Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Nantsin Berry

    cute

    10/05/2020 17:56

  • Matilde Guarnieri

    beautiful

    10/05/2020 17:36

  • XXX AURORA

    oh god I'm basically addicted to this book

    10/05/2020 17:17

  • Dahlia Moua

    Nice beginning ! Love Rayne's personality

    10/05/2020 17:16

  • Kailah Shepherd

    I wanna read more , this is getting so good I don’t wanna put it down !

    10/05/2020 16:46

  • An:.:.:.

    I couldn't stop reading, it's great, thanks for recommending this story to me

    10/05/2020 15:44

  • SpiritAnimal IsAPig

    It’s a really well thought out storyline and definitely would read more if I had the money. Could use some work on the way you explain things, like the first chapter explains a lot in so little time and the sort of cliche mirror description could change or something. But over all the story is great and Arianna is by far one of the best characters in the story.

    10/05/2020 14:47

  • Inesha Veillard

    This was so good!! I love how Rayne did not stay with a man that does not see her self worth!

    10/05/2020 13:38

  • Calista Lee

    i like the story, but its so sad, i dont have much money😢 sorry for my english guys

    10/05/2020 13:32

  • Thurgashini Selvasingam

    love it !!!

    10/05/2020 13:25

  • Jordan

    review at the request of the editor; I’d like to start off and say that this book from what I’ve read in the first three chapters could be seen as very predictable. you’re given the basic outline of how the book will generally unfold in the first couple paragraphs as well as a lot of background information on the main character a little too early. the general delivery of this book in form of its descriptive language is very good, but also quite common in the way that the author will describe everything about a character in one paragraph whereas it could be divided into multiple. one of the two major issues I have with this book (from what I’ve read) is the sexualisation of seventeen year olds. technically speaking all of the characters that have been presented - from what information has been provided surrounding thier age - are minors, this is illegal where I come from (I don’t know about you) and should be visited/edited promptly (including the sex scene under the stairs). the last issue I present with this book is the lack of body/figure diversity. so far all the women have been described as “curvy” with “tight fitted clothing, nothing left for the imagination” (again, heavy hinting on minor sexualisation). same with the men, all described as tall and muscular. are there any thin women/men? any plus sized characters? the use of body diversity in stories can be very helpful with real world body positivity in readers and can also attract a larger audience.

    10/05/2020 13:24

  • Nayeli Elizabeth Rojas Urrea

    look at me here

    10/05/2020 12:25

  • Nayeli Elizabeth Rojas Urrea

    hi hi!! i came bro

    10/05/2020 12:23

  • Raka KMB

    I like this!!

    10/05/2020 11:26

  • Nanyeongwonhan Neouipiteopaen

    My friend told me about this story and what I think about. And the story is sooooo good that I wanted read more but i have no coins soo cliffhanger. the way the story is delivered is sooo captivating makes the reader see/imagine easily what the author describe. 💯👍👌👌

    10/05/2020 10:55

  • mechelle riley

    I payed for coins to read a book but waiting on a couple to get together. that never happened will not read the other books was a real let down. I don’t care if he gets to have a new mate in the next book he already had one.

    10/05/2020 10:21

  • Hana Oriana

    your story is good, but actually i don't really know weather to continue or not, because I don't really like stories in english language, hahahaha forgive my brain that gets hot quickly

    10/05/2020 10:12

  • Spiritualis Physicus

    Im just here to make a review at the request of the editor. The story isnt my cup of tea but I can see why some people would like it. I'm not a big werewolf fan but have read a couple of werewolf books and I'm not above mature content but I felt this one was a rather aggressive and sexual in the beginning. I don't think I'll finish the story but don't give up on it.

    10/05/2020 08:50

  • Ann Parker

    That was amazing, I absolutely loved reading it I was on the edge of my seat, it also have a lot of humour when she was explaining her sister, thank you for sending me so chapters to read I really loved it your an amazing writer xx

    10/05/2020 08:49

  • Raneem Art

    amazing good work

    10/05/2020 08:47

  • Issis

    It's an amazing story, I really loved it, thanks for recommending it to me by dm.♡♡

    10/05/2020 08:33

  • dwi mahaayanti

    I just can say it's good story, well I am picky reader actually sorry for this kind of story I'm not in to it then I will not continue to read , you have good move to make me read your story, but sorry dear I have different tastes. hope u have good luck for your project and always be happy

    10/05/2020 08:32

  • Suri Miyati

    it's a great story, thanks for recommendation. detail in every part so 👍

    10/05/2020 08:04

  • ruin alien

    I’ve been loving this since you sent me one of your chapters😍 this is so good!❤️❤️

    10/05/2020 07:31

  • Cadara93

    thankyou for the recommendation. good story 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 i added to my library👍🏻

    10/05/2020 06:35

  • Pikulove3421

    this story is really amazing,I am just seriously loving it...

    10/05/2020 06:28

  • cursednicole

    thank you for the recommendation. the story is really good to read new things 😌

    10/05/2020 06:19

  • syamimi mimi

    I love it... I like the story cuz sometime I can feel it into the story... I like the line... Lips in deep red and blue eyes...

    10/05/2020 06:10

  • i_don't_know_

    I've loved what I have seen so far thanks for sending it to me

    10/05/2020 05:43

  • Na Tra Ngao Bính

    the story is very good 👍👍👍👍👍

    10/05/2020 04:59

  • Azul Lopez

    I loved i've seen, it's very cool

    10/05/2020 04:58

  • Widi Antari

    the story is very good, thank you for my dm

    10/05/2020 04:55

  • Hael Eam

    Love Love! it’s been good. Thank for the recommendation. 😊

    10/05/2020 04:41

  • Radita Meilariza

    it's been so good. love!!

    10/05/2020 04:17

  • Danda Glang

    i came from wattpad, thanks for dm me i love this story 😊❤️

    10/05/2020 04:06

  • Jerika Garde

    Heyyy I came from wattpad and I've read the story till 'sunshine from California' episode and it's a cliffhanger 🥺. too bad i don't have any coins left, but it's a reallllyyyyyy great story! i hope you make more like this 🥰🥰 thank you for the dm and free coins. I'd definitely recommend this to my friends

    10/05/2020 04:04

  • Cindy Cueva

    I'm from Wattpad too, and it's been so good. Thank you for the recommendation:)

    10/05/2020 03:39

  • Meera Dandekar

    Liking Sebastian!

    10/05/2020 03:13

  • Yvanna Lynett

    thanks for dm me

    10/05/2020 03:05

  • violet martinsen

    Love love LOVE!

    10/05/2020 02:55

  • Heather Patterson

    Hey thanks for the book recommendation this book is pretty cool so far, I'm HeatherPatterson from Wattpad by the way can't wait to read more, I'm normally not into the werewolf thing but what I did have time to read, I'm thinking they aren't as bad as I thought, keep up the awesome work, can't wait for the second part! :) Stay safe!

    10/05/2020 02:54

  • Ellysa Agnes

    hey thanks for dm me

    10/05/2020 02:46

  • Meera Dandekar

    Started out strong! Loving it right now.

    10/05/2020 02:45

  • Re Iruna

    Hi, thank you for your dm on wattpad... Your story is interesting, keep going it's good ^^

    10/05/2020 02:45

  • Amelia Paredes

    Hi i came for wattpad, and honestly i love the story, i like this type of novels or books

    10/05/2020 02:26

  • Patricia Rogers

    I loved it up until the chapter titled hope and darkness. I'm no longer interested in this anymore. I prefer paranormal romance novels. this began as one and then went sideways and weird. lost my interest. shame...would've kept paying to read it if it were a romance novel.

    10/05/2020 02:19

  • Nellie Villaver

    hi i came from wattpad you invited me and this story is so adicted and a wonderfull story love it and thank you for inviting me

    10/05/2020 01:58

  • ra ni

    came from wattpad! it's an amazing story and I love it! Thanks a lot for inviting me!:))

    10/05/2020 01:50

  • Alejandra De La Torre

    Hi! i come from wattpad, you contact me, its really amazing the story!!

    10/05/2020 01:14

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    c

    10/05/2020 01:00

  • Alejandra Naomi Martínez cruz

    :00 It's great! It is very incredible, I like it a lot, it is something great since there are moments that really catch you.

    10/05/2020 00:59

  • Kat Love

    this story is addicting

    10/05/2020 00:58

  • Tiana

    It is a really good story!

    10/05/2020 00:51

  • It's Pinky

    Thanks you again!! Its really amazing story!!

    10/05/2020 00:29

  • Pretty Guardian

    I’m really loving it! hey, I’m from Wattpad too 💖

    10/05/2020 00:14

  • Cynnedie-Anne Audate

    Thanks a lot for invite me reading your story😍

    10/05/2020 00:01

  • Maylin Hoog

    Oh Gia is really terrible but i like Sebastian

    10/04/2020 23:42

  • Maylin Hoog

    I'm from Wattpad too. Thank you for the coins. Poor Rayne and I don't like the Alpha and bis daughter...

    10/04/2020 23:32

  • roaa is overthinking

    love the story im afraid i can't continue it no more coins n im broke lmao

    10/04/2020 23:16

  • Devil's BbyGrl

    thanks for DMing me on wattpad and giving me coins ☺️ sorry for the late the late thank you

    10/04/2020 22:53

  • April Foreman

    good book

    10/04/2020 22:34

  • Bella wolfie

    i just stared reading this story and i can already tell it will be a good story to read.

    10/04/2020 22:20

  • Maumau Marcelo

    I'm sorry up to chapter 7 I can read because on the next chapter my coins is not enough but your story is great good job!

    10/04/2020 22:12

  • Maumau Marcelo

    "sebbie" cute name 😊

    10/04/2020 21:52

  • Lais Gaby

    I came from wattpad and I loved the story and it is certainly classified as paranormal story ,i am really thankful

    10/04/2020 21:51

  • Maumau Marcelo

    the story is good and interesting I LOVE IT!! 😊

    10/04/2020 21:46

  • Johana Campoverde

    very good the book I love You your book ❤

    10/04/2020 21:40

  • Yamini Joshi

    I wanna read this story fully but I can't buy the coin can I read this story anywhere else where there is no coin. I really loved it this chapter had me in tears

    10/04/2020 21:39

  • Schaima Badra

    I came here from Wattpad ~ and I have to say that I really like ~ almost love ~ what I've read about the book so far. I think that if I would read the book further I might start to truly love it cause in my opinion the chapters are wery well writen! ♡ ♡ ♡

    10/04/2020 21:01

  • Dellaceyyyy

    so I'm from wattpad brianna suggested it to me and now omg I love itttt❤️❤️❤️

    10/04/2020 20:44

  • Alexia Carmouche-Joseph

    very very good, I'm loving it!!

    10/04/2020 20:28

  • Reader-665940

    the story so far is really good and has got me captivated and wanting to read more

    10/04/2020 19:24

  • Bianca Koval

    hello, I came to read the story from wattpad.from what I read Its a really good story and it really had me hooked :D but I won't be able to continue reading it since I have to buy the rest of the chapters :/ still, it looks like a really good story, you should continue with it!!

    10/04/2020 19:12

  • Female Eijiro Kirishima

    this story is amazing!!!

    10/04/2020 18:37

  • Bianca Boarță

    all the books read was a she want to mate her soulmate and a he who is a tough guy

    10/04/2020 18:26

  • Bianca Boarță

    this is so good

    10/04/2020 18:23

  • Imaobong Bassey

    I came here from Wattpad to read this because I received a message directing me to. Unfortunately, I couldn't read the whole story. But already I can tell it's a very fascinating book, and that's just by reading the first three chapters! It arouses curiosity and I'm here wondering what happens at the end. I am really grateful for being given the opportunity to read this and I promise that as soon as possible, I will check out the whole book and other books written by the author.

    10/04/2020 18:22

  • Imaobong Bassey

    I'm really sorry that I couldn't finish this story because of the coins issue. But I can tell its a good story because it had me captivated from the first chapter, and not many werewolf stories can do that to me. I have taken note of the story though, and as soon as I am able, I will purchase the whole story.

    10/04/2020 18:10

  • fara

    good start and interesting story :)

    10/04/2020 18:06

  • Laura Maxwell

    walked not waked

    10/04/2020 18:00

  • Denisse Abigail Zuñiga Olivares

    oh god, is so intriguing i love it. it's a really good story, don't give up on.❤️

    10/04/2020 17:55

  • Laura Maxwell

    bond not bod

    10/04/2020 17:52

  • shelly walker123

    i love this book

    10/04/2020 17:52

  • Laura Maxwell

    diner not dinner

    10/04/2020 17:47

  • Laura Maxwell

    if you need me to tell you exactly wgere these are let me jniw

    10/04/2020 17:46

  • Laura Maxwell

    should be now not no

    10/04/2020 17:46

  • Laura Maxwell

    pulling

    10/04/2020 17:35

  • Laura Maxwell

    say not di

    10/04/2020 17:31

  • Laura Maxwell

    in a brutal way

    10/04/2020 17:28

  • Natalia Turbańska

    I like it🤙🏼💙😂

    10/04/2020 17:25

  • Laura Maxwell

    should be ‘shoulder’ not should

    10/04/2020 17:20

  • Laura Maxwell

    too many times had she ‘hoped’

    10/04/2020 17:10

  • Laura Maxwell

    she ‘had’ been heartbroken

    10/04/2020 17:08

  • Andrea Salas

    I liked it, it's very interesting and fun

    10/04/2020 17:02

  • Bangtan Army

    I read the first two chapters, I am probably going to read more when I have more time.

    10/04/2020 16:52

  • hiba_suga_stan

    i like this story ... continue❤🎼

    10/04/2020 16:38

  • Jessica Hepner

    I just finished this book, and I am happy with the way it went. I am glad Rayna is with Parker. Oh, I just realized the ending revealed Sebatians second chance mate that I guessed when first reading about her. I am excited to read the next books.

    10/04/2020 16:27

  • Erlina Permatasari

    👍👍👍👍

    10/04/2020 16:06

  • Lara López Carson

    thanks for letting me help you again :)

    10/04/2020 15:46

  • Nisa Bella

    I really like this story

    10/04/2020 15:41
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