Fates Hands Comments

  • Amanda LeBleu Olivier

    This was am amazing book!

    01/11/2022 18:37
  • Oris Lawani

    I love the book, now that I'm really enjoying it, is when the rest chapters are locked, this is not fair, I want to read more today

    01/11/2022 18:21
  • GnoMe- ToXicYT

    good story

    01/11/2022 18:07
  • Georgette Price

    good story

    01/11/2022 17:45
  • Chaling Lowang

    poor grammar but interesting. can't wait any longer.

    01/11/2022 16:01
  • Marcel MaryJane

    wow

    01/11/2022 14:42
  • Cathy Jayakaram

    why are the chapters locked from.6

    01/11/2022 14:19
  • Lauren Green

    it's $25 for all the chapters currently available. that's a lot for something that is so poorly edited.

    01/11/2022 12:31
  • Michelle Mckinney

    tick in the butt crack πŸ˜‚

    01/11/2022 09:25
  • Karen Panapa- Simon

    grammar,poof...if the story keeps you reading,then it has caught your imagination....

    01/11/2022 05:26
  • jennyannie13

    This book needs serious editing. Especially punctuation (commas) and sentence structure. A little continuity check would be nice as well. Its a really good book besides that

    01/11/2022 04:46
  • N Hen-swis

    love the story but may I suggest you go back and correct people's names. you have the dead prince call his brother one name then you use another. wrong werelion as leader.

    01/11/2022 04:42
  • Winona Kalagi

    Sam πŸ’€πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

    01/11/2022 03:56
  • Claudine Davoren

    what I'm finding annoying is reading it then all of a sudden it stops and says oops try again

    01/11/2022 03:18
  • Claudine Davoren

    what I'm finding annoying is reading it then all of a sudden it stops and says oops try again

    01/11/2022 03:18
  • FV Zammy

    Where can we buy the whole book?

    01/11/2022 03:14
  • Elizabeth G. Eusebio

    Maybe we can have a discounted price if we buy the whole book at the onset. That way, I will know if I can afford it or not.

    01/11/2022 02:08
  • Heather Hopkins

    I'm just wondering what the other books in the series are?

    01/11/2022 01:12
  • Debbie Slocum Lockwood

    great so far

    01/10/2022 23:44
  • Carmen Penley

    This is not my normal type of story, but have to say, I'm LOVING it so far!

    01/10/2022 23:25
  • 94DeZz

    almost 1am and I cannot stop reading.... Amazing book ❀️

    01/10/2022 22:41
  • Karen Jacobi

    So far decent story, but very poorly written. Punctuation would help. as well as a writing class.

    01/10/2022 20:36
  • Esther Eric Egagah

    I don't usually read about wolf but dis very storyline is interesting to read can't wait to see what ll happen to Eric n lilly n their pack. they re so wicked.

    01/10/2022 19:53
  • Yvonne Muzembe

    i lovd to read your bookes

    01/10/2022 19:25
  • Simply, Nikki J

    omg people! idon't know if she asked for it or not, but if not, y'all really don't have to correct every single editing mistake. goodness. English is not everyone's 1st language. it's ok. you know what's being said. just go with it.

    01/10/2022 19:21
  • Sondra Robinson

    love this story.

    01/10/2022 17:37
  • Cher Walker

    I love it read till I couldn't read anymore that's why I never finish a book on these apps I want to but I don't have funds for it

    01/10/2022 16:02
  • Maureen Otieno

    Nice story

    01/10/2022 13:32
  • Scryn.Gurl

    The beginning is thrilling

    01/10/2022 10:48
  • Jenny Wienand

    can't wait to finish reading this book....

    01/10/2022 08:39
  • Hitana Azul Raviz

    i love it

    01/10/2022 07:22
  • Kristen Short

    I have to kno before I continue to read. FL isn't going to continuously get hurt again?

    01/10/2022 04:42
  • Alcestic

    love it

    01/10/2022 04:24
  • Carlena Wilson

    loving the story

    01/10/2022 02:29
  • Mercedes Gonzalez

    I love the story

    01/10/2022 01:41
  • Janinne Broxton

    Chapter 6 or 7 her name changed from Adira to Adair. was that intentional?

    01/10/2022 01:40
  • Leanne Barbour

    love the story so far

    01/10/2022 01:14
  • Robin Schlimgen Perron

    Alexander is short and heavy.

    01/10/2022 00:31
  • Aniemerr Dela Cruz

    nice story

    01/09/2022 22:43
  • Patrice Karas

    so far, I'm enjoying , but I would prefer to buy the whole book in one goal.

    01/09/2022 22:25
  • Robyn Charles

    I like the story so far

    01/09/2022 21:11
  • Stacey Thomson

    it's good so far

    01/09/2022 20:02
  • Monja Oosthuizen

    Very well written can't stop reading

    01/09/2022 19:11
  • Momma Bair

    I'm interested in this but why the locked chapters? I don't have the money to unlock them.

    01/09/2022 18:34
  • FireJewel Howard

    Lori ameling....this is fantastic...I would like to buy an actual printed book

    01/09/2022 17:06
  • FireJewel Howard

    where can I just buy the books?

    01/09/2022 17:05
  • Luna Wolf

    I'm was hooked by the first page. keep on writing. this is so good

    01/09/2022 15:46
  • Stephanie Smoot

    loved the characters. based loosely on Cinderella?

    01/09/2022 12:37
  • Christy Linville Spradlin

    love so far

    01/09/2022 12:17
  • Christy Linville Spradlin

    love the characters

    01/09/2022 12:16
  • Christy Linville Spradlin

    very good story

    01/09/2022 12:16
  • Ioana Pop

    Liked the story Θ™i far

    01/09/2022 07:59
  • N Hen-swis

    I thought the king had 2 sons but he made a comment the prince was his only family. I remember the prince saying he had a brother Alex. I am wrong

    01/09/2022 05:32
  • Candice

    I am hooked great story so far

    01/09/2022 00:59
  • Sheso Real

    great story so far wishbthe chapters were longer

    01/09/2022 00:42
  • Tiffany Rogers

    I love the story so far , saw the add on Facebook and just fell into it. So far amazing story telling , my only complaint is I wish the chapters were a little longer but I'm a speed reader so I wish that for every great πŸ“–

    01/09/2022 00:18
  • Ashley Santana

    love the story so far

    01/08/2022 17:56
  • Laura Graham

    loving the story the people are well written and 3 dimensional, my only complaint is my little pet pev is some gamma mistakes other then that cant wait for the next chapter.

    01/08/2022 16:22
  • Diva's Hill

    I thought Sparrow would be a good name. She flew away from those a$$holes

    01/08/2022 15:07
  • kashiqua25@hotmail.com

    That name though. I am just imagining if i had a name spare i would give it a fancy pronounication to make it sound like spa - re ore sp-are-re or something and i will hate my mother for life

    01/08/2022 13:06
  • Natalie Rose Nitschke

    love the were bears idea of justice.

    01/08/2022 09:46
  • Charito Calabia

    love the story

    01/08/2022 08:02
  • Olga Garcia-McRae

    so good. can't stop reading it

    01/08/2022 05:28
  • Kimberly Pevehouse

    very well written, with interesting characters.

    01/08/2022 03:11
  • Trina Castjean

    Absolutely love this story ❀

    01/07/2022 21:40
  • keituza kau

    very good story.. poor spare..atleast she has a chance for better life..

    01/07/2022 19:14
  • Reader-066926

    I think it’s a dragon

    01/04/2022 16:17
  • Lori Ameling

    The Spare is now "Fates Hands" A three book series . everything is the same, just changed the name.

    12/31/2021 18:56
  • Reader-819860

    The beginning of this book had me hooked, however it did fizzle out towards the end. it was a good read.

    12/30/2021 20:55
  • Lori Ameling

    Book 2 chapter 1 is now posted with the Spare, decided to do it as a bundle. that way all three will be right here.

    12/30/2021 04:27
  • Michelle

    really enjoyed reading this book. can’t wait for jacks story I do hope the others are in it to.

    12/29/2021 10:21
  • GlamMa66

    awesome read can't wait for Jack's book to come out. keep writing and I will keep reading πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

    12/29/2021 05:41
  • Allison Kerpash

    awesome book, other than some editing mistakes. The contraction "would've" is actually would have not would of.

    12/28/2021 16:28
  • Lori Ameling

    To all my reader's, just letting you know that, the story will soon come to it's end. I hope you will all continue to enjoy it.

    12/28/2021 04:56
  • Michelle Campbell

    .love the book, when is the next update? i cant wait! ❀

    12/26/2021 01:55
  • Bonnie

    I'm enjoying this book so far πŸ˜ƒ

    12/24/2021 02:49
  • Gina Rodriguez

    omg Lily deserves to find her happily ever πŸ’– after

    12/18/2021 17:58
  • Lori Ameling

    Can anyone guess what's behind the double doors?πŸ€”

    12/15/2021 20:06
  • Mariam Kromah

    love the book

    12/08/2021 05:22
  • Ava Miakoda

    Glad did not have to wait for a long while after that ending of 33! Still enjoying your book!

    12/02/2021 03:14
  • Ashleigh Nadeau

    I'm addicted to this story! I just binge read the chapters that are here. can't wait for the next update!

    12/01/2021 01:42
  • Elizabeth Carrillo

    How many chapters will this story be?

    11/30/2021 00:53
  • Lori Ameling

    Happy Thanksgiving πŸ¦ƒ

    11/25/2021 19:12
  • Reader-727304

    Why other chapters lock now ?

    11/25/2021 03:43
  • Lori Ameling

    my response to your message was also deleted.πŸ˜—

    11/25/2021 02:50
  • Desirae Justine

    my comment about the chapters being locked was deleted?

    11/25/2021 01:43
  • Wcha

    how come chapters are locked now

    11/24/2021 21:29
  • Lori Ameling

    Thank you everyone , I hope you are all enjoying the story. I love to read all you comments. please if you find something wrong let me know.

    11/24/2021 09:03
  • Cypher

    Congratulations on getting the story signed

    11/24/2021 06:56
  • Lori Ameling

    I want to thank everyone one for reading this story. I post at least one daily, however it isn't showing that this story is updated. Just wanted you to know. check it now and then for the updates. Love you all,πŸ˜‰Lori

    11/19/2021 06:02
  • Pat Taumaa

    omg just started this book and love it Needing more updates please author you have me hooked on ur story alreadyπŸ˜ŠπŸ’ž

    11/13/2021 20:08
  • Azaria Israel

    Love this book and it's pace is just right ☺️☺️☺️ Also the werebears are my favorite so far😎😎😎 Please keep writing this book is amazing

    11/13/2021 14:39
  • Lovebug

    I love that there wolf are name after Greek gods

    11/13/2021 02:05
  • Lovebug

    I love this book 😊❀️❀️❀️❣️

    11/13/2021 01:56
  • Celeste Gagne

    I’m liking this story very much. Thank you for it

    11/12/2021 22:59
  • Johanna neal

    OMG I love this book!! please update more chapters!!❀❀❀

    11/12/2021 13:31