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Sarah Kruger-Padgett
I loved this and again I can not wait for more.
09/04/2023 08:37Meg Roberts
life happens. looking forward to more when u can
09/04/2023 08:37Sarah Kruger-Padgett
i love getting different points of view. anxious to see what happens next and love the Angus is Calums rival should make things very lively
09/04/2023 08:37Sarah Kruger-Padgett
I can not wait to see how her parent's react to where she actually is. Also can't wait to see how Colt reacts when Callum shows up at her house to get his clothes back.
09/04/2023 08:37
Lynora Crawford
Way to go, Colt! 😁
09/04/2023 08:37
Jenn McCoy
Oh this definitely has me needing more finally he's putting things somewhat together. I know Elijah has got help and all that but I really want callus for her a fresh start someone who has been devoted to her before they even officially met. Elijah messed up I feel 1 to many times I hope they see eachother and he gets his peace of mind and maybe a second chance mate. but I just don't feel like it could be colt anymore they always struggled.I feel like they was a learning mates that was ment for them to end for her to get both her animals and for him to better himself as well as her. now I feel they need to move on to real love and I think Calum is it for her and to show all the other cats that rivals don't matter true love and mates do!
09/04/2023 08:36Christine Owings
I am truly moved with the story you have created. truly connected with colt on ever emotional level. can't wait for next update. I hope Calum is whom she ends up with. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale
09/04/2023 08:36Christine Owings
I am truly moved with the story you have created. truly connected with colt on ever emotional level. can't wait for next update. I hope Calum is whom she ends up with. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale
09/04/2023 08:36Christine Owings
I am truly moved with the story you have created. truly connected with colt on ever emotional level. can't wait for next update. I hope Calum is whom she ends up with. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale
09/04/2023 08:36Christine Owings
I am truly moved with the story you have created. truly connected with colt on ever emotional level. can't wait for next update. I hope Calum is whom she ends up with. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale
09/04/2023 08:36Christine Owings
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09/04/2023 08:36
Reader-036379
I love Isla. I’m glad she finally let all that pent up anger from trying to be sold herself by her mum, and actually standing up to her. Also, getting that awesome praise from Lewis made me want to cry my eyes out. I’m an empath I can feel emotions, and when I’m reading these type of stories I can sense what emotions are going on and how the writer felt while doing this. I hope this book continues for the Merrier family. Love it.
09/04/2023 08:36Christine Owings
I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.
09/04/2023 08:36Christine Owings
I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.
09/04/2023 08:36Lynora Crawford
Though I've read the whole story (twice), "Determined" being summarized by Colt here REALLY emphasizes just how much she's gone through, and how incredibly strong she is...I hope Calum focuses on that, and not the last bomb she dropped on him.
09/04/2023 08:36Christine Owings
I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.
09/04/2023 08:36Lynora Crawford
Though I've read the whole story (twice), "Determined" being summarized by Colt here REALLY emphasizes just how much she's gone through, and how incredibly strong she is...I hope Calum focuses on that, and not the last bomb she dropped on him.
09/04/2023 08:36Christine Owings
I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.
09/04/2023 08:36I love this book so far!!! Angus got served like a ground beef. You go girl!
09/04/2023 08:35Lynora Crawford
I love this chapter, the developing trust between Calum and Felix is great! Part of me hopes he simply stays in Scotland indefinitely.
09/04/2023 08:35Ellie Vasileva
Felix is the coolest friend ever...
09/04/2023 08:34oh! boy!! by any chance she will be bumping into Calum in that outfit? I’m so excited???
09/04/2023 08:34Jenn McCoy
thank goodness she is opening up more I think her realizing how much he truly has gone through helped. lol but your killing us here she literally knows someone with lots of knowledge but has yet to contact her 🤨lol. I hope they are able to figure things out they both deserve it and the pain they have been through is enough. I can't wait for more much love!
09/04/2023 08:34Karina Marthinsen
yes, she trust him enough to open Up, thats so great, Hope her takes IT well
09/04/2023 08:34
Melissa Gilbert
when is the next update I am chomping at the bit waiting for the next chapter
09/04/2023 08:34Lynora Crawford
That is simultaneously a horrifying and hysterical situation! I can't wait to see how Colt's parents react to all the trouble she's gotten herself into!
09/04/2023 08:34Lynora Crawford
I'm looking forward to seeing how Calum reasons to that news...
09/04/2023 08:33Lynora Crawford
I'm looking forward to seeing how Calum reasons to that news...
09/04/2023 08:33I love it!!! can’t wait to see what happens. Poor Colt hopefully she will open up to Calum. After Eli…
09/04/2023 08:32Love Felix maybe he will find his mate.
09/04/2023 08:32
bisaayanna
I think Felix is only doing it to give her an option to get the others off her back...no ring is mentioned and I also think he is there for some other reason...remember he did say to himself he realized he is not in love with her anymore.
09/04/2023 08:32Karina Marthinsen
i just love that horse😂😂😂 i like that she is Falling for him slowly, and that her just keeps her close, even when she don't want too
09/04/2023 08:31Blue Fish
Where is Elijah? hmmm
09/04/2023 08:31oh I didn't see this coming! what a surprise!!! I can't wait!!
09/04/2023 08:31So both mates looking for the same women.Loving so far❤️
09/04/2023 08:31“Smarmy git” is going to be added to my repertoire of insults I use for slimey people. Also, another lovely chapter giving me laughs and joy for Colt. Please keep strong Colt. Don’t call Elijah!
09/04/2023 08:31Meg Roberts
this made me giggle!
09/04/2023 08:31Karina Marthinsen
ohh, wonder i there is another reason for Felix ti be there🤔🤔
09/04/2023 08:31I can see him doing that. He really cares for her and would be happy to help her. She won't accept. He's a good friend but she's not one to hide
09/04/2023 08:31OMG thank you. I just found the book! can’t wait to read what awaits her! btw are you going to add Mave and Zack or will they be a separate book?
09/04/2023 08:30amber sweet
excellent chapter keep it up
09/04/2023 08:30Oof I wonder what Isla’s reaction to her parents trying wed Colt off is going to be. Oh man and her dad … I can’t wait for the rest of the Merrier Clan to arrive in Scotland. I love your writing so much. ❤️
09/04/2023 08:29Ellie Vasileva
oh, this is so much fun! I love it! cannot wait for her family to tuchdown in her new house!😄😄😄😄
09/04/2023 08:29I’m hoping she is seeing a future with Calum. her dream wedding and children…
09/04/2023 08:29No problem you do have a life. Looking forward to the updates❤️
09/04/2023 08:28Lynora Crawford
Poor Colt and Calum... I'm really hoping she sits Calum down soon. and explains why she has to hold back. He seems like the type (once he stopped reeling from the shock) to help her figure out a way for them to be together without if affecting Elijah...setting them off on a journey of discovery. Or at least a phone call to Maeve! 😉😂
09/04/2023 08:28
Sonia McLeod
lucky lady all those men trying to court her 😁
09/04/2023 08:28Oh snap! We’re gearing up to Determined’s epilogue! I’m excited. Also, I bet if Isla saw Colt defend Iona like she did, she’d be so proud! (like mother, like daughter) I love your books and writing style.
09/04/2023 08:27Sarah Kruger-Padgett
I remember the epilogue from determined and I can not wait to get that far here. I check everyday to see if there is more. I wanted to wait a bit so I had more to read at a time but am seriously addicted to this story and can not stay away
09/04/2023 08:27amber sweet
why does it seem that some of the commenets repeat 4 times
09/04/2023 08:26
Blabla
SOOOOO glad Isla is back 😍 she's such a bada** mom, I love her! 👏 And the chapters are great, thank you 😁👏🎉
09/04/2023 08:26
Katja Knip
❤❤
09/04/2023 08:25amber sweet
ughhhhh fine its not like all of us arnt dieing to see the turn of events
09/04/2023 08:25Maybe her dream wedding will come true only with to grooms. ❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:25Christine Owings
I am so moved by your writing. I have read determined and now started desired. you have been able to connect with your readers on every emotional level. I have laughed, cried throughout both. Thank you so much for this beautiful love story. I truly hope she ends up with Calum. Felix is also a stand out character that deserves his own tale.
09/04/2023 08:25Sniderin
This story has quickly become the update I am most excited about 😍🥰
09/04/2023 08:25Trish Yocham
What in the world did she just walk into??? I'm sooo excited to find out!!!
09/04/2023 08:24Lynora Crawford
Okay, that was one of the sweetest chapters I've ever read. 🥰
09/04/2023 08:24Ellie Vasileva
definitely not marrying Felix...remember the epilogue from Determined...but I agree it would solve another problem of hers
09/04/2023 08:24Lynora Crawford
I love the fact that the two have already run into each other... maybe there's hope for all of them? 🤔
09/04/2023 08:24Lynora Crawford
Aww...poor Alasdair! I'm apparently a sap, but I hope they all get their happy endings! 🥰 Hopefully Calum wises up soon, and starts testing Colt the way she deserves...I like him, despite his foolishness, lol! 😂
09/04/2023 08:23So happy ☺️
09/04/2023 08:23Jenn McCoy
thank goodness she is opening up more I think her realizing how much he truly has gone through helped. lol but your killing us here she literally knows someone with lots of knowledge but has yet to contact her 🤨lol. I hope they are able to figure things out they both deserve it and the pain they have been through is enough. I can't wait for more much love!
09/04/2023 08:23Meg Roberts
i do like sassy colt
09/04/2023 08:23ok This is getting so good. I hope at the end she ends up with both mates. I know deep down she still loves Elijah.
09/04/2023 08:21btw STAY SAFE EVERYONE!!!
09/04/2023 08:21Sarah Kruger-Padgett
I nearly spat my coffee out reading about Felix proposing. This chapter was amazing and can't wait for more.
09/04/2023 08:21Meg Roberts
i like the beat i on angus scenes
09/04/2023 08:21amber sweet
yes but will she be with her actual mate wildcat or will they keep barley missing one another??
09/04/2023 08:20Lynora Crawford
I really am enjoying the way that you give both perspectives! You balance them quite well, without driving us crazy with bouncing back and forth between the two.
09/04/2023 08:19Lynora Crawford
I'm thrilled that you started it so quickly! I'm glad you're giving us a lead-up to the epilogue in "Determined." I cannot wait to see what's in store for Colt! 😊
09/04/2023 08:19Meg Roberts
Felix!
09/04/2023 08:18Meg Roberts
love it!
09/04/2023 08:18amber sweet
we need more pleaseeee this was awesome
09/04/2023 08:17Lynora Crawford
I cannot wait for her family to arrive!!! Though I knew she would, I was thrilled to see how quickly Isla shifted from outraged to protective. I love them all, but Isla is definitely one of my top favorites.
09/04/2023 08:17Ellie Vasileva
wait... if my time line calculations are right, he is not going to meet her for a few more months... but I'm not worried for her, she can definitely kick some a**!!! it should be fun when she turns down all the marriage contenders
09/04/2023 08:16Katja Knip
love it. please more ❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 08:16Jenn McCoy
I love their relationship already he definitely calms her and grounds her they just need answers. I think 🤔 she was thinking of all the what ifs. lmao 🤣 picturing a 🦁 right when I wake up yea I would have lost it too Cullum. I'm happy she is opening up to him. yes not fully but atleast it's something! I kinda have a feeling Meave may be on her way there. I think her family will like Cullum too! can't wait to see how things keep developing as always much love to your amazing writing!
09/04/2023 08:16wow!!!! this so exciting!!! lol. what a surprise he got!!! soooo will she have both mates?! can’t wait to see what happens.
09/04/2023 08:15
Autumn Harvey
I love that Colt doesn't back down and doesn't let people treat in anyway she doesn't deserve :) it's a battle we all fight and she does just a fantastic job of saying "no"! can wait to see what happens next!!!!!
09/04/2023 08:14Lynora Crawford
Devious bat...maybe Granddad isn't as bad as he first seemed? 🤔
09/04/2023 08:13Blabla
Oooooh!!! GO TO WORK COLT! Can't wait for the next chapter 😍👏
09/04/2023 08:13He's going to tell him he is crazy .and think he is just messing with her. She lives him but more like a Best friend
09/04/2023 08:13Trish Yocham
I'm so happy Colt is back!! I can't wait to see what's in store for her!! Love your books Bethany!!
09/04/2023 08:12I LOVE IT!!!! wait til Calum hears about this!!! OH I can’t wait til the rest of the Merrier family visits Colt!! Wow the fireworks!!!
09/04/2023 08:11Sarah Kruger-Padgett
I was laughing so hard reading this chapter my husband thought I was losing my mind! This was incredible and I can not wait for more!
09/04/2023 08:10Blabla
Angus is such a d**k! I wish Colt had broken at least a couple more of his bones 😬😂 thanks for the update! And happy birthday to Mr. River 👏🎉
09/04/2023 08:10Oh! its wonderful to see Colt spoiled!! can we see what all the boxes contain?! love it!
09/04/2023 08:10Love that she is still so strong. After everything. Stronger and better.❤️
09/04/2023 08:08Blabla
Love the updates 😍 really looking forward to hell being raised, Colt style 😎🤘💪🧨😜
09/04/2023 08:02
