King of the Underworld Comments

Tricia Garza

just wanted to give you a head up that I was face book scrolling and saw your book 2 other places not sure if some one swiped it or not

Reader-251078

love

Sabrina Mcdonald

I wish this book was in hardcover

Red Furie

I'm with Crystal. we need a paperback version. 💕

Crystal Johnson

anyway I can get this book on paperback? I rather just buy the whole book instead of paying for chapters

Teresa Paone

I have reached a point where it reads "the end". very concerned. there seems to be so much more and I have spent a lot of money to read a full story. does this continue with another book? will there be more chapters?

Jessica Knight

This book is also on Readink

Sam

this book is starting to get weird. it was way better when it felt more realistic. i could handle some of the fantasy themes of mates. still people believe In that. now they’re diving 3/4 of the book into magical powers. no thanks. go back to the more real life side. or start with magic from the beginning, not the end.

Taylah Cunningham

thankyou for such an incredible story. It just keeps getting better everytime you update it! take your time with the updates, as addicted as I am to this story you need to take time for yourself aswell💗

Chloé Connolly

SephieCool (for the admins in the group). My usual love on these apps is the shifter genre, mainly werewolves. This has been such a breath of fresh air, it has as much heat as the hottest shifters and packs a punch with the supernatural elements as well. I don't think you can ask for anything more. Except, perhaps, for it to never end. Oh, and read on repeat, each time as if it is the first .....

Joanne Partlow

SephieCool- loved this book. 2nd book is looking good too

Brandi Osler

love this story so far

Kaycee Meade

i need this In a paper book! having a hard time finding it?

Leyla Liebs

"SephieCool" seems like an interesting book with a lot of potential!

Kelly Miller

will you be writing a series for each of the other 5 guys ?

cheh979

does anyone know the video ad for this book - where the line “he finds her after almost 9 years” comes from?

Kimber Forsyth

is there not an actual book to be purchased? I have a hard time reading on a screen..

Sharon Job Narsingh

like the story so far..it's good!

Rose Eloisa

I love her relationship/ therapy advice I’m starting to wonder if the writer cane is also a therapist in real life this is really great advice 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼

Reader-639784

I love the flow of this book

Ngoz Any

Barbara Neeley

I can't get enough of this book it has been one of my favorites so far

Dawn Wallace

I am so loving this book! the characters are incredible the plot is amazing.

Tammy Rai

I love the way they drink water from the same glass. It's really beautiful and cute.

Leila ElMayel

I love sephie already 😍😍

karim abdelrahman

love it sephie cool

Frk. Friis

Sephiecool, love this book its great story and I like the Way it is readeen..only thing is the Price for the complete book.😉

Sam

my only main complaint is the repeat of the same conversations with almost zero changes, just who is hearing it…. Giant waste of money for repeat chapters. happens a lot. otherwise, love the story.

Megan Anderson

I love it, Sephiecool

WeedIn TheDust

I love it 🥰

Stephanie Urban

If they don't turn this into a series, I'll die 😫🥺

Deanna Sherman

very interesting, can't out it down haha ha

Jill Stewart

it's getting interesting...

Sonya Scott

What happened to the first 45 Chapters for 9.99??

Mermaid

This is a serious that as you read you close your eyes, you take the short breath and feel every word!

Reader-024576

I wish chapters weren’t repeating things throughout. chapters 192 and 197 are basically the same.

SG

like what I have read so far. look fwd to reading it when u publish it. I have added the book's name in my notes - to-be-read-definitely. all the best.

Sissy Dancheva

Is it worth buying points and unlocking the whole book?

Brittany Johnson

When is she going to share what her dad told her about everyone?!!!

Vicki Jones

I'm sorry I love the story but a book should not go on a d on

jamy

so we are upto chapter 508. how many chapters will there be total? when will the book be finished?

Constance Peni

Wanting to know if you are going to have a physical book soon cause I'll buy it with out a doubt. Good writing...

Varshha Dudhediya

I'm not able to read the book without purchasing it 😭

Gypsy

MAJOR kuddos for shedding a light onto trauma! not only physical but mental. doesn't mean people are damaged; they are stronger for having gone through it and survived it.

Gypsy

my bad: she has a chest tube. still sucks and painful as hell

Gypsy

little mental note for anyone wondering; it's impossible or nearly impossible to talk with a chest tube. You're intubated, there's a "pipe" going down your throat pushing air. If you try to talk, no air and it's painful AF. If anyone ever needs medical Inf I'm available for answers lol

Gypsy

at least it's not 1000+ chapters or over 3500 as I've seen others. good read. would have liked it as a physical book

Gypsy

Love this book. My only thing is that I don't think a King would be so good with divulging his plans all the time but every darklord is different and he's LordKingBoss. I'd love to see the images that inspired each character.

Charity Hodge

I so badly hope there's a second book but about Ivan and his past of being experimented on! sounds wrong to say but I want to know his personal life in more depth

Robin Marie Underhill

screw the haters! I love this book you’re doing amazing work! Definitely been tossing up the idea of writing via these apps and if it’s worth it. Would love to know if it is worth it!

Mahi

508 chapters and counting that's over 15,000 points needed and it not complete. what a scam and waste of time and money.

MMBurns21

I just realized this book is over 400 chapters lol

Elizabeth Graf Allen

Like the book, but definitely not worth the money!

Reader-902039

good thus far

Stacey Runde

I'm liking it so far 😌

Reader-818141

Enjoying this book, wonderful writing and incredibly captivating to the point I don’t want to put the book down. I would love to have this as a physical book in my library, I’ve seen others also asking the same and would buy this in a heartbeat if it were self published. 😁

Angèlla Edwards

Good read so far

Ua Her Lugo

well well well another book that does not end 🧐

Maria Mendez

well well well it’s about time 😙😜

Colleen Kelly

what do you do once you get stuck?

Reader-256692

Good stuff so far, can't wait to read more. Lord King Boss...haha

Ulveena Aitzaz

how do I read ahead? 😭

Lori L. Fabry

heart thumping can't wait for the good stuff

Pooja Bhattacharya

so interesting!

Jon Doe

love the flow of this book, it has my full attention

Mhellie Victorino

Sephrik. Im loving and hooked with this story🥰! Sephie truly makes me laugh.. no dull moment in every chapter that you are reading🥰! The writer is so amazing with her words and even the twist and turn of events in the story. This is my first Mafia story to read because usually Im more into a werewolf and sci-fi🥰.. But I like this story a lot🥰!

Dejohna Black

I love how Viktor and Andrei protects persephone like she's their little sister despite just meeting her. ❤❤❤

Aayanda Chifamba

how do I get the locked chapters

Michele Hughes

This book is my absolute favorite 💗 💓 ❤ story!! Can't put it down!!

Elizabeth Wyss

if you ever print these books i would absolutely love to buy them! this has been one of my favorite stories in Avery long time❤️

Keywanna Askew

why is something telling me that Stephen is a mole thats what my gut is telling . how is he able to sleep and nobody else can..

Keywanna Askew

omg I cant stop tearing up . this book is so worth it 👌 💗 ❤ 💕 💖 💓

Jessica Knight

Wait.. 505 chapters? Last I looked there were 499, and I thought the book was completed? Is it on-going? When was the last update?

Shally Rai

I love the name, Bubba. it's so cute😊

Barb G

too short of a chapter 😪

Alicia Reece

just loving this book

yazmin roopra

this is one of my favourite reads of all time at the moment. need a physical book to buy and keep in my personal library

Maria-Cristina Moldovan

i love the story so far , makes me want to start writing myself :)

Dilraj Rai

I really like the relationship between Adrik and Sehpie because they don't hide anything from each other unlike other novels where the couples hide the truth from each other and create misunderstanding again and again.

Jessina Barnett

I really like this story but I do not want to watch a bunch of ads to get to the next chapter there has to be a better way of doing this

ann hollenbeck

I love this story but it does take forever to earn points I can't wait to earn 2 more points to read more the story is great😊🥰😍☺️🤗💖💗❤️💕❣️💜💛💚💙

Trinity Zeon

I love this story ❤️ but it takes so long to earn points to get each chapter and reading others to earn some through reading just gets you wrapped up in other books plus it auto takes points to open so once finished reading fe other's when pause... you then find it's taken your points 😔

Shelsie Stratton

Is this really a supernatural book because I’m not seeing it. it’s a good book but the tropes aren’t really matching the description.

Antonela Matijaca

67 € to read only 190chapters of 500!!!

Paulina Kowalewska

awesome story, but unfortunately there are few opportunities to earn extra points. it's the app's fault. why is there no option to watch ads?

Holokitty

Wow you had me completely hooked from the very beginning. Can't wait to keep reading. Love the story so far and the author has a beautiful way of writing. keep up the great work. Thank you 😊

Reader-513534

brilliant story so far. I can’t wait for the next chapter

Jayshree Parmar

interesting gripping story

Reader-192624

love the story so far!!

Sakina Ibrahim

I am in love with this story😍

Reader-020072

This book is good and pricey. the chapters are so short.

Keely Morgano

I need this book sitting on my nightstand asap!

Dorien Garcia

I love this book but chapters are pricey with the cons. I have to wait two days to save up to read. It has made me lose some interest.

Angeline S Maran

thers some error in loading the page.. have to wait for 10/15 seconds for it to be loaded

Sam

do they have unlimited subscription?

Sam

what do the Russian nicknames mean? 3

Theresa Sawyer

how many chapters in this book?

Hayley Pridgen

I love book so far but to pricey

Jams

i hate paying for each chapter, plus i get my freebees. but this book is so damn worth it.. good job to the author🥂. i seriously cant put my ohone down.

Olivia Smith

love this book it’s got it all