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I still remember the day when I came to live in this house after my parent's death.
I still remember the day when he suddenly barged inside my room. I was so shocked because of his sudden appearance in my room. He locked the door and started coming in my direction with a pissed face. I knew that I was in danger by looking at his angry. I knew that I should run away at this moment and hide somewhere but I can't move my body.
Bloody hell, my body is held by the cold gaze of his blue sea-colored eyes.
With long steps, he was coming towards me, and in a flash of seconds, he was in front of me. He grabbed my hair making me look into his eyes, my eyes were close afraid of meeting his cold stare. The next word from his mouth made my eyes short open.
"Who was that man with whom you were laughing and talking, Jane. Tell me who the hell he was” listening to his demanding voice shiver ran through my body but I kept my eyes close. “Answer me, Jane, who was he,” he shouted in anger causing tears to form in my closed eyes.
H-e-he saw me with him.
It was the only thought that was running in my brain. I knew I was in danger. Now, what I will do is the biggest question for me. The memory of that atrocious day still causes a shiver to run through my spine.
Suddenly someone was pulling my arm taking me out of my thoughts. I found myself standing In front of the airport to receive the devil of my life.
Yes, you heard it right.
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Claire Morrison
sorry not for me. I know it's a build up but so far it could be condensed into one or 2 chapters taken me 2 days to get to chapter 10. I am bored now bad grammar. however well done writer for trying this has promise but you need to get a good editor to help you. possibly first language is not English?
02/05/2023 08:39Flavia Correa
I don't really like writing bad reviews, but this book needs some serious editing. The idea had potential, but it turned out boring, dragging, slow and even cringey sometimes. The characters don't flow, they feel very unrealistic. Maybe it was your first book, but I'm sure you can improve the next ones! This one is a no.
05/27/2022 18:34Bev Kauika
Very slow, repetitive, boring. The female character is weak and immature. The cousin is just a bully. The aunt and uncle aren't realistic either. It needs serious editing. Can't believe I read 5 chapters before deciding to quit reading this. 😴🤨😒👎👎👎
05/23/2022 13:06Eli-May Martin
sorry not very good writing at all I can not read this
01/11/2022 09:46
Ofa Leka
I have to leave this book before competing it. it dragged on. It also needs A LOT of editing.
11/15/2021 01:45
Julie Jirovsky
I loved this story. I was disappointed when I had to wait for so long for the uploads. But, it ended up being well worth it.
06/15/2021 23:58Brianne Hofer
even after supposed editing, it could use alot more. otherwise, it is a good read.
05/05/2021 20:41Amanda Harris
it has been months when will this be finished
03/31/2021 11:31Amanda Harris
so we aren’t going to finish this?
03/25/2021 09:29Amanda Harris
so are you not going to update it’s been a long time!
03/03/2021 16:47
