Fates Hands Comments

  • Jennifer Hawkins

    I love this book so far but getting points for another chapter is super annoying. I want access to the whole book.

    01/14/2022 06:10

  • Chrissy 808

    This story is really enjoyable and the story telling is unique. I like it!

    01/14/2022 06:00

  • Reader-854304

    I really enjoyed this story.

    01/14/2022 04:51

  • Tammy Jans-Ward

    I'm hooked

    01/14/2022 04:32

  • Ebony Rosado

    amazing story crazy twist and turns.. never kno what to expect next great story

    01/14/2022 04:06

  • Ciarra Jones

    is there a way to batch buy chapters?🤔

    01/14/2022 03:44

  • Sanjni Kumari

    so far love the story ❤

    01/14/2022 03:06

  • Reader-661514

    this story is very interesting

    01/14/2022 02:42

  • Cora Bren

    I love this story so far

    01/14/2022 02:04

  • Trista Blue

    I’m really into this so far ❤️

    01/14/2022 01:48

  • Tammy Thrash Hollingsworth

    I’m loving this story so far

    01/14/2022 01:06

  • Sadi Henkaline

    Adira is one letter off from my name. (Sadira) 🖤 I've never had a story use anything that even remotely makes me think of my name.

    01/13/2022 23:39

  • Brittany BreeBree Blackwell

    loved the book. I'd also love to know where Adira's(Spare's) mother is? or who? since she is only Lillys half sister. Think that would be awesome book for a lead up to this one. other wise that's the only thing nagging me is wanting to know about Adiras mother.

    01/13/2022 23:29

  • Mouélé Makendzo

    this is so great

    01/13/2022 21:38

  • Jackie S Byrd

    so far so good

    01/13/2022 19:53

  • Reader-601715

    these were great reads. great characters and plots. lots of suspense, humorous parts and drama. please post rest of chapters quickly

    01/13/2022 19:45

  • Reader-169525

    the base of the story which you have here is a great start. I think you need to fill out the story there are so many ways to fill out the characters world. you did in ways fill out some parts but just not enough through the rest of story. when describing characters and places your painting a picture for your reader so the can see, hear and smell every bit of the scenes set. these are wolves so add the smells sometimes. get creative with the way you paint the scenes and characters. characters need to feel real so readers can connect and want to know them. you start with giving them emotion but it was anger and love that’s it. I’d like more backstory as well as motivation for why characters are the way they are better descriptors for the way they feel give them range make sure readers have better understanding of the shifters in this world why they act as they do. I didn’t like the way everything moved so fast without a better healing process.

    01/13/2022 18:55

  • Samantha Farrar

    where is jacks story!!

    01/13/2022 18:39

  • Bezo Maimbo

    should have not should of

    01/13/2022 18:34

  • Dawn Thompson

    how can you get bonuses to read more or do you have to buy them

    01/13/2022 18:26

  • FD Fair

    wow I'm hooked!!! if you ever need a beta reader to help proof read.. just reach out. I'm more than willing

    01/13/2022 18:19

  • Yolanda D. Glasgow

    This was an absolutely amazing read. I really enjoyed how you kept all the characters I the storyline. I will definitely be reading more of your books. Only complaint, more spell check. You should really try writing on Amazon.

    01/13/2022 18:17

  • Jäyce

    I'm so invested in this series... WHY!

    01/13/2022 17:03

  • Chandra Ford-Anderson

    attitude not additude

    01/13/2022 16:42

  • Reader-591650

    update schedule?

    01/13/2022 16:06

  • faulkdizzy

    so far not bad but I get thrown off with the POV. will keep reading though.

    01/13/2022 15:44

  • Reader-386105

    so far so good

    01/13/2022 15:29

  • Mary Anne Clayton

    love it

    01/13/2022 15:09

  • SHARON AWUOR

    nice

    01/13/2022 14:25

  • Emily Hinton

    I thought Marnie wolf was Hera?

    01/13/2022 13:13

  • Abigail Lonia Smith

    Love it

    01/13/2022 13:06

  • Mynis Doweiya

    very good

    01/13/2022 12:57

  • Jay Majula

    our currency is kwacha, don't have a PayPal account, starting from scratch, really want to finish this intriguing story

    01/13/2022 08:59

  • Lavasi Satuala

    nice

    01/13/2022 08:53

  • Cici Chavez-Marquez

    love it

    01/13/2022 08:16

  • Cici Chavez-Marquez

    love it

    01/13/2022 08:12

  • Cici Chavez-Marquez

    love it

    01/13/2022 07:54

  • libra inday

    nice story

    01/13/2022 07:52

  • Cici Chavez-Marquez

    love the book so far

    01/13/2022 07:37

  • Gayo Pauline Jae

    good

    01/13/2022 07:16

  • Brenda Priester

    Love this story. I hope that they get whose people that treated her so bad because she was born the second twin.

    01/13/2022 07:10

  • Amanda Levis

    okay... did not see that coming 😳 at all. well alright then 2bd chance mate.

    01/13/2022 06:35

  • Mhelvon Garden

    Nice story

    01/13/2022 06:32

  • Shirley Zeller

    great story so far...

    01/13/2022 06:18

  • Susan Young

    very good

    01/13/2022 05:17

  • katiejay64

    I've seen many promos for story sites but this is the first one that I liked enough to join, because of this story. Loved the first book, into the second and love that too. Very nice flow, great characters.

    01/13/2022 05:06

  • Kurtisha Brooks

    How do you unlock chapters?

    01/13/2022 04:35

  • Crystal S. Jacobson

    if having issues make sure you are updated on all your phones.

    01/13/2022 03:45

  • Crystal S. Jacobson

    I’m so hooked!! can’t wait to read to the end. good job!

    01/13/2022 03:44

  • Angie Tiger Lazcano

    did anyone passed the chapter 6???? started showing error messages after chapter 6

    01/13/2022 03:34

  • MAUREEN BOWMAKER

    Very captivating

    01/13/2022 03:34

  • Kaitlin Woodward

    I started reading this then went back to continue reading and just get an error message everytime.

    01/13/2022 03:27

  • Tamara Cookiecrumb

    I am enjoying this story.

    01/13/2022 03:10

  • Tamara Cookiecrumb

    I am enjoying this story.

    01/13/2022 03:10

  • Michalann Foley

    I loved this story and sad that it has ended. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

    01/13/2022 02:40

  • Candice

    omg I loved this story . it was written so you can visualize it. there were a few times I felt the words so strong I cried with the characters.

    01/13/2022 01:31

  • brooke whiting

    I like the book too, just hate that I have to keep unlocking it to read. just want to sit and read all at once. wish the book was in paperback or hard back form.

    01/13/2022 01:00

  • Carla Harris

    This book is awesome so far

    01/12/2022 23:55

  • Cindy Frenette

    I have just downloaded this site from FB and am really enjoying this story but I just now found out that it will be $ 25.00 ?!! O M.G , I am seriously not happy !! This is a good book but come on, it's not like I'm holding your hardcover book in my hands and your name is not Christine Feehan for God sake .

    01/12/2022 23:30

  • Reader-079254

    really good read interesting read

    01/12/2022 23:19

  • Kim Kyle

    wow is all I can say

    01/12/2022 23:06

  • Kimberly Wolfe

    would really love to read more but I have to keep unlocking chapters but no money to do so so frustrating

    01/12/2022 22:30

  • Nifemi Ani Kuponiyi

    I love this book.. how do I continue reading

    01/12/2022 22:05

  • Anyanwu Tryphosa

    nice story different from norm

    01/12/2022 21:28

  • Amanda Levis

    Ashton is the funny one out of the werelions

    01/12/2022 20:56

  • Elexis Craig

    I must say, I am really enjoying this book, but more than some of the others I've been reading on these apps. This has definitely got me hooked. Poor King..

    01/12/2022 20:52

  • Christi Thomas

    I’m already in love with these characters!! this is a great book so far and I’m really loving this storyline.🤓🤓

    01/12/2022 19:14

  • Elmarie Oosthuizen

    you Amazing finished your first book in prob 4 to 5 hours

    01/12/2022 18:56

  • Kim Manchester

    I'm loving this book I've been having a hard time putting it down. It keeps me in suspense and wanting to know what happens next.

    01/12/2022 18:44

  • Meek

    what is the title of the 1st book

    01/12/2022 18:43

  • Sonia Hood

    A very interesting start to this story.

    01/12/2022 18:00

  • Lisa Ferguson

    I am excited to see how this one progresses. the story line has everything a great book needs and it keeps me interested to read more!!!

    01/12/2022 17:35

  • Ania K.

    Good :)

    01/12/2022 17:33

  • Michelle Mckinney

    how often do you do updates I normally don't do these kinda of stories but seen it on FB so far it's pretty good but please don't Drag it out

    01/12/2022 16:01

  • Sara Owens

    What about Jake in Fates Hands? Are we going to get his story? Please 🙏

    01/12/2022 15:06

  • Jann Dean

    just get into this book,then bang you have to start unlocking chapters😪😪😪

    01/12/2022 14:58

  • Judy Jay B Banda

    lovely story

    01/12/2022 14:34

  • Dixie Tiller

    Very nice story. Can't wait for more!

    01/12/2022 14:03

  • Lorraine Russell

    very good read

    01/12/2022 13:55

  • Daphne Hughes-Nelson

    please use spell and grammar check....it's like you're pushing to get it out fast cuz you're promising a post a day, and not even double checking it. and before people get on .y ass like they constantly try get on Helen's... it says Adair sometimes. Duncan was spelt Dunan once. these are like super easily mistakes that could be fixed that is not due to a language barrier.

    01/12/2022 12:45

  • Mylyn Carbonel

    Nice ebook

    01/12/2022 12:08

  • Jenny Burston

    love it

    01/12/2022 11:39

  • Marie K

    makes you wanna read more, so far I’m loving it. thanks!

    01/12/2022 10:40

  • Carol Ann Hurter

    Love this story

    01/12/2022 10:16

  • Jenine Jensen

    really enjoying the read so far

    01/12/2022 09:54

  • pamela bettis

    I love it so far. It's really good. I can't wait to read more.

    01/12/2022 09:25

  • Ayla-Marishna Rowlands

    just started reading and I am absolutely obsessed

    01/12/2022 08:30

  • sweetlhou

    how many point per chapter? new reader here

    01/12/2022 06:24

  • lenya Brent

    This book is bringing me so much joy in reading it, thank you for sharing your craft. please continue to write stories, you have a true gift.

    01/12/2022 06:19

  • Lucilyn Cuevas

    very interesting, want to read more...

    01/12/2022 06:10

  • Hannah Ebertowski

    Great story so far

    01/12/2022 05:20

  • Randi Holden

    I'm Sooooooo hooked!!! neeeeeeeddddddddd moreeeeeeeee

    01/12/2022 04:50

  • Jill Faver

    I finally gave into reading this book after so many ads for it. not disappointed

    01/12/2022 02:49

  • Vanessa Thomas

    great story so far looking for more

    01/12/2022 02:30

  • Mere-Wairita Ecawa Naisua

    So far so good 👍

    01/11/2022 23:44

  • Monica Craig

    oh my God, does this book ever end. its a great story line, even the flow is pretty good. definitely need an editor, or at the very least a proofer. I'm at chapter 61... wrap it up!

    01/11/2022 22:46

  • Naomi Farrell

    why can't I download the whole book at once?

    01/11/2022 21:03

  • Blueforeva-02

    I kept seeing this advertised and I kept wanting to read it but kept telling myself not to but I am so glad I finally caved! it’s so good!

    01/11/2022 20:25

  • Gloria Pam Thomas Morris

    are these books in the stores

    01/11/2022 20:19

  • CodyAnne Omori

    I would proof and line edit this for you, but not sure if you’d be allowed to have a freelance proofreader do that. It needs serious work.

    01/11/2022 19:07
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