The Returned Luna Comments

  • CoconutPixie

    #50%offread He didn't treat her right, discarded her, and she died. Now she gets a new life and his daddy gets to clap those cheeks...epic

    08/31/2023 14:41

  • Switch Fix

    #50%offread I just want to be a fly on the wall when she runs into her ex with his dad. I hope he notices right away and is crushed!!!

    08/31/2023 14:40

  • Read Feeder

    #50%offread Dear Basil, how that crow taste?! ..If he doesnโ€™t treat you right, date/marry the man that raised him ๐Ÿคฃ

    08/31/2023 14:12

  • Dana

    i have only read a few chapters and i think it is a good bookโ€ฆi look forward to reading further and learning what she will do and if she will meet her husband from her past life #bingeread

    07/24/2023 14:18

  • Reader-762870

    literally donโ€™t bother. itโ€™s like the author doesnโ€™t even read what they have already written ๐Ÿ™„ one second sheโ€™s been declared his mate in front of everyone, the next no one knows why she is there, and so many other problems that are just not worth the money or time lost and Iโ€™m only 49 Chapters inโ€ฆ thatโ€™s as far as Iโ€™m going, I tried to make it work but itโ€™s not good

    04/11/2023 06:51

  • Donna Pember

    #6s7a# I just added this book to my reading list. I can't wait to read it.

    03/30/2023 12:54

  • Jan T

    6s7a #6s7a this story have good comments. I'm looking forward to reading it. I'm adding it to my reading list

    03/30/2023 12:49

  • Kat Waters

    6s7a this was such a great book he sure learned he had a great luna but only to late to bad she had to die but was reborn n2 his father's mate karma can get u

    03/30/2023 12:41

  • Kerry Graham

    6S7A I have enjoyed it so far and looking forward to how the story evolves and what happens

    03/30/2023 12:35

  • Iris Valles

    #6s7a# Such a good read highly recommend this book to anyone who likes books with a strong female lead and with a good redemption story line

    03/30/2023 12:30

  • Hayley louise

    6s7a have read this story before it's a second chance redemption story. With a strong female lead. Good read.

    03/30/2023 12:25

  • Awurabena Afriyie Asare

    #6s7a# this book is now on my top list. the characters are challenging in all aspects. i believe the girl would be happy at the end.

    03/30/2023 12:23

  • Vicki usher

    6s7a# I had to add this book to my collect as it seems to have a bit of everything. A strong female, betrayal and of course a second chance mate.

    03/30/2023 12:16

  • Kitty-694016

    6s7a. this is a book on my to be read list. This challenge is causing that list to grow!

    03/30/2023 12:12

  • John Robinson

    6s 7a What a start to a story poor sweet Laura, what a nasty mate she's better off without him. Hoping she gets her happily ever and a better second chance mate.

    03/30/2023 12:11

  • Martial Flor

    6s7a very well written book, really good author who clearly worked hard on defining and "polishing" each character. to read at least twice

    03/30/2023 12:09

  • Michibeba

    #6s7a# This sounds like a good second chance/redemption story, I am hoping that even though her mate is her ex father-in-law that there is a reason to him not having waited for her, his true mate.

    03/30/2023 12:09

  • Alexis Bail

    is this story complete? i have come across a lot of stories that said complete but they are not

    03/05/2023 07:06

  • Sandra Kazlaskas

    how would they have a staffing shortage with all the festivities Basil & the ministers kept throwing aND Basil insisting that there would be no position open for Laura/Laurel in the castle? Not feasible! Sarahโ€™s role would be to help Laurel as approved by King Adolp.

    01/22/2023 00:59

  • debi harley

    I have read this story over 10 times and still love it.

    01/21/2023 10:57

  • tina preston

    have read this story on another site. excellent reading, you won't be disappointed.

    01/17/2023 22:25

  • Ashleigh Law

    Bleeding your readers for money with a absurdly slow story with zero character development is annoying and disrespectful. I pushed through to chapter 45 in hopes that at SOME POINT something would start happening and I wouldnโ€™t be reading the same thing over and over, but couldnโ€™t take it anymore. Itโ€™s like groundhogs day. I pulled the plug on this story.

    01/12/2023 03:35

  • Diana Belford

    I would like to slap her

    10/06/2022 15:41

  • Gail Gilliam

    kq7ku

    08/25/2022 22:54

  • Maiden0110

    Is ch 174, Jack, the last chapter? Maybe I've been spoiled by final chapters being labeled as epilogues, or burned by this author apparently abandoning her stories...

    08/22/2022 16:41

  • Carol Taylor

    would definitely love to read about Eden he really needs a mate this book was so good great story line

    08/20/2022 18:38

  • Elsie Badenhorst

    I love the first 9 chapters, cant wait to read more.

    08/04/2022 18:50

  • Vivi Tay

    after torn then you regreted and fantasi to wearing it before you wanted to return it to d kibg, too much drama this laura

    07/28/2022 07:36

  • Klara-KK

    is this book completed?

    07/08/2022 00:03

  • Reader-804123

    loved this book so for

    07/05/2022 07:55

  • Diana Dsouza

    loved the book.... I truly enjoyed reading it!!!

    06/18/2022 15:30

  • CharlieV96

    tbh If I were here I would curse Basils lineage ๐Ÿ‘€

    06/16/2022 22:06

  • Cathleen Cox

    loved the book please write a sequel!!!!!!!

    05/20/2022 14:50

  • Julie Black

    Fantastic book. I really enjoyed it.

    05/11/2022 05:18

  • Adaugo Gina

    wow I really enjoyed his book๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜,Thanks Laurie great story lines you have here kudos

    05/04/2022 22:15

  • Klara-KK

    is this book completed?

    05/01/2022 11:55

  • Elle Rose

    sad book. wish I could get my money back

    04/27/2022 04:01

  • Angelica Nicole Johnson

    Funny how Delia STILL thinks that dress was hers!! ๐Ÿ˜‚ What an idiot

    04/25/2022 16:56

  • Angelica Nicole Johnson

    Lmao!!! Basil thinks he can tell his father what to do like he is king? Laughable!!

    04/25/2022 14:15

  • Brittany Roberts

    This book was just wow! I read the comments along the way and found a lot of disregard for you as an author. It was as if they expected the book to be written exactly the same way as every other werewolf novel out there, at the same pace and with the same story plot. I, however, found your nobel to be an extremely nice change to the werewolf novel. It was less about the werewolf side (though you did incorporate them throughout the story) and more about the people within in the story. While it first, I believed after Laura was reincarnated the story seems to progress slowly, but the end I had to say I understand why. So much time, effort and consideration went into the introduction, development and growth of each character that without the "stuffing" and seemingly slow progression of the chapters none of the book would have made sense. Thank you for your out of the box approach and creating a brilliant story with amazing characters and depth not reached in many books I have read.

    04/25/2022 12:43

  • Maffie Mangaoang

    Oh Eden .. should have a mate too

    04/22/2022 08:56

  • Valerie Newman

    who is Arthur? I thought his name was adolph

    04/18/2022 06:53

  • Tiffany Oswalt

    so far so good! just wondering if you have any idea how long this book will be?

    04/17/2022 21:56

  • Zinzi Trisha Gceba Fraser

    love the book

    04/13/2022 10:25

  • Reader-315135

    Great book๏ผ

    04/06/2022 06:27

  • Kay Mc Laurin

    I love Adolph!

    04/05/2022 19:56

  • Lori Platz

    she needs to get over basil. she feels on it too much

    04/05/2022 01:41

  • Iani328

    this was a great book. I loved reading it. would there be a sequel? it would be nice to read one with Eden finding his mate.

    04/04/2022 02:45

  • 676lucy

    upto chapter 37 and the further I read the more annoyed I get with Laurel ๐Ÿ˜’

    04/03/2022 11:45

  • Stana Stefano

    i really enjoyed this book!! will there be a sequel?? i finished it in 2 days!!!

    04/03/2022 01:53

  • Courtney Michele

    this story is wonderful and very well written. Iโ€™m hooked

    03/30/2022 18:08

  • Fatema Bhattacharya

    waiting for updates....love the story

    03/30/2022 15:01

  • Brittney Allen

    loved it from. beginning to end๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ

    03/30/2022 00:27

  • Ermer Kalinggalan

    nice story ๐Ÿ˜Š

    03/29/2022 14:36

  • Jennifer L. Giambrone

    whew!! ( releases breath being held) omg! love it!

    03/25/2022 16:01

  • Iani328

    i love this update! I love this book!!!

    03/24/2022 11:32

  • Michelle Squires

    while I love the story and drama these updates are to short and makes you lose the essence of the story with the long wait.

    03/21/2022 13:11

  • Lorrie Bartlett-Cook

    this girl is doing my head in

    03/20/2022 01:48

  • Jessica Bean

    she is wasting away her second chance at life like the moon godess gave her and blaming everyone else for their actions when she refuses to actually talk

    03/13/2022 07:41

  • Leonie Rapana

    love this story! bye bye Gavin the narcissist!

    03/11/2022 07:42

  • Wendy Virginia

    canโ€™t say how much I love this story! just gets better and better!

    03/10/2022 12:52

  • Jennifer L. Giambrone

    finally! thank the Goddess, Delia is getting what she deserves!

    02/25/2022 19:40

  • Keely Moor

    How often are the updates please?

    02/22/2022 19:05

  • Sunrise

    i absolutely love this story. what a pleasant progression.

    02/11/2022 19:12

  • Minca Westerhof

    i love this story

    02/11/2022 07:12

  • Catherine O'Neill

    Well I think il pass on this one every one is disappointed with the main character

    02/09/2022 20:01

  • elle

    the girl in this story is very stupid,,,when she is describe strong ang wise but i dont see it,,,she can be easily fooled thats all maybe the author got the wring meaning of strong and wise

    02/08/2022 15:35

  • angela aldous

    needed further development to hook me into this one, seems ok but Iโ€™ll pass

    02/07/2022 01:09

  • Marcilla Pace

    when will this be continued please

    02/06/2022 02:02

  • Jennifer L. Giambrone

    need an update please please please ๐Ÿฅบ

    02/05/2022 04:30

  • Jennifer L. Giambrone

    are we going to get back to the story going on at the castle? Laura getting murdered, Delia, Basil...and all that??? !! I'm excited to see what happens after they get back from this mess with Eden.

    02/05/2022 04:30

  • Aline Laurent

    when are updates please?

    02/03/2022 04:23

  • Blessing Chukwuma

    wow

    01/31/2022 13:31

  • dolly pit

    idk why but want Laurel to be with Eden

    01/19/2022 06:47

  • Pamela Pfaff

    I feel so very sorry for the Heroine of this story-I really hope that all those who abused and humiliated her get what the royally deserve-I hope from where this story seems to be going that she is going to end up with the head king-the father of the mate who deserted, abandoned,and then most likely had her killed-๐Ÿ˜ธ๐ŸŒท๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿ‡ณ๐Ÿ‡ฑ๐Ÿ‡ฒ๐Ÿ‡จ

    01/17/2022 13:19

  • Patricia Hodge

    hope that does it for whoever is reading these comments.

    01/16/2022 00:24

  • Michelle Squires

    laurel acts so much as a young child throwing taundrum, she has lived as a mature woman and need to stop asking like a naive girl. she seems to have not learned anything from all those years of living in the kingdom, she still looks at herself as nobody in her thinking she needs to get her act together, let's.see some back bone.

    01/12/2022 21:21

  • Jennifer L. Giambrone

    God, Delia is such a bitch!

    01/09/2022 05:24

  • Jennifer L. Giambrone

    if no one has told you already, the cover change is great!

    01/07/2022 13:00

  • damla incesu

    chapter 76 missing

    12/27/2021 08:28

  • Lacie

    really love this storyโ€ฆ

    12/25/2021 14:15

  • Mia T

    I think that chapter 76 is missing

    12/23/2021 22:28

  • nicg20

    I get why Laura/laurel is acting the way she is towards the king but sometimes she takes it to far and is super annoying

    12/23/2021 13:15

  • Renae

    does the author @laurie respond to comments?

    12/23/2021 00:08

  • Aline Laurent

    does anyone know what the update schedule is??

    12/21/2021 23:08

  • Lynn Hojnacki Lajoie

    do you maintain an update schedule for this story?

    12/21/2021 19:15

  • Georgia

    how many chapters will be in this?

    11/30/2021 05:37

  • Jennifer rand

    waited a week to read. or was worth the wait. cant wait to see what Basil desides. & how it goes with Laurel & zadolph

    11/26/2021 07:16

  • Cypher

    Thank you for your amazing storytelling. Your updates are much anticipated, and I am truly enjoying this book ๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธ

    11/22/2021 12:07

  • Jennifer rand

    I love the story. especially since Adolph & Laurel have finally got together

    11/18/2021 05:00

  • DeAnna Phillips

    I hope she knocks her teeth out. There is no way she should get away with what she has done. She is stupid if she does not tell the king but of course she will cover it up like everyone in her place they're usually do.

    11/16/2021 19:26

  • elle

    what an annoying character laurel have,,,

    11/15/2021 05:41

  • Lacie

    when do you update it?

    11/15/2021 05:16

  • Lacie

    canโ€™t wait to read more!

    11/15/2021 05:15

  • elle

    so im just starting to read this book for those who read this quite far may i ask if its good? or the female lead is weak or act stupid or let someone abuse her?

    11/15/2021 04:00

  • NurseAimz18

    Why is she always taking abuse from Delia? If she is the Kingโ€™s mate she needs to check her and stop letting her talk and hit her.

    11/15/2021 02:50

  • Kristina Mitchell

    Hi! I'm so excited to read this book, you had me hooked with the preview!! I was wondering if it is part of a series and if so is this book 1? I LOVE series books but don't want to start in the middle lol.

    11/15/2021 02:37

  • Natalia Garza Flores

    and another thing I think people should we eat your story more and comment because you have some great material

    11/09/2021 03:20

  • Natalia Garza Flores

    why...why do these chapters have to be so short stop leaving me on a cliffhanger can you please make a tiny bit longer โคโคโค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

    11/09/2021 03:19

  • Bonib2

    Initially I liked Eden for rescuing her, but I started doubting him when I remember the man Gavin is speaking to and the fact he is connected to the ministers.

    10/30/2021 03:03
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