Fates Hands Comments

  • Terri Kimpel

    I am really enjoying this story so far, please continue to hold my interest.

    03/18/2022 02:25

  • Megan Chance

    so this is a good story but it’s so poorly written. run on sentences so you have to almost focus harder to understand what the writer is trying to say, then sometimes it’s in third person and sometimes it’s in first person. I just started chapter 7 and it says jacks name and how “he knew his boys were wanting fun” then it says “I can’t think of anything more fun than chasing fleabags.” it’s very confusing.

    03/17/2022 20:07

  • Megan Chance

    okay it’s definitely good but how do I bookmark lol

    03/17/2022 16:26

  • Yumiko Cairo Mitsu

    I might like this one. keep on going

    03/17/2022 10:30

  • Reader-463695

    how does this work? I want to read the book...it's locked for how long? will I be able to complete the book???

    03/16/2022 15:02

  • Reader-463695

    very intriguing!!

    03/16/2022 14:57

  • Katrina Cain

    I’m enjoying it so far

    03/16/2022 14:00

  • Tessa Samuel

    ok their wolves right and he’s obviously close by there are other weres there also why had no one SMELLED him yet? 🤔

    03/16/2022 12:05

  • Dani Jorgensen

    gf

    03/16/2022 00:00

  • Reader-535539

    starting out great

    03/15/2022 09:39

  • Reader-583350

    enjoying the story

    03/15/2022 01:36

  • Tammy Kapp

    enjoyed these chapters so fats can’t wait for the next ones…

    03/15/2022 01:27

  • Patricia Lawhorn

    love story just want to read more tell how

    03/15/2022 00:25

  • Reader-802910

    loving this so far xxx

    03/14/2022 10:07

  • Munro Sandra

    I like this story so far :)

    03/14/2022 02:24

  • Patricia Phillips

    I am loving this story very much

    03/13/2022 21:08

  • Marshalee Hinds

    i really love this book

    03/13/2022 18:43

  • Brianna Helms

    ❤️❤️❤️

    03/13/2022 17:17

  • Reader-493474

    whose Jason??

    03/12/2022 21:53

  • Sherry Price

    Loving this book so far, can't wait for the next chapter.

    03/12/2022 14:59

  • Kelsey

    My husband officially hates me I have not moved from my bed in almost 6 hours reading the first book I’m absolutely in love with it cannot wait to read the others!

    03/12/2022 06:57

  • Ashtynne Davis

    I really like Duncan!

    03/11/2022 04:28

  • Marie L Dank

    i am loving your books I can’t put them down. I look forward to reading them.

    03/11/2022 04:07

  • Libby Greenham

    what talent!!

    03/10/2022 18:07

  • Amanda Kotab

    loved all the books, looking forward to seeing what the author has in store for the future characters. I do which that the stories were a bit longer chapter wise (love it so much I didn’t want it to end)

    03/10/2022 15:16

  • Elaine Garcia

    I really enjoyed this story! the characters were just so real and the story lines pulled you in! Thank you for this!

    03/09/2022 20:59

  • Ruby Obeng

    beautiful story loved every bit of it 👌❤

    03/09/2022 16:03

  • MELINDA VICTORINO

    I wonder why the King is not envited in the wedding of Jack and his mate in book 2?...unlike with Duncan when all the main characters are present...I guess only Duncan is the King's favorite and Jack is just...not fair😅

    03/09/2022 15:32

  • Ana Afton

    very good so far

    03/09/2022 03:42

  • Lisa Dunagan

    this was amazing book and I hope there will be more like them

    03/07/2022 20:54

  • Jenna Smith

    only comment I have about this chapter is explain what they look like in wolf form. it got a bit lost in transition here

    03/07/2022 14:35

  • Mwika Makukutsi

    very nice book

    03/07/2022 11:55

  • Patryce Stillettos Critz

    this book was amazing please tell me there will be more!

    03/07/2022 10:27

  • Alanna Bedworth

    oooh yes!!

    03/07/2022 02:13

  • stanchy

    Is this a single story book?

    03/06/2022 20:44

  • Aena Zahid

    this is an awesome tale, one of the best books. I would really appreciate if some one can take a little time to check out 'A Place Unlike Home.' thankyou.

    03/06/2022 18:22

  • Dawn Williams

    An absolutely awesome read.

    03/06/2022 12:20

  • Elissa J Martinez

    Hi, Lori!...🙋🏻‍♀️. In what book does Jack, 'The Teddy Bear ', find his mate? I read this book first and now I am reading The Elixir, which talks about her. Is that book on here?...🤔

    03/06/2022 07:52

  • DebFou-019193

    Archer I’d like to read a story on him meeting his mate. I’m sorry it’s over, I really enjoyed the story.

    03/06/2022 00:18

  • Angel

    I am at chapter 6 and so far it ain’t bad. It is hard to put the story down

    03/05/2022 09:35

  • Reader-703008

    great story. hooked.

    03/04/2022 23:17

  • Nicole Anne Cracknell

    loving this so far !

    03/04/2022 22:13

  • Charleen Jones

    fantastic story. totally enjoyed it. and rather than letting it go on forever you ended it and started a new book, which I can't wait to read. I'm so looking forward to it. thank you so very much.

    03/04/2022 07:37

  • Cindy Johnson

    interesting

    03/04/2022 00:21

  • Reader-887459

    I really enjoyed this story/adventure definitely going to follow the author.

    03/03/2022 22:32

  • Lisa Clarke

    I liked that you put the series in one.

    03/03/2022 18:37

  • bernice ajayi

    interesting

    03/02/2022 22:19

  • Samantha Davidson

    what happen to Anna & Auston, and how did Salena act when she learned who her true mate really was?

    03/02/2022 19:33

  • Angela Cruse

    I really enjoyed this. I had a hard time putting it down. really good read. minus a few misplaced character names and grammar I really loved it.

    03/02/2022 10:41

  • Hayley Chiblow

    what happened with Alpha assholes wolf and the warning from the moon goddess? surely the full moon has happened, what was the consequence !?!?!

    03/01/2022 03:25

  • Rayia Lorraine

    this is getting good

    02/28/2022 03:44

  • Angelica Nicole Johnson

    What a Fruit loop!! Her stepfather has only ever went after humans. Not another bear let alone a clan of them. He really is stupid as he is sadistic.

    02/27/2022 15:42

  • TGI GISH

    be easy using the name Winchester in vain...

    02/27/2022 11:56

  • Kat Ellen

    oh wow!!

    02/27/2022 10:41

  • Tricia Torgler

    Grammar could be better. But overall an AMAZING read!! Each chapter you want to read more. Truly says a lot!!

    02/27/2022 02:53

  • Liz Rhodes

    so it sounds like there is another or is going to be another book in regards to Archer's daughter and the other boys. So is that not out yet or is it one of her other stories?

    02/27/2022 02:35

  • Elexis Craig

    is Jack's name inspired from Titanic? lol because it just dawned on me that that was literally his name 😂😂

    02/26/2022 22:30

  • Charlie Biggs

    can some one tell me what the first book is

    02/25/2022 19:21

  • Kelly Rohrer

    omggg I’m dying 🤣🤣🤣

    02/25/2022 18:47

  • Kelly Rohrer

    🤣🤣take that Alpha Asshole

    02/25/2022 18:20

  • Charlessa Coats Springberg

    is her name Adira or Adair??? it keeps changing.

    02/25/2022 17:57

  • Kelly Rohrer

    I love that he is not a black wolf - as per the usual Alpha!!

    02/25/2022 17:30

  • Kelly Rohrer

    refreshing Alpha 💜 i love him already

    02/25/2022 17:18

  • Stephanie Warren

    no not at the pack house

    02/25/2022 16:36

  • Love Kayy

    there are three books if you are reading spare story that is book one if you are reading jacks story that is book two and I believe it’s acher story that is book 3

    02/24/2022 07:48

  • Jenniffer Martin

    it says this book is complete but it looks like it is multiple books. is the full story finished? or just the first two books?

    02/24/2022 07:23

  • Dorene Brooks

    omg mixing up the names is making me confused. I have to go back up to see if I read right🤦🏻‍♀️

    02/24/2022 07:21

  • dannah ellis

    love it

    02/24/2022 02:44

  • chad anderson

    books are fated hands, hidden, elixir

    02/23/2022 21:34

  • chad anderson

    this needs to actually come out in book form so I can own it

    02/23/2022 21:18

  • Linda Croft

    what is book 2?

    02/23/2022 20:43

  • Phenon Tingle

    I love the trigger warnings thanks

    02/23/2022 06:24

  • Michelle Washington-Scarberry

    Love all three books. I’ve read them three times and I fall in love with the characters all over again. I was wondering if you are going to write a book about August and Anna because I want know what’s happening with them after their marriage

    02/23/2022 03:04

  • Supreme Goddess

    omg little kids smfh

    02/22/2022 21:37

  • Kitty Lindberg

    I need this in audiobook so I can clean house and know what happens.

    02/22/2022 18:26

  • Ms. Stephie Davis

    is there anyway I can buy the entire book and skip the scrolling issue!!! I’m invested and been thinking about this book all day.

    02/22/2022 01:56

  • Kali West

    how do you unlock without paying?

    02/22/2022 01:47

  • Lisa Ramsey

    it won't let me continue after it shows to scroll and tap here?? it's stupid that I can't get past that

    02/22/2022 01:27

  • Dottie Dee

    it’s a good book… but I’m stuck on chapter 8. that means I will have to wait a few days to read another (1) chapter!

    02/22/2022 01:09

  • Summer Lynn Stanton

    so I believe the way u have to unlock chapters is RIDICULOUS but I love this book and want to continue to chapter 6. can I just buy the book? is this series included in the “unlimited monthly price”? if not, how can I buy the book so I can just read the damn thing. this takes the pleasure out of it being stopped in the middle of a chapter 😡

    02/21/2022 20:04

  • Kassiopia Clark

    love this story so far!

    02/20/2022 19:40

  • Donna Iceton

    I’m loving this book

    02/20/2022 17:37

  • Patryce Stillettos Critz

    this book is amazing! I can’t put it down.

    02/20/2022 15:57

  • Eriks Rose

    I hate the narrative shift in chapter one, from first orsini Spare to third to first person Duncan back to third in only a few paragraphs. Other than that it starts off well

    02/20/2022 13:38

  • Reader-165424

    wish it was like a you get a key every hour to unlock the next chapter can’t wait I need to skip to chapter 12 I’ve red them all on another site don’t know what it was called but now I’m stuck at chapter 6 😭

    02/20/2022 08:35

  • Reader-191809

    how do you buy the whole book? instead of buying by chapter?

    02/19/2022 21:01

  • Reader-846239

    does anybody know what are the other two titles names. I would like to read them all from the first one to the last one

    02/19/2022 15:49

  • Kathy Bailey

    great book so far

    02/19/2022 13:10

  • Angie G. de Muñoz

    STALKER! How romantic tho. 😆 😺 💘 ❤ 💋

    02/19/2022 04:11

  • Crystal McNeil Nelson

    who do you complain to when your double billed and it won’t unlock?

    02/18/2022 04:51

  • Cassandras_Curse

    A single warning at the beginning of a book is all that is needed. Warnings at the beginning of every chapter are redundant. if someone chooses to read the book after the first warning, then it is on them if they are later triggered.

    02/18/2022 02:48

  • Yvonnika Lammers

    wish I could afford to read more only got to read to chapter 9

    02/17/2022 11:48

  • Pauline Hicks Bourke

    I have loved the 3 books thankyou so much cannot wait for the next books from you 💕

    02/17/2022 08:46

  • Freda Truitt

    It is very good. It is keeping me glued to this book.

    02/17/2022 06:37

  • Fallon Clouatre

    Fate can fickle

    02/17/2022 06:26

  • Juanita Lara

    omg… I love the novel. where can I find the other novels

    02/17/2022 00:40

  • ramona hall

    loved this book

    02/16/2022 18:56

  • kjm2000

    I’m kinda confused on the fact of why everyone but adira got punished for knowing about what was going on and not stopping it. A lot of people were threatened just like adira but she was the only one with a pass?

    02/16/2022 06:06

  • BookDragon

    So happy for them!!

    02/16/2022 05:24

  • ashlei schwendinger

    love the story. can't wait to finish reading

    02/16/2022 04:27
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