Rejected My Alpha Mate Comments
Reader-119753
good book shame chapters are so short đ¤ˇââď¸
07/30/2023 17:08Awurabena Afriyie Asare
JUNE I just love how the lady sacrificed her modesty to protect that of the man It shows that women can be very kind in dire situations like this. The introduction of the book kind of suggests that the guy may be human that was why he couldn't sense the mate bond. But since the lady was able to sense it , it is left with her for him to realize the bond that exists between them so that it may work aa the goddess herself proclaimed.
06/27/2023 08:55Debra Sykes
JUNE I have read some of this book already and I like it. I just can't believe a father would do that to his kid's but Hay only a story. I also agree that intro has no real info by just putting an insert but the story is good.
06/27/2023 06:29Kobie Stroebel
JUNE good start
06/27/2023 05:24Doobies
JUNE - I agree with several other reviewers that only using an excerpt from the story as the intro and not including any kind of synopsis/summary makes it difficult for the reader/audience to determine what this book is about and if one is interested enough in it to invest in reading further.
06/27/2023 04:45icuovrthere
JUNE it's hard to know if I want to invest in this book when the author has included an excerpt, instead of a synopsis. I know sometimes it can be recommended to the writer by an editor, etc, but where's the intrigue? where's the other point of view?
06/27/2023 04:21
Lori Holden
June. the into wasn't really an intro, still don't know what the book is about. why would she call her dad? why would she reject her mate after her wold told her he was her mate?
06/27/2023 03:57Ana
JUNE I don't understand why there is no actual information about the book in the introduction that's where you are supposed to gain people's interest and tease them into wanting to read more of the book and this doesn't do that for me
06/27/2023 03:45LerĂŠ Saunderson
JUNE I do not understand why she rejected him even after Raine, her wolf, told her that he is in fact their mate. From other books in the werewolf genre, its clear that there is a huge trust relationship between the human and wolf in the partnership. Why is she not trusting her wolf? Odd.
06/27/2023 03:25Kirsten Tooker
JUNE The introduction wasnât really a introduction since it didnât have a blurb about what the story is actually about. After reading the first couple chapters I was left confused over what was happening. I wonât be adding it to my library.
06/27/2023 03:06Me Myself
JUNE I read the introduction and the first few chapters of this book and I am so confused. the three year time jump was probably a mistake because the actions of the female lead make no sense.
06/27/2023 01:35Autumn Bradley
June I have want to know are all three men she connected somehow? and is the second man in the room with the cleaning lady the same as the one she slept with?
06/27/2023 00:43Donna Pember
June I have read the first few chapters and I am a bit confused about where the story is going. I don't understand why she would call her father for help after what he did to her. I am not sure if I am going to finish the book
06/27/2023 00:39Caitlin Sullivan
June .. I can see the potential in this book as it starts out with a bang. However, I don't understand why she called her dad for advice and no one thought to go to either alpha, mate or original packs, for advice or help. why lie?
06/26/2023 22:50
Joele G
JUNE This book has also capture my attention to the storyline; it has gotten me intrigue in it; it does seems to be a very good book and well written; I wanna just continue reading to find out what happens next.
06/26/2023 22:34
Sammy
JUNE I read a few chapters and somehow could not connect with the writing style. I think the flow of the storyline was compromised and became choppy because the author unsuccessfully tried to add some suspense or a cliffhanger at the end of the chapters. Also, personally I prefer quick reads and 160 chapters is too lengthy for me and I become bored easily with drawn out stories.
06/26/2023 22:30Paula Almeida
June- okay I am really interested in this book. I really like to read warewolf books. I really want to know whether she stays with her mate or not. this book definitely has my attention.
06/26/2023 22:16KMKC11
JUNE - This book is, in a word, a disaster. I have no idea what the plot is and the writing style is just not my cup of tea. The lead character seems to be all over the map making it difficult to follow. Maybe with a little TLC this book could be better but as of now itâs a pass.
06/26/2023 21:43Karin Tuchman
JUNE , This book is abit in a mess for my taste. I just don't see the direct storyline it's all over the place and this type of books trigger my ADHD which means I will have to pass this book unfortunately.
06/26/2023 21:29JustBee
âJUNEâ I do not understand the second chapter it just didnât address what happened after âplease help meâ well they slept together but I still donât get how they got there. The chick seems to all over the place and I donât think this book is doing much to hold my interest, the first 3 chapters do not excite they are just word on paper(screen) I am not feeling the emotions or elements in the lack of setting. Like how did she even get in the hotel room almost getting raped.
06/26/2023 20:49Helen M
JUNE The introduction is simply a scene from the story and doesnât really provide much information about the storyline. The slight twist to the typical ârejected mateâ plot is that it is the female doing the rejecting and not the male. Iâll add to my list of possible stories to read. JUNE
06/26/2023 20:20Zana
June the intro doesn't really appeal to me because it's a storyline that I've already read several times, so I don't know if I want to start it again
06/26/2023 19:53
LouValfa
June. For the first time I didnât read the intro. but I can say that this story is promising. I nearly stopped at the first chapter because I really donât like rapes or any kind of violence against children or woman or of bullied.
06/26/2023 19:37
Tricia Freligh
âJUNEâ This intro sounds so interesting. I just added it to my library. I wonder what will happen when he wakes up. I havenât started it yet but Iâm curious to see.
06/26/2023 19:36yes sir
june I almost finished reading this book but I think I read it on another website it's good I will read from where I left of to know what will happen in the end
06/26/2023 18:38AngelaCCoelho
JUNE - Jeez, what a start to the story. What do you mean, they're already in bed right away. Wow, what happened to them?! How interesting, I can't wait to read this story. This author already made me more than curious. I've already put it on the list for future readings.
06/26/2023 18:33Hazel Honey
JUNE This has the potential to keep my interest throughout the story, the intro serves its purpose well, so if the introduction arises your interest, I would think the story is likely to keep you entertained.
06/26/2023 18:19Hazel Honey
JUNE The intro intrigued me enough to read the first few chapters and I must say I'm getting hooked into this story. An interesting storyline with diverse characters and a good flow to make an easy read.
06/26/2023 18:12Alice Pinto
JUNE Once more, I have always loved werewolf stories! the introduction of this one is well written and it intrigued me to read the book. I will add this story to my list
06/26/2023 17:46
Amal Samir
JUNE, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next between the two of them. It seems interesting to read the book to know how they met and how they will deal with each other
06/26/2023 17:13Brenda Kay
JUNE what a great chapter the author ⌠it has me very interested in their style of writing I hope the next chapter are just as interesting, this is a book that I wonât be able to stop reading.
06/26/2023 17:06Ashley
JUNE I am interested in many of this authors books, they all look like they would be amazing. The introduction gives you a look into the female leads experience with finding her mate and sleeping with him but for some reason she wants to leave. I wonder why she wants to run from her mate.
06/26/2023 16:59
Anna Lipton
JUNE. I absolutely love this authorâs books. I have had this book in my library for awhile and unfortunately have not had a chance to read it yet. But I am looking forward to the day that I am able to read it.
06/26/2023 16:29Ashley P
JUNE this book is already in my library and for very good reason. this author is amazing. I've read some of her other works and they have all been equally as good. I don't think you can go wrong here.
06/26/2023 16:21Vicki usher
JUNE This book looks so good I love this type of book. It got a different storyline that's interesting an I am intrigued to see what happens. I think it will have great character growth and I for one am looking forward to reading it.
06/26/2023 16:17Bianca Bratu
JUNE I really love this story and I think it has great potential. I absolutely love the female lead in this story is a strong woman and doesnât settle for anything less than she deserves.
06/26/2023 16:13Jill Robinson
JUNE First I think there should be a warning that the beginning of this story starts with an attempted assault as it might be triggering for some. Having said that I think it's going to be a really interesting story so will read more.
06/26/2023 16:08
Megan Phillips
d5s8 just started this book, it's really interesting I hope the female lead rejects her mate for a change of pace.
04/04/2023 01:14Julie Mejia Zertuche
d5s8 enjoying this book so far, and like how the female lead isn't feeling hopeless and is strong in this story.
04/04/2023 00:33Bianca Yetzke
d5s8 the intro got me. Iâm intrigued to know why sheâs going to leave her mate.
04/03/2023 22:55Sumriti Singh
d5s8 great introduction good start and a complete book WT else one can ask for so definitely gonna read it to the end
04/03/2023 21:18Stacey Stratton
d5s8 from just the intro, this sounds like a great story! definitely adding this to my library!
04/03/2023 20:52Gemma Butler
d5s8 After reading the first few chapters I can already tell that Iâm going to love this book
04/03/2023 20:38Bianca Bratu
d5s8 I canât wait to keep reading this story because it had a strong start that keeps you hooked since the begining
04/03/2023 19:48
Freya D
d5s8 I like the story so far, but I think the gang he owes money to is very bad newsâŚ
04/03/2023 19:37Jade Ridler
#d5s8# a strong start to the book with great characters. it's interesting to see a female reject the male for a change. excited to read the rest
04/03/2023 19:21
Michibeba
#d5s8# canât wait to read something different in which the female is actually the one ârejectingâ, itâs a first for me in shifter novels where the female is not the antagonist but the lead doing this
04/03/2023 17:22Terrin Garis
#d5s8# I like how this book seems different from other wolf books. The story line seems promising
04/03/2023 16:19Reader-529162
#d5s8# Interesting content and the flow of the book is good. Looking forward to the rest of the book!
04/03/2023 14:20April Hamlett
d5s8 This story is really interesting. Very active from the start. Her dad is a bastard. She should never have been responsible for her brother.
04/03/2023 13:59
Jan T
d5s8 #d5s8 this is new where werewolves are embarrassed by being naked and be near a naked man. good introduction and I want to find out why she's trying to run away from his mate
04/03/2023 11:53Maria Mazzy
d5s8. really love the start of the book love the fact she puts her dad in his place and shes a strong assertive character you go girl!
04/03/2023 11:45Vicki usher
d5s8# after reading the introduction this book seem interesting. Have to now what happens when he wakes up will he mad or just want to find her ?
04/03/2023 07:57Reader-350476
d5s8 I started reading this book with the introduction and this one is really a good book to read and Iâm excited to read more chapters
04/03/2023 06:12Rafael
#d5s8# I like the introduction. it seems a interesting story. because I like the supernatural stories I am going to added it in my library and reading soon.
04/03/2023 03:42zira
d5s8 the excitement to read this book is beyond me...i havent finished the other book im having but i start reading this already, that how catchy and good the introduction of this book...now i cant stop reading it
04/03/2023 03:32
Alexis
d5s8 Interesting introduction! Will definitely be adding to my library and reading later on! Thanks for the new read!
04/03/2023 03:12Rhonda Gibson
I sure hope they solve the mystery of her mother. Why haven't they done a DNA test with Richard Campbell? There is so much mystery in this story. I wonder if Tyler's mother was really his father's fated mate since they do so much wheeling and dealing where mates and children are concerned.
01/12/2023 08:59Rhonda Gibson
Selflessness? Maybe Nathan has alternative motives. What about his fated mate?
01/12/2023 07:51Rhonda Gibson
I wouldn't meet him at the house. I'm afraid he could take her captive. He could take her baby even. This may all be a ruse by him.
01/12/2023 06:03Sandra Kazlaskas
still think his daddy would force him to complete the rejection, if not take him to court then only accept what heâs claiming he owes him then return the amount in court with receipt
12/25/2022 14:38Sandra Kazlaskas
why doesnât she call his father to help out or send his dad copies of the texts sheâs sent ?
12/25/2022 14:06Debra A Jackson
I love it! just wish I knew what happened with Nathan and Lindy
11/26/2022 12:03Georgina Bush
what happened to lindy and her mate. ?
11/23/2022 06:22Kirsti D
Please Please change the cover, it does not do the book justice. I have searched for a few that I think would work better if you're interested.
10/16/2022 06:54Reader-005797
Is there a way to get a refund for the rest of the chapters I have not read yet? This book has become so disappointing and a waste of money!
08/08/2022 19:05Reader-005797
I am really enjoying this book. Note to the author though: The front cover of this book is horrible! I have considered maybe starting to read it several times over the last few months but the cover picture is really off-putting. The only reason I eventually decided to load it to my library and give it a chance was because of the many positive reviews of the book.
07/31/2022 19:46Michelle Reed
wow what a story!!! I hope there's going to be a follow up book đ
07/15/2022 21:42Siobhain Shaw-Walker
Surprised there aren't more comments on here!! So in hopes that potential new readers might read this when deciding whether or not to give this book a go, I'm happy to write a little something after literally just completing the book (with none of the annoying big spoilers that so often litter comments sections) All in all, a great story and one that I would have been happy to continue reading. I only realised how long the actual book was just now upon reflection. The book is long, yes...but it's because it's already kind of like two books in one. Rachel and Tyler's relationship is kind of split into a before and after type thing. Lots of twists and turns and revelations that keep the story moving forward and the characters growing. It has really set itself up a glorious foundation for future sequels! So many potential stories to explore and I can't wait for the author to hopefully begin work on further books in this series *fingers crossed* ..ASAP hahaha! No pressure đ â¤ď¸ it! xx
07/15/2022 03:51gramma
thisbook is so good. do you know how many more chapters there will be?
07/13/2022 03:00gramma
this book is so good, but Tyler doesn't deserve a 2nd chance.
06/29/2022 06:06Carol Taylor
great read can't put down
06/16/2022 17:45Christina Johnson
Hi, hope you will update soon. love your writing. x
06/06/2022 20:28Claudia Almendra
hey there author...any idea how long this book will actually be???? I don't want it to turn into one of these never ending ones.
05/24/2022 08:36Linda G
if her father is there causing a scene, can't they all see he is a major issue for her? does Tyler know about Ethan?
04/15/2022 12:03Linda G
sounds like a toxic relationship where no one communicated. at least Tyler heard why she rejected him and he sorta dealt with jenny.
04/15/2022 11:49Amber-lee Stewart
why do I like nathen and actually want Rachel to be with him đ¤đ¤
04/03/2022 14:07Parwan Kaur
hello dear author..can u please tell me how often do u update this book....excellent writing tho can't wait to read other books too
03/22/2022 12:29Carolyn Narbone
well I was not expecting that at all.
03/06/2022 23:46Tara Liszewski
I need more!!
02/22/2022 03:07
Sintia Samuel
It wonât let me read chapter 21 đđŠ whyâve
02/16/2022 09:34Esmeralda Lopez
do you have other stories we.can read in between this one.
02/15/2022 18:16Esmeralda Lopez
Hi, when will the next couple of chapters come available?
02/15/2022 18:16
Bonib2
How often do you post update fir this story?
01/31/2022 14:50
Caroline Above Story
thanks for liking my story! I will update it from the next Monday! stay tuned!
01/06/2022 02:27
Akinkunmi Victoria
your story is interesting! Please next update
01/03/2022 17:18Samantha Rickards
loved the story already can't wait for updated chapters
01/01/2022 00:28Caroline Above Story
My all lovelies, thanks for giving my story a shot! If you wanna keep updated on my writing schedule and the next stories, pls join my f b group âCaroline Above Storyâ. Iâm tying my best to build the community up. will be honored to have your support. lots of love, Caro
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