t wait to see these two roasted
05/17/2021 09:17Bella Jersey 2
I really like to see what happens to our slave girl
05/16/2021 11:14Bella Jersey 2
they are just gonna invade a kingdom and not care about the innocents?
05/16/2021 11:11Bella Jersey 2
Cyprian might help young slave girl. I hope Viola’s old kingdom is okay
05/15/2021 05:30Bella Jersey 2
I was just gonna ask why this book is gonna be called dragon brothers? when it one deals Lucian and Viola?
05/14/2021 07:35Bella Jersey 2
here lies king Rufus cause of death stupidity
05/14/2021 07:20Bella Jersey 2
I feel bad for the bad guys the dragon brothers are coming after you
05/14/2021 07:07Bella Jersey 2
it looks like they are back on track
05/12/2021 04:17Bella Jersey 2
what hell is going on with those two. did that the death of their child damage them that bad?
05/12/2021 03:45Richelle Hoover
the story is getting better and better every chapter 💕💕💕
05/11/2021 11:57Bella Jersey 2
thank god somebody started speaking sense to her
05/10/2021 08:02Bella Jersey 2
Marji needs at least 15 lashes
05/10/2021 07:58Bella Jersey 2
why did she want to believe the worst in him?
05/10/2021 07:54Bella Jersey 2
what did the seeer mean when viola will have huge or great tears?
05/10/2021 07:47Bella Jersey 2
I am surprised he went that way. I do think she took a HUGE step back in Lucian eyes
05/10/2021 07:46Bella Jersey 2
woah this could go very very badly
05/10/2021 07:35Bella Jersey 2
I have no idea how Lucian is gonna react
05/10/2021 07:26Richelle Hoover
finally caught back up and let's just say I've been wiping tears so happy for the two princes but terribly sad for viola
05/09/2021 14:38Richelle Hoover
loving the story💕
05/09/2021 13:16Bella Jersey 2
I’m just saying the woman in my family. if he said to us with respect look what you did by asking simply questions. our response would not be her’s. Lucian should be thankful he’s not in this world. just saying
05/08/2021 01:43Bella Jersey 2
I think Lucian likes to punish sexually not to do physical harm to her
05/06/2021 00:31Bella Jersey 2
beautiful
05/06/2021 00:03Bella Jersey 2
the thing I really like this chapter is she didn’t run to Lucian. she didn’t even ask him to punish them. I can’t wait to for to get the opportunity to put those BOYS in their place
05/05/2021 23:21Bella Jersey 2
she is showing baby girl or bratty behavior. what girl doesn’t like to get into mischief?
05/05/2021 23:18Bella Jersey 2
they finally made love
05/05/2021 23:07Bella Jersey 2
I think he was very good and fair a patient with her
05/05/2021 23:04san heath
I think they need to do a book for the two brother as well with Molly and emily
05/04/2021 13:26Bella Jersey 2
I can see how some are comparing your and Jenny’s world
05/04/2021 03:34Bella Jersey 2
if this is gonna be a submissive and dominant relationship. it looks like he open up the door to bratty
05/04/2021 03:32
Becca Jackson
is this the same writer as The war God's favorite?
05/02/2021 01:57Bella Jersey 2
much teach the staff to knock. you could also try to get some guards station in front of your room
04/29/2021 05:32Bella Jersey 2
unless she’s on some serious pain meds. you don’t have sex with a broken rib
04/29/2021 05:28Bella Jersey 2
anybody wants roasted rapist?
04/29/2021 05:14Bella Jersey 2
who kidnapped her? the whipping her with the belt is extreme. that is not sexy that abusive
04/29/2021 04:58Bella Jersey 2
now what I’m sorry an asshole is an asshole
04/29/2021 04:48Bella Jersey 2
I’ll help her pack
04/29/2021 04:46Richelle Hoover
this chapter was perfect I was hoping she would be mated to a dragon prince
04/28/2021 13:30Michael Ann Melson Kerley
love it can’t wait for more chapters.
04/28/2021 01:54Nay Nay
Love the book! 💕💕💕 I'm still laughing at the line from Cool Runnings! 😂😂
04/28/2021 01:46Bella Jersey 2
I think she might be bringing herself more trouble. even though Lucian seem to be a jerk they like a lot of the same things
04/27/2021 22:00
Ann Hall
love reading this book hope there love never ends
04/26/2021 17:07Richelle Hoover
the chapters are getting better 🥰
04/26/2021 14:30Richelle Hoover
chapter 19 came out better but with some choppy points but yet still a lot better. don't be afraid of using compound complex sentences or using words that have great connective ness to it that it makes two sentences flow easily together instead of feeling like you're constantly breathing and I agree somebody to reread the sentences would be a lot easier and help with the structure of the sentences
04/26/2021 13:08
Emma
love it!!!! can't wait for the next update!!
04/26/2021 09:34tiki iria
A bit choppy writing style and needs an editor to help keep things straight. You can't have Viola's POV and write I tied a bag around her neck. But she is tying the bag around her own neck.
04/26/2021 01:07Richelle Hoover
viola what I be drinking hunny to kiss another man. here u go kissing anor and I keep dreaming of your Lucian
04/19/2021 02:30Richelle Hoover
go viola run and ur man🥰fight for love⚔️
04/19/2021 02:00Richelle Hoover
I love the story. it's just choppy at some points where the sentence doesn't flow, a sentence will pop up that's so Frank or blunt after for instance I just been visualizing it as I was reading the previous says. like in the chapter I'm reading it's about the Battle she goes from watching him places armor she stands by the door it's so detailed and then all of a sudden he's leaving and you say it just very similar to that and it's just like it could have been reformed as in as he was leaving she draws herself up to him to embrace him with tender love and kiss. it can always take my advice I love helping people I don't mean to offend I just want to see your creation get even stronger with this beautiful love story
04/19/2021 01:53Samantha Dogan
Fun fact the book referenced in chapter three is a real book and I believe you can even buy it on Amazon.
04/16/2021 05:02
Chicken N A Biscuit
love the book so far!
04/15/2021 14:30Samantha Dogan
Chapter 10 is posted. I hope y'all like All Tied Up
04/10/2021 05:24
Isabella Cassidy
who needs a condom when you have someone knocking on the door LMAO
04/05/2021 09:52Richelle Hoover
I'm loving this book so far and love the cover for the book too
04/04/2021 03:20Samantha Dogan
I've started a Facebook page for updates, new projects, and other fun stuff at Facebook.com/sammi-from-anystories
04/03/2021 23:33Chicken N A Biscuit
how often are the updates on this book? daily? weekly? certain days? just checking so I’m not checking all the time. Thanks Amy I’m kind of a binge reader
04/02/2021 17:26Trina Lardner
when is the next update to be released?
03/30/2021 12:25
