Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • Elaina Isaacs

    I was asked to review this by an editor on wattpad. When I was reading the prologue I figured the rest of the story had to be just as good!! I’m rlly glad I gotten it recommend,,, it’s pretty great :)

    09/09/2020 08:10

  • Precious Young

    I read a few chapters and I think to be honest is a good story line

    09/09/2020 07:16

  • Jofane Albeos

    Hi I already read some of the chap and its really entertaining and I love the way the story started...I loved it really..it makes me more interested.

    09/09/2020 06:26

  • Selena C

    First of all wow. That was amazing. The plot was nice and not too complicated like I see with young writers and the character introduction and development in the chapters I read is a work of art. If I was the author I would publish and advertise because I’d pay for the hard cover version of this book no doubt. Great job!!!

    09/09/2020 06:03

  • cassierae

    This book is so good, relatable, and funny, I absolutely LOVE this book!!

    09/09/2020 05:09

  • Kitty Kait

    The is overall good. Not that kind of story I expected, far from cliche stories though it needs editing. Please do not recall events as flashbacks. Explain the events by protagonists POVs. There was very less investment in Kane and Ember's relationship. I didn't like how it ended. I suggest you to add more chapters about the progress in their relationship but in the end it is your story and your will to edit it. Best of luck 👍

    09/09/2020 03:42

  • Kitty Kait

    it is not available on Wattpad

    09/09/2020 03:19

  • Vivian Olisah

    it's a really lovely story, I plan finishing the story

    09/09/2020 02:44

  • Vamp Girl

    I just came here from Wattpad. My Wattpad profile is book-lover4ever. I love your book. it's a really fun read, I enjoyed it so much.

    09/09/2020 02:21

  • SecretStarr101

    I just finished chapter 4 which is my favorite so far lol. This story is so well written. I wish I had read it sooner when it was on Wattpad but it's better late than never. I can't wait to read more!

    09/09/2020 02:12

  • Kathryn Randall

    I love this book it's soo good. The writer recommend it and I'm glad the writer it. Can't wait to reread it.

    09/09/2020 01:29

  • FarfalleMajesty

    Someone just reconmended this story on wattpad ! and its really worth it! lemme give all my support :)

    09/09/2020 01:26

  • Madison Ling

    I’ve read the first 15 chapters and thought it was good! There were a couple things that could be improved, however. There are a lot of typos and just certain things that don’t make sense. I don’t think I’ve ever read a werewolf story before, but this was a good one to start with!

    09/09/2020 00:55

  • BTS.Jikook

    I don’t have enough coins 😭😭😭😭

    09/09/2020 00:40

  • LunaStar3323

    A very amazing book! I just love the storyline!

    09/09/2020 00:00

  • Kikelomo Williams

    Amazing story, my sister actually read it first and told me it was a must read, I started it on wattpad but could not complete it for a while, when I was able to, it had been taken down. I felt it was a pity until the author recommended it to me, I had to download this app specially because of the book, because reading the prologue reminded me of what got me hooked. It is a beautiful story,

    09/08/2020 23:14

  • Karen Adjei

    this book has me...likeee.its so worth it I love it Soo much 🤩

    09/08/2020 23:04

  • Labibah Abidin

    i read this book because writer recommended it. i am glad found this story

    09/08/2020 21:40

  • Reader-528516

    Thanks to the writer who recommended me to read this story because I really liked it, it has an amazing plot that has been developed well

    09/08/2020 21:03

  • Nova_lilly-95

    I found out about this when the author contacted me on wattpad. I am really glad the author got in contact with me ad I am really enjoying the story so far, I love how each chapter flow into each other and that it keeps it you engage and entertain.

    09/08/2020 20:41

  • AkiraNes

    here from wattpad 😁 thank you writer and editor for recommend this to me, the story is great and entertaining 💞

    09/08/2020 18:46

  • SuchALittleAngel

    omfg rude 😪

    09/08/2020 17:42

  • Claire Arsenio

    ohhh.. I loved it😊

    09/08/2020 17:19

  • Chantal Mitchell

    I really enjoy, the flow of words across the page. The depth of time put in to create the plot to expect all the question in the readers mine and answer them as you write.

    09/08/2020 16:45

  • Esenija Bistrova

    I read a half of this book for now and i want to say that it is very interesting .I realy enjoy to read it .I want to sag thanks for the author because she recomended it to me.

    09/08/2020 16:00

  • Sal .S

    itssss goooodddd. really really goood. im stuck.

    09/08/2020 14:33

  • Chutshela Mototoba Bhili KaSkhonza

    I hate bullies, yep every kind damnit ☹️☹️

    09/08/2020 14:28

  • Chutshela Mototoba Bhili KaSkhonza

    I love the story so far but I don't want to lie I hate that she trampled a giant but become a mouse in front of her mate. I hope that changes soon otherwise I will be disappointed.👏

    09/08/2020 14:17

  • Jo Doucette

    The author reached out to me via Wattpad, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! Every character is interesting, and I’ve found myself invested in all of them even from the first few chapters! I’ve only read up to chapter 16, and will stop there as I don’t plan on purchasing coins, but I really loved the story. It’s not predictable, great characters, and a good writing flow!

    09/08/2020 13:35

  • Magda Smith

    Magda200o from Wattpad. I was asked by the editor of this story to read it and give my honest opinion, and here it is. Wow! I absolutely love this story. You did a great job creating something unique from an overused idea. The MC's character development was also well done and the plot was thoroughly thought out. The pacing of the story is great and the scenes are not drawn out or boring. Grammar and spelling are well edited. I couldn't read the entire story, but the part that was available to me kept me on the edge of my seat wanting more. To the author and editor: You did a great job creating this story. Best of luck with your writing and keep up the amazing work.

    09/08/2020 12:06

  • L.CLAUDE26

    OH GOD!? I only read the editor's recommendations through wattpad. I never thought it was a wonderful story!! That time I only said that I'll read the book when I had time, but now looking at this story here I finally feel like hidding from embarrassment! Such an excellent and exciting story was spoken by me an uninteresting a bit..?! I feel like crying for happiness to the author !!! I love this!

    09/08/2020 10:36

  • Pallavi Misal

    The story unfolds adequately, the journey of twist and steers us through many aspects, anger, friendship, frustration, past experience, sorrow. Since everything is a perfect balance of character, emotion, humour, situation, one gets curious to know what will happen subsequently in the plot.

    09/08/2020 09:43

  • BS_2798

    The book is quite engaging from beginning itself. Good read

    09/08/2020 09:38

  • Michelle Hughes

    I just found this story through wattpad and I absolutely love it! The story just glides off your tongue (or your thoughts if you are reading in your head).

    09/08/2020 05:47

  • Krishnaa Selvaraju

    Okay Quick question is ember a girl or a guy?

    09/08/2020 05:25

  • Namjoon's Rat

    found this through Wattpad and I'm glad that I found this I really like the plot :)

    09/08/2020 05:01

  • Hufflepuff L_MS

    Interesting story. I like the beginning so far, this book was recommended to me by its author on Wattpad.

    09/08/2020 04:14

  • PlushMo Mew

    Hi! I was asked to check out this story by the editor from Wattpad. The story so far is well done! The world that the story is presented in is very intriguing and interesting. The writing of the story is well done it easily allows me to envision the world perfectly. The characters are also very likable and interesting. Keep up the good work!!

    09/08/2020 04:14

  • Tiff

    😂😂

    09/08/2020 02:09

  • Five Fifty

    Make him jealous

    09/08/2020 01:20

  • Selanie Amie

    this book is amazing, something that i haven't come across in awhile and i will love to recomment it to other readers too

    09/08/2020 01:19

  • Five Fifty

    It’s still transitional and I love me some transitional werewolf love story. She’s so going beat his ass up

    09/08/2020 01:16

  • Five Fifty

    I love me some boxing scenes. She’s going to prove her mate wrong!

    09/08/2020 01:11

  • Crystal Han

    Hello, As writer request I came to read this, It's a amazing story and I really Love it. First, I read a few chapters and then wanna read till the end one time.

    09/08/2020 01:10

  • Five Fifty

    unexpected and a twist

    09/08/2020 01:09

  • Sundra

    But that's your mate! thanks for recomending this to me author!

    09/08/2020 00:13

  • Spotted Tip

    T-T I can't read anymore apparently

    09/07/2020 21:37

  • Nutella Babe130

    Hi, is the book completed?

    09/07/2020 21:15

  • issabellagi1

    Suspenseful

    09/07/2020 21:10

  • WiccanMetallicRose

    the author recommended it to me on Wattpad as well, I’ve quite enjoyed the story so far. it’s engaging and the characters are well developed. a fun well rounded read for fantasy lovers.

    09/07/2020 18:53

  • samplechapreader❤

    The author recommended me this book from Wattpad and I am truly in love with this story. 💕 I would also like to thank Miss Maybell-Bashara-0112 for sending me a special gift for reading the sample chapters. It means a lot. I hope and pray for the success of this book.

    09/07/2020 18:19

  • gbemisola taibat

    This is super interesting and entertaining to say the least, glad the editor recommended the story to me. The plot is well woven and the characters are well developed. I really appreciate the editor for the free 100coins, it gives me the liberty to read this awesome novel. I look forward to more of your stories both on wattpad and anystories.

    09/07/2020 18:10

  • Marlyn Palafox

    I have my ult ship for this book now. JEmber? Embett?

    09/07/2020 17:32

  • Marlyn Palafox

    hold on was he castrated?

    09/07/2020 17:27

  • Sunshine

    After being messaged by the author to check it out I got this app and started reading. I rather fancy werewolf stories and I’m pleased that I started reading. It’s quite well written and setting up the location is very well done. Not only am I enjoying the book but now I’ve discovered a new reading/writing app with it! Now then back to enjoying the storie! :)

    09/07/2020 17:23

  • Marlyn Palafox

    the will smith painting reminds me of the large life sized cut out of Will Smith my English teacher from last year had in her class room

    09/07/2020 16:56

  • Marlyn Palafox

    I think this is the first time her name is actually mentioned in the book

    09/07/2020 16:46

  • Dark Music

    This is amazing! i absolutely love this story so far

    09/07/2020 15:40

  • hufflekim ⁷

    This is the most unique book, which has no similarities between other alpha related Stories. Coz, they always have the same concepts & they use the same techniques, but this is really great and I like the way how the writer has built up everything in a great manner. As, a writer myself in WP, I have read many books there, but this is amazing!

    09/07/2020 15:05

  • izzy lightwood

    its a really good book, the plot is well built as are the characters. i dont have anything bad to say about It except that its a little bit rushed at the bigging but besid that its really well writtend and i recomend it.

    09/07/2020 14:16

  • Alysabeth Lawter

    I found this book on Wattpad, it was recommended by the author, and I’m glad she did I’ve only read two chapters but those two were amazing 10/10

    09/07/2020 13:53

  • miminxx

    Hi! I must say, the prologue really got me captivated. Sorry, I took a long time to write a review so here it is. "Nature was elegant chaos, messy but orderly, so unlike my life," this line struck me the most, maybe because I could relate to it somehow. Didn't expect the story to have other supernatural creatures aside from werewolves, it was a refreshing addition in my opinion. The characters are well-written, the flow of the story felt natural as well. I'm also interested in what was behind Kane's reason as to why he was avoiding Ember. Hoping his actions would be justified. Based on the chapters I just read, I can tell that the rest of the chapters are amazingly written as well. Keep it up, and best wishes to you!

    09/07/2020 13:33

  • Anne-lise Vilholm

    I really love the story I have the whole first book but I do not have the money to get the second if it ever comes out, would you maybe consider putting it on wattpad for the poor people hahaha

    09/07/2020 13:02

  • Anne-lise Vilholm

    league fan? Darius and Caitlyn was named hmmmm

    09/07/2020 12:59

  • Jolina Junio

    hello I read your story it's amazing 🙂 keep doing it 😉😊 cool

    09/07/2020 12:52

  • Aeri bree

    finally I'm here reading this❤️

    09/07/2020 11:38

  • aleskandraa

    i actually got this book recommend by the writer and i actually love it soo much, and it has an amazing storyline

    09/07/2020 10:32

  • Preeti Renee

    Its awesome

    09/07/2020 09:04

  • Monica I.

    When the author found me on Wattpad and sent me a sample chapter, I was intrigued so I said yes and I’m so glad I did!

    09/07/2020 08:28

  • Dre

    Got to love this book. Found this from wattpad like most people. Wouldn't stick around for it costs coins but this story soooo good I just can't stop reading ❤️❤️❤️

    09/07/2020 07:37

  • Shatabdi Mukhopadhyay

    Hi this is Athela_Perk from Wattpad. Your plot is quite intriguing. It has a vibe of dystopian story.

    09/07/2020 06:12

  • Chowmein and Apples

    omg this actually not bad for the prologue

    09/07/2020 05:46

  • Kiki

    I found this book through wattpad when one of the editors asked me to leave a review, so here it is: Book is well constructed and characters well developed. It is quite easy to relate with the main character as she is sassy and strong, but demure and weak at times as well. The grammar is much better than many books I have read on Wattpad. The intrigue of the book is quite nice: it develops slowly, leaving us wondering what will happen, but not too slowly that we would get bored.

    09/07/2020 05:06

  • Diana Amirsadeghi

    I was messaged by the editor on wattpad and honestly im really happy they did and i said yes because im really enjoying this story

    09/07/2020 03:56

  • “𝘚𝘸𝘪𝘴𝘴𝘩_退化する

    Hello! this is Michi_Sanchii from wattpad. The story was amazing, the plot was also very interesting. Thank you so much for promoting it to me. (Also thank you for the redeem code! ^^)

    09/07/2020 03:01

  • Elle U

    I normally would have dropped off after a few chapters, it felt like the ssdd. Alpha doesn't want me..im not worthy... but I was asked to review from the editor as it seems is quite the trend. I found it enjoyable to read. I loved that so many themes revolved around self reliance and finding inner strength. I found it to be well written and beautifully descriptive. World building isn't and easy task. I attention and thought to how magical beings function and live was wonderful. The characters are relatable and chance are you know someone this each one of them. Ember is so fierce but she doubts herself. She makes you want her to succeed. You get so tense when she fights. You are relieved when she's ok. I'd says it is more action/adventure than anything. I didn't really find Ember and Kane relationship exciting, more of a side note. I was more interested in her being badass. She is amazing.

    09/07/2020 02:31

  • Tiffiany Seaton

    oh no bad mistake. Haha my friends would totally do that dress me in white and leave me to get married smh. :). +-+.. Haha messing with trolls are never a good idea have they ever played medieval games... Haha all in all great chapter I have never read about fairies, trolls, and werewolves in a story before amazing. Haha I especially like the real experience it brings. =).

    09/06/2020 23:46

  • Reon Tine

    Hello, it's Reon from Wattpad :) I came here to check out this book bec the author's friend requested me to, and glad I said yes, because this story is /so/ good! I actually read this last month, but I just signed up coz I have to leave a comment bec this story is amazing. xx

    09/06/2020 23:40

  • Tiffiany Seaton

    What I would give to see her room and house. I love art and comics♡▪♡... I love the sound of her house and room. I would love to punch the chick messing with her mate. Haha let me at her!⊙^⊙.... Sucks that her mate won't acknowledge her and that she had to serve them oof. *sigh* -_-...

    09/06/2020 22:58

  • Tiffiany Seaton

    Haha uh oh. I love characters that are friends with the main character but uh oh. She might get in trouble for it. Haha anyways it pretty good. I love how you can tell they are friends but seems to be a one sides love story also. I love it.

    09/06/2020 22:48

  • Tiffiany Seaton

    Oooh a fairie!!!! I love fairies especially since they are characterized as beautiful and mischievous. I love how she's her friend??? Haha I would have taken the deal but her being a werewolf and having a mother kinda makes the deal harder to take. How sad she's not only mulled over him in high school but also in college. Haha hope she picks the fairie. Hopefully I'll get to see guy competition...:)♡_♡

    09/06/2020 21:10

  • Lenessa Abraham

    This book is really really good. Wish i was able to finish it. Fantastic work

    09/06/2020 21:05

  • Darktales

    Hey! I renewed my account from Wattpad, where my username is Teaphillic. I sincerely appreciate you giving me the chance of reading the full version of this book. Thanks ❤️

    09/06/2020 20:50

  • justsunny

    I really love this story, great writing style, good story, everything is super great, really recommended!!! :)))))

    09/06/2020 20:32

  • Tiffiany Seaton

    Awwww why do I get sooo sympathetic for every character I read about :`( >_<..... Haha anyways it's sooo heartwrenching when the werewolves mate does not like the other one. oof haha and to make it worse when the female character is a omega. I love how the author added in scenes lots of people can relate to like cartoon artist, want for an awesome apartment, and want to fight back bullies. oh and the fluid motion of writing scenes that are not too confusing.

    09/06/2020 20:31

  • Tiffiany Seaton

    Just Wow. I'm barely starting the first chapter and I already know this is going to be good. Haha I also came from Wattpad. I like how the beginning differs from other were-stories. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

    09/06/2020 20:21

  • Alli Long-gone

    I have never been more excited about a book recommendation in my entire life... And I am utterly blown away!! This book is amazingly written; the descriptions and details are so in-depth, you can literally picture the storyline unfolding in front of your eyes. The characters are realistic and relatable, even if they are werewolves and it's not your cliché supernatural plot. I honestly could not stop reading till the end. Well done to the author for creating this work of art. Definitely worth the read!

    09/06/2020 19:34

  • Chloe Solis

    waaa the author of this story recommended me this through and i am very happy that he/she did recommend it

    09/06/2020 19:33

  • luna y alice

    wow this chapter was amasing, the redaction made the history special

    09/06/2020 19:14

  • arianna.maguire

    this is honestly so amazing. I haven’t got too far in the book yet and I can already tell I’m going to be obsessed!! it’s not like a normal werewolf mate story that’s for sure !!

    09/06/2020 19:06

  • Amanda Todd

    cant purchase coins so cant read any further do the chapters open by themselves after a certain amount of days love this books but cant read it all

    09/06/2020 18:37

  • Miss L

    This was an amazing story filled with emotional turns. I love the characters and how they interacted with each other. this is one of the best books I've ever read and I can't wait for what the author has in store next. 🙂

    09/06/2020 18:22

  • 勇気Roselia

    The story is quite breathtaking to be honest with the well built plot and it is well written. Entertaining for young adults with its supernatural ways. Highly recommend it!

    09/06/2020 18:14

  • Jonghyeaven

    i really like this book keep on writing stories!

    09/06/2020 17:57

  • Faye Asher

    Oh, I had no idea colors were colorful! Thank you for this new revelation.

    09/06/2020 17:38

  • Random_bi_potato

    I really love it! an editor on wattapd recommended it to me and I was like omg ues I have to check this out I can only read the first 6 chapters because this app requires coins but I bet the rest it awesome UnU

    09/06/2020 17:08

  • sweetybomb

    Hello it's me from Wattpad !! I got asked to read and write a review. I start to read and love it..! Your story is very very interesting..! I enjoyed and recommended it to a few of my friends. I really love how the whole story just flows !! I hope your work will be successfull !!

    09/06/2020 16:54

  • Luzzhaila Intig

    i love it

    09/06/2020 16:53

  • LadyAdmi

    beautiful!!

    09/06/2020 16:41

  • Seibide

    this book is superb, this is just the prologue and I'm really excited about it😁, rock

    09/06/2020 16:36
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