Fates Hands Comments

Reader-569284

good

Giselle Simone

Is this story complete?

Jen Gaudiello

😝more description of yummy duncan

Reader-703008

great story. hooked.

Susan Smith-Elmore Kinder

great story you do a wonderful job writing

Christina Bones

this book has got me on my toes

Lorinda Cartwright

I loved that you tied it all together and it was great! but I did want to know about Serena torture in hell.

Hayley Chiblow

what happened with Alpha assholes wolf and the warning from the moon goddess? surely the full moon has happened, what was the consequence !?!?!

Ariel Kayea

what is the name of the second and third book?

Reader-086139

wish chapters longer

Reader-136721

new to this

Reader-735271

Too many run on sentences. sometimes idk who’s talking or what’s happening

Elisa Reid

when is the next chapters being released?

Nicole Loray

love both book 1 & 2. I do have one note about book 2 to consider. In the beginning Jack talks about the 3 boys that he seems to have adopted, but then after he meets Nora he never speaks about them again.

kaykay garcia

amazing!!!!!!

Vickie c

when is the next update please

Deanna

I really loved the stories. I personally much preferred the first books because you wrote them from the point of view of the characters. I tend to end up loving those types of books. when you changed to the point of view of a narrator I didn’t enjoy the story as much. Possibly because I didn’t feel as connected to the story with that style. I still think you have done an awesome job though and I do hope you continue to write 💜 Thanks for all your hard work.

Brittany Nicol Trippler

so this is for everyone Including the author. she posts up to 3 chapters daily but let's all remember that she does have a life to live it's amazing so many people love the book but let's remember that even authors need time to think about the new chapters and to relax to be able too for us your doing great Lori can't wait for the new chapter

Mary T Caston

this is a fantastic book

Cheryl Motter

no update yesterday?? hope all is well.

Kaitlyn Short

🥲

🤣🤣take that Alpha Asshole

faithjenkins

I’m still in book one. Are all three about Adria and Duncan?

Daniel Jimenez

awe no update yet?

Benaifer Bagli

my points some times don't add ...

Te Koingo Acton

when does this update??

Liz Rhodes

so it sounds like there is another or is going to be another book in regards to Archer's daughter and the other boys. So is that not out yet or is it one of her other stories?

Tiffany Taylor

what debt? it's her PUNISHMENT...good grief.

doreen vance

great story love it

Stephanie Warren

no not at the pack house

Ifeoma James

The intro is good but it takes time to open to read.

Juanita Lara

omg… I love the novel. where can I find the other novels

Glenda Hitchcock

This is a awesome read couldn’t ask for a better book can’t wait to read the ending. Thanks for writing it.

Lisa Benjamin

Still waiting for the next update. I love the stories and it keeps me on the edge of my seat but I tend to lose interest when I have to wait long periods of time for the story to continue. I'm very used to reading a novel from beginning to end without breaks. I even read books 2 and 3 over just to keep myself engaged.

Karabear

I really hope felicia isnt Jack's mate

Connie Nieto

so far this book is really good

kjm2000

I’m kinda confused on the fact of why everyone but adira got punished for knowing about what was going on and not stopping it. A lot of people were threatened just like adira but she was the only one with a pass?

dannah ellis

love it

Sylvia Castillo

oh please don't leave. e hanging

Michelle Washington-Scarberry

Love all three books. I’ve read them three times and I fall in love with the characters all over again. I was wondering if you are going to write a book about August and Anna because I want know what’s happening with them after their marriage

Aderonke Adeboye Titoneye

Great 👍

Chelsea Bernius

such a great read! I absolutely recommend the entire series!

Lisa Ramsey

it won't let me read it. it gives tutorial but won't let me pass the next option

Lorinda Cartwright

when will this be updated?

Susy Q Badilla Calderon

i Will like yo know the name of the book that Will be for the children of Jack, Duncan and Archer

Dorene Brooks

omg mixing up the names is making me confused. I have to go back up to see if I read right🤦🏻‍♀️

Bronwyn Livy

Hi There. I’ve not long started reading, only on chapter 33! But I noticed this is a three book series, what book number is this one? and how do I find the others! Thank you!

Shawna Davis

wow this a really good book

Marty Henry

I loved this book very much!!

Dottie Dee

it’s a good book… but I’m stuck on chapter 8. that means I will have to wait a few days to read another (1) chapter!

Glenda Thompson

will there be more chapters to the third book

Christina Holden

Book 1 thoughts cont : Now Jack was amazing. Loved him. I can’t wait for him to do his walk about in the spring. Loved Marnie and Ash. His purr is adorable. Archer seems like an amazing leader like Jack and Duncan. Those three will be unstoppable I think. Can’t wait to see if Archer finds his lioness mate. It seems like all the mate bonds are decreasing and I hope that somehow they are saved and they all find their forever love. I love the differences in the different Were’s and how the author shows the distinct difference in each species. All in all I can’t wait to read Book 2. So away I go to continue the journey.

joann foster

when will this be updated I’m dying to finish. it is so exciting and so amazing to read loving you stories please continue

Ellie Brooke

wow now that's a plot twist!!!! Now if we could just have longer chapters I'd be over the moon xx

Reader-293666

um

Kelli Noble

thought it was just a short story- but I like it

Tracy Cooper

enjoying it very much

April Osborn

so good

Karabear

I am so beyond happy that lily is finally getting some happiness in her life. I understand she was a horrible person before but it was done out of necessity and survival and that deep down, she wasnt really the horrible person she portrayed.

Tasha Atkinson

I knew it...thus keeps getting better

lori Thomas

can't stop reading

Claire tb

chapter 15 book 3 intro: i think the word should be...you read not listen to comments...

Stacey Musterman

ok so if they’re mates why did it take so long I mean it’s been months and now she’s in heat all the sudden there mates

Kary Atkinson

loved this chapter you are pulling you all into your first book You may not figure out your style with this one but the more you write it will come to you but I think you’re doing an excellent job

Michelle Mckinney

is that the end or are there more chapters 🤔

Karen Evers Byrd

I have enjoyed this book...I love all the wires very intriguing...can't wait to see whats next

Reader-240794

I love it😍😍😍

Sarah Hammack

loving this book

Karol Brown

this is a great intense story line!!

Pamela Boyd

This book is so good on chapter 60 just wait it's so good

Marshalee Hinds

enjoying it

Reader-622281

interesting so far

Tina Storer

brilliant story...

Teresa Millar

just when it started to get good ...new to this can't you read the whole book

Shannon Mssassy Patten

sooooooo good

Kim John Ward

really enjoying this book

leatherkey

Oh. My. Lanta!! Love this book so far. So suspenseful, even if very heartbreaking yet heartwarming at the same time. How do you manage that?!

Eriks Rose

I hate the narrative shift in chapter one, from first orsini Spare to third to first person Duncan back to third in only a few paragraphs. Other than that it starts off well

Reader-299086

talk about the evil mother and father, plus twin sister. Love how you aren’t sure of what’s next to happen here.

Tayler Laraway

this is truely an addictive story I’m hooked!

Roxanne Vugts

I absolutely loved this book, i finished it in just over a day/ night lol your an amazing talented writer and u can't wait to read more from you!!! thank you

Susan W

I have been reading novels and short stories for most of my 58 years. Your intro to Adira's store grabbed my attention. your writing kept me enthralled. Character development, storyline development is wonderful. Normally I do not like to read incomplete books because some authors get overwhelmed with life, because it happens. the story is never completed. I am thankful to have hung in while you wrote. Stories are great. I am a fan.

RoseAnn Shepherd

I love the story line!

linda romanowski

you have my attention

Arelene Bryant

So far I love this book but wished all chapters were unlocked.

Reader-553144

you are a very good writer enjoying your books

Jamie Johnson

What happened to the 3 boys Jack took in after the mess in the first book?

Richard Griffin

so far really good 👍

Lula Faye Reed

I thought it was the king . But it was a big foot omg this is on now. ❤ loving it.

Amanda Marsiglia

so far I'm digging the story. I just wish I could keep reading and not have to unlock chapters. This is new to me

Wolfgang Armedaus

Wednesday morning 🌄

love your stories, it is awesome 👌

Lisa Hyden

how do you unlock chapters?

Loverta Summers

this book is great loving it

Tiffany Weaver Ross

I love this so far I can’t wait to finish it

Amber Anderson

I loved it and it wasn't long like most of these stories are. also can you do a book on Asher I would really like for him to find his mate as well. no one deserves to not find a mate.

Daniel Jimenez

is there an option to buy all three books?

Lori Ameling

Ok everyone I have been working on something all I ask I for your patience. I have decided instead of the epilogue I have changed it to little stories, for all the secondary characters. Yes the will the rest of the end of book three. I am. almost done. I thought about sending it as I write but I makes better sense if read all together.

hey Lori I just want to tell you that these books are seriously amazing. I couldn’t put Adira’s and Duncan’s book down! you have a serious talent for writing. please continue doing it! 🥰

Daniel Jimenez

no updates today 😔