Fates Hands Comments

  • Missy Myers

    why does this say part 2 of 2? what is the first part? please?

    04/13/2022 22:33

  • Glynda Holloway

    great story and story line!

    04/13/2022 21:09

  • Maria G Maerz

    I want to keep going

    04/13/2022 04:56

  • Margie Jordan Bales

    i hope jack finds his mate

    04/13/2022 02:39

  • Chelsea Sloan

    This may be a reflection on my personality; why does the author feel the need to use females instead of women?

    04/12/2022 03:18

  • Chelsea Sloan

    While the written grammar is terrible, the story is quite a page-turner.

    04/12/2022 02:44

  • Stacy DeShun Logan

    I started reading this book and have not put it down until 30 minutes ago. Im really enjoying this book, I can't wait yo see what happens at the end.

    04/11/2022 23:33

  • Kathie Clough Dreesman

    am enjoying the read

    04/11/2022 16:56

  • Rosalee Messier Laurin

    enjoying reading this book, looking forward to the next chapters

    04/11/2022 15:22

  • Teri Wright

    you did an excellent job. really enjoyed reading!

    04/11/2022 09:45

  • Cath Lufc Hopkins

    great read looking forward to book three

    04/11/2022 08:43

  • Lori Ameling

    Hey there every one. I have a new Facebook group for my readers. it is called. Beyond the pages. look for it on Facebook. looking forward to seeing you all there.

    04/11/2022 03:17

  • Teresa Williamson

    love the story so far hope it gets more exciting

    04/10/2022 20:23

  • Teresa Williamson

    yes that's right dirty little slut

    04/10/2022 20:23

  • Reader-080773

    great read so fat

    04/10/2022 14:35

  • Reader-171692

    If the alpha and Eric are brothers and his daughter is sleeping with the alpha that means she’s sleeping with her uncle.

    04/10/2022 09:15

  • Taay Fargo

    is the detective not waiting for him ? 😭 45 mins is crazy ? I would of left

    04/10/2022 01:12

  • Roberta Crummel

    love the story so far.

    04/09/2022 22:03

  • Nada Noujaime

    Amazing! Love the stories and the characters. Do not stop writing, these is definitely the best I've read in a long time. Worth the read! 😍

    04/09/2022 20:07

  • Edwina Smith

    cool story it’s so interesting

    04/09/2022 15:44

  • Annmarie B

    cool

    04/09/2022 14:33

  • Winnie Pokai

    great book so far

    04/09/2022 08:00

  • Katie Fabain

    fantastic book. I read this on another platform I think and had 2 other stories that continue with Jack the bear and archer the lion

    04/09/2022 05:45

  • Shae Brown

    great story so far. Just takes forever to unlock new chapters.

    04/09/2022 05:12

  • Karen Chuhaniuk

    I like this story

    04/09/2022 03:10

  • amanda cook

    liking this story I read 6 chapters straight

    04/09/2022 01:47

  • Ida Vandine

    I really like this story can't wait to see what happens next.

    04/08/2022 22:33

  • angela tinson

    These were some great stories. I was sad when it came to an end.

    04/08/2022 17:21

  • Yazmine Reynoso Martinez {Violet Flame of love }

    nice name awesome loving it

    04/08/2022 06:31

  • Yazmine Reynoso Martinez {Violet Flame of love }

    omg I’m already crying for this girl she is so strong and brave

    04/08/2022 06:14

  • Yazmine Reynoso Martinez {Violet Flame of love }

    I personally think he should be the one naming her not her or anyone else and do to the way she is describe, she is beautiful and a strong woman. May e a flower that grows in the service the winter and represents strength and beauty

    04/08/2022 06:06

  • K A Mears-Kolesnikoff Carter

    Artemis and Apollo?? Really? The twin Greek deities; Apollo the Sun god and Artemis the moon goddess, goddess of the hunt, aka Diana 😁😄😃

    04/08/2022 00:40

  • Tamra Curran

    I really have enjoyed your writing keep up the good work can’t wait to read more 🥰

    04/08/2022 00:28

  • Audrey Jantzen

    I'm enjoying the book so far. I like the name she picked. I can see that these 2 will Definitely wind up together with no problems.. I just hope her family does not find her.

    04/07/2022 21:15

  • Reader-423391

    good read

    04/07/2022 02:46

  • Debbie Bowen

    wow, great stuff. Adira is a beautiful name!

    04/07/2022 01:53

  • Liliana Guadarrama

    great book

    04/07/2022 01:41

  • Bernadette Slaney

    a good read so far

    04/07/2022 01:35

  • Sonya Duckham

    great book.

    04/06/2022 23:37

  • Tonie Sledge

    I’m so happy Spare has time with the king. He got to know who she was.

    04/06/2022 21:31

  • Margaret-Ann Niomoni-Tapuaki

    Just started... And I'm hooked

    04/05/2022 23:01

  • Deeanna Hensley

    love it so far can't wait to see what's next

    04/05/2022 18:44

  • Tonie Sledge

    aww that’s so sweet! on another note I can’t wait to see what the werebears have in store. lol

    04/05/2022 11:45

  • Tonie Sledge

    LOL@ then taking that tracker to werebear country and dropping it off. I can’t wait to see what happens there! hahahaha

    04/05/2022 11:19

  • Carol Anne Shoesmith

    great story

    04/05/2022 01:31

  • Georgina Mechan

    brilliant read so far

    04/04/2022 23:05

  • T Seiboko

    what happened to the other son?

    04/04/2022 20:39

  • Charmaine Lindo

    this story is shaping up very nicely. I cannot wait for the surprise in store for her family. wicked pack

    04/04/2022 18:34

  • MaryJo Stasiowski

    good so far

    04/04/2022 18:25

  • Jan Naugle

    So far an amazing read. Her family is horrwnsous. Can't quite grasp how the make qere that have been taken away from their mates are surviving the separation and their mates being mated to other werewolves. Very strange indeed.

    04/04/2022 03:46

  • LeAnna Jean Wood

    Really enjoy this book! very hard to pull myself from it!

    04/04/2022 02:25

  • Marie Rouze

    I would like to say that I really enjoyed reading your stories very well put together

    04/04/2022 01:34

  • Gemma Therese Micallef

    chapter 2 and I'm hooked

    04/04/2022 01:19

  • Reader-637974

    poor girl is a mess!

    04/03/2022 17:20

  • Amanda Ballentine Vasquez

    loving it so far

    04/02/2022 16:59

  • Selina Thwaites

    waiting patiently for book 2 of this series. I'm sooooooo invested now, I hope it will not be long

    04/02/2022 14:52

  • Tiffany Conners

    I loved this book I could not stop and I love all characters especially jack and the dark Humor I hope you make book 2 about the king and Lily or the newlyweds lol

    04/02/2022 14:47

  • Tara Dellinger

    Loving this book so far!

    04/02/2022 12:57

  • Keayna Cason

    yap thinking of that too

    04/02/2022 02:22

  • Beth Kelley

    really good I love it so far

    04/02/2022 00:40

  • Yazmine Reynoso Martinez {Violet Flame of love }

    lol this guy will have to go shopping with her

    04/01/2022 12:53

  • Leah Minnucci

    do not start reading if you have plans or need to clean or have a job you need to get to. I am so addicted I can’t put it down. I made my husband order take out because I refused to stop reading to cook. This book is amazing!!!!!! I love it!!!!!! thank you for this amazing story.

    04/01/2022 08:30

  • Kelli Underwood

    captivating story. good setup and decently written. really appreciate the time the author put into not only a good storyline, but good grammar.

    03/31/2022 21:02

  • Yazmine Reynoso Martinez {Violet Flame of love }

    I just started reading this and I'm confused I mean she said thatvhert dad didn't act like her mom did that hedsid she looked like his she mother. so I don't get it. yes she is different but why would he allows her to eat alone or have to steal food?? I understand that her mother might want her separate from them and she might live in the attic bit what I don't get is the lack of furniture and clothes I mean her father was not like her mom

    03/31/2022 19:47

  • Nolly Ebunilo

    perfect, they’re both going to kill each other.

    03/31/2022 08:22

  • Nolly Ebunilo

    it’s not waisted it wasted.

    03/31/2022 08:05

  • Nolly Ebunilo

    spell check is very important, also it’s “I would have” not” I would of”

    03/31/2022 08:02

  • Jane Morales

    This a great story, I really love it, I can't stop reading it

    03/30/2022 23:37

  • Tracey Edwards

    it's a good story line so far

    03/30/2022 21:53

  • Reader-764387

    really enjoying reading the book found it very addictive and can not put it down.

    03/28/2022 21:39

  • Margaret Kuntschik

    so far I love the book

    03/28/2022 04:17

  • leah ashton

    I loved the books.I love the way you write each character and that they aren't all wolves. I have heard of other shifters but never bears. thank you for inspiring me to write my own were stories.

    03/27/2022 10:03

  • Charlotte Dunn

    well written and interesting. held me with bated breath for next chapter

    03/27/2022 01:15

  • Wanda F McBride Tinker

    I had 35 credits tried to read chapter 12 it took the credit didn’t open chapter

    03/26/2022 16:15

  • luana

    i have really enjoyed reading it all i’m really gutted it has ended i need lots more xxx

    03/26/2022 12:45

  • Qwanaè Williams

    how do I go to the next chapter

    03/26/2022 07:11

  • debbie pippenger

    love it

    03/26/2022 01:06

  • Mariam Erinah

    I'm enjoying this kind of torture

    03/24/2022 21:11

  • Julie Randy Cloyd

    I am really enjoying your book. Thanks for getting me reading again.

    03/23/2022 22:32

  • Sheila Searcy

    always excited to see where this is going. great characters and plot.

    03/23/2022 05:03

  • Reader-120871

    really enjoying reading this so far!

    03/23/2022 03:40

  • Julia Woolard

    how come I can’t find the 2nd book on here? and there’s a 3rd? yay! I’m so excited!! some one tell me where I can read the other books please!!!

    03/22/2022 23:49

  • Reader-826031

    amazing story can’t wait for next chapter

    03/22/2022 21:22

  • Mars Muratalla

    All three books are absolutely amazing ! I am curious if there are going to be books regarding the Clan, Pack and Prides kids. At the end of the third book it talked about their two boys and daughter. what’s the next book? I am soooo hooked!

    03/22/2022 20:20

  • joyce campbell

    enjoying this so far

    03/22/2022 17:59

  • Jenni Watkins

    loving the story

    03/22/2022 01:24

  • Reader-785643

    Stop taking me to chapters I’ve already read!!!

    03/21/2022 00:59

  • Christie Bauer

    great jo

    03/21/2022 00:36

  • Leila Isaack

    I never saw this coming...how on this small plot

    03/20/2022 17:39

  • Reader-519908

    trying to find out where I can buy this book

    03/20/2022 13:47

  • Reader-802910

    have just finished this series’s and thoroughly enjoyed it - I do wish that it had been proofed before being published as the names were sometimes mixed up or changed briefly also some of the grammar was a bit off - this is the very first book/s that I have read online so I maybe being a little critical but all being said I still very much enjoyed it and look forward to the next instalments x

    03/20/2022 11:42

  • Mel Smith

    ❤️

    03/19/2022 22:28

  • Moralee Corrupt

    Soooo for everyone correcting “sleuth of bears” a group of bears is a sleuth or a sloth. Just thought I’d let y’all know.

    03/19/2022 16:39

  • Shebee1614

    Let me tell you that king isn’t anything to mess with!!!

    03/19/2022 15:55

  • Ruqoyyah siyanbola

    This is a nice read.

    03/19/2022 09:27

  • Michelle F. Rivera

    omg I can't. I have a headache. she's having flashbacks eating pizza with him but not with the sister??? aye aye aye. great overall ideas but you Def need better skills at organizing the story. sorry. can't waste anymore money on this

    03/19/2022 05:18

  • Michelle F. Rivera

    it's a great story so far... but I feel like it's on fast forward. like yesterday she's going to school and today she's a Luna.

    03/19/2022 04:49

  • Trab Emolotrab

    I enjoyed the story

    03/19/2022 04:46

  • Wanda F McBride Tinker

    love this story I’ve been waiting to read it

    03/18/2022 22:45

  • Toni Davison

    is this book out to buy

    03/18/2022 08:59
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