Fates Hands Comments

  • Andrea Johnson

    'GOOD STORY' pulls you right in and as you go along you get hit with how bad it really was for the main character. she gets out of her old pack with her mate but you just get started in this twisted sick world she left. the longer she is gone the more twisted stuff you learn. Hard to read because deep down you know there are sick people in this world that could be doing awful stuff like her old Alpha. You won't want to put this story down. the main character is brave and her mate is so patient. The combo is instant love for their relationship.

    07/06/2022 17:00

  • Bernice Petzer

    #GOOD STORY. Amazing book that makes you notice that life is not always hardship but much much more. I am so proud of the lead caracter she is very inspiring.

    07/06/2022 16:44

  • Ankita Shukla

    "GOOD STORY" Fates Hand is a book / story that I would love to recommend. This book is packed with suspense and a very gripping story line . Its about a girl named Spare and the entire story revolves around her. Its about the hardships she faces and the never give up attitude that helps her to overcome all those obstacles. Would definitely recommend it #goodstory

    07/06/2022 16:33

  • Christene Van Zyl

    #GOOD STORY. This book inpires a person to rise above any hardship. In the blink of an eye your life can change

    07/06/2022 16:17

  • Christene Van Zyl

    I wish everyone could read this book. So inspiring to not let life get you down. A example of a strong woman

    07/06/2022 16:13

  • Yvonne Guzzetta Bedore

    Good story. still reading the book and love it

    07/06/2022 15:59

  • Nichole Opunui

    #GoodStory Spare is a superstar for showing everyone to never give up on yourself. Fantastic story

    07/06/2022 15:35

  • Robin

    #GoodStory What a great story

    07/06/2022 15:21

  • Erin Lee Sommerer

    #GoodStory I am currently reading this book. It is easy to read and easy to follow along. It has such good plots which keeps you interested. Bonus there are other books to go with it so your not left hanging 😍

    07/06/2022 15:10

  • Lesley Crutchlow

    #GoodStory Great story that pulls you in from the start. filled with lots of twists and turns. can't wait to read the second book.

    07/06/2022 15:05

  • Rosemarie Ballestero

    GOOD STORY I really enjoyed this book and the 2 that followed it! They are not just good stories but great stories. Because I enjoyed them so much I read 2 other books by the author. Keep up the good work!

    07/06/2022 14:08

  • Brittany Hopkins

    great story line…keeps you wanting more..would definitely recommend #goodstort

    07/06/2022 14:03

  • Virginia Sheppard

    great story wished it wouldn't end I felt like I was part of the story

    07/06/2022 13:57

  • Laura Walsh

    good story loved this book well worth the read

    07/06/2022 13:25

  • Vanida Thompson

    If Agent David is Nova’s biological dad, Jack and him are good friends and I hope they tear James and the sheriff a new whole. This is getting good. I think Jack is a sweetheart and deserves all the happiness. WOW!!

    07/05/2022 16:10

  • Tina Ford

    I absolutely love this book and I adore the writer she really draws you into the story, some stories I've read just repeat alot and are drawn out but this book doesn't and it leaves you wanting more. I do hope that the writer will at some point add more to this book she definitely has left the door open for more story lines❤️ Great great book

    07/04/2022 17:15

  • Sabrina Blankenship

    love this book

    07/01/2022 20:17

  • Antrice T

    this should be a movie series

    07/01/2022 05:44

  • Karlene Gordon

    hahahahah omg

    06/30/2022 21:41

  • Becky Lehman

    is there a second book

    06/30/2022 20:22

  • Alona Munez

    so heart breaking😭😭😭... how can they do yjis thing...

    06/30/2022 05:50

  • Diane Booth

    love this storyline. can't wait to read more chapters!!!

    06/29/2022 21:00

  • Breanne Fuller

    I love the story line of the book and all the characters! I would love to be your editor though. The errors were the only bad thing about this book.

    06/29/2022 19:26

  • Amanda Lynne

    Even with the grammatical errors, this is a great read! I'd love to be this Authors editor. Her stories are very well written and I can picture each character in my mind. Great Work!

    06/29/2022 12:28

  • Amanda Lynne

    When did she change her name from Adira to Adair? jw.

    06/29/2022 10:11

  • Tammy Barto

    so far great

    06/29/2022 00:07

  • Dona Henderson

    I love it so far !

    06/26/2022 23:27

  • Tammy Browning

    got interest just wanna keep reading now

    06/26/2022 00:01

  • Faribach

    Good storytelling. thank you!

    06/25/2022 11:35

  • Eryll Ann

    Why this story is so much alike to Werewolf song???

    06/25/2022 09:05

  • Kristi Dahl

    Really? Ready or not!?? That has to be the absolute worst line I have ever seen.

    06/24/2022 05:55

  • Dailys Mendieta

    wow just wow. I'm in love with this book

    06/24/2022 03:57

  • Donna Lee

    this book is awesome. I can’t wait to read the next chapters

    06/24/2022 02:26

  • Kimberly Kerr

    Wow..didn't see that coming

    06/24/2022 00:25

  • Anna Gearing

    So far so good it's got my interest.

    06/23/2022 23:34

  • Catherine Mc Laughlin

    Great story so far. Cant wait to read more

    06/23/2022 20:19

  • Charlotte Burruss

    Oh Wow!!! Definitely didn’t see that coming; Lily and the King?????

    06/23/2022 19:40

  • Trishn29

    I thought her name was Adira....now it's Adair???

    06/23/2022 09:21

  • Brittany Jayne

    so far so good

    06/23/2022 03:03

  • Kim Murray

    hope they all suffer

    06/23/2022 02:22

  • Kim Murray

    love the reading but wow alot of sickos

    06/23/2022 02:15

  • Maureen Pech

    aww... I love this so far, Duncan and Adira are happy along with their wolves..

    06/22/2022 23:33

  • Tammy Clem

    we have to wait for chapters? No! I want the rest of the book now I can't wait..

    06/22/2022 22:21

  • Crystal Skeater

    I hope this book gets published and sold to local stores. Id love to collect her books! the start of this story is so exciting Im excited to see how Adira's life changes with her mate !

    06/21/2022 20:17

  • Reader-937264

    great book it has everything in it , love adventure, sadness and finally a very happy ending was a great read loved it

    06/21/2022 13:09

  • Christina Vawser

    I haven't read in so long but I am soon glued to this book!!! I can so relate with the character formally known as spare!

    06/21/2022 03:49

  • Reader-430674

    Love this book! I try to read every chance I get! Haven’t read this much in a very long time!

    06/21/2022 02:52

  • Brenda McDaniel

    Absolutely loved this book and can't wait to get Jack's story started. one really enjoyable thing about it was I do not remember one single vulgar word in it that made it even more enjoyable.

    06/20/2022 17:56

  • Reader-634798

    I have enjoyed all three books. I live the humor you slip in too!

    06/20/2022 15:21

  • Colleen Sharpe

    OMG 😲 😱 I absolutely love this author. she is my new favorite. I swear u will read anything she writes. 💖💖💖

    06/20/2022 08:23

  • Reader-634798

    I can’t stop reading this story. I just keep reading into the wee hours of the night, early morning, next day. definitely a page turner!!!!

    06/19/2022 01:44

  • Ash Desautels

    story sounds captivating so far...

    06/17/2022 23:09

  • Cathy Brode

    so is this prince the son of the king the pavk hires out to?

    06/17/2022 21:16

  • Sydney-Rae Smith

    You should add your story to one of the audiobook apps. I love to read but I also love to listen to them when driving or working. Audiobooks is usually how I try new authors.

    06/17/2022 11:18

  • Jolan Hildebrandt

    what the hell. you shifted pov mid chapter?I'm sorry but it doesn't work

    06/17/2022 05:58

  • Reader-099937

    I really wish I could just out right buy this series. The unlock feature is driving me bananas.

    06/17/2022 04:11

  • Charlotte Corder Riordan

    Ioved it! would like to read more of your work

    06/16/2022 23:44

  • Loquita Siempre

    Lori you should put this story on other apps it's really good.

    06/16/2022 21:37

  • Miranda Kinkead-White

    I can’t wait to read the next chapter I hope the story never ends

    06/16/2022 12:59

  • Ellen Chittom

    Bye.

    06/16/2022 06:01

  • Ellen Chittom

    Can't unlock chapter 6 so will miss it. Am disappointed. can't click on the "unlock previous chapter" at the top of Chapter 7...it disappears. At this point, it's not a fun book.

    06/16/2022 05:54

  • Ellen Chittom

    Such an interesting story!

    06/16/2022 05:47

  • Ellen Chittom

    Do you have to buy this book to finish it? i'm on Social Security and I don't have money for that kind of luxury...or any luxuries. I'm about survival.

    06/16/2022 04:13

  • Reader-430674

    This story keeps you interested in what happens next. Well done!

    06/15/2022 23:14

  • Tracie Murphy

    oh, I love it. He so has a crush on her and she on him since that ride even though she won't admit it

    06/15/2022 14:48

  • Patricia Ward

    love the story would love to buy in book form

    06/15/2022 14:17

  • Eula McGaughey

    I like the story so far I wish I could buy in book form

    06/15/2022 09:45

  • Reader-208132

    love the story

    06/15/2022 00:48

  • Jeanne Wagner

    I love the name she chose

    06/14/2022 13:09

  • Jeanne Wagner

    love it so far

    06/14/2022 12:44

  • Crystal Lynne Brown

    love it

    06/14/2022 07:17

  • tunes0728

    love the story telling so far…it just grabs you!

    06/14/2022 06:22

  • Reader-104750

    I love the angle this story is taking

    06/13/2022 20:34

  • Christina Noel Rieger

    the story is good I'm enjoying it there are a few errors in the writing but still pretty good.

    06/13/2022 18:02

  • Adele Rosencrance

    Am really enjoying this book, can't put it down!

    06/13/2022 17:00

  • Adele Rosencrance

    Hope Lily gets her just dessert!

    06/13/2022 16:54

  • Nicole Brown

    So far good but I hate that I didn't get the points for reading it to this point.

    06/13/2022 14:23

  • Cyndi Romero

    Just began this book and am wrapped up in it!

    06/13/2022 11:39

  • Iris Husted

    This is a really good book…keeps you on edge…can’t stop reading and can’t wait to read more!

    06/13/2022 02:27

  • Leslie Jack

    I would never let an enemy work in my kitchen area period

    06/13/2022 01:50

  • Pamela George

    Just finished reading the book, very well written. Kept me coming back for more & on the edge of my chair. Can't wait to read the next series. Amazing book!!

    06/13/2022 01:35

  • Nina Arrendale Williams

    This made me cry to here all the things they did to her but she has somebody that will go over and beyond for her that made me happy . I want them to take her old pack and tare them in to pieces.

    06/12/2022 23:33

  • Lisa Jonsson

    Just finished the book. It was well written and kept me engaged and pushing for more through every chapter. I only suggest better editing.If this is going to be a series, can't wait for more! GREAT JOB!

    06/12/2022 16:18

  • Phyllis Seedorf

    can’t wait to read the next couple chapters in this book to find out what happens to that s*it of a pack she was originally from. I hope they are treated worst then she was.

    06/12/2022 07:50

  • Elizabeth and Ronnie Martin

    really good story

    06/12/2022 04:20

  • Loquita Siempre

    Really like the story. It should be put on other story websites that you can earn more points from or watch ads to read it.

    06/11/2022 17:20

  • Teresa Belleville

    I've almost finished this book. I have read alot if werewolf books, actually, that's all I read! I understand that the books have alot of violence in them, but, this one is to much! the storyline got lost in all the unnecessary gore. it's to bad, started off with a great story and went downhill fast! to bad!!

    06/11/2022 15:04

  • Jennifer Jensen

    What was the most frustrating were all the Grammer police.After the first few chapters you could clearly understand the author did not edit before publishing. So by correcting the Grammer errors in every paragraph after the first few chapters was very pointless & redundant. There was confusion with a couple characters. Their characters could have been planned a little better. Other than that the story was great. I want to see this made into a movie.

    06/11/2022 02:05

  • Hannah Latour

    if you buy the unlimited can you read as much as you want of this book?

    06/11/2022 00:06

  • Kimberly Kerr

    I am LOVING THIS BOOK..Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!❤❤❤

    06/10/2022 23:26

  • Cheryl Misner

    Am enjoying this story very much

    06/10/2022 22:42

  • Dianna Haley

    I loved this chapter as much as all the other chapters, actually even better. Please keep writting.

    06/10/2022 21:56

  • Libellule D'or

    How can I finish reading the story?

    06/10/2022 19:10

  • Selene Willow

    So far a really good read.

    06/10/2022 15:53

  • Reader-973937

    I just requested to join the face book page waiting on approval ❤️❤️love the books❤️❤️ question though does the book about Jack’s adopted sons and Archie’s daughter have a name??

    06/10/2022 07:30

  • Andra Anthony

    It is getting more and more interesting. Love this story

    06/10/2022 06:10

  • Reader-571940

    love this story

    06/10/2022 00:27

  • Candace Ho

    enjoyed the book look forward to reading more

    06/09/2022 18:35

  • Tina Jones

    wow this was fabulous the more I read the more I didn’t want to stop or put it down. great great sorry. can’t wait to read about Jack

    06/09/2022 16:55

  • Belkis Santana

    the more I read the less I want to stop and put it down

    06/09/2022 01:20
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