Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Natasha L Gray

    Very repetitive tells the same thing in every chapter like the writing is trying to figure out how to make the story longer but has no clue

    10/07/2020 04:30

  • Reegan Barton

    so far l have only read the first 4 chapters. I’m intrigued but also get a little lost with who’s profile we are reading from, I feel as tho this story is a little predictable but in saying that I could be wrong.

    10/07/2020 04:18

  • Bianca QB

    I love this story so much!!!

    10/07/2020 03:59

  • Kim Galbraith

    how do u get bonus coins

    10/07/2020 03:53

  • Noor Rm

    Good work I like thank for share it with me

    10/07/2020 03:39

  • Yvette Jara Peña

    I loved your story!♡

    10/07/2020 02:56

  • Nur Azizah

    I like this story💕

    10/07/2020 02:26

  • trizmikaela

    this is a good story i really like it i'll finish it💗

    10/07/2020 02:22

  • DARK

    this is so amazing and very good i love it❤️❤️❤️

    10/07/2020 02:15

  • Natasha L Gray

    This story is good but it's too long and drawn-out

    10/07/2020 01:40

  • Ree Noomaara

    An interesting and captivating story. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it and look forward to its sequel. Good Job!!!

    10/07/2020 01:30

  • Sofia Cruz

    Thanks for following me on Wattpad!! 💕

    10/07/2020 01:18

  • Philosophy 003

    Sebbie eh? Now that I know he doesn't like it, I will use it more. Being mates does not always garantee that the person will be happy right? I like the idea that he experimented, not wanting to lose time, cause everything is unpredictable. I started liking Sebbie, but as the cap advanced I decided that I like him but not as much as the beginning. (Men, not everthing its about sex) Sebbie how are you so blind? Guy with a good position + Girl + sex = she wants him because of interest, not love.

    10/07/2020 01:02

  • Elizabeth Nauman

    this story is really good so far. Definitely going to finish it.

    10/07/2020 01:01

  • Karen Meneses

    thank you for look for me um wattpad

    10/07/2020 01:00

  • Karen Meneses

    i love your story

    10/07/2020 00:59

  • zuko 22

    iťs cool the history, I like it

    10/07/2020 00:40

  • Maylin Hoog

    Arianna is cool. I liked her and hat Wilson the Alpha very much

    10/07/2020 00:20

  • danielle grace

    love the story!

    10/06/2020 23:55

  • LATIFA LATIFA

    Good story that I loved💙🌸

    10/06/2020 22:27

  • Becca Santa santa

    it's amazing , i love it

    10/06/2020 22:26

  • dark_shine

    hi... finally i can read your story it so great

    10/06/2020 22:13

  • Lyka Martizano Mier

    I love the story line...

    10/06/2020 21:29

  • AdindaTang

    keep writing. I like your story❤️

    10/06/2020 21:07

  • A_S_L_

    That’s great I arleady love Rayne so much ❤️❤️❤️

    10/06/2020 20:32

  • OMI_ OMI

    i can say that Bredgite became a good person ❤️

    10/06/2020 18:32

  • Tjmom Maya

    she been through so much , to have a happy life with Parker but with sabastian it’s mixed feelings? I’m still reading and want to know what he will do . to get her as his .

    10/06/2020 18:29

  • OMI_ OMI

    i really feel sad for ray😭 why Sebastian acting like trash i want to stabbed him 😤

    10/06/2020 17:53

  • Moody Bbg

    love the story!! good work! ❤️❤️

    10/06/2020 17:18

  • ʙi ᴍᴇss

    this is awesome ❤

    10/06/2020 17:12

  • Killernuel 1308

    This story is amazing I can not stop reading this such an amazing history

    10/06/2020 16:53

  • snezana trtica

    i like it!

    10/06/2020 16:53

  • Adilene Noriega

    ❤❤

    10/06/2020 16:45

  • shada fedriga

    first chapter so good🔝

    10/06/2020 16:45

  • Anna Whyte

    I was recommended from wattpad and I was gifted some coins to read the first few chapters and I was going to continue reading when I had funds available but I only read romance novels, I thought this was a paranormal romance novel and it's not my place to say but you should probably turn it into one with sebastian and rayne being together. Thank God I read the comments or I would've continued only to be sorely disappointed. In terms of the actual story, plot twists are nice but you have too much. The fact that Sebastian left and then has a child five years later when you expect them to have started working on their relationship is sad. And then they're not gonna be together in the end. Also if she isn't going to end up with Sebastian then this shouldn't have included his POV. You could've started with Parker's POV until he met rayne. And based on the preview of your second book that seems to be a romance novel. Is it? I suggest you drop another character in Sebastian's place and modify this story for him and rayne to be together. Trust me I have read thousands of books and you had a great intro and your book could be a bestseller one day if the expected couple ends up together. Yes it is very cliche but that's what most of the audience wants. As a writer you need to please your audience first and then when you're established you can diversify into new areas. A lot of persons probably won't read your second book because you left them hanging on this one. Once again it's a lot of work but I suggest you modify the plot for Sebastian and Rayne to be together. There are too many bad things going on in the book already (Rayne's abuse, Alec's death...) for it not to have the ending most persons would have wanted

    10/06/2020 16:43

  • yasmine benkaddour

    I love the third chapitre so bad. it's amazing ❤

    10/06/2020 15:49

  • Gruffinfuck

    i really like it.

    10/06/2020 15:32

  • ITOBWG

    I loved the first chapter ❤️❤️❤️

    10/06/2020 15:28

  • MinRai Oliver

    I just got stuck in the first chapter.

    10/06/2020 15:23

  • Julia Jankowska Jankowska

    A realy interesting story, I got into it from the very first chapter. Of course, there are minor and almost imperceptible mistakes, but this is on of the most original stories I have read. A well-created world, and irreplaceable heroes who won my heart. Full of amazing and exciting events. Fast action and an ingenious story made it impossible to tear yourself away from reading until the very end. All in all, this is one of the best books nad I sincerely recommend it. Julia Jankowksa, author ,, Las " and ,, Anioł Śmierci, Wybrana " on Wattpad. Name: jj26320

    10/06/2020 15:05

  • Tjmom Maya

    it’s a wonderful story making me cry but it’s very good .. okay going back to the story 🥰

    10/06/2020 15:03

  • Reader-635799

    love it

    10/06/2020 14:52

  • Vy Vy

    a great story! I feel it is wonderful

    10/06/2020 14:50

  • Rabbie

    Very good story, thank you ♥ ️

    10/06/2020 14:45

  • iratti est

    😍😍

    10/06/2020 14:40

  • Houda Louis

    It's a amazing story i'lovet so much 😘😘😘😍❤️

    10/06/2020 14:25

  • Wilyaris Oquendo

    it’s so good!! i read a chapter and I’m already in LOVE with it i love Alpha and Omega stories I recommend it it’s the best story ever❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💓

    10/06/2020 14:22

  • Jeon Hanna

    Hi, Author. I was asked to review your story. I loved your story, that's good! but unfortunately i don't enough coins to read it more.

    10/06/2020 14:22

  • GraceShee

    Hi! Author. I was asked to review your story although I'd love to continue it, I sadly do not have coins to do so. Since I am here on request, I'll get right to the point. i've only read the first 3 chapters I think? I find the story very engaging and honestly well written. I have heard that this has a love triangle and I would have absolutely loved to read it, even if I really dislike love triangles since there's always a broken heart at the end of it. To me your story seems to be doing very good, but the first thing that caught my attention is that your story is straight to the point.(Not that it's a bad thing) Don't worry though this is only based on the three chapters so I can't say for sure. I also find it a little bit fast paced? at the start but when you got to the third it came down a little since Ranye met Arianne. Also regarding the descriptions of their appearance at the start I'd say they look a little bit excessive but it was smoothly done. Not sure if you could call this a review, but sometimes I get lost amidst the paragraph since some of them are too long. My suggestion would be to–at least–cut off the super long paragraphs and separate them when it gets too long. That's all I can say, too bad I can't continue reading. Thanks!

    10/06/2020 13:58

  • ghen gonzales

    The story is interesting and I love this story so far.I just started reading.😍😍😘

    10/06/2020 13:52

  • Eve Par

    Hey! it's a good begin of story !! It's amazing, I Hope you will have sucess with this story!❤️😊

    10/06/2020 13:47

  • Leica Anne Mores Baingan

    ❤❤❤❤

    10/06/2020 13:34

  • Hân Lý

    i love your story so much amazing

    10/06/2020 13:25

  • Kira Colby

    hey this book is amazing, I love it

    10/06/2020 13:22

  • Anisa Septy

    Hello I love this story. The first time you showed me some chapter of the story on Wattpad and I thought it was a really cool story

    10/06/2020 12:56

  • Promity Islam

    interesting story . 😍

    10/06/2020 12:45

  • Riley Bruner

    I love this story so far. The characters all have depth and the love triangle seems very well put together. The overall story, as well is well written, organized, and very thorough in regards to the story and the backstories! I look forward to finishing this book and reading more that the author has to offer!

    10/06/2020 12:37

  • Alexis Rupinta

    Interesting Story❤️ I love it🤗

    10/06/2020 12:25

  • Fanny Azzahra

    this story is really good and I luv it. So far so good❤ I would love to read more of it

    10/06/2020 11:55

  • Reader-256918

    I don’t have insta, will the next book show up here?

    10/06/2020 11:49

  • Ririn Aryani

    this story is really good.. 😀😀

    10/06/2020 11:24

  • Eduarda Celestino

    It's so good!!! 🤧😍

    10/06/2020 11:14

  • Nicole MJ

    sorry but I'm not going to paid for a story I don't even know if it's finish or not.

    10/06/2020 10:55

  • Unniecorn

    i like this story💜💜

    10/06/2020 09:45

  • kaiyne

    l love it!!❤️

    10/06/2020 09:18

  • Hà Kim

    it’s a really nice story. My english is not very good but I can understand the story and I love the way it was written. Moreover the author is great and adorable.

    10/06/2020 07:20

  • Farah Riri Dwi Nerisa Ariana

    I got to know this story from wattpad. This story is very good, I read it too feel. Come on read

    10/06/2020 06:46

  • kaliya1d

    cool

    10/06/2020 06:46

  • Farah Riri Dwi Nerisa Ariana

    I got to know this story from wattpad. This story is very good, I read it too feel. Come on read

    10/06/2020 06:46

  • Alex Allison

    i feel like because of the title of the book its her mate, buw what happend to him, how did he lose all his memories....

    10/06/2020 06:24

  • Quenn_gcalth

    This story is so great

    10/06/2020 05:01

  • Akira356

    🥰🥰

    10/06/2020 03:26

  • tell me a story

    I started reading this from a Facebook ad. It was captivating. I am not sure if I want to continue reading the story. it is drama filled with interesting characters. Character development was great! I had a little trouble with the flow..the POV would change and I wouldn’t know it had changed till I re-read it to follow the story. I am not sure if I want to continue because the story is very drawn out and seems to go in separate directions. Sebation and his sister could have had their own book as well as Raybe and Parker. it felt like 2 different stories and waiting for them to combine was taking to long, the instances when they were all together and created a story together felt short and was like a “cameio” in a movie or 2 shows coming together for an episode. The chapters are short and having to spend more money on a novice story than a professional author isn’t working for me. I don’t mind spending money to support a beginner writer, but I don’t want to spend $20 to read an unedited version.

    10/06/2020 02:51

  • Ana Karina Soto

    Hello I love this story, when you showed me some chapters and I read them your story I thought your story is very cool.

    10/06/2020 02:51

  • Vellinka

    Finally I have time to read again 😭😭 Damn school project.....

    10/06/2020 02:46

  • Dark Maiden Light

    i expected good, and I definitely got good! well done!

    10/06/2020 02:09

  • Reader-519211

    First, let me say for your first book, well done. I read the whole book through to the end as I became invested in the characters. I felt that each character was well developed and the plot interesting. My only criticism is actually hopefully a pointer as you work on your future books: there is quite a bit of redundancy in describing the plot, one’s feelings and thoughts etc. Too many times I wanted to say, “I get it already!”. I don’t feel that a rehashing of things in every chapter is necessary or even assists in ease of reading. So please take these statements to improve your future work, as I’m sure you have a bright future in writing! Thank you for the entertainment!

    10/06/2020 01:56

  • Condori Fernanda

    I loved this very good 👌

    10/06/2020 01:34

  • Rachel Williams

    i wanted sebation and ranye togather this sucks good in the beginning but will be moving on to another story sorry but will not pay for the rest of this book

    10/06/2020 01:34

  • Carrie Massee

    I'm getting frustrated 3 times it has over charged me for chapters

    10/06/2020 00:50

  • EgyptianHaler

    sounds promising! so far so good 👌👍

    10/06/2020 00:02

  • vanillaqween

    Its kinda interesting. I would love to read more of it ! 🌟

    10/05/2020 23:38

  • LittleWisteria

    Love this ❣️ excelent job

    10/05/2020 23:19

  • Andoo013

    The book is very interesting and the way you write is absolutely excellent🖤 Congrats!!!

    10/05/2020 23:06

  • Zatch162

    I really love the way you write ♥ ️

    10/05/2020 23:02

  • ValuQueenUwU

    The book is very good, you have a great talent to express yourself in words, and an incredible imagination. I am admired ♥😉

    10/05/2020 22:35

  • Madalena Lena

    😍

    10/05/2020 21:23

  • Alyssa Moreno

    came from watt pad i really love the book 😋

    10/05/2020 20:54

  • Hanna García

    This book is amazing! It's very interesting from the beginning! ❣️

    10/05/2020 20:30

  • Baek Hyun

    I love this book a lot📘♥yaeh very good story good job I like it😁♥♥♥

    10/05/2020 19:52

  • Nalien Wessels

    definitely good writing, the scenes are intriguing and empowering that Rayne is going on the path she chooses and not one chosen for her

    10/05/2020 19:51

  • park teako

    so beautiful, i love it ❤️

    10/05/2020 19:27

  • lonely noodle

    i love this book alot😳🖤

    10/05/2020 19:25

  • Sophie Nindl

    i Love your writing style!!!!❤️

    10/05/2020 19:19

  • Lola Belladonna

    who is Connor?

    10/05/2020 19:17

  • Fardha Maulidya

    Very good story !!

    10/05/2020 19:15

  • kunaiz

    I'm loving the story!!

    10/05/2020 18:54

  • thortuwr10

    i think it will be a good story and i like Rayne's assertiveness

    10/05/2020 18:52

  • lavender

    So good. There were some scenes and stuffs that I did not expect and it's interesting.

    10/05/2020 18:24

  • Tirza Inzaaliza

    hai. done to add this book to my library

    10/05/2020 17:58
1234567891011121314151617181920212223242526272829303132333435363738394041424344454647484950515253545556575859606162636465666768697071727374757677787980818283848586878889909192