Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments
Angelia Weldon
it's good that they can at least be friends now. and possible allies in the future with what they're both building...
09/04/2023 07:11Reinella Mae Mariano
I like it😊though I didnt finish it to the last update. This story was interesting. I will just share to you, that I haven't read a wolf story before, but this ones make me interested. Keep on writing author😘
09/04/2023 07:11
Reader-087468
That’s right Rayne 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
09/04/2023 07:11
Mary
before going to next chapter I thinks, the men is her father and no clue who the future bartender is. let find out...
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
maybe I'm wrong, but I swear that I read in an earlier chapter, when Rayne was contacting ari for the first time, it said she had remembered her number by heart?? if that's the case, why now does she need the card out was written on?? am I wrong in what I read??
09/04/2023 07:11
Jalexi Marrero
it sounds amazing so far and i am excited to read more
09/04/2023 07:11Jenn McGrogan
lol I knew that the scar guy was going to be her dad.
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
awe, this is ssssooo heart breaking 💔 😢.... poor jace 😔
09/04/2023 07:11Anna Gabriela
the story is amazing I really like it❤
09/04/2023 07:11Alejandra Borau García
i just want to let you know that you offten change the character names (the name of Sebas wolf, the name of Raynes mom for example) that is a very bad thing to do as a writer.
09/04/2023 07:11
Aleida Colindres
This is a good story
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
ssssooo, will Irina be Seb's second chance mate??? OOOHHHH, I can't WAIT to see how this plays out!!!
09/04/2023 07:11Cindy Razel Ragasa Urcia
So, apparently someone gave me a link of this book of your's and I got hook immediately. The flow of the story is well written and almost perfect grammar. I love it. Keep up the good work.
09/04/2023 07:11Flecel Morales
its very nice and so addictive to read love ur story.Everything is very well written..
09/04/2023 07:11[nevermind]
so the editor contacted me and oh my goooood i love it
09/04/2023 07:11Lenka Volfova
it's a very interesting and nice story :0 ^^
09/04/2023 07:11Seneva Sullivan
I like the story it's been really good so far, and I'm glad to see that we get to see Parker shift a bit. I'm thinking the stranger might be a brother of Rayne?
09/04/2023 07:11
Jackie Garcia
I love this chapter it really has so much detail and I find it very interesting
09/04/2023 07:11
halfbl00dG1rl
the editor contacted me and I have stated reading it and the plot is very interesting can't wait to keep reading x
09/04/2023 07:11Dalia Esquivel
It's been about two hours since I was reached by your editor and do far I am very very interested in this one. I try to find books that catch my attention and this one did so I really like this one
09/04/2023 07:11Hinakochi
Hello, I am so angry and sorry for what Rayne must en dure, 👍
09/04/2023 07:11
unbeliebubble
amazing
09/04/2023 07:11
Lea Tormon
uwahhhhh!! I'm legitimately here! it's interesting! i love itt
09/04/2023 07:11Patrice Berry-Avery
No. She's going to reject him😥😥😥
09/04/2023 07:11Jeon Meléim
wow...i wasn't expecting it to be that amazing,very nice!
09/04/2023 07:11
Pradaline
Cool chapter
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
I'm so freaking stoked!!! and so over the moon that Seb made the right choice!! I just hope he meets his second chance mate soon, he really does deserve it ❤
09/04/2023 07:11Danielle Galamb
I want Parker to be Rayne’s mate when restart her heart.
09/04/2023 07:11
Ash Merlin
WHAT!! What happened to Alec?! I am really pissed off!
09/04/2023 07:11
Sabrina Wrinkle
wow love it so far
09/04/2023 07:11lucy shelby
I’ve had this happen to me too which is weird be I don’t write or read alpha fics but this seems to be a thing now
09/04/2023 07:11
coffequeen
I’m glad she’s with Parker. that sebastion didn’t deserve her. purely selfish.
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
YAS!! YAS!! YAS!!! OMG IM JUMPING WITH JOY RIGHT NOW!! This honestly could NOT have worked out better ❤❤❤❤❤!! TY TY TY!!!
09/04/2023 07:11
Nilay Meryem Kamalı
Hello Rayne♥
09/04/2023 07:11
joesmama
this book is very straight
09/04/2023 07:11
badaregood
Great story and loving it 😊💕
09/04/2023 07:11
Isabella Nightshade
I really like the plot of the story so far and I'm really interested to see where it goes can't wait to find out
09/04/2023 07:11Jenn McGrogan
ok so I am seeing ppl questioning why Seb suddenly seeks Ray. here’s the thing, the writer touches upon something many I think ppl are missing. that he has been haunted about the way they left thing. the writer also touches upon how the mating bond works. his wolf has always wanted ray cuz her & her wolf is the other part of his soul. seb even wanted her all those years ago, but he let his mind cloud his judgment, when Gia told him she was pregnant. he also allowed for Gia to manipulate him sadly in an abusive way. all he knew was Gia & he let his idea of what love was blind him. that is obvious with the fact he couldn’t even believe his best friends when they tried to tell him the truth. some ppl can be so blinded by their idea of love(not to mention their lack of self love) & can let someone warp their minds so much that they will close themselves off from the truth. a soul mate is special. they’re one that completes you on a whole diff plane. when they enter your life you do not realize how distorted your thinking may have been. they are what you have been lacking. they make you face yourself. so I believe seb let his mind cloud his judgment & close it off from seeing & truly feeling that connection. Gia tech was a narcissist & messed with his mind. is it weird that it suddenly clicks right away? yes, but I think the writer writing in the fact that the one who got away could have been killed or hurt, put things into fast motion for him. what would take normal ppl years to realize until their paths crossed again, the character was put into a reality that made him face it immediately & seek her.
09/04/2023 07:11Katy Johnson
I'm loving this book I mean it's very interesting
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
wow, this just keeps getting better!! surprise after surprise after surprise 😁. It's Rayne feeling his death or his choice???
09/04/2023 07:11Yoo Seolbin
Woah, really.. I'm speechless right now :") It's so good that I want to cryy❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:11Bidemi Abayomi
Interesting story 👍
09/04/2023 07:11Patrice Berry-Avery
I love Parker, and I know Sebastian did Rayne wrong. But I'm going to be sad if they don't end up together😔
09/04/2023 07:11Dora Amanda Morris
I love this store. it has kept my interest. I have not stopped reading yet from start. I told my family to leave me alone I am reading.
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
this makes me wonder if the same thing happened to Edmund when he died?? what choice was he given?? Don't be selfish Sebastian, choose honestly.....
09/04/2023 07:11Ashley Lee
I love that Rayne and Parker are now mates! I also live how mature Sebastian is being about it. and the above comment about someone acting like your editor on whattpad is true I will do a screenshot and show you.
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
I wish humans had mates. God, it would make things ssssooo much easier for 🤣🥰
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
I love these glimpses into their pasts. it explains more of what happened and gives us a better understanding. thank you for that 👏❤
09/04/2023 07:11Anatali Aguilar
I really like the story it was really good, I think the writer should keep writing more stories in my opinion.
09/04/2023 07:11Lexi Moore
this is amazing
09/04/2023 07:11
Pitu Petru
I just love your story it’s amazing ,, I can’t wait to read more when you update the story
09/04/2023 07:11
Agrima Girish
A warewolf book with lots drama? YES please!
09/04/2023 07:11Lenitz Forrosuelo Cordova
ok i read it now thank you
09/04/2023 07:11Jean Occiano
I already love it lol 😍 the storyline is my cup of tea ❤️
09/04/2023 07:11
Sarah Nguyen
I like the story very much, it's very good and interesting❤
09/04/2023 07:11
Elizalalala15
hii author! Just wanna tell you that I love you and your stories❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 07:11
Sensa Gita
sorry...i found Gia at the party.. :D
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
I hope to hell she dies!!! but please let Sebastian be OK!!! after everything he's been thru, he doesn't deserve to die now 😔
09/04/2023 07:11Sensa Gita
chap 2...why Gina doesn't come to the party?
09/04/2023 07:11Mishy
this is a very excellent read - and I'm looking forward to what's next!
09/04/2023 07:11
Monica Lagunay
I've never really read this type of genre and by reading it now, I think I'm going to love this ❤️
09/04/2023 07:11Patricia Berry
I love this one I love this book
09/04/2023 07:11Vivi Bii
wow, this is a very interesting story that males me want to always read it, i hope this story is Made of the film series and spirit of working for the writer
09/04/2023 07:11kayla leslie
if this ends with her not with sebastian please tell me
09/04/2023 07:11Sayani Karmakar
Great work
09/04/2023 07:11Reader-284173
I have been thoroughly enjoying each chapter that you have written and look forward to reading book 2.
09/04/2023 07:11Angelia Weldon
she better not kill him and get away with her plan!! however, I have a VERY bad feeling about all this 😞
09/04/2023 07:11Mary Moncayo
I love it 🥰
09/04/2023 07:11
Elly Abriyanti
niceee
09/04/2023 07:11Sammy Ann
super goos book so far look forward for more
09/04/2023 07:11
Bitanya Bonso
Your story is amazing, and I got connected from wp.
09/04/2023 07:11Ashlee Madriñan
So nice! Cant wait to read more!
09/04/2023 07:11Ruby Lee
it's a good read
09/04/2023 07:11
crystal_miller75@yahoo.com
I purchased the chapter titled Awakening, but there is no content.
09/04/2023 07:11mariah Gutierrez
Omg this is amazing I can't wait to read more
09/04/2023 07:11
violet martinsen
sooo good! good work Author ☺️
09/04/2023 07:11
Skye Cooper
people are claiming that this is their book
09/04/2023 07:11cloudy_ mood
this story is soo good it was recommended from the editors and I can tell it was an amazing opening the messages
09/04/2023 07:11Skye Cooper
I like the story its really good
09/04/2023 07:11
Pine Pinace
echoing other readers, deeply disappointed. the title and plot are misleading. personally I expected to see a light alfa love story about sebastion and rayne love story. Parker is a friend that somehow becomes her mate...why tho :’( so much of misleading build up. If this is not a romance book don’t call it like a typical alpha romance book. call it rayne and Parker’s adventures into the supernatural world...
09/04/2023 07:11Mary Del Y Ramos
worth_reading
09/04/2023 07:11Anjar Sari Putri
nice story...
09/04/2023 07:11
Qween Evil
I like
09/04/2023 07:11Cmg27 G8
its so good you should read it
09/04/2023 07:11Inky the Squid
I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR! But I can't buy the rest of the book but I can tell that this book is going to be AMAZING
09/04/2023 07:11Agatha
love that story 😍😍😍😍😍 the plot twist is amazing. thank You author 😘😘😘
09/04/2023 07:11
Nightcore_Daycore
I’m not even finished with the story and I already like it!💖💖✨✨
09/04/2023 07:11
Ana Maria
Hi! This is a great book! I love this so much 💞💞💞💞💞
09/04/2023 07:11Nancy Cobbinah-Abban
interesting
09/04/2023 07:11Reader-987095
I am kinda hoping that when Parker passes in the future, maybe rather and Sebastian find each other because they are friends and make a go. and I do not mean soon I mean in the future. maybe they end together.
09/04/2023 07:11
Kyra
the story is quite interesting, but it is also quite descriptive when it comes to sexual intentions and thoughts and even actually sex. I do realise it’s to enhance the emotions conveyed and everything, but I must say if you were to lay off those details by a bit it would make the story a lot better in my opinion. Besides that, I believe it’s a creative story and a good one too.
09/04/2023 07:11Minenhle Mshibe
Hi Editor, just read your sample as asked. The book has captured my attention, I don't mind it really its enough romance and mystery to it. The characters are well stated and their development so far makes sense. I'm not sure what you wanted to hear Lol. But it's great, there is always room for improvement, but so far it's a good read. 😊😊
09/04/2023 07:11Iona Giesinger
love the book ! has a good plot line and flows pretty good 👍 its a very stereotypical werewolf story but everyone like a classic
09/04/2023 07:11Aaysha K
Hey... Sherill dilmore.... Excited for Ur new story.... Loving This... Superb work
09/04/2023 07:11Andy Kam
I look forward to following everything that will happen
09/04/2023 07:11Saniya Nabila
i love this story so much, its amazing ❤️🌼
09/04/2023 07:11Andy Kam
I look forward to following everything that will happen
09/04/2023 07:11Athanasia
So Cruel he slap her
09/04/2023 07:11Hilary Flores
Im a team sebastian, even though he did those things we all know that he's just blinded by love
09/04/2023 07:11Ashley Marie Ritniez
Hello! this book is amazing. I was really not quite fond od this kind of genre, but I find my self enjoying this book.
09/04/2023 07:11
