Fates Hands Comments

  • Basma Shamas

    i loved reading this book. i still have around 13 chapters to finish the third book. i see you have a part 2 of 2. are you going to be updating this series with part 2 and when would be expect the update?

    02/15/2022 17:12

  • Laura Walters

    I love how this book is turning out. I can't wait to finish reading it to see if she stays with them!

    02/15/2022 00:11

  • Linda Herrington

    i enjoyed the book. So glad that everyone got a mate and a happy ending. Just disappointed that Archer didn't find his mate

    02/14/2022 22:41

  • Reader-885727

    love!!!

    02/14/2022 10:55

  • Nicole Loray

    love both book 1 & 2. I do have one note about book 2 to consider. In the beginning Jack talks about the 3 boys that he seems to have adopted, but then after he meets Nora he never speaks about them again.

    02/14/2022 07:25

  • ChairtyJune

    omg this made me cry…. the poor king!!! my heart breaks for him!

    02/14/2022 01:34

  • Sabrina Loray

    hi Lori . I lov this book but can’t find the rest of it . is there a book 2

    02/13/2022 13:39

  • Tonia Grundhauser

    Lori, do you have any other books? I love your stories. I would like to but the whole book at one time. great books. thank you for an awesome read

    02/13/2022 03:53

  • Chantal White

    wow these people are vile

    02/13/2022 03:39

  • Reader-735271

    Too many run on sentences. sometimes idk who’s talking or what’s happening

    02/13/2022 01:39

  • Stacey Musterman

    ok so if they’re mates why did it take so long I mean it’s been months and now she’s in heat all the sudden there mates

    02/12/2022 16:57

  • Stacey Musterman

    yeah no I don’t like the fact lily and the king being mates

    02/12/2022 16:19

  • Susan Smith-Elmore Kinder

    great story you do a wonderful job writing

    02/11/2022 23:28

  • Jen Gaudiello

    😝more description of yummy duncan

    02/11/2022 15:59

  • C Fraz

    you should sell through Amazon.

    02/11/2022 14:57

  • RoseAnn Shepherd

    I love the story line!

    02/11/2022 03:25

  • michelle lockhart

    Loved the story. Gave visual to the characters. I want more of Duncan Pack told.

    02/11/2022 00:24

  • Eve Egüez

    Are you going to add another story?

    02/10/2022 18:07

  • Amber Anderson

    I loved it and it wasn't long like most of these stories are. also can you do a book on Asher I would really like for him to find his mate as well. no one deserves to not find a mate.

    02/10/2022 01:20

  • Giselle Simone

    Is this story complete?

    02/09/2022 21:18

  • Rae Amanda

    is there any other way to get points other than buying?

    02/09/2022 12:40

  • daphne kabassidi

    I hate it when I have to wait because I didn't have enough points to read chapters. would have love uninterrupted reading.i enjoy the book and storyline.

    02/09/2022 12:31

  • Karen Panapa- Simon

    thank you,I enjoyed this series and your writing,what I enjoyed most was that I didn't have any or next to any interruptions to my reading.

    02/09/2022 01:26

  • Jeannette Biggs

    I love the books but hate you have to keep putting out money and then you don't get to read that long

    02/09/2022 01:03

  • Lisa Ramsey

    it won't let me continue after tutorial on how to scroll

    02/09/2022 00:08

  • Robyn Russell

    hope Micheal ready for war, because it's on the way

    02/08/2022 23:09

  • Jacqueline Johnson

    love the book

    02/08/2022 22:18

  • Lizzy Hutchings

    just bought up to chapter 20. then when I scrolled back up... they were locked again from chapter 16.... not impressed

    02/08/2022 17:38

  • jade vargas

    love it keep writing ✍ books like this

    02/08/2022 10:40

  • Reader-569284

    good

    02/08/2022 06:30

  • Reader-293666

    um

    02/08/2022 03:01

  • Renee Carroll

    love the book 📖 wish there was a better way to urn more points

    02/07/2022 23:50

  • Kat Waters

    is fates hand 1st or 2nd book and what are the other titles of this series

    02/07/2022 19:19

  • Lori Ameling

    What was waiting for Selena....To her surprise when she arrived in hell. it wasn't as bad as she thought. That was until the made her sit in front of a mirror. They told her before things get started, she has to watch what her life could have been. I n the mirror she saw herself happily holding on to a man. It was Joran. They had three beautiful Cubs playing at their feet. Her mirror self smiled and winked at her. She started to scream in her rage. "What you screaming for? The fun hasn't started yet." As another mirror rolled up to her. "Why don't we have a look at your true face?, the demon Snickers. upon seeing her true face what little was left of her sanity was gone. "Ok, time to move on to the next one." Did this on my phone don't judge it. thanks 😉

    02/07/2022 18:07

  • Reader-647260

    I loved reading these books they were good

    02/07/2022 16:34

  • Christina Bones

    this book has got me on my toes

    02/07/2022 13:44

  • Reader-136721

    new to this

    02/07/2022 01:39

  • Benaifer Bagli

    my points some times don't add ...

    02/06/2022 18:10

  • Dreamgoddess811

    I'm betting Joran is the beast as revenge for drinking Dorans love potion 😆 lol

    02/04/2022 22:47

  • Christina Holden

    Book 1 thoughts cont : Now Jack was amazing. Loved him. I can’t wait for him to do his walk about in the spring. Loved Marnie and Ash. His purr is adorable. Archer seems like an amazing leader like Jack and Duncan. Those three will be unstoppable I think. Can’t wait to see if Archer finds his lioness mate. It seems like all the mate bonds are decreasing and I hope that somehow they are saved and they all find their forever love. I love the differences in the different Were’s and how the author shows the distinct difference in each species. All in all I can’t wait to read Book 2. So away I go to continue the journey.

    02/04/2022 20:00

  • Christina Holden

    Book 1 thoughts : I loved it!!! Loved the relationship between Duncan and Spare. Loved all the relationships except 1. I couldn’t handle the L and K(A) relationship. It seemed kinda forced or like a spur of the moment match considering they had seen and met several times before and their was no connection. I get L was forgiven by the Goddess, but I don’t understand her being paired with K. That was just too much cuz honestly I never came to care for her character. I felt bad after all was revealed but even she said she did a lot because she wanted to. One second she is saying she was trying to protect Spare then in another she says she did it cuz she wanted too. Stockholm Syndrome at its worst. And I get she was groomed from a young age. I just couldn’t find it in myself to believe her because her thoughts were so varied at different times. I also understand that if she was the MFC I prolly would of come to care for her but I was invested in Spare so I was angry for all she did to her

    02/04/2022 19:55

  • Amy Bongle Todd

    love first few chapters

    02/04/2022 17:12

  • Deanna

    I really loved the stories. I personally much preferred the first books because you wrote them from the point of view of the characters. I tend to end up loving those types of books. when you changed to the point of view of a narrator I didn’t enjoy the story as much. Possibly because I didn’t feel as connected to the story with that style. I still think you have done an awesome job though and I do hope you continue to write 💜 Thanks for all your hard work.

    02/04/2022 03:52

  • Susy Q Badilla Calderon

    i Will like yo know the name of the book that Will be for the children of Jack, Duncan and Archer

    02/04/2022 02:40

  • Lorinda Cartwright

    I loved that you tied it all together and it was great! but I did want to know about Serena torture in hell.

    02/04/2022 01:26

  • Ariel Kayea

    what is the name of the second and third book?

    02/04/2022 00:15

  • Peggy Wilkinson Bullard

    anyone else having trouble buying credits through googleplay/pay? i wont use paypal but it wont give the option to do googlepay anymore. are these books on any other platforms?

    02/03/2022 22:34

  • Elisa Reid

    when is the next chapters being released?

    02/03/2022 20:41

  • Reader-299086

    talk about the evil mother and father, plus twin sister. Love how you aren’t sure of what’s next to happen here.

    02/03/2022 20:13

  • Lisa Benjamin

    Still waiting for the next update. I love the stories and it keeps me on the edge of my seat but I tend to lose interest when I have to wait long periods of time for the story to continue. I'm very used to reading a novel from beginning to end without breaks. I even read books 2 and 3 over just to keep myself engaged.

    02/03/2022 19:39

  • Lisa Ramsey

    it won't let me read it. it gives tutorial but won't let me pass the next option

    02/03/2022 19:06

  • Vickie c

    when is the next update please

    02/03/2022 18:28

  • Carmen Pettie

    I truly love all three books! This should be in print for sure! You are a gifted writer, Lori! Keep writing!

    02/03/2022 15:37

  • Ellie Brooke

    wow now that's a plot twist!!!! Now if we could just have longer chapters I'd be over the moon xx

    02/03/2022 15:36

  • Daniel Jimenez

    awe no update yet?

    02/03/2022 05:26

  • Michelle Mckinney

    is that the end or are there more chapters 🤔

    02/03/2022 05:11

  • Daniel Jimenez

    is there an option to buy all three books?

    02/03/2022 02:23

  • Sally Sutherland

    Love the story! I haven't seen an update for c couple of days and I had seen a post saying that there is a little more to tell. Just checking in to see if I missed the update or something? Thanks in advance.

    02/02/2022 23:17

  • Brenda Griffin

    if I wanted to buy a book I would order from Amazon. this story is good but not good enough for me to give a credit card number to an unknown agency. sell your book to Amazon and i would buy it.

    02/02/2022 22:36

  • Kathy Chamberlin

    Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift it was a wonderful read being able to escape even for just a little while is wonderful! I can't find the book about Jack is it available?! thanks again wonderful story.

    02/02/2022 22:34

  • Glenda Hitchcock

    This is a awesome read couldn’t ask for a better book can’t wait to read the ending. Thanks for writing it.

    02/02/2022 22:02

  • CarlandStep Coleman

    please never give up writing you are extremely talented I can't wait for more from you

    02/02/2022 20:04

  • Lynell Arps

    good read

    02/02/2022 20:00

  • Brittany Nicol Trippler

    so this is for everyone Including the author. she posts up to 3 chapters daily but let's all remember that she does have a life to live it's amazing so many people love the book but let's remember that even authors need time to think about the new chapters and to relax to be able too for us your doing great Lori can't wait for the new chapter

    02/02/2022 19:46

  • Roxanne Rodriguez

    love this book

    02/02/2022 19:22

  • Stacey Benson

    Is there going to be a update on book 3 or has it ended nit updated in 2 days yet it says to be continued

    02/02/2022 18:55

  • Cheryl Motter

    no update yesterday?? hope all is well.

    02/02/2022 12:12

  • Ifeoma James

    The intro is good but it takes time to open to read.

    02/02/2022 12:11

  • Lula Faye Reed

    I thought it was the king . But it was a big foot omg this is on now. ❤ loving it.

    02/02/2022 11:55

  • Lula Faye Reed

    ooooh where it's the king now we are going to see some shyt

    02/02/2022 11:44

  • Reader-086139

    wish chapters longer

    02/02/2022 10:53

  • tracey williams

    I thought I couldn't read. Can you understand what I'm saying? I'm loving this book.

    02/02/2022 05:36

  • Mary T Caston

    this is a fantastic book

    02/02/2022 05:22

  • Shawna Davis

    wow this a really good book

    02/02/2022 02:52

  • lori Thomas

    can't stop reading

    02/02/2022 01:57

  • Shannon Mssassy Patten

    sooooooo good

    02/02/2022 01:04

  • Kimberlie Knowles

    why does it take so much to open a chapter. then you dont even get enough to read more then 1 chapter at a time

    02/02/2022 00:43

  • Glenda Thompson

    will there be more chapters to the third book

    02/02/2022 00:25

  • faithjenkins

    I’m still in book one. Are all three about Adria and Duncan?

    02/01/2022 23:57

  • April Osborn

    so good

    02/01/2022 23:47

  • Missy Robertson

    I love this story

    02/01/2022 23:08

  • kaykay garcia

    amazing!!!!!!

    02/01/2022 19:47

  • Wolfgang Armedaus

    Wednesday morning 🌄

    02/01/2022 18:49

  • Lori Ameling

    Ok everyone I have been working on something all I ask I for your patience. I have decided instead of the epilogue I have changed it to little stories, for all the secondary characters. Yes the will the rest of the end of book three. I am. almost done. I thought about sending it as I write but I makes better sense if read all together.

    02/01/2022 18:38

  • Daniel Jimenez

    I don't see an update yet. was there not one yesterday evening?

    02/01/2022 15:00

  • Karabear

    I really hope felicia isnt Jack's mate

    02/01/2022 14:25

  • Karabear

    I am so beyond happy that lily is finally getting some happiness in her life. I understand she was a horrible person before but it was done out of necessity and survival and that deep down, she wasnt really the horrible person she portrayed.

    02/01/2022 13:14

  • Roxanne Vugts

    I absolutely loved this book, i finished it in just over a day/ night lol your an amazing talented writer and u can't wait to read more from you!!! thank you

    02/01/2022 10:12

  • Susan W

    I have been reading novels and short stories for most of my 58 years. Your intro to Adira's store grabbed my attention. your writing kept me enthralled. Character development, storyline development is wonderful. Normally I do not like to read incomplete books because some authors get overwhelmed with life, because it happens. the story is never completed. I am thankful to have hung in while you wrote. Stories are great. I am a fan.

    02/01/2022 09:59

  • Reader-475095

    hey Lori I just want to tell you that these books are seriously amazing. I couldn’t put Adira’s and Duncan’s book down! you have a serious talent for writing. please continue doing it! 🥰

    02/01/2022 07:14

  • Lorinda Cartwright

    when will this be updated?

    02/01/2022 04:22

  • Kaitlyn Short

    🥲

    02/01/2022 03:54

  • Melissa Taylor

    are the warnings really necessary every chapter? Shouldn't 1 at the beginning if the book be sufficient? Using it to up your word count is BS and just gosting us more $!

    02/01/2022 01:37

  • Te Koingo Acton

    when does this update??

    02/01/2022 01:36

  • Olivia Amanonce Lumanta

    Nice story

    02/01/2022 01:22

  • Tanya Ammons

    This is the 1st book I've read and loving it! what are the other 2 books? I would really like to read them all.

    01/31/2022 16:59

  • Sandra Griffen

    great story can't wait to find out more

    01/31/2022 15:58

  • Lena Benson

    You are an amazing writer, more grease to your elbows

    01/31/2022 11:29

  • Michele Harry

    I have read well over 5000 book in my life an I enjoy your books so much, book two is starting out to be just as good as spare. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

    01/31/2022 06:32

  • Cathrine Rehn

    I want to know what happens to the children Archer adopted?

    01/31/2022 05:04
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