Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments
Dnaguir Soso
the novel was recommanded to me by the author and im so happy to read'it
09/04/2023 07:10rabiatul adawiyah
I enjoyed it..I wish you could write more story like this
09/04/2023 07:10Yusuf Fashian Shodri
i love this story
09/04/2023 07:10Kate Angellou
totally nailed it!
09/04/2023 07:10
animem
honestly, all i can say is that the story was amazing, especially with the samples. it shows the background of Rayne and what happened to her parents in the beginning and shows character, and it was pretty good!
09/04/2023 07:10Bannabear1
I was told about the story by your Editor, and liked the story you guys are making. I hope with practise, I’m able to write clear stories as you all do.
09/04/2023 07:10Airien Himand Sewlal Rampadarath
hi im reading your story .is the best
09/04/2023 07:10Shadow Night
This is so much better than any cliche story! Amazing job,guys!
09/04/2023 07:10
Reader-501343
This story is absolutely amazing! I love how it didn’t follow the typical “mate” story line of most other werewolf stories. I can’t wait to start the next book ❤️
09/04/2023 07:10One Piece
Actually, this story is good. I know the Author have her own idea to make this story, how the characters leads have their owns choices. But I do have my opinions. I like this story but i don't like how the title and the story doesn't matched at all. Sorry, I'm Sebastian's team. I don't like how Rayne can deny her destiny partner. Don't judge me, it's just I feel it unfair for Sebastian. Everyone can make their mistakes, it's not like just Sebastian is wrong in the first place. Rayne is wrong too. She doesn't want a mate but didn't give him a chance to ammend for his mistakes. I just didn't how the story goes but overall, this story is very amazing with the author's own thoughts to make this story. 😊😇 By the way, someone share this link story to me and asked me to give this story a review. Here is my review. Sorry for my bad grammar. Wish u all the best for you next story. 😍😍
09/04/2023 07:10
Michelle Cadimas
its getting beautiful and beautiful to read!
09/04/2023 07:10Cathryn Minnich
crazy and addicting
09/04/2023 07:10Ines Guirati
Omg, that's the most amazing paranormal story! I love it, this is a great book, so let's continue!
09/04/2023 07:10Kassy Rodriguez
hi on watt pad I got asked to review your story by @1988MeridithAbbs as from the many comments I read on here I am guessing this is not her story. I just wanted to let you know because as far as I read it is a great book!! I dint want to help someone out if it’s not even their story.
09/04/2023 07:10Jean Solo
hehe
09/04/2023 07:10Ashley Chapa
I'm very interested in Monroe he sounds like a very interesting person cant wait.
09/04/2023 07:10Angel Candice
another douche on the list
09/04/2023 07:10FiaAyu _18
That was a really great story.. Oh my Gosh, I loved the way you desc your character here, you're good writer... keep going and be a professional writter... luv ya
09/04/2023 07:10Indah Widiarti
as far that i read in here is. it a good story, actually i'm not to fond to this genre, but still i enjoy it.
09/04/2023 07:10Eleine Garcia
Hmmm.. I'm sort of like to struggle Sebbie for having such a blinded eyes... It's very obvious that Gia girl is no good.. Argghh.. He is kind of giving weak impression for a male lead..
09/04/2023 07:10Charlotta Sjödin
first she got her black hair and green eyes from her father, then her mother??
09/04/2023 07:10
Melissa Scobee
so far it's a good book
09/04/2023 07:10FiaAyu _18
hay Dania, it's Fi, you made a good story... I love the way you describe your main character... keep going on Dan, you must be a pro writer here...
09/04/2023 07:10
Alexandra Dumitru
Cool plot
09/04/2023 07:10Sandra Winsby Berdu
likening the book but hate having to wait
09/04/2023 07:10Reader-786452
updating soon?
09/04/2023 07:10Angelia Weldon
Wow!! 2 blasts from the past!! that's awesome!! they both deserve it!! ❤
09/04/2023 07:10Honey Ignacio
Well, it’s about time Sebastion to show your mate your sincerity and regret for hurting her 5 years ago. Make the effort and show her you’re a changed werewolf 😜
09/04/2023 07:10Arlyn Paulino
Nice Story!! i love it continue writing🥺💖
09/04/2023 07:10Patrice Berry-Avery
We know who the other person is, and it seems she knows also.
09/04/2023 07:10Patrice Berry-Avery
It might be Wilson🤔 I thought I read he was killed, but in recent chapters it said he was banished. So confused😂
09/04/2023 07:10Mariah DiTillio
I have read some similar books and enjoyed them
09/04/2023 07:10
Monica Redmon
that’s funny how Sebastian found his mate naked with another guy because he had just gotten done banging Gia when he found Rayne in the beginning.... the rolls are reversed
09/04/2023 07:10
Louise Madalette S. Badal
Omg this the best ever and love it so much
09/04/2023 07:10Athanasia
Many people really hate Gia, Why they are envy
09/04/2023 07:10JaneMLove
this story is really nice UwU
09/04/2023 07:10Darksoul 707 UwU
It's good! I love this story
09/04/2023 07:10Leslie Harper
how do I get more couns?
09/04/2023 07:10Gabbii Martinez
I KNEW IT
09/04/2023 07:10
Meh_name_is_amelia
Hey, it's Amelia. I forgot to comment on here, but I just wanted to say that I'm loving the book and my friends are too, I'm hooked! ♡♡
09/04/2023 07:10
Mae
Team Sebastian!!!!. Honestly it's a verryy impressive book 💘❤.
09/04/2023 07:10Angelia Weldon
this story was freaking fantastic!!! i can't wait for His Redemption!!! love love love this book!!! ❤❤❤
09/04/2023 07:10Daniella Esquierdo
wow! nice story! <:
09/04/2023 07:10Teni Lismaya
nice story. I like it. you did well :)
09/04/2023 07:10lunar kiss
im kinda disappointed of how things ended:( if it wasn’t clear, i am team sebastion hehe
09/04/2023 07:10Athanasia
I really enjoy your story, i love it
09/04/2023 07:10•Prøud Mudbløød•
I love this book so much! It has really good detail to!
09/04/2023 07:10Jenn McGrogan
I’m confused is this a diff unknown character? I thought the unknown guy, didn’t know her, but she triggered some sort of memory for him. that he didn’t know who he was for 14yrs & what happened to him, but he was drawn to her due to the fact something about her made his mind sorta itch to remember things?
09/04/2023 07:10
Just me
Seriously i really love it. i'm looking forward for the next chaps❤
09/04/2023 07:10
Salsabeel Mohamrd
I really like the book it's really great
09/04/2023 07:10wuh.im.here
your Editor also sent me here! And IM NOT REALLY COMPLAINING! i might take some day off of Reading, but this is really good tbh!🥴
09/04/2023 07:10Lucy Loach
I think the stranger maybe a relitive like a brother she never new of or her dad
09/04/2023 07:10
Crazy Quinn
you gotta admit though..the way of advertising the story is great . Although a bit freaky XD
09/04/2023 07:10lunar kiss
nooooooooooo. i wanted to sebastian be rayne’s mates and fall in love whyyyyyy TToTT
09/04/2023 07:10
Ryleigh DuBrey
I love the story so far and hope the author keeps writing stories like this one
09/04/2023 07:10Jim_ Reci
I really like the way you write, I came here because your editor told me about this story, and I really found it interesting, keep writing, you are doing great work!!
09/04/2023 07:10
KatAlLouXoX
ur editor asked me to read this and I gotta say I am definitely not disappointed! this is a really great book
09/04/2023 07:10Mell Smith
i think this book is amazing so far of what i have read its so interesting tho i would have liked a little more actiln on the first few chapters
09/04/2023 07:10Lucy Loach
Love this chapter as it moves the story around nicely Intreged to see what her old alli is in help for and who means to hurt her
09/04/2023 07:10
Mohor Ali
amazing
09/04/2023 07:10One Piece
Actually, this story is good. I know the Author have her own idea to make this story, how the characters leads have their owns choices. But I do have my opinions. I like this story but i don't like how the title and the story doesn't matched at all. Sorry, I'm Sebastian's team. I don't like how Rayne can deny her destiny partner. Don't judge me, it's just I feel it unfair for Sebastian. Everyone can make their mistakes, it's not like just Sebastian is wrong in the first place. Rayne is wrong too. She doesn't want a mate but didn't give him a chance to ammend his mistakes. I just didn't like how the story goes, but overall this story is amazing with the author's own thought to make this story 😊😇 By the way, someone sent this link story to me and ask me to review this story. This is my review, sorry for grammar error. I'm not that good with english. Wish U the best for your next book 😍😍
09/04/2023 07:10Cari Jansen
please let me know when I can read the next chapter midnight and unwanted mates
09/04/2023 07:10Mohor Ali
amazing
09/04/2023 07:101800 weeb dot com
pretty good! 👍
09/04/2023 07:10Amanda Lea Palermo
I like the book so far but I think Sebastian is in for a surprise if he thinks his mate will accept what he plans to do. I hope she puts him in his place and rejects him before Gia does something stupid again
09/04/2023 07:10Tyshae Brady
Your book is absolutely amazing! Thank you so much for recommending it to me and letting me review it!
09/04/2023 07:10
Aveleen
Such a nice story ❤️
09/04/2023 07:10
Nataliaa_18
wow this book is called “her return mate” and the return mate doesn’t get to be with her I’m kind of disappointed I really love Parker and everything she’s done for Rayne and with rayne but I hoped for him to find his true mate and for Sebastion and Rayne to find their way back to each other. I guess! 😏😒
09/04/2023 07:10TC Choi
This book is great, although I just read the first few chapters, I think it is a fantastic book, keep it up!
09/04/2023 07:10
Min Sora
The story, the plot, The character every thing about this story is amazing
09/04/2023 07:10Jennifer Davis
love it can’t wait for more!
09/04/2023 07:10Adina Naomi Nyla
book is legit awesome still though. I'd consider it a win lose situation. cuz like someone's putting your book put there but they're claiming it
09/04/2023 07:10
Shane Ballesteros
I praised how the plot is getting at..good story by the way
09/04/2023 07:10
Dawn Ouimet
not a big fan of the last chapter prayers to the moon goddess. Sebastian never got to try and make thing right, even though he is her returned mate (the name of the book), Parker being her second chance mate was an even bigger disappointment then, Sebastian losing the option of making things right.
09/04/2023 07:10Vanilla_2198
Hello, I've seen a lot of comments saying that "editors" are sending samples of their stories. An username called MAHALIASTOEGERNOV27 sent me those exact words. They wanted me to review those samples and also sent the link for this story... Should I be worried and report them?
09/04/2023 07:10Vanilla_2198
today an username called MAHALIASTOEGERNOV27 sent me a frag of this story. she said she was one of the story's editor. I've seen a lot of comments about editors sending the first chapter and so... wanted to let you know and inform me if she really is one of the editors. should I be worried and report?
09/04/2023 07:10
Hiro_CM
love this story! don't listen to bad comments, you write art 💕
09/04/2023 07:10MissBea Haven
Love this story. It's hard to wait for updates. Happy that it is not the typical mush romance. Can't wait for the series. You are a great writer. Thank you
09/04/2023 07:10Reader-273693
why call it “her returned mate” if Sebation didn’t return to her
09/04/2023 07:10fritzy
I'm really liking this book!
09/04/2023 07:10
LyliaLazerWolf
So far I really love the story because it's both thrilling and interesting to read. Though my Ship didn't sail at Sebastion but it's still a very nice story and I can't wait for the next chap, I'm really excited about it already (*-*!!)
09/04/2023 07:10
Ivory001
i thought Ray rejecting her mate was the right choice at first 5 years ago, but now, I'm bot sure. If I didn't read is POV that is. Throuple? HAHAHAHHA NAAAAHHHH
09/04/2023 07:10
brybra723
Loved the book until Parker became Rayne’s mate.This could have been a really great book, but I won’t know the ending because I can’t get past that to continue reading. Both guys were bad but, to choose the possessive toxic guy over the selfish arrogant guy that was attempting to change was just bad for the story. Good luck on your writing, you have talent. I will definitely give another story you write a read, fingers crossed that the story line is better.
09/04/2023 07:10Pansy Rose
Thanks for the chapter 🌺🌺🌺
09/04/2023 07:10
Patty Pirog
I was very intrigued by the book and the writing, although I am extremely disappointed with the Moon Goddess, Mate piece. The title was very misleading, it made sense in the first 2/3 of the book but not in the reminder. He does not return to her in the sense a mate would. My disappointment is such it will impact any continued testing, which is truly a shame because the writing was good.
09/04/2023 07:10Pansy Rose
Nice work 🥰🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 07:10
Charline wanja Charline wanja
this book is dope
09/04/2023 07:10Pansy Rose
Past always return 🥺🥺🥺
09/04/2023 07:10
IzzyHouston79
I do not like supernatural stories but this caught my eye and I’m loving it💜💜💜
09/04/2023 07:10Vicki Trewella
Ooohhh I'm really pleased Parker is her 2nd chance mate... fabulous! can't wait for the next update!
09/04/2023 07:10Pansy Rose
🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 07:10Vicky James
I love this story thanks so much for updating fantastic writing can not went to see what happens next
09/04/2023 07:10Mary Brandenburg
this broke my heart. poor Sebastian. I was sure they would get back together. I don’t like Parker at all
09/04/2023 07:10
Valerie Kakoma
I'm already loving the first chapter
09/04/2023 07:10
Abigail Docchar
I'm so glad he changed his mind regarding his son. He may not be his by blood but he is in every other way that counts
09/04/2023 07:10Pansy Rose
But i still love it 😎😎😎
09/04/2023 07:10
Chloe Smith
Love this book it's the best one yet love the ending
09/04/2023 07:10Monisha Mayo
Very great story!!! Love how it is going!
09/04/2023 07:10Rose Marie
this is so good I hope you can on to make good stories like this again
09/04/2023 07:10Janice Ezell
the book is so good, but sad that I can not finish it, don't have the funds to buy more, on a fix income.
09/04/2023 07:10
