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Donna DeNardo Grogan

As always family comes first. Prayers to your Husband and you. ❤️🙏As always these chapters were Great Like Zackary being there he always was there for Cot. But Elijah is still his Best Friend. LOVE OUR LION 🦁🦁🦁🦁💖

Donna DeNardo Grogan

Take your time worth the wait. ❤️ I'm guessing he is going to talk to him about. Elijah. and taking care of his Daughter

Lynora Crawford

Poor Isla...it's hard to live with so much resentment towards your parents.

Lynora Crawford

I am so sorry that your husband is dealing with all of this, and that your family has so much worry right now. He, and the rest of you, will absolutely be in my prayers. I'll be praying for a complete and speedy recovery, wisdom and discernment for the doctors, and strength for the whole family. Is there anything specific you'd like prayers for?

oh!! Angus has lost his mind!!!

love this chapter! I can just imagine the mess!! I hunted hare/jack rabbits during my college days... I always left the gut pile where my kill was and always skinned and process outside by the barn!! I can just imagine the blood and gore he made in her kitchen! lol...

Lynora Crawford

That chapter was so sweet! I love Calum more with every word about him. 😊

Lynora Crawford

Full disclosure time now, right? (Can you tell that I'm jonesing for Calum's reaction to the reveal-all?) Seriously though, I really hope he doesn't take too long to adjust to the news...

Christine Owings

I am truly moved with the story you have created. truly connected with colt on ever emotional level. can't wait for next update. I hope Calum is whom she ends up with. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale

Christine Owings

I am truly moved with the story you have created. truly connected with colt on ever emotional level. can't wait for next update. I hope Calum is whom she ends up with. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale

Lynora Crawford

Though I've read the whole story (twice), "Determined" being summarized by Colt here REALLY emphasizes just how much she's gone through, and how incredibly strong she is...I hope Calum focuses on that, and not the last bomb she dropped on him.

Christine Owings

I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.

I love this chapter...I can barely wait for the next...

Karina Marthinsen

ahh, thats so sweet, i like how he is, but now i wonder how her will take the next levels off confession

such an AWESOME lion!!!! now I'm really impatient for the next update. btw belated happy birthday!!!

Jenn McCoy

thank goodness she is opening up more I think her realizing how much he truly has gone through helped. lol but your killin us here she literally knows someone with lots of knowledge but has yet to contact her 🤨lol. I hope they are able to figure things out they both deserve it and the pain they have been through is enough. I can't wait for more much love!

Jenn McCoy

thank goodness she is opening up more I think her realizing how much he truly has gone through helped. lol but your killing us here she literally knows someone with lots of knowledge but has yet to contact her 🤨lol. I hope they are able to figure things out they both deserve it and the pain they have been through is enough. I can't wait for more much love!

Donna DeNardo Grogan

She has the Best Parents. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Christine Owings

I am truly moved with the story you have created. truly connected with colt on ever emotional level. can't wait for next update. I hope Calum is whom she ends up with. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale

Christine Owings

I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.

amber sweet

come on they got to get together I like him

Lynora Crawford

That was fabulous. It sucks that Kalvin unintentionally overstepped like that, but it would definitely be something someone in his line of work (and as Colt's father) would ask.

How can you not love Felix. I hope he meets someone. Who he has his own book.❤️

Jenn McCoy

thank goodness she is opening up more I think her realizing how much he truly has gone through helped. lol but your killing us here she literally knows someone with lots of knowledge but has yet to contact her 🤨lol. I hope they are able to figure things out they both deserve it and the pain they have been through is enough. I can't wait for more much love!

Jenn McCoy

thank goodness she is opening up more I think her realizing how much he truly has gone through helped. lol but your killing us here she literally knows someone with lots of knowledge but has yet to contact her 🤨lol. I hope they are able to figure things out they both deserve it and the pain they have been through is enough. I can't wait for more much love!

Jenn McCoy

thank goodness she is opening up more I think her realizing how much he truly has gone through helped. lol but your killing us here she literally knows someone with lots of knowledge but has yet to contact her 🤨lol. I hope they are able to figure things out they both deserve it and the pain they have been through is enough. I can't wait for more much love!

Karina Marthinsen

yes, she trust him enough to open Up, thats so great, Hope her takes IT well

oooh I can’t wait til the next chapters…

Lynora Crawford

Ooh, I like the Elijah update; I was curious if we'd get much about him through this installment! As for Angus...I ALMOST feel sorry for him. I kind of hope Isla (and the rest of the family) arrives while Arthur is "handling" Colt, though I'm not sure there would be words to describe the poetic justice I'm sure would follow! 😅

I don't know who I am rooting for . Colt deserve s to be Happy. I think at the end she will have a pup. Maybe Two Mates🤔❤️

I think she needs to face Elijah he has changed for the better not that that excuses what he did. But he was hurting she left he didn't know she felt what he was doing . But Now with her new Mate who knows Elijah is looking for Colt. He should be honest .He seems like a good man. Let it be her to deside so she could be Happy.

Meg Roberts

isla is going to have a coronary.... i love the sass etc in this chapter... i can only imagine how much fun isla in scotland will be

poor Calum. come on Colt have to live a life of some sort! Calum is willing to only have you and even willing to adopt kids.

those 2 Bruce's have lost their minds!!! Mom & Dad are coming and not to mention Felix, and Calum's clan?

Trish Yocham

Loved it!!! Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!

oh!!! what a chapter!!! can’t wait to see where all this leads to!!! thank you!!!!

Jenn McCoy

loved this chapter so cute. he is noticing things she has done good so far being open in ways with him not closed off like she was with Elijah. she needs to explain things no matter how bad she don't so they can find answers together because they both want eachother but she don't need him doubting because she pulls away when he is to touchy! oh answers lol still waiting for mauve to save the day 😉🤔🤫 I'll wait here 👀

Lynora Crawford

Wow...that sheds a lot more light into why Iona is so stubborn. My heart breaks for all of them, though. Colt's realization about her current relationship is kind of sad, though it's still early days. I hope Angus gets what he deserves, without causing Colt much more pain...she's lived through so much already. I'm really intrigued to know what Isla's worrying about, though. Hmm...I feel like I've been left with several cliffhangers, lol! Sick households are no fun. I wish you and your family a smooth and speedy recovery, and that nobody else starts showing symptoms.

Megan Docchar

finally at the epilogue! so excited for the next part, started mad giggling after this xx without wanting to rush you I'm buzzing for the next chapters 😚

oh! finally! Colt totally deserves him! bless his heart!!!

where is the epilogue from what I remembered it was from colton's perspective but I can't remember where it was

Christine Owings

I am truly moved with the story you have created. truly connected with colt on ever emotional level. can't wait for next update. I hope Calum is whom she ends up with. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale

amber sweet

awesome thankyou for timeline clarity i thought it was over a 3 week period

Christine Owings

I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.

I can’t wait for the next update. will Calum tell Colt that he has met Elijah? can the 3 of them survive this? where is Colts family?

Lynora Crawford

Oh my gosh, this chapter was funny! Colt's reaction to what Calum was doing, and then telling him to go change while she was still so angry was so accurate, that I giggled through the rest of the chapter.

Lynora Crawford

WAY TO GO, FELIX!!! He is absolutely wonderful, the way he handled Calum! 🥰

Lynora Crawford

Ooh, that throws a new twist on things...Calum knowing that Colt is Elijah's mate? (Even if he thinks they're chosen, as opposed to fate.) I did NOT see that coming! I'm so excited to see what happens when he eventually talks with Colt! 😊

oh I really think colt and callum are a good match and he sooths her brings her peace. ..I hope she chooses him as a mate!!

Jenn McCoy

thank goodness she is opening up more I think her realizing how much he truly has gone through helped. lol but your killing us here she literally knows someone with lots of knowledge but has yet to contact her 🤨lol. I hope they are able to figure things out they both deserve it and the pain they have been through is enough. I can't wait for more much love!

Sarah Kruger-Padgett

I have a very Love/Hate response to Colt being worried about how Elijah will handle her not so much being with Cullum but so much as kissing him after all Elijah out her through. I still think Elijah can be redeemed and I think Colt needs them both

amber sweet

yes this is goona be good

Lynora Crawford

I'm glad Calum was able to put his pride aside and be open with Felix...and Felix is honest-to-goodness the best friend we all wish we had. 🥰

Jenn McCoy

yes so excited loved it I truly can't wait for the rest of thier journey!

Christine Owings

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Christine Owings

I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.

Christine Owings

I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.

Christine Owings

I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.

Christine Owings

I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.

I love this chapter.

amber sweet

she feels Elijah close by

Karina Marthinsen

that's a surprise, callum is quit smart 😍 i'm so excited for the next chapters, to see if he gets there in time and if Elijah follows him

Lynora Crawford

SPOILERS?!!! *gasp* Who are you, and what have you done with our beloved author, Bethany?! I'm sorry you had such a rough week...that seriously sucks. I hope this week does a complete 180° about-face for you, and it's absolutely stupendous!

Karina Marthinsen

loved the chapter, thats so sweet

Karina Marthinsen

yes, she trust him enough to open Up, thats so great, Hope her takes IT well

thank you!!! I love it!!! so they are moving forward!!

I'm still hoping she and Elijah find a qay to work it out!!

love it!!! Lol. what does Colt have to do to get Angus to leave her alone? well Felix should be able to keep the men at bay? thank you for the update. I got back to school on the 23rd and the same time I go back to teaching after school. I have missed my kindergarteners!!

Lynora Crawford

Loved every second of this chapter!!!

amber sweet

great chapter loved it

Autumn Harvey

as a fellow horse person, I LOVE this chapter :) I've always loved all the stuff about Sol, but this is perfect, including the second hand water lol

Reader-014009

you can not release these chapters fast enough! I’m dying for more! keep it coming.

Nichole83pa

I’m confused 🤔 obviously Colt was with Eli before she met Calum and Calum wasn’t hospitalized so did Elijahs pain come from the fact that he marked Colt and she kissed Felix and he wasn’t her mate or was it because Elijah was standing right there when she kissed Felix? She needs to talk to Calum and explain what’s going on and Calum needs to tell Colt that Elijah is looking for her. I just want her to be happy with her mate (either or both) but this is just kinda sad for everyone 😩

amber sweet

I was totally eating a salami sandwich great great chapter

no no no. he can’t do that. he even admitted he loves her like a sister. I know he’s trying to help, but she’s got a 2nd chance mate. this might work to get all 60 wildcats to go away….

Lynora Crawford

😲 Poor Felix! I know at this point he's just trying to help her, but still my heart twists for him. Poor Colt... I'll bet she's absolutely gobsmacked! 😂 Maybe she'll accept on a temporary basis? "Just until she figures something else out." 🤔🤔🤔

Lynora Crawford

Oh, I'm glad he's there! I was sorry to think that we may have seen the last of him!!! 😊

I love this chapter it gives a background to Calum. is he going to actually meet Colt at the cottage?! can't wait to see how they finally meet . . .

Reader-014009

OMG that was so good! I can’t wait for the next update!

Jenn McCoy

loved this chapter lol her horse had good timing lol. I know she would have been upset tho because she would worry about Elijah! also I think people also forgot she was told it would be hard for her to have kids if at all so her dreaming about kids would just depress her. people need to realize she is a good person as well and is trying to hold back from Cullum on affection because she is worried about Elijah even if she does not want to.

Lynora Crawford

I loved this chapter! I'm so glad you gave us this encounter from Calum's point of view, too! 😊

Ellie Vasileva

can't wait for Felix to ruffle some wildcats feathers, play the role of boyfriend even, just to give her grandparents a small but we'll deserved heart attack here and there😄😄😄

oh yes! reinforcement!!! this should get interestimg!!

Blabla

oh my! it's even better than I hoped! 😍 Can't wait for the next chapter! when can er expect it? 🤓😇

Jenn McCoy

lol I love Isla! can't wait for more to see how things keep developing I'm happy she feels the pull tho. she deserves to be happy and not thinking about Elijah. Cullum deserves a chance at happiness with how hard he has been looking for her as well.

I love it!!! her grandparents are in for a rude awakening. lol.

Lynora Crawford

I'm intrigued to know how Colt will react to Calum's revelation... Don't feel bad about family time! We'll still be here when you're able to write. 😉

Autumn Harvey

I'm so excited for an update! tbisnis my favorite story I've got going on right now :)

amber sweet

loved it

Lynora Crawford

Love this, so much! Good for Felix, for watching out for her, but I dearly wish she'd torn Angus up a bit more...he deserves it! 😅

Karina Marthinsen

ohh thank god she send Felix, but that Angus should really have an ass wup

Autumn Harvey

every chapter just gets better and better! it always makes my day when I see an update!

Lynora Crawford

I was surprised, thinking she accepted, but I'm so glad they were doing for Iona instead! (I'm also glad Iona's dad is 100% in her corner!) Her musings were kind of heartbreaking, though... poor Colt. I'm so excited to see what happens after Calum finds her! 😊

Karina Marthinsen

ohh this is good, so mom is going home, this can only get good, family fight 😂😂

Lynora Crawford

Ouch! I do not envy Colt, at this moment. Though it highly amuses me that Felix passed out! 🤣

Jenn McCoy

yes loved thier interaction just hate that because of Elijah she is holding back. he needs to find his second chance mate and let her go. but I have been begging her to call mave so she can get answers about things so she can move on happily with Cullum!

Jenn McCoy

awe I loved this one lol missed him. I hope he finds his mate one day would love his spin off but I can't wait to see for more of colt. her mom is going to lose it.

caroline p

I love it!! thank u so much!! can't wait for even more now. lol

amber sweet

ohhhhh this is goona be good im rooting for calum and Eli

Sarah Kruger-Padgett

i can not wait till her family shows up. i doubt it will only be her parents. the entire merrier bunch will be at her door. also the reunion between isla and her parents...