Fates Hands Comments

  • Reader-854304

    I really enjoyed this story.

    09/04/2023 09:58

  • Chrissy Gun

    so far so good

    09/04/2023 09:58

  • Bev Horton

    simply the best story I have read in this genre absolutely enthralled from first to last can’t wait to read jacks story you have a wondrous talent keep the stories coming please ❤️

    09/04/2023 09:58

  • Carolyn Tucker

    so far grest

    09/04/2023 09:58

  • Abigail Lonia Smith

    Love it

    09/04/2023 09:57

  • Bezo Maimbo

    should have not should of

    09/04/2023 09:57

  • Reader-819860

    The beginning of this book had me hooked, however it did fizzle out towards the end. it was a good read.

    09/04/2023 09:57

  • Lorraine Russell

    very good read

    09/04/2023 09:57

  • Christi Thomas

    I’m already in love with these characters!! this is a great book so far and I’m really loving this storyline.🤓🤓

    09/04/2023 09:57

  • Ebony Rosado

    amazing story crazy twist and turns.. never kno what to expect next great story

    09/04/2023 09:57

  • faulkdizzy

    so far not bad but I get thrown off with the POV. will keep reading though.

    09/04/2023 09:57

  • Jenny Burston

    love it

    09/04/2023 09:57

  • Jackie S Byrd

    so far so good

    09/04/2023 09:56

  • Reader-601715

    these were great reads. great characters and plots. lots of suspense, humorous parts and drama. please post rest of chapters quickly

    09/04/2023 09:56

  • libra inday

    nice story

    09/04/2023 09:56

  • lenya Brent

    This book is bringing me so much joy in reading it, thank you for sharing your craft. please continue to write stories, you have a true gift.

    09/04/2023 09:56

  • Lucilyn Cuevas

    very interesting, want to read more...

    09/04/2023 09:56

  • love it

    09/04/2023 09:56

  • Mere-Wairita Ecawa Naisua

    So far so good 👍

    09/04/2023 09:56

  • Patrice Karas

    so far, I'm enjoying , but I would prefer to buy the whole book in one goal.

    09/04/2023 09:55

  • Elexis Craig

    I must say, I am really enjoying this book, but more than some of the others I've been reading on these apps. This has definitely got me hooked. Poor King..

    09/04/2023 09:55

  • Michelle Mckinney

    how often do you do updates I normally don't do these kinda of stories but seen it on FB so far it's pretty good but please don't Drag it out

    09/04/2023 09:55

  • Lisa Ferguson

    I am excited to see how this one progresses. the story line has everything a great book needs and it keeps me interested to read more!!!

    09/04/2023 09:54

  • Lori Ameling

    Book 2 chapter 1 is now posted with the Spare, decided to do it as a bundle. that way all three will be right here.

    09/04/2023 09:54

  • Scryn.Gurl

    The beginning is thrilling

    09/04/2023 09:53

  • Claudine Davoren

    what I'm finding annoying is reading it then all of a sudden it stops and says oops try again

    09/04/2023 09:53

  • Sondra Robinson

    love this story.

    09/04/2023 09:52

  • FireJewel Howard

    Lori ameling....this is fantastic...I would like to buy an actual printed book

    09/04/2023 09:52

  • Laura Graham

    loving the story the people are well written and 3 dimensional, my only complaint is my little pet pev is some gamma mistakes other then that cant wait for the next chapter.

    09/04/2023 09:52

  • Janinne Broxton

    Chapter 6 or 7 her name changed from Adira to Adair. was that intentional?

    09/04/2023 09:52

  • Monja Oosthuizen

    Very well written can't stop reading

    09/04/2023 09:51

  • Ioana Pop

    Liked the story și far

    09/04/2023 09:51

  • Charito Calabia

    love the story

    09/04/2023 09:49

  • I want to thank everyone one for reading this story. I post at least one daily, however it isn't showing that this story is updated. Just wanted you to know. check it now and then for the updates. Love you all,😉Lori

    09/04/2023 09:47

  • Johanna neal

    OMG I love this book!! please update more chapters!!❤❤❤

    09/04/2023 09:45

  • my comment about the chapters being locked was deleted?

    09/04/2023 09:45

  • Ashleigh Nadeau

    I'm addicted to this story! I just binge read the chapters that are here. can't wait for the next update!

    09/04/2023 09:44

  • Lori Ameling

    To all my reader's, just letting you know that, the story will soon come to it's end. I hope you will all continue to enjoy it.

    09/04/2023 09:43

  • Pat Taumaa

    omg just started this book and love it Needing more updates please author you have me hooked on ur story already😊💞

    09/04/2023 09:43

  • Lori Ameling

    Thank you everyone , I hope you are all enjoying the story. I love to read all you comments. please if you find something wrong let me know.

    09/04/2023 09:43

  • Congratulations on getting the story signed

    09/04/2023 09:41

  • .love the book, when is the next update? i cant wait! ❤

    09/04/2023 09:39

  • Reader-727304

    Why other chapters lock now ?

    09/04/2023 09:39

  • Celeste Gagne

    I’m liking this story very much. Thank you for it

    09/04/2023 09:36

  • I love this book 😊❤️❤️❤️❣️

    09/04/2023 09:34

  • Lori Ameling

    Can anyone guess what's behind the double doors?🤔

    09/04/2023 09:34

  • I love that there wolf are name after Greek gods

    09/04/2023 09:31

  • Wcha

    how come chapters are locked now

    09/04/2023 09:30

  • Mariam Kromah

    love the book

    09/04/2023 09:27

  • Ava Miakoda

    Glad did not have to wait for a long while after that ending of 33! Still enjoying your book!

    09/04/2023 09:21

  • Elizabeth Carrillo

    How many chapters will this story be?

    09/04/2023 09:20

  • Lori Ameling

    Happy Thanksgiving 🦃

    09/04/2023 09:18
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