Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
Abbigail Benavides
This story is actually really good. 1 to 5. I give it a 4. It still has it's moments and it still has life. I hope this story keeps going for the better. I love Ember and Ian. Ian is a card. Characters with much dorky crackheadness always have a good place somewhere. Adding that wanted comedy to an otherwise serious outline
09/04/2023 07:08QueenAzra Ali
I have read some chapters of your book, thank you for choosing me to give your opinion about your book, I like his storyline i really appreciate it
09/04/2023 07:08
hahawolfy
Hi, thankyou for suggesting me to read this story back then in wp. at first, I thought it just a cliche story about ww but NO!! it's not. I'm really impressed when the author put the other fairytales characters in this book! and how the story develops. but for me, a few chapters before the ending it kinda missed something. but overall, this is absolutely an awesome and great story to read! i love it! 💜
09/04/2023 07:08
Reader-518600
this chapter was confusing
09/04/2023 07:08jaimy-lee kurtz
I am thoroughly hooked👏👏👏
09/04/2023 07:08
Cassia Campbell
lov8ng this story
09/04/2023 07:08
tanya larose
I love this book so far it’s reallly pulling me into it
09/04/2023 07:08Emily Duarte
Omg
09/04/2023 07:08
Amreen Sonara
honestly just loving this book so much!
09/04/2023 07:08__smirk __
we bacc reading this lmao
09/04/2023 07:08
Tinyiko Valoyi
it's a really good book... I don't comment a lot but wow!
09/04/2023 07:08Luzzhaila Intig
i love it
09/04/2023 07:08
Kira Jones
as someone who as never enjoyed a “straight” omegaverse fic I was honestly surprised at how addicted I got to the story! although I couldn’t read the whole thing I’m glad I got to read a bit of it 10/10 would read any book from this author!!
09/04/2023 07:08Monique John
not bad very detailed
09/04/2023 07:08laura sanchez
I'm reading it as the autor asked and hell, It's good. Thank you!!
09/04/2023 07:08Rita Pinto
This book is really great!! I love the story and the way it developed. It’s a story that makes you entertaining till the end! I really recommend this book!!
09/04/2023 07:08
Aparna
I haven't read the entire book yet but the storyline is extremely interesting and I love the authors writing style! I'm so happy the author recommended me this story because it draws you in and flows so well!! Love it :)
09/04/2023 07:08Amreen Sonara
i found this book via the editor and gosh I am loving it. The way the fight was described it's just..... wow. Its beautifully described.
09/04/2023 07:08Amy Mosselmans
only read one chapter and I already love it it gives me Teen Wolf vibes
09/04/2023 07:08
@llamamenadi_
This book is so good. I so happy to read it. It's so intense and addicted to read. Very much recommended, people! Just enjoy reading it, it's worth it!!
09/04/2023 07:08
LadyAdmi
beautiful!!
09/04/2023 07:08Egao Yuri-chan Love
I love strong girls.
09/04/2023 07:08Alyssa 111
THIS IS AMAZING
09/04/2023 07:08Leandre De wet
I've just started reading this book yesterday and i couldn't put it down i absolutely love this book i can't wait for other books of the author. It is now officially one of my fav Werewolf books
09/04/2023 07:08Charlotte Clark
This story is really good has a very great story line I would recommend this 100%
09/04/2023 07:08
dhnncjy
what would alpha kane's reason(s) be?
09/04/2023 07:08yohi love
ohhh, I love you girl. You finally gathered your wits
09/04/2023 07:08
ughpastry
oh no he didn’t
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-010078
it’s a very interesting story, I’m broke though so I can’t keep reading
09/04/2023 07:08
CuteSuzy
This story is so intriguing! ❤
09/04/2023 07:08
Seibide
this book is superb, this is just the prologue and I'm really excited about it😁, rock
09/04/2023 07:08kashae young
this is a good story so far... I'm glad the author suggested this to me.
09/04/2023 07:08Maya Caviera
I found this book through the editor and I really liked it. The story flows smoothly and since I love anything supernatural I really enjoyed reading it. 😊 I would surely recommend it to everyone who likes not only werewolves, but also other fantasy creatures.
09/04/2023 07:08Bel Writer
This book is amazing! The narrative is smooth and the characters are endearing. It will hook you and keep you reading!
09/04/2023 07:08Shailey Giddings
I love this book so far.
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-258842
I love her , I love the fact that she didn’t just jump in his arms. she’s strong ❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:08
prabhjot kalsi
I LOVE JETT. I LOVE HIM
09/04/2023 07:08
Christen Zemp
I don’t normally read stories with werewolves but I made an exception and I’m happy I did! I love this story so far and I can’t wait to read more of it.
09/04/2023 07:08Yohanna Moges
what in the world?
09/04/2023 07:08Jamie Carter
thank you author for recommending this! I'm interested already!
09/04/2023 07:08
Aminata Coulibaly
I still didn't read the book fully but for what I've read I can surely say that It's very eye-catching and also the writing is simple and understandable to anyone. It's really a good and entertaining book.!!
09/04/2023 07:08
allenwiedmann
being poor is annoying 😭 but this story is so gooood I love everybody on the book and ian is my favorite with ember and aster ! storyline is so good and I thank the editor and the writer for showing me this story 💕💞
09/04/2023 07:08
thedreamerssix
i really love this book only read a few chapters but I'm already in love with it
09/04/2023 07:08
a_g1776
I am so glad that the author reached me through watt pad this story is amazing!!!
09/04/2023 07:08Gabrielle Lockheart
lmao. ian is funnyyyy, can i be friend with him? 🤣
09/04/2023 07:08
Chaos Lupa
this book is Addictive. I LITERALLY cannyo put it down
09/04/2023 07:08warwindy
12. This is what he supposed to do but hell... why he had to date Hellen? if hi doesn't date nobody will ever be kidnapped or whatever. If was Ember I'll let him come and resist the urge to mate just because of the pull when he gets the Alpha status
09/04/2023 07:08
Stephanie Kraak
The fact that she's not a defenseless damsel even though she's an omega does it for me! I'm loving this so far 👏
09/04/2023 07:08Thư Huỳnh
That's like the werewolf world, but I think this outline has to demand colors... uhm This seem to be quiet a popular, . But your wording is simple, concise and that's really beautiful. I extremely impressive about that. Good luck
09/04/2023 07:08
Partners_In_Crime067
I absolutely love it so far and can’t wait to finish reading!!
09/04/2023 07:08LunaStar3323
A very amazing book! I just love the storyline!
09/04/2023 07:08
Justchichix
When this book was recommended, it rung a bell and now I know why, from the few chapters I read on wp it looked like a good book, I'm glad I'm going to be able to complete reading it here or at least read more chapters.
09/04/2023 07:08Zara Zafia
yes!ur not his ,girl !! GIRL POWER!!
09/04/2023 07:08Bethani Dugan
good story. maybe once its published and available at a library I'll be able to finish it. 😢
09/04/2023 07:08ambriel დ
I’ve just started to read this book when it was recommended, and I am so happy to ready the first chapter!
09/04/2023 07:08Shamara Janes
I love this so much thanks for sending me a summery of the chapters!
09/04/2023 07:08Dark moon
i love the idea so much. Iam so excited to read the rest of the story.
09/04/2023 07:08BlueWolf
The troll kinda sounds like he looks like Hulk
09/04/2023 07:08
Caitlin Kanter
loving this book so far. very addicting
09/04/2023 07:08
Tuuli Mylläri
I really like this book, and I truly feel sorry for not being able to go further, there so far haven't been any grammatical errors, and The story is good at keeping your attention, if The story were to be or is already published as a real paperbook, I would no doubt buy it. I recommend this story for all who are above 12 years old ( unless The age rating goes up to mature actions) and those who are interested in fantasy stories with alpha-omega dynamics.
09/04/2023 07:08creativeanimelover 34
I love the plot and the natural flow of the book it's over all very entertaining to read ( from wattpad-animenerdmeow)
09/04/2023 07:08Selly Rigby
The Writer recommended it,and this is good,enjoyable and interesting. I wanna say thank you to the writer who already recommended this story❤️.
09/04/2023 07:08
haru
The storyline was great but maybe there was a bit too much details on the introduction.The only part I didn't understand was the mate part but the rest was really good! I really like this novel, and thank u for recommend your work to me. ( Im sorry if any of u felt that the story introduction wasnt too long or short but this is just my opinon, Thank u for understanding )♡ヾ(๑╹◡╹)ﾉ"
09/04/2023 07:08
Chisom Okafor
i found out about this story when the writer asked me to check it out and my dear it actually worth it, keep up with the good work
09/04/2023 07:08
gem lover2
WHAT?! A bride in exchange for a treasure?! Ian could have mentioned that.
09/04/2023 07:08
SarahProxy
When I was a kid I used to dream of meeting Warewolf, but unfortunately now I'm the vampire team
09/04/2023 07:08warwindy
11. seriously!!! she couldn't fight back because the public? or her mask? He wants her now because she punched a troll. At least she left, pride is good sometimes
09/04/2023 07:08Marlyn Palafox
I have my ult ship for this book now. JEmber? Embett?
09/04/2023 07:08
Tyesha Y
Glad I found it❤️
09/04/2023 07:08SarahProxy
I thought I read this. But I don't know, a friend told me this story and it ended up being amazing.
09/04/2023 07:08
Divine Ota-oghene
I haven't read all, but am glad I agreed to read it. It is amazing.
09/04/2023 07:08Marlyn Palafox
hold on was he castrated?
09/04/2023 07:08•Onii Ushi•
so far so good
09/04/2023 07:08
prigkipica20
The whole plot is very well written! I am so glad that after all the stories I have read ( and believe me there were a lot ), I can still find something that makes me want to stay up all night! Thank you!😊
09/04/2023 07:08
Carolien Swart
I got asked to review this book from the author and I just have to say it’s an amazing book and I love it
09/04/2023 07:08Liberty Farnsworth
I bought and read the whole book about a month ago, but it says I have to re-buy everything after chapter 10. is anyone else having this problem?
09/04/2023 07:08warwindy
10.direccional challenge, from nursery at Kane's place to school??? going to the library through a halfway naked and furious males in a unexpected room...
09/04/2023 07:08Faith Quilaquil
thanks to martha alberta😊 for recommendation😍
09/04/2023 07:08
Princess Quillosa
I honestly love the story it was very entertaining and im really thankful that the writer recommend this story..
09/04/2023 07:08Donamae Mabborang Zipagan
Keep writing. You are talented 😉
09/04/2023 07:08Marlyn Palafox
the will smith painting reminds me of the large life sized cut out of Will Smith my English teacher from last year had in her class room
09/04/2023 07:08gem lover2
I really like how you described the experience the character was going through. I also wanted to say I find this very intreaging so far
09/04/2023 07:08
Joan Success Nkemnji
The story is really amazing and flows really well. Thanks for sharing it with me
09/04/2023 07:08Marlyn Palafox
I think this is the first time her name is actually mentioned in the book
09/04/2023 07:08Cassie J
I could only read a few chapters. though it's not something I would read as it's an original story it's quite nice.writing is good too. I would have enjoyed it more if the alpha didn't get on my nerves but other than that if i put my personal feeling aside it's great. can't say more on it cause I can't read the whole thing.
09/04/2023 07:08Celestia Lundenburg
I find this really interesting and usually I’m not into these type of stories but this just makes me want to keep reading.
09/04/2023 07:08warwindy
9.nice chapter, girl in love but not showing it too much.Her mate still a jerk but hopefully saved her at least
09/04/2023 07:08Sadiqa Khan
AMAZING
09/04/2023 07:08
4nonymouse
❤️
09/04/2023 07:08
BelleDanger
Really good book! The writers are amazing at writing! I get so hooked on the book that I can’t stop reading and that’s what I love about certain books! This book is an amazing book and i can’t wait for more books from these writers!
09/04/2023 07:08
ara.amir
the writer actually recommended this story to me^^ and i'm glad that it happened~ really love how he flow of the story~ keeps me entertained <3
09/04/2023 07:08
Koyinsola Ogun
got asked to write a review and didn’t even have much to say but wow. Just the first few chapters is enough to have one hooked. 😍😍
09/04/2023 07:08
soosoo58690
i realy liked the story so much
09/04/2023 07:08Satan queen
miss spelt fairies
09/04/2023 07:08Lyslene Ines
This history is so cool I congratulate the author
09/04/2023 07:08Lupita Carrasco Evia
I really like it. It's only the prologue but I love it. Congratulations!
09/04/2023 07:08Gabigail Dixson
it's good. felt a little fast paced at the beginning and I wish we could have had a small run in with the mom while she cooked dinner, but other than that I'm impressed. thank you for sending that link. I thoroughly enjoyed what you have written.
09/04/2023 07:08love dance arteaga burgos
This photo has been added to his favorite. I'm glad he took this very good story.
09/04/2023 07:08
Juliet Kotor
Already in love with this book💯💯
09/04/2023 07:08Ann Wina
thanks to the writer for recommending this to me I definitely love the plot and unexpected turn of events so far.
09/04/2023 07:08
