Take me Alpha Comments

  • Tammay H

    I hope they end up together!!

    07/12/2023 01:55

  • Tammay H

    I am so interested to see what happen to her. Oh just wait till she sees Collin!!

    07/12/2023 00:43

  • Tammay H

    Very interesting!! I wonder what is going on? I have been to involved in the story to comment. I am loving it!! And glad he felt bad about the cheater part!!

    07/11/2023 20:31

  • Jamie Pieszala

    I want my money back. This is a repeat chapter!

    05/13/2023 13:24

  • Camillia Castillo

    9z0x Omg yes this is definitely getting better by the moment but she Mmmm why did she have to lie they are supposed to be her best friends surly she could have shared that with them.

    04/10/2023 12:46

  • Camillia Castillo

    It seems to be a good book so far and it keeps you wanting more.

    04/07/2023 15:19

  • Jules Marie

    9z0x the introduction looks interesting. I'll put it on my to-read list. Although I agree about wanting to know with books that should have sequels. I've been left hanging before. It's annoying.

    03/31/2023 16:10

  • Julie Schmitt

    9z0x Take Me Alph The first couple chapters are good but I read many comments and there seems to be a sequel that no one can find. I will wait till the sequel is available, I know I will want to keep reading and not want to wait.

    03/31/2023 16:01

  • nakisha adams

    9z0x I’m hooked I must get to the bottom of this intriguing event great writing author I mean u are that brave to get it on in an alpha house geez

    03/31/2023 15:40

  • Christin Louth

    #9z0x# I’m a few chapters in and already I’m hooked into the story. it’s interesting to have the infidelity caused by the woman. Mate bonds must work differently in this book if he couldn’t tell she was cheating. I feel bad he had to shut out his parents for her for nothing.

    03/31/2023 15:14

  • Rafael

    #9z0x# OK. nice introduction. I like the summary. the story seems interesting and it is a supernatural story. is going to be fun read it .

    03/31/2023 11:50

  • GZ21

    9z0x the story between Collin and Nadia was quick paced and full of mirth. I finished the book too quickly. I would highly recommend this… sadly the sequel es no quite complete.

    03/31/2023 11:39

  • Jan T

    9z0x oh wow!!! this book is so Erotic, I think I will need to read it in private. I'm blushing already kekeke

    03/31/2023 11:32

  • John Robinson

    9z0x Well written story like the fact that it's the Alpha that is cheated on. Really looking forward to finding out what happens next.

    03/31/2023 11:16

  • Sumriti Singh

    9z0x it's an erotic story n it is very vivid takes u with it to the place characters are in so great experience if u r into dat stuff

    03/31/2023 11:11

  • zira

    9z0x this book is sexxy...i love how it is presented...i love wvery detail of it..im looking forward every chapter

    03/31/2023 11:06

  • Fun M

    Book has been posted. It's called the Alpha's Addiction

    12/10/2022 08:05

  • Kaeliegh Beasley

    has anyone found books 2 yet because it's still not showing

    11/24/2022 13:14

  • lunabug

    she promised a second book in Feb of this year and it's still not out here yet... makes u wonder

    11/03/2022 03:13

  • Evelyn Gonzalez-Peña

    where is the second book? and what is the title?

    11/01/2022 21:51

  • Destiny Winkle

    it's her not so dead brother and probs will too

    10/29/2022 19:06

  • Mary Hall

    Why can't I find the sequel to thid book?

    09/21/2022 05:24

  • Doge The Barker

    ?the only book that shows up is this book??

    09/04/2022 22:33

  • Danai Stavrakaki

    i can't find the second book. Anyone found it?

    09/02/2022 22:53

  • Joke Tabois

    Hi great author. When are you posting the sequel🥰

    08/18/2022 06:44

  • Desiree da Silva

    hi nice book

    08/08/2022 03:11

  • Jeannetta Kirksey

    What’s the name of the second book

    08/08/2022 01:01

  • Jeannetta Kirksey

    These chapters are too short

    08/07/2022 10:34

  • Karen Jackson-Neufeld

    I have tried finding the second book and I can't find it. I even looked under the authors name and it's not there. has anyone else been able to find it?

    07/24/2022 19:22

  • Morse Code

    Where's book 2?????????

    05/05/2022 01:40

  • Emily Rose Mahon

    is it just me or do I feel like William was the killer

    03/15/2022 09:54

  • Candice Johnson

    Still waiting on book 2

    02/26/2022 05:18

  • Paula Simms Retherford

    so have you started the second part of this. mine doesn’t show it

    02/21/2022 06:26

  • Melissa Conaway

    where is book 2? I've searched for it multiple times and can't find it.

    02/19/2022 22:59

  • Lindsey Hackbarth

    Have you uploaded any of book 2 yet?

    02/15/2022 22:27

  • Jennifer Kruse

    what’s the 2nd book called?

    02/04/2022 11:47

  • Arikka Smith

    I am so happy you are back Holly, and I hope everything is going great for you. Can't wait to see what happens next with your story, and hope you have a Happy Holidays!

    12/24/2021 04:38

  • Tiffany Bryant

    omggggggg I didn't notice you started updating again I am so happy you are back I have a lot to catch up on!!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    12/22/2021 01:34

  • Heather Nalley

    I don't know you & I haven't read your story, but some of these comments are shameful. Some people really don't care how they treat others or make them feel. Dear Author, You don't owe anyone anything. If you need a break, take a break. Don't apologize. Just maybe when you return let your readers know, but also you don't have to. Also if you want, give your readers a heads up if you're going to be away, but again, you don't have to. People seem to forget that others besides them have a life... school, family, career, friends. I know that updating a chapter isn't what your life is revolved around. Live life, enjoy what you can of it. It passes way too quickly. Be Happy!!! If writing makes you happy, go for it. Just don't let others take that joy away from you. I've seen many authors give up bc it becomes more of a job than a hobby/passion bc of the hate and complaints they receive. Take care of yourself first. xo

    12/13/2021 00:28

  • Al_Left

    I’ve just added to my list and am like “I wonder if this is a second chance mate thing” only bc I thought only mates could get mates off on sexual arousal… then again every story is different but I’d think at least that should be a constant, unless they are a chosen lover after mate rejects them or dies.

    12/13/2021 00:04

  • Karamea G

    I haven’t started the book yet but I can’t believe how entitled some of these comments are!! Many of the authors on these reading apps have lives outside of their writing. They have children, partners, jobs, friends, extended family, pressures and FEELINGS. Get a grip on yourselves people!

    12/08/2021 20:34

  • Lacie

    welcome back! can't wait to read more!

    12/06/2021 02:22

  • Cassarndra Skarratt

    welcome back thank you for your appolies they mean alot and I do hope you follow through 💕

    11/26/2021 22:16

  • Reader-006417

    So sad that people get invested in a book and are let hanging.

    11/19/2021 18:33

  • Reader-148264

    from looking at comments this book has not been updated since June, if the author walks away from a book does it just stay on the site incompleted?

    08/21/2021 18:00

  • kg oh oh lhclh

    Love the book and hope you are doing okay! Sorry about all the people in the comments batching about no updates! I love your writing and I will be here to read whenever you feel like updating! Take your time and don't forget to take care of yourself! Writing is a difficult process so thank you for giving us a wonderful story. I know that was long but just know you have tons of readers who just love your writing and don't care about the timing of updates. 💞💘🥰

    06/29/2021 22:13

  • Melissa Conaway

    when will their be an update on this book?

    06/21/2021 19:44

  • Tammy

    I was wondering if there is a plan to finish this book? It is really good and I have enjoyed reading it... just want to know if I should just forget about it

    06/05/2021 12:22

  • Reader-084345

    how long does it take to update ??? it’s been a long time since last updated. I’m gonna give up on this story and author...

    04/05/2021 05:19

  • Reader-207821

    update soon

    03/12/2021 02:08

  • amy.

    uuugh Collins use your brain! he should've asked about her family without throwing her under the bus🤦🏼‍♀️

    02/22/2021 16:54

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    just take care and be safe. I know what it is like to be without power. mine was from snow. I just hope that Collin and Nadine will get together soon.

    02/20/2021 19:40

  • Maria De Los Angeles Diaz

    I don’t get this last chapter. why Collins was with drake?

    02/20/2021 13:16

  • Brittany

    updates???

    02/16/2021 12:14

  • Tiffany Bryant

    I'm sorry for whatever you were going through to make you stop updating how you use to but Im glad I waited still love the book!

    02/11/2021 01:33

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    oh no no no. please she has to love Collins.

    02/06/2021 16:43

  • amy.

    awww man! I was rooting for collins lol hes not his father girl!

    02/06/2021 02:56

  • Reader-207821

    Well Damn!! His father killed her family and he didn’t know anything about it. Wow!!

    02/06/2021 02:49

  • amy.

    I'm so happy you started updating again! feel like I might need to reread it but loving the new chapters! its getting good

    02/05/2021 01:16

  • Arikka Smith

    talk about leaving us hanging 😂🤣😂🤣

    02/04/2021 21:37

  • Lauren Carlisle

    omg! this book is crack cocaine!

    01/11/2021 04:44

  • T Rich

    Hell! I need to start over...I forgot what the story is about.

    01/09/2021 03:40

  • Arikka Smith

    thank you so much for the update cant wait for the next chapter I hope she sticks with Collins

    01/03/2021 20:29

  • sifusbabe

    any news??? updates or have you forgotten. what about returning the money people have paid to read a whole book trusting it would get finished?

    12/31/2020 15:51

  • Arikka Smith

    is the author giving up on the story whats going on

    12/26/2020 03:39

  • Reader-845081

    I almost don’t even want to read this book since the author isn’t updating to giant the story.

    11/21/2020 00:49

  • Debbie Boston

    pls update

    11/13/2020 15:14

  • Alicia Rodriguez

    deleting this book updates never come and I can’t remember the story

    11/08/2020 20:34

  • Analys Vazquez

    update please

    11/04/2020 06:02

  • Tonbara Porbeni

    hi, I am new on any stories and I am looking for people who would like to check out my story. so here is the link: https://anystories.onelink.me/zUiI?pid=author_invite&c=share_book&af_ad=5f98f533d17930000f55193a&af_adset=link&af_dp=anystories%3A%2F%2F%2Fbook%2F5f98f533d17930000f55193a&af_web_dp=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.anystories.app

    10/28/2020 15:33

  • Alicia Rodriguez

    it’s been so long for an update that i forgot the srory

    10/26/2020 17:43

  • ◆•.°Lųną•Qųəən°.•◆

    Well thank you for updating! I've wondered if you were sick or something or if you'd just given up on this book. I'm glad that you haven't given up on it though! I almost removed it from my library like 2 days ago, after waiting for so many weeks for an update.I couldn't bring myself to remove it though, in hope's that just maybe you'd update it sometime this week. Lol. But I do wish the chapter would've been longer, to make up for how long it took to update it. I love this book. But would you please let us know if you are going to continue it or if it's gna be monthly or weekly updates now or what? Please? Because it sucks checking it everyday for an update, just to see that there's still not one. I hope you decide to start updating alot more, like daily would be awesome lol, but weekly would be great too! And please consider giving us longer chapters as well. Please & Thank you! Love your book, & hope that you have been well!

    10/25/2020 04:07

  • Katie Mathews

    so excited to see a new update!

    10/23/2020 06:40

  • Arikka Smith

    thank you for the update cant wait for the next one 🥰 hope everything is ok

    10/22/2020 23:54

  • Eiyah

    thank you for the update.

    10/22/2020 15:03

  • angeleyes

    when are you going to update

    10/16/2020 10:21

  • Crystal

    Will there be any more updates??

    10/10/2020 20:09

  • Analys Vazquez

    😞UPDATE PLEASE IS A LONG WAITING 😥

    10/07/2020 01:35

  • Viomary Lopez

    I keep waiting for an update. It's been months since the last...

    10/06/2020 19:51

  • Cassarndra Skarratt

    been waiting months for a update 😢

    10/05/2020 21:51

  • Arikka Smith

    I really hope that this story continues

    10/03/2020 07:32

  • Laura Lascaris

    Really waiting for a new update!!!

    09/30/2020 07:39

  • Laura Lascaris

    Are there more updates coming for this?

    09/23/2020 06:17

  • Arikka Smith

    I hope everything is ok Holly

    09/23/2020 01:39

  • ajrss 07

    I thought she was updating daily? Did something happen?

    09/21/2020 21:53

  • Reader-180306

    bruhh🤦🏻‍♀️ she updates like once a month & it’s ridiculous! we pay to read your books & rarely get an update. everybody is telling you how much we love your book & you don’t even have the courtesy to keep us updated with what’s going on. I wish I could get a refund on the coins I’ve spent reading these few chapters!

    09/18/2020 07:01

  • Viomary Lopez

    Is this story? How often do you update?

    09/17/2020 03:06

  • Tara

    why hasn’t the story been updated?

    09/14/2020 11:06

  • Tammy

    thank you for the update

    09/07/2020 04:14

  • Eiyah

    yum

    09/06/2020 08:35

  • Reader-284890

    Love this book so far!!

    09/03/2020 04:13

  • Hauser Tracey Dave

    oops my comment is on the wrong book. sorry.

    09/01/2020 20:04

  • Hauser Tracey Dave

    I hate waiting for updates lol. I check 20 times a day. can’t wait for Mara and Liam to hook up and face the Black family. I am sure the Black ladies will control the older brothers.

    09/01/2020 20:01

  • Montana Danee Farmer

    when is the next update...love this book!!!

    08/30/2020 16:31

  • Montana Danee Farmer

    when will there be more...im so hooked!!!

    08/26/2020 15:53

  • Tammy

    hey Holly, so glad you are back and doing better

    08/26/2020 11:20

  • Reader-180306

    updates are definitely not daily so when exactly will we get them ? once a week ? a month ?

    08/25/2020 23:33

  • Amaya Soma

    How many books are you working on? On here I notice you have 4 that are ongoing. On Dreame you have several. Maybe try focusing on just one book til completion? Enjoyed this story so far.

    08/25/2020 18:09

  • Eiyah

    I loved this update. thank you

    08/23/2020 23:31

  • Jennifer Classen

    is there any updates after chapter 41 if there it isn’t showing

    08/23/2020 16:03
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