Fates Hands Comments

  • Ann Brewer

    love book but I missed did jack ever get DNA for Luna see who her mom is?

    01/19/2022 07:01
  • Kari Wall

    The plot was ok. The writing needs polishing big time. 3/5 starts...

    01/19/2022 04:58
  • Chinta Que

    good story! about 25 chapters in and i can say the story keeps my interest while relaxing and thats all that matter to me. I dont even notice the errors in grammar most people are complaining of. Unlocking the chapter is where the headache is.

    01/19/2022 04:26
  • Laura Newman Webster

    needs some polish for the grammatical errors but a good story

    01/19/2022 03:41
  • Mary Hvizdak

    solar so good.. only a few chapters in. some grammatical errors. needs an editor to polish it.

    01/19/2022 03:29
  • Tammytamikalee Tavai

    umm..book is great..this unlocking chapters is just pathetic.πŸ‘€πŸ‘€

    01/19/2022 03:27
  • Deannchris

    so am I the only one disappointed the Lily and the King? I mean seriously 😳

    01/19/2022 03:14
  • Samyra Bell

    So are all the leading ladies working at motels or hotels

    01/19/2022 02:40
  • Jamie Berry

    I really like the books. Please keep up the great work.

    01/19/2022 01:35
  • Kirsti Brester

    good so far

    01/19/2022 01:22
  • Gitchie Wabanimkee

    Good book so far and it's getting interested. The twisted mind is a good touch to the book.

    01/19/2022 01:07
  • Chaelene Vs

    why does this chapter got locked up again when i unlocked it already i havent read it fully yet 😫

    01/19/2022 00:16
  • Katrina Stordahl

    I cant get this book to open anymore 😩 haven't been able to for a few days

    01/19/2022 00:05
  • Fatima Williams

    I love this chapters so far

    01/18/2022 22:37
  • Rita Queen

    couldn't read alll just chapter.... I wish I never started reading......this sucks

    01/18/2022 22:20
  • Michelle de la Cruz

    lovin it

    01/18/2022 22:17
  • Paballo Lekgetho

    very good read

    01/18/2022 22:10
  • Candy Will Bailey

    Starting to get interesting. Good to get full info and background for the story.

    01/18/2022 21:33
  • Melissa Bell

    when is the book for the spin off of this

    01/18/2022 21:15
  • Angel Day

    this book has the potential to be something amazing but the author struggles to keep up with the story line and forgets characters or changes their names

    01/18/2022 20:01
  • Vicki Trewella

    Nope! I definitely didn't see that coming either 😳

    01/18/2022 19:37
  • Reader-282727

    enjoyed the book. I have not read a book in a long time. work, life, school, have been in the way. I read a piece on FB and decided to continue. may I say, you captured the audience. thank you for bringing me back to reading.

    01/18/2022 19:35
  • Tricia Yesildal

    would drove to be able to read this . says scroll but won't let you .

    01/18/2022 17:42
  • Lisa Higgs

    love this story ❀️

    01/18/2022 17:31
  • Sandy Veillette

    I loved this story. it’s gripping and very hard to put down. I would love to see a sequel to it. I will look for the book you said at the end. Thank you!

    01/18/2022 16:20
  • Tamara Smith

    This book keeps having me on edge of what's going to happen next. I stayed up hours reading.

    01/18/2022 15:32
  • Amie Thompson

    Will the Storey be continued? I read 99 chapters and it just stops. I thought there was a book 3.

    01/18/2022 14:24
  • Michelle Mckinney

    i loved this story glad she got her happy ending

    01/18/2022 12:11
  • Abelina Victoria Diaz

    im starting to enjoy this book so much

    01/18/2022 11:19
  • Kassi P

    I LOVED THIS BOOK FROM THE MOMENT I PICKED IT UP I DID NOT PUT IT DOWN! I FINISHED IT IN ONE SITTING THANK YOU 😊

    01/18/2022 10:37
  • Joke Joke

    I love the story

    01/18/2022 10:14
  • Shauna Loomer-Mulder

    this is a well written, suspenseful, romantic, story full of interesting plot twists while also having romance, it also deals with bullying and abuse in an intriguing way

    01/18/2022 09:02
  • Doris Cole

    This is a good book. This chapter is sad but only right that Dad do it. How did he miss what a brat he raised being g such a honorable king.

    01/18/2022 08:43
  • Katrina Feighan

    Good read so far

    01/18/2022 07:44
  • Annick Nokiah

    I love this story!!!

    01/18/2022 06:27
  • Leanne Carver

    loved your book I am starting the next tomorrow!!

    01/18/2022 06:06
  • Karamel la

    I really like this Duncan guyπŸ™ƒ

    01/18/2022 05:10
  • Maria Rodriguez

    This is a very well written story with strong plots and characters.

    01/18/2022 03:36
  • Lori Ameling

    You won't have to wait for long.

    01/18/2022 03:03
  • Daphney Price

    I need to know about Acher! More please.

    01/18/2022 01:46
  • Sherry Martin

    I am so hooked!! Dying to find out what happens next!! On chapter 7.

    01/18/2022 00:27
  • Renita Velez Moore

    when will there be more chapters? book 2 chapter 32 is as far as I can go

    01/17/2022 23:46
  • Stephanie Warren

    love book one and on book two cart put down

    01/17/2022 23:44
  • Kat Waters

    I can only go to chapter 6 without buying more is it like that 4 everyone

    01/17/2022 21:55
  • KaosPixi3

    I usually have to wait a few days to read a few chapters. I might be hooked lol

    01/17/2022 20:57
  • June Vandouser

    great story.

    01/17/2022 19:32
  • BONES

    how long is the wait to unlock the chapters

    01/17/2022 19:19
  • Melissa Woods Lemons

    great story so far

    01/17/2022 19:10
  • Valdeen Safedien

    pls can we know how to open the bonuses for n not wait so long to open other chapters..Author pls respond

    01/17/2022 18:12
  • amorsita

    loving the story so far can't wait to read the rest

    01/17/2022 17:36
  • Doris Cole

    Good story so far like Spare and Duncan.

    01/17/2022 16:41
  • Melissa Anderson

    kind of saw that coming.

    01/17/2022 16:05
  • April Graesch

    I am looking forward to reading more!!!

    01/17/2022 16:03
  • Fiona Solomon

    😍 love this book

    01/17/2022 16:03
  • kellie hudson

    Capacity, not compacity

    01/17/2022 15:57
  • Kat Waters

    how can u read whole book y am I seeing a title the spare and fates hands with same cover i got to read 6 chapters and hooked plz help me find out how 2 read the rest

    01/17/2022 14:37
  • Angela Pittman

    Love it how do you unlock chapter

    01/17/2022 14:02
  • Tammy

    the story is building and I would like to unlock more chapters

    01/17/2022 13:02
  • Yvonne.Kawagien Nelson

    chapters !!!

    01/17/2022 12:36
  • Shirley Cunningham

    Looks like you have to buy chapters

    01/17/2022 10:34
  • Caroline Healy

    how do I unlock chapter do we just buy

    01/17/2022 10:30
  • Valdeen Safedien

    pls help me πŸ”‘πŸ”“unlock chapters πŸ™

    01/17/2022 09:47
  • Nonie Gonzalez

    how do you unlock chapters

    01/17/2022 06:55
  • Debbie Berry

    tell me there another chapter

    01/17/2022 06:33
  • Mary Grace Marcial

    a good piece is here. can't wait for the next chapter.

    01/17/2022 06:14
  • Lenny Toney

    first chapters are are good reading. just need to k ow how to unlock chapters.

    01/17/2022 06:08
  • Valdeen Safedien

    how do we unlock chapters

    01/17/2022 05:59
  • Angie n eves

    Love it can't wait for book 3

    01/17/2022 05:36
  • Jan Daniels

    : 6chΒ³/ R5

    01/17/2022 05:24
  • Kels Brand

    loooovvvveeeee

    01/17/2022 05:14
  • Debbie Burley

    Very interesting can't wait to keep reading

    01/17/2022 04:31
  • Janette

    absolutely love this along with jacks story keep it coming πŸ€—

    01/17/2022 04:07
  • Michelle Washington-Scarberry

    Great story so far looking forward to the next update please hurry

    01/17/2022 03:53
  • Brandi Guinn

    mine jyst keep saying error please try again

    01/17/2022 03:34
  • Reader-259856

    good story do far

    01/17/2022 03:32
  • Harriet Mungasia

    very interesting book

    01/17/2022 03:21
  • Daniela Mirandha

    i've been reading non stopΓ·!!!

    01/17/2022 03:03
  • Marsha Boyd

    love this book getting really good

    01/17/2022 03:00
  • Stacey Cole

    hooked

    01/17/2022 02:43
  • Jaqi Jenkins

    yeeesss Adira true queen behavior

    01/17/2022 02:36
  • Jennifer Hawkins

    What is the name of the first book?

    01/17/2022 01:58
  • John Dase

    great start

    01/17/2022 01:22
  • Lucilyn Cuevas

    i love to read more.

    01/17/2022 01:02
  • Lucilyn Cuevas

    suspense is ascending that hooked the readers. I lobe.to read more.

    01/17/2022 01:01
  • Susan Fuehrer

    Good start

    01/16/2022 23:49
  • Mariam Erinah

    loving the story

    01/16/2022 23:05
  • Katrina Feighan

    Great book

    01/16/2022 22:43
  • Katrina Feighan

    Great book

    01/16/2022 22:43
  • Jessica Cleveland

    is it Adira or Adair?

    01/16/2022 22:35
  • Tina Smith

    can't wait for more

    01/16/2022 21:06
  • Angela Snyder

    Love it so far!!

    01/16/2022 19:31
  • luanne nye

    wonderful story so far

    01/16/2022 19:28
  • kristy walls

    love this story..hate that I have to wait

    01/16/2022 19:22
  • Chris

    how many chapters is the first book?

    01/16/2022 18:40
  • Vicki Trewella

    The poor King... how heartbreaking for him.😭

    01/16/2022 18:27
  • Jessica Davis

    is there only chapter one?

    01/16/2022 17:25
  • Deborah Anderson

    I love it so far. I just hope she'll be happy and safe

    01/16/2022 15:25
  • Reader-525663

    so far so good

    01/16/2022 14:27
  • Shelley Monteith

    do we read first part then wait fir next chapter?

    01/16/2022 14:20
  • Nina Penning

    who think this? The King?

    01/16/2022 13:40