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  • Megan

    When will there be more updates? I'm dying over here and out feels like forever since theres been an update.

    08/21/2020 02:20

  • Amanda Caruana

    when is the next update??

    08/20/2020 00:11

  • Cherie Humphreys

    when is the next update due? can’t wait to continue the story.

    08/18/2020 15:06

  • Bobbi Saunders

    oooohhhhh love the story cant wait for more chapters

    08/16/2020 18:56

  • Tara Hogenbirk

    when will this start updating again??

    08/16/2020 15:25

  • Tabitha Miles

    I absolutely love the book ❤ but is chapter 40 the end of the book? The author note at the end of the chapter says daily updates and it hasn't been updated in a while.

    08/16/2020 02:39

  • Rebecca Veitch

    “Sorry for MIA, daily updates are back” was posted quite awhile ago and no update. plans to finish the story?

    08/15/2020 03:40

  • Laurie Gruchevski

    I love the book so far. I can’t wait for this to be complet.. I am interested to see which one she chooses

    08/14/2020 10:00

  • Corrin Mitchella

    No! I caught up! Now I have to wait for chapters like everyone else!😋

    08/14/2020 06:33

  • Kali Simms

    what happened to starting daily updates?

    08/13/2020 23:34

  • Keithlanae Fuqua

    I would really like to funish this book!!

    08/13/2020 19:59

  • Tara Hogenbirk

    will this update soon?

    08/13/2020 17:52

  • Reader-523253

    I like the book but the wait between chapters is too long- would be better to have it completed because I have now gone on to other stories-

    08/10/2020 16:39

  • Reader-236758

    when do we get an update?

    08/08/2020 14:25

  • Eiyah

    awesome update

    08/06/2020 17:50

  • Ashley Dubose

    when will chapter 32 be out?

    08/06/2020 17:23

  • Alicia Rodriguez

    that was a really short chapter...like really short

    08/06/2020 15:18

  • Stephanie E Chumbley

    when will the next update be? I haven't seen updates in more than a week, probably longer. other comments say updated daily.

    08/06/2020 01:43

  • Keithlanae Fuqua

    Update please!!!!

    08/05/2020 01:54

  • Megan

    Please update in dying to know what happens next.

    08/05/2020 00:50

  • ◆•.°Lųną•Qųəən°.•◆

    when will this be updated again??

    08/05/2020 00:37

  • Star Barth

    please update 😭

    08/04/2020 21:22

  • Reader-006417

    is this story over? No updates??

    08/03/2020 00:45

  • Analys Vazquez

    update please

    08/02/2020 23:33

  • Amy Sparks Cadenhead

    Hi. There is a huge difference between the words quite and quiet. The author should really check that out, or at the very least have someone edit the atory for these types of errors.

    08/02/2020 04:28

  • Keithlanae Fuqua

    Update please!!!

    08/02/2020 00:34

  • Kali Simms

    Hi Holly, I thought the new chapter was going to be out yesterday. When will you be updating?

    08/02/2020 00:30

  • AmandaSegoviaKarsten

    when will the next update be? I've been reading a few of your books both here and on Dreame and I've been left hanging with no updates in days! Hope everything is okay with you!

    08/01/2020 13:40

  • Tiffany Bryant

    when is the next update happening the anticipation killing me 😭

    07/29/2020 22:21

  • Chancey Smith

    How often are there updates?

    07/29/2020 12:54

  • AmandaSegoviaKarsten

    when is the next update?

    07/28/2020 22:42

  • Tanée Boyd

    crap, at the good part. oh wel, good read

    07/23/2020 23:42

  • GalaxyDeathStar

    I love your story and wish I could keep reading it but I don't any more coins

    07/23/2020 11:03

  • Reader-097081

    please please udateeeee!!!! it’s soo gooddd and I need the restttt

    07/23/2020 06:11

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    loving this book so far. can you please give more than one chapter when updating please. keeps leaving me in suspense. I have to go back and reread the previous chapters. thank you. keep up the great work.

    07/21/2020 15:51

  • Eiyah

    Oh goodness I loved this update.

    07/21/2020 15:08

  • Alice Medford

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    07/21/2020 03:41

  • Areen Abukishek

    wow

    07/21/2020 01:00

  • Shania Martin

    hi Holly just wondering if there will be a update today didn't see one yesterday so I figured I'd ask

    07/20/2020 15:01

  • Lindsey Bennett

    seriously addicted to this story just read the whole thing today how often do you add new chapters

    07/18/2020 16:55

  • Eiyah

    oooh I can’t wait to see what’s next. great update ❤️❤️❤️

    07/18/2020 16:19

  • Ashlee Friend

    This book is addictive

    07/18/2020 01:29

  • Monique Moses

    trying to open chapter 31 n it won't open

    07/17/2020 02:26

  • Eiyah

    all caught up. I love this book so far.

    07/16/2020 21:46

  • Eiyah

    I’d love to join your group on Facebook

    07/16/2020 07:50

  • Alicia Pierce

    love it so far

    07/15/2020 18:33

  • Megan Urban

    Holly Dominic where can I find you on Dream? I tried this name and Lyn Monreal and I cant find anything. I was interested in reading your other stories as well as this one which btw I love!!

    07/15/2020 06:29

  • zireonda pando

    yes that would be great !

    07/15/2020 00:13

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    awesome

    07/14/2020 20:00

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    loving this story. please more updates.

    07/13/2020 20:23

  • Brinley Rae

    LOVE LOVE LOVE THE BOOK SO FAR!! ❤️

    07/11/2020 17:41

  • buse bulut

    are there more updates coming?? this story is amazing!

    07/11/2020 15:08

  • Reader-254912

    great story can’t wait for an update 👍👍

    07/07/2020 21:30

  • Desiree Luft

    Happy Birthday! Love this story

    07/04/2020 23:26

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    I can’t wait. Happy Birthday.

    07/04/2020 03:39

  • Reader-643076

    happy birthday!! I love the storey!!

    07/04/2020 00:55

  • HK21

    happy birthday beautiful!! thank you for these awesome gifts u give us 💕 can’t wait for more

    07/03/2020 19:00

  • Jamie

    Thank you! Happy Birthday!

    07/03/2020 17:38

  • Bailee McBride

    will this only be updated once a month?

    07/03/2020 02:48

  • HK21

    I’m ain’t gonna lie, I could care less about the shit her friend is going thru bcuz I want to read more about her & Collin! but I am curious how long it has been since she was last in contact with her other friend & what’s up with her? was she take/killed by something? I’m constantly checking for updates cuz I have no patience and want to read more! I also am in love with this story

    07/03/2020 02:16

  • Reader-781235

    look you need to update more than one chapter a month wtf

    06/30/2020 02:33

  • Desiree Luft

    I'm really loving this story. please update soon

    06/25/2020 17:07

  • Tara Hogenbirk

    when is the next update??

    06/25/2020 13:07

  • Tamika Johnson

    Hi Holly... Love the story so far but did you notice the cover states someone else wrote it. I like that author as well but I believe you should get the credit you deserve. Also how often do you update? I already read all 28 chapters

    06/25/2020 11:09

  • Reader-781235

    can you hurry up n make some more chapters dangggggg lol

    06/25/2020 04:00

  • ◆•.°Lųną•Qųəən°.•◆

    Is it updated just one chapter at a time? And is it updated everyday or week?

    06/25/2020 03:04

  • Tara Hogenbirk

    how often do you update... i binge read all the chapters 🙄🙄

    06/22/2020 14:11

  • zireonda pando

    hello i hope everything is okay @HollyDominic

    06/18/2020 16:37

  • HK21

    I need more!!!! can’t wait for the next update 💜

    06/18/2020 05:54

  • Reader-643076

    loving this storey hoping fir an update soon?😊

    06/16/2020 16:50

  • Kim

    when will there be more chapters?!

    06/16/2020 02:28

  • Jessica White

    can’t wait until they meet up again. excited for next update. great work.

    06/07/2020 22:56

  • Megan

    It wont open all of sudden to let me read it???? Hope this gets fixed asap I'm dying to read to latest chapter.

    06/07/2020 06:57

  • Stephanie E Chumbley

    what the hell! duplicated chapter. I want my coins back.

    06/05/2020 02:25

  • Jessica White

    love this book so far!!

    06/04/2020 16:14

  • Tammy

    is there a way to get the coins back for paying for the same chapter twice

    06/03/2020 18:17

  • zireonda pando

    chapter 23 was posted twice.

    06/03/2020 03:45

  • ViVi Henry

    I want to let you know, chapter 23 is double and I had to pay coins to unlock the same chapter I already read.

    06/03/2020 01:55

  • zireonda pando

    smh that Mrs.Heathers she knows alot and she really hates the werewolves..yikes she still would risk her grand-daughter smh

    06/02/2020 14:45

  • Jasmine Smith

    love it

    06/01/2020 20:27

  • Cassandra Tobin

    how often do you post chapter's? I feel like it's been a while

    05/22/2020 12:38

  • Arikka Smith

    Does anybody know how often the story is updated 😟

    05/21/2020 16:29

  • Keely Pleasant

    thank you for the updates! I just found your story and I'm friggin hooked. you are amazing woman!

    05/14/2020 03:49

  • Megan Urban

    love love love cant wait for Nadia to show up!!!!

    05/13/2020 20:34

  • Arikka Smith

    This is pretty good so far I like keep up the great work cause you got me interested lol

    05/13/2020 03:31

  • zireonda pando

    omg this soooo good..I feel bad for William 😥. she definitely was finding a reason to leave ASAP

    05/12/2020 17:45

  • Heydi

    like the storyline, but been waiting for the next chapter since last Friday 😩😩😩

    05/09/2020 14:39

  • Sil Mary

    how often the chapters are uploaded? I feel I have been waiting for ever😩😩

    05/05/2020 00:11

  • Dahlia Mynd

    This is a very interesting storyline. I can't wait to read more!!!

    04/29/2020 18:40

  • Rebecc S

    attempting... more more more!

    04/23/2020 09:09
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