Fates Hands Comments
Amanda LeBleu Olivier
This was am amazing book!
01/11/2022 18:37Oris Lawani
I love the book, now that I'm really enjoying it, is when the rest chapters are locked, this is not fair, I want to read more today
01/11/2022 18:21GnoMe- ToXicYT
good story
01/11/2022 18:07Georgette Price
good story
01/11/2022 17:45Chaling Lowang
poor grammar but interesting. can't wait any longer.
01/11/2022 16:01Marcel MaryJane
wow
01/11/2022 14:42Cathy Jayakaram
why are the chapters locked from.6
01/11/2022 14:19Lauren Green
it's $25 for all the chapters currently available. that's a lot for something that is so poorly edited.
01/11/2022 12:31Michelle Mckinney
tick in the butt crack π
01/11/2022 09:25Karen Panapa- Simon
grammar,poof...if the story keeps you reading,then it has caught your imagination....
01/11/2022 05:26jennyannie13
This book needs serious editing. Especially punctuation (commas) and sentence structure. A little continuity check would be nice as well. Its a really good book besides that
01/11/2022 04:46N Hen-swis
love the story but may I suggest you go back and correct people's names. you have the dead prince call his brother one name then you use another. wrong werelion as leader.
01/11/2022 04:42Winona Kalagi
Sam πππ€£
01/11/2022 03:56Claudine Davoren
what I'm finding annoying is reading it then all of a sudden it stops and says oops try again
01/11/2022 03:18Claudine Davoren
what I'm finding annoying is reading it then all of a sudden it stops and says oops try again
01/11/2022 03:18FV Zammy
Where can we buy the whole book?
01/11/2022 03:14Elizabeth G. Eusebio
Maybe we can have a discounted price if we buy the whole book at the onset. That way, I will know if I can afford it or not.
01/11/2022 02:08Heather Hopkins
I'm just wondering what the other books in the series are?
01/11/2022 01:12Debbie Slocum Lockwood
great so far
01/10/2022 23:44Carmen Penley
This is not my normal type of story, but have to say, I'm LOVING it so far!
01/10/2022 23:2594DeZz
almost 1am and I cannot stop reading.... Amazing book β€οΈ
01/10/2022 22:41Karen Jacobi
So far decent story, but very poorly written. Punctuation would help. as well as a writing class.
01/10/2022 20:36Esther Eric Egagah
I don't usually read about wolf but dis very storyline is interesting to read can't wait to see what ll happen to Eric n lilly n their pack. they re so wicked.
01/10/2022 19:53Yvonne Muzembe
i lovd to read your bookes
01/10/2022 19:25Simply, Nikki J
omg people! idon't know if she asked for it or not, but if not, y'all really don't have to correct every single editing mistake. goodness. English is not everyone's 1st language. it's ok. you know what's being said. just go with it.
01/10/2022 19:21Sondra Robinson
love this story.
01/10/2022 17:37Cher Walker
I love it read till I couldn't read anymore that's why I never finish a book on these apps I want to but I don't have funds for it
01/10/2022 16:02Maureen Otieno
Nice story
01/10/2022 13:32Scryn.Gurl
The beginning is thrilling
01/10/2022 10:48Jenny Wienand
can't wait to finish reading this book....
01/10/2022 08:39Hitana Azul Raviz
i love it
01/10/2022 07:22Kristen Short
I have to kno before I continue to read. FL isn't going to continuously get hurt again?
01/10/2022 04:42Alcestic
love it
01/10/2022 04:24Carlena Wilson
loving the story
01/10/2022 02:29Mercedes Gonzalez
I love the story
01/10/2022 01:41Janinne Broxton
Chapter 6 or 7 her name changed from Adira to Adair. was that intentional?
01/10/2022 01:40Leanne Barbour
love the story so far
01/10/2022 01:14Robin Schlimgen Perron
Alexander is short and heavy.
01/10/2022 00:31Aniemerr Dela Cruz
nice story
01/09/2022 22:43Patrice Karas
so far, I'm enjoying , but I would prefer to buy the whole book in one goal.
01/09/2022 22:25Robyn Charles
I like the story so far
01/09/2022 21:11Stacey Thomson
it's good so far
01/09/2022 20:02Monja Oosthuizen
Very well written can't stop reading
01/09/2022 19:11Momma Bair
I'm interested in this but why the locked chapters? I don't have the money to unlock them.
01/09/2022 18:34FireJewel Howard
Lori ameling....this is fantastic...I would like to buy an actual printed book
01/09/2022 17:06FireJewel Howard
where can I just buy the books?
01/09/2022 17:05Luna Wolf
I'm was hooked by the first page. keep on writing. this is so good
01/09/2022 15:46Stephanie Smoot
loved the characters. based loosely on Cinderella?
01/09/2022 12:37Christy Linville Spradlin
love so far
01/09/2022 12:17Christy Linville Spradlin
love the characters
01/09/2022 12:16Christy Linville Spradlin
very good story
01/09/2022 12:16Ioana Pop
Liked the story Θi far
01/09/2022 07:59N Hen-swis
I thought the king had 2 sons but he made a comment the prince was his only family. I remember the prince saying he had a brother Alex. I am wrong
01/09/2022 05:32Candice
I am hooked great story so far
01/09/2022 00:59Sheso Real
great story so far wishbthe chapters were longer
01/09/2022 00:42Tiffany Rogers
I love the story so far , saw the add on Facebook and just fell into it. So far amazing story telling , my only complaint is I wish the chapters were a little longer but I'm a speed reader so I wish that for every great π
01/09/2022 00:18Ashley Santana
love the story so far
01/08/2022 17:56Laura Graham
loving the story the people are well written and 3 dimensional, my only complaint is my little pet pev is some gamma mistakes other then that cant wait for the next chapter.
01/08/2022 16:22Diva's Hill
I thought Sparrow would be a good name. She flew away from those a$$holes
01/08/2022 15:07kashiqua25@hotmail.com
That name though. I am just imagining if i had a name spare i would give it a fancy pronounication to make it sound like spa - re ore sp-are-re or something and i will hate my mother for life
01/08/2022 13:06Natalie Rose Nitschke
love the were bears idea of justice.
01/08/2022 09:46Charito Calabia
love the story
01/08/2022 08:02Olga Garcia-McRae
so good. can't stop reading it
01/08/2022 05:28Kimberly Pevehouse
very well written, with interesting characters.
01/08/2022 03:11Trina Castjean
Absolutely love this story β€
01/07/2022 21:40keituza kau
very good story.. poor spare..atleast she has a chance for better life..
01/07/2022 19:14Reader-066926
I think itβs a dragon
01/04/2022 16:17Lori Ameling
The Spare is now "Fates Hands" A three book series . everything is the same, just changed the name.
12/31/2021 18:56Reader-819860
The beginning of this book had me hooked, however it did fizzle out towards the end. it was a good read.
12/30/2021 20:55Lori Ameling
Book 2 chapter 1 is now posted with the Spare, decided to do it as a bundle. that way all three will be right here.
12/30/2021 04:27Michelle
really enjoyed reading this book. canβt wait for jacks story I do hope the others are in it to.
12/29/2021 10:21GlamMa66
awesome read can't wait for Jack's book to come out. keep writing and I will keep reading π₯π₯π₯π₯
12/29/2021 05:41Allison Kerpash
awesome book, other than some editing mistakes. The contraction "would've" is actually would have not would of.
12/28/2021 16:28Lori Ameling
To all my reader's, just letting you know that, the story will soon come to it's end. I hope you will all continue to enjoy it.
12/28/2021 04:56Michelle Campbell
.love the book, when is the next update? i cant wait! β€
12/26/2021 01:55Bonnie
I'm enjoying this book so far π
12/24/2021 02:49Gina Rodriguez
omg Lily deserves to find her happily ever π after
12/18/2021 17:58Lori Ameling
Can anyone guess what's behind the double doors?π€
12/15/2021 20:06Mariam Kromah
love the book
12/08/2021 05:22Ava Miakoda
Glad did not have to wait for a long while after that ending of 33! Still enjoying your book!
12/02/2021 03:14Ashleigh Nadeau
I'm addicted to this story! I just binge read the chapters that are here. can't wait for the next update!
12/01/2021 01:42Elizabeth Carrillo
How many chapters will this story be?
11/30/2021 00:53Lori Ameling
Happy Thanksgiving π¦
11/25/2021 19:12Reader-727304
Why other chapters lock now ?
11/25/2021 03:43Lori Ameling
my response to your message was also deleted.π
11/25/2021 02:50Desirae Justine
my comment about the chapters being locked was deleted?
11/25/2021 01:43Wcha
how come chapters are locked now
11/24/2021 21:29Lori Ameling
Thank you everyone , I hope you are all enjoying the story. I love to read all you comments. please if you find something wrong let me know.
11/24/2021 09:03Cypher
Congratulations on getting the story signed
11/24/2021 06:56Lori Ameling
I want to thank everyone one for reading this story. I post at least one daily, however it isn't showing that this story is updated. Just wanted you to know. check it now and then for the updates. Love you all,πLori
11/19/2021 06:02Pat Taumaa
omg just started this book and love it Needing more updates please author you have me hooked on ur story alreadyππ
11/13/2021 20:08Azaria Israel
Love this book and it's pace is just right βΊοΈβΊοΈβΊοΈ Also the werebears are my favorite so farπππ Please keep writing this book is amazing
11/13/2021 14:39Lovebug
I love that there wolf are name after Greek gods
11/13/2021 02:05Lovebug
I love this book πβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ£οΈ
11/13/2021 01:56Celeste Gagne
Iβm liking this story very much. Thank you for it
11/12/2021 22:59Johanna neal
OMG I love this book!! please update more chapters!!β€β€β€
11/12/2021 13:31