The Rejected Alpha's Daughter

The Rejected Alpha's Daughter

Peter Dedekuma

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“I never loved you, Lexi. You were always principled, boring and always wanting to put your people first–as you called it. You never had time for me in your busy schedule. The only reason I stuck around was because of the Alpha title I thought you were going to get. Imagine my surprise and happiness when the title was finally given to the love of my life.” He pulls Penelope closer to him as he kisses her in front of me.
My wolf can no longer bear it as she comes out, forcing me to forcefully transform. I watch in helplessness as she takes full control of my body and rushes at Penelope.
My wolf whimpers as she lands on the ground mid stride. She tries to go against the order but the effort is futile so she goes back in. I’m naked as I sob on the floor, my humiliation reaching its peak.
Betrayed by her family and her mate. She left the pack and joined the arm force of the lycanblood-line pack to fight against her own pack. Also become their Alpha’s second chance mate.
He is the Lycan Alpha of the Lycanblood-line pack. He is strongest amongst other Alphas and ruthless as well. Rumor has it that he killed his Luna and his own brother. He later mated with Lexi.
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  • Clare Hodgson

    Right!!! I have managed to get to chapter 20 and I am tapping out!!! I think it could have the potential to be a really good book... Strong female lead, clear start, however I feel it looses so much depth and detail early on in the book... Lots and Lots of descriptive paragraphs which is al very well but they are not the easiest of reads... it has a tendency to loose the readers as not very clear and it gets a little boring and long... not enough dialogue and interaction between charactors...build on the relationships between rather than dropping this randomly into chapters about such as building desire between the two leads.

    03/23/2025 21:45

  • mama11945

    If I could give this a negative star I would. If I wanted to take a course in how to lose readers this story is a prime example. It had a great start but then the strong alpha female turns into a sex deviant omega. Not only is there a major character change but the writing style has also become overly effusive. I felt like I was trying to read Chaucer again. yuk.

    03/06/2025 23:13

  • Bonblue75

    my 2 cents: great beginning storyline & characters- although bloody/violent. I was in to it until ch 40- had to stop. Sorry to say all this but too wordy & hard to follow. I'm sure the author was trying to set the scene they wanted to portray but it was just too overwhelming. The writing style takes a astronomical trajectory turn off & morphs into a whole other surreal situation. It feels like an unfinished work that somebody else took over & finished with their own twist. Scrolled through the other 86 is mostly descriptions/explanations & no dialogue- it jumped around so much, I couldn't attempt it. I thought this was a fated mates romance tale? So lost

    03/01/2025 08:17

  • Visitor

    I think I am fairly well versed in the English language.... but I am really struggling. The first few chapters felt rushed and missed components to set the story. It was hard to picture a scene as it jumped too quickly. But now, each chapter is way too hard to follow. I'm more concerned with trying to understand what I am reading, then actually just reading.

    02/26/2025 07:59

  • Visitor

    Every other word has 4 syllables. Why am I taking an English class to get through each chapter of the book. It makes reading this so unpleasant

    02/14/2025 08:15

  • Visitor

    Started out great, then went down hill. They have a great strong female character that they turn into a weak sex doll basically I couldn't even get through it. 1/5 Stars

    02/11/2025 08:35

  • Visitor

    Think the author bought a thesaurus. Writing style has changed and full of literary language that is so different from the beginning. I like the hard ass alpha trained woman, not this , now omega's, inner monologue of flowery drivel. I keep scan reading as I'm getting bored.

    02/09/2025 14:01

  • Visitor

    Damn the writer effed up their own book. Had a fantastic story line going but ruined it. Should've kept her stubborn. Yes in this werewolf genre sex I'd something unavoidable for them but damn at least you could've left her dignity and kept their sex heated during or perhaps in the heat of the moment. But to have her submit weakly. Yea you crashed your own book.

    02/07/2025 08:24

  • Visitor

    Please don't tell me she went from badass wolf to weak and throwing herself on any bed near by to submit. This book would have sooooooo much more potential with her and the alpha clashing and trying each others will for will. He clearly needs a Lina that can match his stubbornness. I will quit reading as I can't take another weak wolf character.

    02/07/2025 08:09

  • Angela Waring

    I am not 100% sure what happened here. the story started strong but things rapidly changed like it was being written by 2 different people. The FMC went from strong being trained to be the Alpha of her pack to a weak Omega. Plus the writing style changed drastically. The words, tone and even conversations went from normal 20 year olds speaking and telling the story to needing a thesaurus and a PhD to understand the words being used.

    08/16/2024 21:30