Fates Hands Comments

Mynis Doweiya

very good

kristy walls

love this story..hate that I have to wait

Lisa Dunagan

love this story and I can't wait to get the other books

Tamara Cookiecrumb

I am enjoying this story.

Tamara Cookiecrumb

I am enjoying this story.

Lavasi Satuala

nice

Jessie Williams

love this book! 😍

Reader-800338

can we buy this book😍

FD Fair

wow I'm hooked!!! if you ever need a beta reader to help proof read.. just reach out. I'm more than willing

Lori Middleton

like this story

Anyanwu Tryphosa

nice story different from norm

Michelle Mckinney

tick in the butt crack 😂

Shirl Jones

when are you going to finish the last book really like the story. waiting to read the rest

Jenny Wienand

can't wait to finish reading this book....

Reader-620015

good book

Cindy Bear

LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS BOOK!! I sat from 7am until 7pm reading it! I could NOT PUT IT DOWN! I usually don't like the fantasy stuff BUT this captured my attention! Now to straighten the house and throw some frozen pizzas in the oven! THANK YOU for such an enjoyable read!!

Jann Dean

just get into this book,then bang you have to start unlocking chapters😪😪😪

Aliesha Kirby

amazing can't stop reading

Katrina Feighan

Great book

Donna Custard

Hello there...I do njoy reading about All the difference Alpha's clans men in these books...Im waiting for the rest of rhe books 2 and 3....

Diana64

I am hooked so far, Now trying to see how to unlock!

Kia Thiesen

I’m new here, and can’t seem to get past chapter 26. can anyone explain?

Carrie Frier

Why are you not being published? Best Seller Material!!

Ciarra Jones

is there a way to batch buy chapters?🤔

Reader-985657

loving this book

Missy Robertson

I'm so deep in this story..

Frankie Oliver

so romantic and beautiful sounding

Harriet Mungasia

very interesting book

Crystal K. Smith

really good so far... dont like how short the chapters are

Reader-859623

Really like the story

Reader-944421

love the story so far

Priscilla Gonzalez

enjoying

Laura Jona

i can r get some sleep as I become attached to this wonderful story. i was a whisked into the work of Duncan and Adria. I love the concept of the magical creatures gathered together in this world. I cannot get enough.

Robyn Robson

🥰 amazing

Debbie Berry

tell me there another chapter

Ann Brewer

love book but I missed did jack ever get DNA for Luna see who her mom is?

Yvonne Muzembe

i lovd to read your bookes

Heather Stoker

so far I really like the story. can’t wait to keep reading.

Amie Thompson

Will the Storey be continued? I read 99 chapters and it just stops. I thought there was a book 3.

Carmen Penley

This is not my normal type of story, but have to say, I'm LOVING it so far!

Chaelene Vs

why does this chapter got locked up again when i unlocked it already i havent read it fully yet 😫

Gloria Pam Thomas Morris

are these books in the stores

Reader-249566

really frustrating that the author doesn’t understand that it is “have” after “could” or “would” and not “of”

FireJewel Howard

where can I just buy the books?

Cathy Jayakaram

why are the chapters locked from.6

Debbie Slocum Lockwood

great so far

Tammy Smith

love it

Lenny Toney

first chapters are are good reading. just need to k ow how to unlock chapters.

Georgette Price

good story

Sonia Hood

A very interesting start to this story.

Nicky Turner

Great

Joke Joke

I love the story

Reader-386105

so far so good

Winona Kalagi

Sam 💀😂🤣

N Hen-swis

I thought the king had 2 sons but he made a comment the prince was his only family. I remember the prince saying he had a brother Alex. I am wrong

Melinda Smith

I really am digging the. BEAR..LOVE THIS BOOK..

Reader-249566

might have not of

Trisha Wilder

This is a really good story and plot. There are some shortcomings but nothing that a writer won't develop over time. This is my first story by you and I like it very much. I will be looking for your other titles when I finish this one. One grammar mistake I really want to point out is the use of the word 'of' when it should be 'have'. This is very common and I don't want to offend an author. For example, "He should of known better." When we talk it does sound like "of". But it should be, "He should *have* known better." I don't want to be be grammar nerd but if it were me, I would want to know. It's how I learned. Have a great day! 💗

Amanda Levis

okay... did not see that coming 😳 at all. well alright then 2bd chance mate.

Jäyce

I'm so invested in this series... WHY!

Daniela Mirandha

i've been reading non stop÷!!!

Esther Eric Egagah

I don't usually read about wolf but dis very storyline is interesting to read can't wait to see what ll happen to Eric n lilly n their pack. they re so wicked.

Reader-845602

good story but I’m confused, the prince mentions a brother early on in the book, who he refused to loose the throne to but later after he dies the king says he has no heirs and is thinking of making Duncan king, what happened to the other brother?

Jenaris Rosello

I’m loving the store would love to watch if it was turned into Netflix series honestly I love her name Adira but u misspelled it couple times threw me off a little Adair but I was like huh

Brittany BreeBree Blackwell

loved the book. I'd also love to know where Adira's(Spare's) mother is? or who? since she is only Lillys half sister. Think that would be awesome book for a lead up to this one. other wise that's the only thing nagging me is wanting to know about Adiras mother.

Angelina Wines

Good story so far

Natalie Rose Nitschke

love the were bears idea of justice.

Reader-525663

so far so good

Debbie Burley

Very interesting can't wait to keep reading

Tanya Ammons

This is the 1st book I've read and loving it! what are the other 2 books? I would really like to read them all.

Tammy L Wicks Sims

good so far. holds my attention very well

Reader-591650

update schedule?

I really enjoyed the way this story started out, but I’m really struggling to keep going. The character development is tough, so that I don’t even really care about them. And the are parts to the story that could be developed more to build up the climax, but instead it moves so quickly. There is a problem or a bad person- boom, it’s over, then on to the next thing. I’m really hoping that it gets better, because the story itself is really interesting, but the execution is tough to follow.

Samantha Farrar

where is jacks story!!

Chrissy 808

This story is really enjoyable and the story telling is unique. I like it!

Jaqi Jenkins

yeeesss Adira true queen behavior

Priscilla Renee Palacios-Johnson

loving it

luanne nye

wonderful story so far

Daphney Price

I need to know about Acher! More please.

Lee Derby

seems pretty good reading so far. up to chapter 6

Elmarie Oosthuizen

you Amazing finished your first book in prob 4 to 5 hours

Janette

absolutely love this along with jacks story keep it coming 🤗

Stephanie Smoot

loved the characters. based loosely on Cinderella?

Greanna Barrow

ready for more

Marlene Tuazon

Good story

Christy Linville Spradlin

love the characters

Christy Linville Spradlin

very good story

Lori Ameling

Every evening two chapters

Meek

what is the title of the 1st book

Natasha Fouche

Really enjoying the story

Rebecca Mathes

people like that don’t need children

Kathileen Marie Pendergrass

awesome story, can't wait for more.

Reader-259856

good story do far

Emily Franchino

been sucked in!

Blueforeva-02

I kept seeing this advertised and I kept wanting to read it but kept telling myself not to but I am so glad I finally caved! it’s so good!

Sheso Real

great story so far wishbthe chapters were longer

Allison Thorn

loving this so far

Nikki Lush

loving this book

Karla Declet

how many more chapters after this one?

Jenine Jensen

really enjoying the read so far