Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments
Yhannie Trese
thats so sad sebseb.😥
09/04/2023 07:09Rebecca Lassaline
is there a printed book? or is it only online?
09/04/2023 07:09
Jordan Garver
This is great book thanks for recommending it for me.
09/04/2023 07:09Laura Zd
I never read ameizing story like this,I don't have any words to speak about this story just everthing is ameizing only I can say in one word GREAT
09/04/2023 07:09
Nadia Briones
I'm here because of the editor named 238-adrian-oliver send me here, is he really the editor of this story?
09/04/2023 07:09Jessica Fawn Anderson
i love the story i just hate the waiting for the next one but i understand
09/04/2023 07:09Ellen Shazel
I think that the man is her father, but the woman I'm still puzzled on that 1
09/04/2023 07:09Pally Baltimore
this story is so annoying, you really irritate me. but good job I know it’s hard work
09/04/2023 07:09
BlackSambuca
is this in a ebook or somewhere else. id rather buy the book outright.
09/04/2023 07:09
Ivory001
my heart is just breaking reading this ML POV 😭
09/04/2023 07:09Jamilah Nurul
wow. very amazing story. annoying why just reading it now. a story that is very deep in my heart
09/04/2023 07:09Wendi Ellison
I can't wait for the next chapter.
09/04/2023 07:09Trayla Rose
it's a really good story with a great plot. I will elaborate when I finish the book.
09/04/2023 07:09
Wolf Heart
the story seems really good so far, I love the main characters personality and it’s written out really well. I love wolves and everything to do with them so this is a great story for people like me. I’m excited to read more!
09/04/2023 07:09Nicole Rader
Great Story
09/04/2023 07:09Nicole Rader
Great Story
09/04/2023 07:09Clear Vision
773_Lanette_Kobza another person tryna claim
09/04/2023 07:08
Kat Morris
can I buy this in paper somewhere?
09/04/2023 07:08Tanya Sterner
I am absolutely hooked. I can’t wait for the new chapters! I hope to see Parker find his mate and Rayne and Sebastian come together and she will give him a chance once she sees he has changed, but that Rayne and Parker will keep up with their bar helping the supernatural when they are need and that Sebastian steps up to help and open up more about the world he didn’t know existed.
09/04/2023 07:08
Bridgett
💔
09/04/2023 07:08
Tiffany
love this book ! Love how rayne is a badass
09/04/2023 07:08Reva
It's amazing, I love it .
09/04/2023 07:08Peace Tea
this story actually affected me emotionally, I just got sucked in an now I’m attached! very well written.
09/04/2023 07:08Thet
Not bad, good to read ... I think it will be interesting..
09/04/2023 07:08Bridgett
💔
09/04/2023 07:08anushka choudhary
this book is awesome and not some typical romance I love ittt🙌🙌❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:08
Winter_Storm
This is looking very great! I love the characteristics of Rayne and Sebastion and how different they are to others in there packs. Keep up the good work and remember to show not tell. Although, your already doing that very well!
09/04/2023 07:08Nicola Taylor Holbrook
are Rayne and Sebastian not going to get back together? I don't want to finish if not.
09/04/2023 07:08Inaya Mariyam
wow! the story is interesting!
09/04/2023 07:08
VkyRuby
This is so entising I love it
09/04/2023 07:08Shakelya Janay Reed
I wish I could buy the book or read it some where else
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-465029
This is one of the best well written stories I’ve read so far. I’m team Seb and I hope in the next chapters his human side continues to come out. Awesome story line
09/04/2023 07:08Maryrose Trinidad
Im so excited to read this, cuz the editor send me some chaps and i absolutely love ittttt!!!!
09/04/2023 07:08Asanion Adriana Breaks
hey author I just want to say that the chapters you gave me are GORGEOUS!!! I CAN'T STAND IT, IT'S haay *fall down the floor unconscious* 😵
09/04/2023 07:08Madonna Boyd
wonderful book so far.
09/04/2023 07:08Paulette Caceres
The truth is quite a compelling story, really great
09/04/2023 07:08
mwangui winnie
am loving it so far
09/04/2023 07:08Cecilia Christopher
it's good
09/04/2023 07:08Deannchris
mysterious man her father the witch still to bee seen
09/04/2023 07:08Lunarwolf24 *
I've only read 3 chapter but so far I'm hooked
09/04/2023 07:08
Keala Herman
great book
09/04/2023 07:08
Tracy Secord
the story is very good
09/04/2023 07:08Blank 00
It's a really good story😆😆
09/04/2023 07:08Paula Perez
good narrations but i hope u tone it down a lil bit. anw continue writing luv, it's a good book (so far) 😊
09/04/2023 07:08
Ko Ke
I liked your description of the characters💖 Thank you for your effort in writing All this, keep writing💜
09/04/2023 07:08Roxana Hernandez Garcia
the hell, what's the other demons obsession with Morty sis? he watched from distant and became obsessed? weird, like the drama tho. I think the ex alpha is trying to rid of her something about what she witnessed maybe?
09/04/2023 07:08selly kapweya
yay
09/04/2023 07:08
Au'Star_lie
your story is awesome can't wait to see what's next.
09/04/2023 07:08selly kapweya
this book excites me....
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-001708
I’m a bit questioning rashionality of this story. Ok it’s fantasy I get that. Now the goddess pairs two people... they don’t want each other ... so they lead separate lives after like 10 minutes encounter they had and never even got a chance to get know each other... Sebastian story is so depressing like his childhood friend turned lover is just completely fake person who tried to kill him. His son was introduced like not being his son but at the end yeah surprise, surprise the son is his own. Sebastian kinda rejected his mate but in the same time he did not rejected her so she could rejected him instead... and there is this Parker who has thinking about his true mate from very beginning of the book but he has not met her yet soo he kind of replace her with temporary mate 😂😂 Oh and let’s don’t forget about our heroine. She kinda manage to overcome all childhood drama, that’s cool. She kinda grown cold towards her fated mate, all understandable and then whe she thinks he is dead and she is like: oh I feel sudden emptiness and in the split of the second she is like hey I got new mate 🤣👍 that’s what I call let’s move on ...
09/04/2023 07:08Mariah Atwood
I love the slow burn of this story but I have to admit I hope that she chooses Sebastian they have both changed for the better and I think they would be amazing together a real power couple. she’s beta born if she got with the alpha there would be no stopping them
09/04/2023 07:08JJ Ace
As a reader and writer from WP, this isn't my kind of genre at all, however the book has a good flow in the few chapters I read. Its written well and has potential. But the fact there's writers out here asking for reviews is a little sad (considering I've got the same review messages from new writers more than once now.) All in all, hope the book does well, I'm sure many people in tje vampire and werewolf fandom will love it.
09/04/2023 07:08Jessica Shannon
ok so on in previous chapters rayne was ready to let Parker go once he found his mate but now that she has experienced Sebastians pain she was afraid she miscarried Parker’s child this is confusing. I even went back to read when she got pregnant in the first place didn’t find anything
09/04/2023 07:08Humz786
That was explosive! Wilson needs to be shot! Can't stand abusive men. Nice of Arianna to show some support to reyne. She needs all the help she can get. Hopefully seb will kill wilson or throw him to the wolves and humiliate him.
09/04/2023 07:08
Nova Alisia
That's a good story and I'll read it over a snack, the passion for writing the story. it's very entertaining.:)))
09/04/2023 07:08Shelby Semore
“Her retuned mate” Is a great romance to read with the many twist and deep plot to it. It even has some action and dark themes embedded into it to keep you on your toes and reading. And I just hope you will like the story just as much as me.
09/04/2023 07:08
Mina_015
Me gusta es interesante, la trama
09/04/2023 07:08Shelby Semore
“Her retuned mate” Is a great romance to read, it even has some action and dark themes embedded into it so you know you’ll never be left bored. This book is definitely worth taking a chance on and I hope whoever else reads this story likes it just as much as me.
09/04/2023 07:08
jj stars
i can't say a word! it's a very good story!!!
09/04/2023 07:08Vicky James
I love this story can stop reading fantastic writing can not went to see what happens
09/04/2023 07:08cielcat
Will you publish this in to a paper book after your done writing it? If so i would buy the book. But if you don't think you can or don't want to i understand I'll be sad but it's understandable.
09/04/2023 07:08Kassandra Joeliz
also the third POV can get confusing sometimes when the focus changes
09/04/2023 07:08Shirley Nicely
I do not like that you took his Seb. mate...I will stop reading this book
09/04/2023 07:08
Sandro Vargas
Beautiful
09/04/2023 07:08Kassandra Joeliz
this story is good but it should have an intro page or something where it explains the wolf packs and history before going straight into a story line. other than that it’s very good
09/04/2023 07:08
☆Lily_The_Reader☆
This beautiful! of all werewolf genre stories i've read, this one is the best! I love it!! Thank you for writing this Author-san!
09/04/2023 07:08
Eden Aqila
i really like the story. it's really my favorite syle of plotting, and it's written very neatly. i love this overall but sorry i'm only 17 so i kinda can't read the rest ;)
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-891469
is this going to be finished soon ?
09/04/2023 07:08Jennifer Reyes
i am soo happy! yay parker is her second mate. i didnt want her to end with sebastion. he only wanted her now because he found out about gia otherwise he would have never looked for her.
09/04/2023 07:08
Recklessjen
how often are new chapters uploaded??
09/04/2023 07:08
Karime Preciado
Sorry, this is just my opinion but I think the dialogue is a bit too formal. I've only read the first two chapters, though. I do find this book intriguing, and I want to know what happens next. I like the idea of Rayne possibly being Sebastions mate, and maybe if there is a plot twist. I'm not sure yet. Some of the ideas are a little overused, and expected. I hope to see more things that make this book different than all the other werewolf books. Keep up the good work!
09/04/2023 07:08Lucy Loach
Love the first chapter carnt wait to see what happens next
09/04/2023 07:08
North Rose 🌹
To all of my lovely readers, some one so kindly decided it would be a great idea to promote another author through me. While I support other authors and their writting efforts, it is VERY rude to do this to another author. Bad Boy please don't do this again. Thank you to all my reader for your feedback and comments. As always stay safe and happy reading.
09/04/2023 07:08mung bean
okay but im loving thisss
09/04/2023 07:08Sanda Sanda
Love it. You're an amazing writer xx
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-387982
I’m loving the story
09/04/2023 07:08Jada Williams
I was hooked from the first Chapter alone. Keep up the good work 👏🏾👏🏾
09/04/2023 07:08Roxana Hernandez Garcia
I think he should find the boys boy's biological father, see if he will take him. before he decides to keep him, he was not born of alpha blood isn't that a big thing in this world? How can he be heir to the pack? just curious poor kid
09/04/2023 07:08Jessica Shannon
I literally feel like Parker was robbed of meeting his first mate just because he was in love with Rayne. She had her opportunity to have a first mate and he didn’t smh poor thing
09/04/2023 07:08
Fox'sOnlyVixen
You said Rayne was the daughter of Wilson's old Beta. How does she have other parents then? And then you say Gia wore a skin tight dress. How does Seb pull her "barely legal skirt" up?? It's inconsistent.
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-311293
I think the werewolf is her father or is that just me?
09/04/2023 07:08Justina Eappen
In the last line of 5th paragraph you have gone from 3rd person's view to Rayne's point of view
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-116619
I know majority of the people are shipping Rayne and Parker but honestly... I can’t wait to see her get with Sabastian! After he works his ass off to get her to forgive him of course. I want Parker to be happily with his mate. I don’t think it’d be fair of him to reject her...
09/04/2023 07:08Roxana Hernandez Garcia
I love this story so far! I'm interested in this drifter... who is he to Rayne. could it be her father??
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-165572
when will the next chapter or book be ready?
09/04/2023 07:08Ana Anushki Shonia
wow I love it great job 🖤🖤🥺
09/04/2023 07:08Michelle Laird-Palmer
the book is really good who wrote this book is a really good writer
09/04/2023 07:08Widiya Astuti
this part is good, i like it
09/04/2023 07:08Rose SB
Loving the story. Glad or hope Gia is finally out of the picture. Hope Sebastion recovers and get his mate!!
09/04/2023 07:08Amii - Lavender
Hi! I love the book SO MUCH, I hope you keep up the good work! Hope you have lots of love, Salut!
09/04/2023 07:08Julianne Ruclane Nui
Team Sebastian!
09/04/2023 07:08
ace joker
it's really good so far I like it a lot.
09/04/2023 07:08Ela Bela
To verdie-bertus-1986 great reads here...thanks for suggesting these story it has been added to my library. though it may take sometime for me to read the rest of the lock chapters as am also trying to earn few cents. but sure it is interesting...
09/04/2023 07:08
Adrian Pawar
adrienna is close to my name
09/04/2023 07:08
Maddie Rodriguez
woops accidentallysent it twice but you get it
09/04/2023 07:08
Peedletuck
You asked for thoughts about Sebastian’s change of heart towards Jace. So that’s why I came to the comments, I have a lot to say on the subject. Honestly I have a hard time liking stories with children from past relationships. I was kind of surprised when he said to send him off with Gia, but not completely upset by it. I know it’s a harsh view because children are innocent, but the way I see Jace, he would be such a terrible reminder of the night Sebastian turned his back on Rayne. So not only does she need to forgive him for the terrible things he said, for choosing a woman who kicked her so hard she cracked her ribs and for staying with this woman for 5 years after the fact, never bothering to check on her. She will need to be a step mother to a kid that is not even his, and the baby he was so excited about when Gia told him in FRONT of Rayne. I get that Rayne didn’t want a mate. But her past abuse made her distrustful, and she felt like the only person she could count on was herself. Then she meets her mate, and he drove that point home, when he turned his back on her and chose someone else. No one had ever put her first. So if she forgives Sebastian, which I want to happen eventually, definitely not right away. She will be constantly reminded of the night she met her true mate and he, like everyone else, didn’t choose her. Every time she looks at Jace she will remember, he was the Ace in his mother’s pocket to pull Sebastian away from Rayne that night and it worked. It makes me mad that she will have to continue to be reminded of that every day if she goes with him. Again, I realize I sound like a jerk talking about a fictional kid like this, but this is why I don’t like children from past relationships in books. Having a child with someone is so special and it’s just one more first Rayne won’t have with Sebastian. Regardless of whether Jace is his or not, he still experienced having a family with someone else instead of her. What is left for her? He’s already done everything with someone else.
09/04/2023 07:08Angela Morales
Is Edmund the last chapter for now? That's the last one I can see.
09/04/2023 07:08Julianne Ruclane Nui
a second chance for mate which is Parker. i was hoping the Moon goddess would give Sebastian and Rayne a second chance! I really want them together to work it out and find their way back to each other.Despite that, I am completely loving this book.
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-237666
i am so upset, i really wanted Rayne to be with Sebastian, but i am excited to see what is next for him
09/04/2023 07:08Chimchim Wifeyyy
Somebody recommend me this in the wattapad this.. So far I like the story... Good job thanks #1974-ethyl-killmeyer 🌸
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