Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
Tiffiany Seaton
oh no bad mistake. Haha my friends would totally do that dress me in white and leave me to get married smh. :). +-+.. Haha messing with trolls are never a good idea have they ever played medieval games... Haha all in all great chapter I have never read about fairies, trolls, and werewolves in a story before amazing. Haha I especially like the real experience it brings. =).
09/04/2023 07:10Frilanz Roto Paraiso
love the story..thanks for sharing...😍😊
09/04/2023 07:10
AraKimchiii18
Heyyyyy there! I really love and support this story so much, the whole detailed events get me shooked and over-whelmed when I read the chapters of this book. I'm looking forward to read more interesting chapters.
09/04/2023 07:10
Precious Young
I read a few chapters and I think to be honest is a good story line
09/04/2023 07:10Banothile Mthimkhulu
this story is flames!!!
09/04/2023 07:10Tiff
😂😂
09/04/2023 07:10Charlie_
only a few chapters in and Im really enjoying this story!! I don't usually enjoy Alpha/Omega storylines as they're hard to follow but this one is easy to read and keeping my attention! I'm so glad I was recommended this <3
09/04/2023 07:10Tiffiany Seaton
What I would give to see her room and house. I love art and comics♡▪♡... I love the sound of her house and room. I would love to punch the chick messing with her mate. Haha let me at her!⊙^⊙.... Sucks that her mate won't acknowledge her and that she had to serve them oof. *sigh* -_-...
09/04/2023 07:10Iatha Flemmings
love this book so much
09/04/2023 07:10Tamara Angela
I actually found this by someone that recommended me to read the story and the story was amaizing! the author was write very amazing and entertaining story beside i was really like some fantasy story yeah hahaha.
09/04/2023 07:10Medhavi Sarin
this book is really good!! it very well written!
09/04/2023 07:10Tiffiany Seaton
Haha uh oh. I love characters that are friends with the main character but uh oh. She might get in trouble for it. Haha anyways it pretty good. I love how you can tell they are friends but seems to be a one sides love story also. I love it.
09/04/2023 07:10
xing_mei
I mean I won’t believe him either but I understand why he did that. from what I know if a werewolf rejects his mate they feel intense pain even sometimes become weak and heart themselves. he wanted to protect her I get that but in front of the whole school, let his friends bully her and flaunt Helen in her face. Beyond messed up.
09/04/2023 07:10Karen McGuffey
This story should be published. You can self publish. I would but it. It had interesting characters and a well formed plot. Good job.
09/04/2023 07:10Jofane Albeos
Hi I already read some of the chap and its really entertaining and I love the way the story started...I loved it really..it makes me more interested.
09/04/2023 07:10xing_mei
wow!! from what I could read this book seem really interesting. what I didn’t like is when Kane rejected Ember then had the nerve to forbid her from talking to anyone.. but he could do it. smh
09/04/2023 07:10Toh Cheng Yee
Enticing, definitely a Page turner! so glad I said yes when the author asked if I would check it out!
09/04/2023 07:10Lexie Marie
Was asked to review. Good so far. has a slight chliche to it, but it’s a healthy dose. noticing that the ending of the chapters are slightly bland. otherwise, wording is good, nice use of less common words and good grammar. interesting plot that makes a reader want to follow. good work so far.
09/04/2023 07:10Sakshi Singhania
i found out this books through wp when the author asked me to read it.. i am not usually into werewolf and all.. but this book is captivating.. i have read 5 chapters yet. and i like it. i hope to see how the characters will develop further down the story.. thanks for telling me about this book. i would have missed a good novel otherwise🙆🙆
09/04/2023 07:10
page
I just started reading it and I'm already into it .
09/04/2023 07:10
Five Fifty
Make him jealous
09/04/2023 07:10Nessie Jessie
Absolutely loved it broke the original 10/10 I find this book 20/20
09/04/2023 07:10Selanie Amie
this book is amazing, something that i haven't come across in awhile and i will love to recomment it to other readers too
09/04/2023 07:10Five Fifty
It’s still transitional and I love me some transitional werewolf love story. She’s so going beat his ass up
09/04/2023 07:10Jenny Best Camacho
I’m loving it !!!
09/04/2023 07:10Five Fifty
I love me some boxing scenes. She’s going to prove her mate wrong!
09/04/2023 07:10Bernel Adams
I really enjoyed this book! even tho it does not fall under the areas that I like to read I would 10/10 read again and most likely enjoy it so if your looking for that right supernatural book this ones for you!!😊💛
09/04/2023 07:10Caitlin Cronje
I am really captivated by this book, I keep wanting to know more, and the way the words are written and described is remarkable, it's really not every day you find a book like this, I'm really impressed
09/04/2023 07:10
Crystal Han
Hello, As writer request I came to read this, It's a amazing story and I really Love it. First, I read a few chapters and then wanna read till the end one time.
09/04/2023 07:10
Keeley Thomson
I found this book on Wp because one of the editors from this contacted me asking me to sample it and I would highly recommend it because it’s so enjoyable and entertaining and it flows really well
09/04/2023 07:10Five Fifty
unexpected and a twist
09/04/2023 07:10
cassierae
This book is so good, relatable, and funny, I absolutely LOVE this book!!
09/04/2023 07:10Sundra
But that's your mate! thanks for recomending this to me author!
09/04/2023 07:10
Emilia La
when I read buzzfeed unsolved I screamed
09/04/2023 07:10Dayna Ramjattan
wow so far I like chic keep it up sis. 😘❤🔥🔥🔥💯
09/04/2023 07:10Sailor Moon
Great story! The author reached out for me to read it and I am glad I did. I love the magical world they created, it's very unique to the other werewolf story's I have read.
09/04/2023 07:10Jesweet Leal Bisquera
finally here. I am very thankful that the author recommended this. I've already read the first chap and it really is to my taste . hope it will be more interesting in the following chaps.
09/04/2023 07:10Reader-119202
I loved this book!!! All the plot twists gave me whiplash and it was so awesome!! A great adventure!!!
09/04/2023 07:10
neereees_
i'm so gland that the writer recommended the book, since It is really enterteining, funny and enjoyable. i love it
09/04/2023 07:10Husky The wolf Alpha
I already read some chapters on wp(wattpad) and this was amazing!! I recommend reading this if you haven’t ^^
09/04/2023 07:10Noa
I just recently had the opportunity to get acquainted with this wonderful work. I’m still in the process of reading right now, but this story has taken me so deeply that I don’t even notice anything else. I am very sorry that I did not find her earlier. The plot is very interesting, the writing style is exciting and the characters are adorable. At the same time, the development of the heroes is visible, which is also a huge plus. I am delighted with this work and really love it! I hope the author will continue to create such wonderful works. I wish the author great success !!!
09/04/2023 07:10
BellaCoppelia
After being sent some sample chapters, I wanted more...so here I am.
09/04/2023 07:10warwindy
13.things are changing but she doesn't like it...ok
09/04/2023 07:09Malavika Satheesh
really nice story I love it
09/04/2023 07:09
Emi Lia
hey emi here from Wattpad, you asked me for a Review about this book :) If you do not mind I just beginn in this chapter. So I like your choice of language. For me a german reader is it easy to understand, you discribe the Situation very well and vivid but I wish for some parts more information for example a little indroduction (whose point of view we are reading, who is the narrator of the story) or maybe I am just too curious and I'll find out in the next few chapters :D I also like the small paragraphs in the text, so the reader can easy follow your Story. I am very curious to read further your Story and find out how it goes on! thank you to ask me to read it I really enjoy it! And I hope my little opinion helps you!
09/04/2023 07:09Debrlynn
I just started reading this and I’m sooo intrigued!! I’m sure the rest is just as rewarding. 👍🏼
09/04/2023 07:09Pauline Mae
The writer recommend this book on wp and I'm so glad that the writer recommend it the book is so amazing, keep up the good work.
09/04/2023 07:09
A_LadyCute
This is great! I love it! 💓
09/04/2023 07:09Debrlynn
I just began reading this and I’m sooo intrigued. I’m sure the rest is just as rewarding. 👍🏼
09/04/2023 07:09Livto18
I cant wait for her to stand up to him
09/04/2023 07:09Nichialle
I really appreciate the story. I haven't read the full story but I love it already. It's captivating and exciting. You can also see their development from the first chapter. I just wished I could get a glimpse of Kane's POV more.
09/04/2023 07:09
SuchALittleAngel
omfg rude 😪
09/04/2023 07:09【banana】
Honestly really glad the author recommended this to me. This book must be one of the most engrossing I’ve read in a while, absolutely love how they mixed together the real world and fantasy things. It’s pretty rare for me to find something like this, so it’s super refreshing. The plot and writing style is just gorgeous, keep doing what you’re doing, author.
09/04/2023 07:09
Faith Ezekiel
Good one!❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:09
Claire Arsenio
ohhh.. I loved it😊
09/04/2023 07:09
Jelie C
hi!! I started reading and this story seems interesting to me!
09/04/2023 07:09
Emma Slade
I was very impressed with the writing of this story. The author did a truly amazing job hands down
09/04/2023 07:09Jam McCartney
Well, the work is good so far from what I've read. I was asked to take a look at it from an editor on WP. I didn't realize this was a werewolf thing. I'm not particularly into stories like this, so I won't be finishing the book. from what I've read it seems a bit wordy but it flows nicely even with it. there are some spots where I would have removed some ditails just to help the flow of words. it wasn't bad by any means and I wish I could read something else from a writer like this. it was very pleasant on the eyes but a little choppy on the mind. out of everything 8/10 good story.
09/04/2023 07:09Nelisiwe Vezi
💛 love it
09/04/2023 07:09
Ysabella Grace Campos
omg are you the one who needed my opinion omg your so famous now told you many people would like it see good job
09/04/2023 07:09Nina Usman
I appreciate d buk, it nice
09/04/2023 07:09Livto18
she is bad ass. So different from your typical omegas
09/04/2023 07:09Chantal Mitchell
I really enjoy, the flow of words across the page. The depth of time put in to create the plot to expect all the question in the readers mine and answer them as you write.
09/04/2023 07:09Valya Rouse
this is turning out to be really different from all the other alpha stories. I am enjoying the reading. I can’t wait to read more.
09/04/2023 07:09
Valentina Galano
i am glad the writer recommended me this story, i have already read some chapters and i can say it's written very very well (sorry if i written something wrong, but i'm italian)
09/04/2023 07:09Kitty Kait
The is overall good. Not that kind of story I expected, far from cliche stories though it needs editing. Please do not recall events as flashbacks. Explain the events by protagonists POVs. There was very less investment in Kane and Ember's relationship. I didn't like how it ended. I suggest you to add more chapters about the progress in their relationship but in the end it is your story and your will to edit it. Best of luck 👍
09/04/2023 07:09Mei Kazuki
waw! so excited!
09/04/2023 07:09سكت الطالب
omg so sad I'm crying now
09/04/2023 07:09Tiffiany Seaton
Oooh a fairie!!!! I love fairies especially since they are characterized as beautiful and mischievous. I love how she's her friend??? Haha I would have taken the deal but her being a werewolf and having a mother kinda makes the deal harder to take. How sad she's not only mulled over him in high school but also in college. Haha hope she picks the fairie. Hopefully I'll get to see guy competition...:)♡_♡
09/04/2023 07:09Martie Engelbrecht
Awesome writing as always !!!
09/04/2023 07:09
ANGELWOLF99
I have started reading as the writer told me about and I am glad I said yes this is a good book and I enjoy it even though I only read two chapters I know I am gonna enjoy it you have done good work and i love this story!
09/04/2023 07:09Cheyenna Wanschers
I love it😍
09/04/2023 07:09Onuora Ijeoma Elizabeth
I hardly recommend books to people but once I do you know the book is worth it.. This book captured my heart, I love reading it. The author did a wonderful work with this book thanks for sharing
09/04/2023 07:09Lenessa Abraham
This book is really really good. Wish i was able to finish it. Fantastic work
09/04/2023 07:09Kezee Marie Tan
the author personally recommend this book to me. I really love the story and the author itself. shes just so humble and even asks me for my personal opinion. Thats a raise girl.
09/04/2023 07:09
Beren Yurdakul
You send me a link to you story and I must say I am pretty impressed I love you story so much I hope you will write more story’s and I can’t describe how good this story is❤️
09/04/2023 07:09
Esenija Bistrova
I read a half of this book for now and i want to say that it is very interesting .I realy enjoy to read it .I want to sag thanks for the author because she recomended it to me.
09/04/2023 07:09JerZee06
I like it for me to actually stop reading a book to read this means it was amazing and caught me at the first paragraph so amazing job
09/04/2023 07:09Himeezembi Scar Helao
thanks a lot for recommending this book to me i love it a lot.....i am still reading it but so far i love it
09/04/2023 07:09
GFD001
Wow that was an amazing prologue great job!!!
09/04/2023 07:09Loren Thomas
This is a great first chapter. Keep up the good work!
09/04/2023 07:09
Pearl197
Awesome story enough said. It was super fun to read and really really SUPER amazing!!!!!!!
09/04/2023 07:09
Walking Dictionary
❤️❤️❤️ So far... One of my favorite stories!!!
09/04/2023 07:09Sarah Odegu
love the book
09/04/2023 07:09Reader-668644
it’s really good but I can’t continue reading 🥺
09/04/2023 07:09Aish KpopTrash
She was like "yeet!" 😂😂😂😂
09/04/2023 07:09Julieann Soguilon Diaz
😊😊😊
09/04/2023 07:09Stefania Elena Ursache
Oh my God ... This story looks very promising.
09/04/2023 07:09Adaugo Agu
lawd this prologue got me tripping already 😅
09/04/2023 07:09
Some_Potato_art Wow
I love this book
09/04/2023 07:09
Kalika Nerd
The story is really good.
09/04/2023 07:09justsunny
I really love this story, great writing style, good story, everything is super great, really recommended!!! :)))))
09/04/2023 07:09Ella KZ
hey, finally found this place! Can't wait to read the book more!
09/04/2023 07:09Nutella Babe130
Hi, is the book completed?
09/04/2023 07:09
issabellagi1
Suspenseful
09/04/2023 07:09
Natsuki
I'm starting to love this story. I'll support you guys!
09/04/2023 07:09Inu Ookami
oh wow didn't expect of how it's end but I guess it's will turn out ok for them? not sure it was a bit confusing when there was flashbacks and only once you read further away that make sense but overall great story!
09/04/2023 07:09Angelique Katherine Jensen
this is a good book I am really glad that the writer of this book recommended me to read it
09/04/2023 07:09
FoxChan082305
I love the creativity in this book keep doing your best 🥳😄
09/04/2023 07:09
Ena Darcy
UwU, really good I don't usually read 1st or hetero relationships but I love the is story!
09/04/2023 07:09
