Fates Hands Comments

  • Elizabeth Blevins

    good story

    01/27/2022 01:47

  • Be Nilda

    love tge story

    01/27/2022 01:40

  • Be Nilda

    where to but paperback?

    01/27/2022 01:39

  • Kiara Neill

    is this book available to buy in paperback?

    01/27/2022 00:35

  • Karabear

    why does everyone hate adira so much? it makes no sense.

    01/27/2022 00:05

  • Doneta Creech

    Punctuation and grammar are important. So are character development and plausibility. There is a very good storyline hidden within the junior high writing style. Take your time, get to know your characters, do your research, and always, always PROOF READ. Then do it again. You have the potential to become a serious writer.

    01/26/2022 22:57

  • Missy Robertson

    I'm so deep in this story..

    01/26/2022 21:46

  • Brooke Mardino

    love the story so far

    01/26/2022 21:36

  • Tiffany Weaver Ross

    I love this so far I can’t wait to finish it

    01/26/2022 18:46

  • KitaScott

    I'm loving this story... I can't wait until the beast comes and talk. Hopefully, they won't kill him first.

    01/26/2022 18:02

  • Amy Gilson

    Great story and a very interesting take. Definitely needs editing.. the part where the prince mentions a younger brother but then it's completely forgotten about and now he's an only child has really frustrated me.. and the fact that you change or misspell adira's name a lot sucks too but other than those inconsistencies it is a really great read 🙂

    01/26/2022 17:12

  • Coneva

    I like the storyline mostly, but I really wish you took some more time to edit and clean it up. There are inconsistencies that make it hard to follow and sometimes change the story progression mid-chapter…

    01/26/2022 15:56

  • Elizabeth Nolan

    Love this story

    01/26/2022 14:33

  • Reader-819860

    Loved Jack and Nova’s story, intriguing, fast paced and just fantastic

    01/26/2022 12:49

  • Yin

    I’m absolutely loving this story! always look forward to new chapters, keep up the great work <3

    01/26/2022 12:48

  • Amanda Marsiglia

    so far I'm digging the story. I just wish I could keep reading and not have to unlock chapters. This is new to me

    01/26/2022 12:37

  • Erin Norris

    this is a 3 book series can someone tell me what the other 2 are?

    01/26/2022 12:37

  • Rhonda Hayes

    loved it.

    01/26/2022 05:30

  • Tina Moxley-Hamilton

    awesome storyline.

    01/26/2022 05:01

  • Susie Ordonez

    I'm loving the story can't wait to read more

    01/26/2022 02:49

  • Carly M Milam

    loving this book and can't wait for the next update

    01/26/2022 02:46

  • Lisa Dunagan

    love this story and I can't wait to get the other books

    01/26/2022 02:44

  • Sandra Sawyers

    loving this story can't wait for the next update so I can read some more of book 3

    01/26/2022 01:43

  • Emily Wiles

    such a wonderful read. loved it!

    01/26/2022 00:17

  • Reader-484844

    Am I the only one who checks back hourly for an update? lol

    01/26/2022 00:06

  • Faith Sebben

    Loving this!

    01/25/2022 21:55

  • Amber Belle

    This is a great story.

    01/25/2022 18:57

  • Juanice Terry

    I'm so loving ❤ this story 😍

    01/25/2022 18:19

  • Aliesha Kirby

    amazing can't stop reading

    01/25/2022 16:53

  • C Lorraine Manning

    Enjoying so far. Amazing

    01/25/2022 15:39

  • Michelle Parker Brewer

    I love this book so far.

    01/25/2022 15:33

  • Robyn Robson

    🥰 amazing

    01/25/2022 12:59

  • Tammy Smith

    love it

    01/25/2022 12:41

  • Juanita Garcia

    love your stories, it is awesome 👌

    01/25/2022 12:28

  • Kiesha Berryman

    The three chapters you must added were amazing. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for more. Great writing...I have some suspicions on who the best truly is so I'm excited to read more.

    01/25/2022 11:19

  • Tina Kroah

    I really don't like to read books but I am enjoying this one

    01/25/2022 09:34

  • Vicki Trewella

    Arrgghhh! another Cliffhanger!😤 Well done 👏👏 totally hooked!🥰

    01/25/2022 06:56

  • Sherry Paschal

    Awesome books. I love the wit and humor. "... a bird fart 10 miles away." "... french fries in a seagull park." Bahahaha! The best one though was the crack about cheerleader secrets. I'm such a fast reader that I just devoured the books in 2½ days, despite breaks to do some other things. Now comes the hard part, waiting for the updates. I can hardly wait. I knew these girls couldn't be "just human."

    01/25/2022 05:00

  • Christine Kurtz

    so are all the guards dead then

    01/25/2022 02:28

  • Dedra Agnimel

    I wonder if Joran is the beast that Selena has doing her killing for stopping her from getting Dargon with her love potion.

    01/25/2022 02:27

  • Karen Haney

    love this but i can't get into chapter 6

    01/25/2022 01:36

  • Zoey Secor

    wish I could find the book somewhere else so I don’t have to unlock each chapter

    01/25/2022 01:15

  • Kristy Kaye

    this is the best book I've ever read I just love it thank you for writing this it brings me joy ❣️

    01/25/2022 00:51

  • Crystal K. Smith

    really good so far... dont like how short the chapters are

    01/25/2022 00:12

  • Corina Hodge

    I'm hooked! love it so far

    01/25/2022 00:06

  • Nicky Turner

    Great

    01/24/2022 23:06

  • Pauline Tanner

    good so far

    01/24/2022 22:52

  • Reader-553144

    really enjoyed the book had a hard time putting it down

    01/24/2022 22:49

  • Reader-461494

    is this the first book or are there books before this one? i would love to read all the books if available

    01/24/2022 22:44

  • Janet Edwards

    updates please

    01/24/2022 22:31

  • Sharon Stander

    Book 3 Chapter 11, chapters very short, why don't you write a few before updating because it is a bit irritating to read drips and draps

    01/24/2022 20:06

  • ginileigh

    Isn't this the end....part 2?

    01/24/2022 19:35

  • Renee Carroll

    I love this book so far

    01/24/2022 19:30

  • Megan Buchanan

    loving the book, already on chapter 48!

    01/24/2022 19:23

  • Gemia Holmes

    I'm hooked. keep them coming

    01/24/2022 19:08

  • Melissa S

    Great job, loving every chapter.

    01/24/2022 18:49

  • Reader-196417

    I’m curious as to how this book start in a first person point a view of spare and jumped to 3rd person

    01/24/2022 18:41

  • Mary Williams

    Love the book! Great job!!

    01/24/2022 18:28

  • Merriah Stark

    I love love this story I can't get enough

    01/24/2022 18:22

  • Daniel Duncan

    Not even ten chapters in and I'm already hooked.

    01/24/2022 17:37

  • Eva Roberts

    When will the book Just a Girl Alone be coming out? I can’t wait to see what happens with Jack.

    01/24/2022 17:21

  • Breaboo2

    so far so goooood!!

    01/24/2022 16:23

  • Tamara Winn

    love this book it's excellent.

    01/24/2022 11:55

  • Gloria Davies

    am loving this story, but it doesnt open where i left off. i go through where i lthink lfeft off and find i have ateady read that part.

    01/24/2022 11:09

  • Hannah Holmes

    loving the book but there are quite a few grammatical errors

    01/24/2022 09:20

  • Quinnda S. Hansell-McMullen

    love it and actually love the name Spare!

    01/24/2022 04:21

  • jan cud

    This book is fantastic, I am dyslexic and love books but can find reading stressful. I tend to use Audible books but have not read so much for pleasure in years. it's also nice to see we all make grammar mistakes.

    01/24/2022 02:50

  • Dedra Agnimel

    I'm wondering what happened when Jessica showed up at Acher and August apartment and found them not there.

    01/24/2022 02:23

  • Zacheria Morrow

    if these were paper I'd buy in a heartbeat I'm hooked

    01/24/2022 01:58

  • Patti Dunsmore

    before I start reading is this completed or is there still chapters coming and if so how long for it to be completed?

    01/23/2022 23:52

  • Judy Richmond

    best book ever

    01/23/2022 23:37

  • Reader-905306

    is this book part of the unlimited section?

    01/23/2022 22:43

  • Geesje Wright

    is it three stories????

    01/23/2022 22:39

  • Melissa Dale

    thanks for sharing your stories. they were beautiful. usually I wouldn't start reading work that has not been completed but with you I will. ❤ i look forward the the next story.

    01/23/2022 22:35

  • Akerele Christiana Adebukola

    living this book more and more. next chapter please

    01/23/2022 22:06

  • Nichole Simpson

    love it so far…. When is the other chapters going to be unlocked?

    01/23/2022 21:33

  • Stacy Spencer

    *allowed

    01/23/2022 21:31

  • Rena Reynolds Carroll

    I've enjoyed what I've read so far.

    01/23/2022 20:48

  • Nikki Scott

    I just don't get the bad grammar, not would of, for god's sake, would have!!!

    01/23/2022 20:26

  • Kiesha Berryman

    I really loved reading these books. I can't wait for you to finish the last one. You are a great writer. The books completely draw you in to the characters. I also loved how you developed each character.

    01/23/2022 20:05

  • donna batts

    how can Michael mind link when his wolf is gone and most of his enforcers wolves are gone? Doesn't sound feasible.

    01/23/2022 19:34

  • Alliene Thomas

    really good so far

    01/23/2022 19:16

  • Shawn Rothwell Power

    so far so good

    01/23/2022 17:26

  • Serlmah Cass

    great

    01/23/2022 16:56

  • Step Wheeler

    loving everything so far I have to wait to unlock chapter 39

    01/23/2022 15:59

  • Teresa Sikora

    I love this story line!! As an English teacher, I'd love to do some editing, but overall...I read the entire story over 3 days!! It was so good I didn't want to put it down! You have amazing character development and you do a really good job shifting and incorporating genres!! thank you for a great read!!

    01/23/2022 14:22

  • Kira Bamps

    nice :)

    01/23/2022 12:59

  • Dezi Kohler

    I really enjoyed this story.

    01/23/2022 06:48

  • Angelina Wines

    Good story so far

    01/23/2022 06:34

  • Dee Allen

    loving it so far

    01/23/2022 06:16

  • Ratu Ntilane

    I am loving the book so far.. Can't seem to put it down

    01/23/2022 06:12

  • Reader-249566

    really frustrating that the author doesn’t understand that it is “have” after “could” or “would” and not “of”

    01/23/2022 05:33

  • Rachel Sanada

    keep it coming

    01/23/2022 04:08

  • Lucy Graves

    great book is it an ebook yet

    01/23/2022 03:35

  • Del Budden

    I really love what I have read so far wish I could read more

    01/23/2022 02:47

  • Wanda Stephens

    I am in love with this book

    01/23/2022 02:08

  • Reader-249566

    recognize is misspelled

    01/23/2022 02:06

  • Alliene Thomas

    really love how the wolf-human interact

    01/23/2022 01:36

  • Reader-268415

    her old pack and her uncle make me sick! I’m luvin this book so far!

    01/23/2022 01:22

  • CeeCee Oliver

    so I’m thinking so far that Nova & Maggi aren’t shifters. Interesting twist.

    01/23/2022 01:07
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