A Mafia's Obsession Comments

  • Elin Kähäri

    please, she Cant be this stupid, she solde herself and now she is kissing some one and putting his life and her sisters in danger, now she is starting to piss me off

    07/02/2023 01:39

  • Elin Kähäri

    i dont know what she was thinking,but i dont think she Will do this agen!

    06/24/2023 10:39

  • Aaira

    f6g7 the story looks interesting I have read a few chapters I think I will be continuing to read more and know more about the story

    04/27/2023 06:17

  • Martial Flor

    f6g7 the text surely needs some editing and proofreading but it's not bad! I'm really enjoying the story so far, the tension and all the build up for the dynamic between Crystal and Leonardo.

    04/26/2023 23:15

  • Caitlin Sullivan

    f6g7.... this story appears to have real potential. I hope their characters develop and that he treats her right

    04/26/2023 22:09

  • Cansu Harris

    f6g7 this story about mafia is very different she is stuck with a loan that her father has with the mafia.

    04/26/2023 18:07

  • John Robinson

    f6g7 As English is not the author's first language I think it is a really good attempt and will be adding to my library to read more. I like Crystal and I think Golden is like the mother hen looking after Crystal. Liking the story so far.

    04/26/2023 10:10

  • Reader-778832

    f6g7. so she hates the mafia but then gets a job with them? Really?plot is too ridiculous to even bother

    04/26/2023 08:47

  • Joele G

    f6g7 the storyline got me hooked; off to a great start so far; like to see where it takes you

    04/26/2023 07:04

  • Irma Beck

    f6g7 the story line so far is really good I would suggest that editing is done on the on the grammar errors. definitely adding to my library

    04/26/2023 06:24

  • sabrina nace

    I liked the story but the English was an issue in some spots. If you have a friend who speaks English you may want to have them review your story before it is posted

    04/26/2023 05:21

  • blubelle Reads

    f6g7 great storyline

    04/26/2023 02:54

  • Vicki usher

    f6g7# can't say no to a good mafia book. This looks good, different and interesting storyline. Can't wait to find out if she accepts him and if he can make things up to her

    04/26/2023 00:14

  • J Marie

    Not to discount the author's efforts, but it's obvious that the author is not very familiar with English. The vocabulary is very limited with many words used incorrectly. No development happening with the characters.

    04/11/2023 23:12

  • Lostluna

    well done author!!

    08/15/2022 21:58

  • Lostluna

    Very very interesting read I totally recommended it!

    08/15/2022 21:57