Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Asri Puspa

    hello, it's me "Keynarapark" from wattpad. I dwonload this app just for read your story. This story its really amazing and I love it. I'm enjoy reading this story and can't stop to read. Keep writing and do another great work. Fighting !!!

    10/02/2020 16:14

  • Heni Rahmawati

    Hi, I'm a wattpad user that you DM, this story is very interesting and amazing. I really enjoying the story you made. I love this story💕

    10/02/2020 16:12

  • Tanaka Gitta

    hello, i'm already read this chapter. you know, this story is really good. the way you write the atmosphere is so good and not make the readers get bored. I'm so happy that you tell me about your story 😊

    10/02/2020 16:00

  • Sharon Blackett

    ok so far I'm loving the story . its writing style is unique and even though it's a werewolf story ,the story line is different unlike some other stories. I also love that you included both of their point of views. thank you for the dm

    10/02/2020 15:57

  • Brenda Calo Gear

    it has kept my interest. But I am not willing to pay all that you want for each chapter when I can buy a whole book for that price. if you want anyone to read your books then make a price for the whole thing. I will discontinue my subscription. DONE

    10/02/2020 15:50

  • Rocket_94

    Hi! im one of the people you texted on wattpad, and let me just say, this is honestly a very incredible read, i love it alot so far, keep it up 👍🏻

    10/02/2020 15:39

  • Kumuro Tokia

    Hello! I'm one of the user that you message in Wattpad. The part you sent me was so interesting, so I had to check it out.

    10/02/2020 15:37

  • Savery Abbygail

    Hi! I'm the one of watty's user that you messaged. Finally I download this app, coz I'm interested to your story. I've just started it, and found that this story has its own style. Can't wait to finish it.💕

    10/02/2020 15:35

  • ahruaii 20

    hiiii i really like the way you write this....omega. verse in one of my favourite and will look forward to your update

    10/02/2020 15:32

  • S. G

    Hi, I'm the girl you texted me at Wattpad It's an amazing story, keep going, I can't wait to continue reading the other chapters. 👍

    10/02/2020 15:16

  • Esyp Sari28

    i love this story 👍🏼💓

    10/02/2020 15:08

  • BabyGirl_belen

    Hello!! I come thanks to your DM, this story Is amazing, thanks for the recommendation, good luck!

    10/02/2020 15:07

  • Pearlyy Guilla

    I am the girl you message on watty and here I am now reading your story and I like the flow of it because it’s not a cliche story. I hope you had a lot more stories to publish soon labyah❤️

    10/02/2020 15:04

  • Kristen

    This book is dope ngl

    10/02/2020 15:04

  • Nobody

    Hey, I'm the girl you msgd on watty and I just started this novel, I like that it's kinda different from regular werewolf novels so it seems like this is going to be one amazing book, I can't wait to finish it.💖👌

    10/02/2020 15:00

  • Aisyaeva

    Heyy ... finally i came to here ... thank you for your DM ... you know what? i want translate this story to my Bahasa (Indonesian) ... good luck, and do your best ... 💕

    10/02/2020 14:49

  • Rhyce Mckenzie L. Gammad

    Owemjii. I was looking for a book that's themed like this, and this is exactly what I am looking for. I guess it's gonna be an amazing story

    10/02/2020 14:38

  • Lunam Mabuda

    Just started reading it and it's really amazing. I will surely continue to read it.

    10/02/2020 14:19

  • An Chu

    Amazing story. Love it

    10/02/2020 14:08

  • Yana

    Hi! I'm the girl you message at watty it really caught my attention so I downloaded the app and I will surely continue to read it its really good I love it

    10/02/2020 13:37

  • lovelypotato5

    I just started reading, but your story is awesome and i can’t wait to see what happens to Rayne

    10/02/2020 13:30

  • xxfkaroid

    Look at this, I just read it a little bit, but from the start this story started to give a different impression from other stories, you know? it even seems like this will be one of my favorite works, even I downloaded this application because of you, really a very beautiful and good story, btw I'm the woman you sent a message from Wattpad, my username is @xxfkaroid, happy to be the one who reads stories interesting you made 💕

    10/02/2020 13:28

  • illgirl

    hey I'm illgirl from Wattpad, your story is amazing

    10/02/2020 13:26

  • Lima

    good book

    10/02/2020 13:16

  • Natalie Desierto

    hi!I'm the girl you message in watty! i love your story now hahahahah i just download this app because of you❤keep up the good work!

    10/02/2020 13:08

  • EvageParis

    so Wilson is dead, good. I'm hoping that the mystery man is Sebastian.

    10/02/2020 13:04

  • Chriss_45

    hello i'm umbra_noptii from wattpad I love this book is absolutely wonderful I still have to read from it but I am already very captivated by the book🥰

    10/02/2020 12:49

  • Bre-Ann Buckanan

    Hi it's skbp18 just add the book to my library

    10/02/2020 12:40

  • Geraldine Nicole Custodio

    hi congrats I'm the one you send me your chaps

    10/02/2020 12:37

  • Mary

    Heya, is BigMary01 from Wattpad, your story is amazing!

    10/02/2020 12:14

  • Tashia Mood

    hey!!! it’s ARMYYY2018 from wattpad !! I’m really glad your story got soo popular u deserve it!!!!

    10/02/2020 12:06

  • Colenggg

    hellooo!!! its me from wattpad!!!!! i really really love your story😊🥰

    10/02/2020 12:05

  • EvageParis

    no, Alec can't be dead. That means that Wilson won

    10/02/2020 12:01

  • perissologyy

    hi! this is perissologyy from wattpad! nice to see that your story got the recognition it deserved!

    10/02/2020 11:53

  • D Ana

    Hello!!! its me from wattpad. I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY!! even the first chapter was amazing. loveit!

    10/02/2020 10:44

  • EvageParis

    chapter 1 ended too soon, where's 2😂

    10/02/2020 10:10

  • Rotnaiseny Meulens

    love it

    10/02/2020 09:32

  • dhiadewi@yahoo.com

    hiii,i'm canplanrathavit from wattpad, i downloaded this app just for your story 😊

    10/02/2020 09:29

  • Julianne Denise Sales

    loveeee it❤️

    10/02/2020 09:14

  • Akiralicia

    Really good story !! the characters are endearing and the story is gripping !! love this is !! super writing skills 🥰🥰

    10/02/2020 08:37

  • Paula Ocampo Sinuto

    she just gave a 100 coins from Wattpad!

    10/02/2020 08:24

  • Lin Awan

    this great story!! I love it!!! 😚🌺

    10/02/2020 07:45

  • Lin37342

    I love this story! I want to read more but I don't have enough coins. Anyway, this story's amazing!

    10/02/2020 07:36

  • °•𝓲𝓽𝓼𝓤𝓷𝓲•°

    I really love this story!! 💕

    10/02/2020 07:28

  • Helixxx

    I downloaded this app just for your story. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

    10/02/2020 07:22

  • Dev Anggraini

    hey seriously this story is amazing you know and i like this ❤️❤️

    10/02/2020 06:04

  • Elizabeth García

    .

    10/02/2020 05:28

  • Katie Gamez

    omg I'ma have to read this book it actually seems interesting 😚💗

    10/02/2020 05:20

  • Lorena Cruz

    I have loved the plot of this book, all those details that are given are wonderful, I think you need to fix some grammar and punctuation errors, terrible for me! about the coins to keep reading, because I'd love to keep doing it; This Wattpad reader was delighted I hope you have great successes.🥰

    10/02/2020 04:57

  • Nana owouwu

    this story is amazing i love this seriously i love it very 💟👌

    10/02/2020 04:55

  • Meriga Anggini

    heiiii this is yeyyooooo from wattpad, i love your book and I hope your story will always be loved by many people💗💗

    10/02/2020 04:46

  • Andrea Colene G. Martin

    I love it! ❤ I'm from wattpad btw, the one with the username itzcolene? Definitely expect to see me on future chapters☺

    10/02/2020 04:31

  • Mafercontreras2

    I have read this chapter again and I still like it ❤️

    10/02/2020 04:05

  • Villaseñor Yaritza

    omg I like your book, I’m just start reading the 2nd chapter☺️☺️

    10/02/2020 03:53

  • Ariel Smith

    Your editor reached out and I was able to read to chapter 4. I love the shifting point of views. I love being able to peek into the thoughts of each character, even just for a moment. The story flows super smoothly and I’ve never seen mates portrayed like this, so the idea is super cool. I’m looking forward to seeing how Rayne and Sebastian clash.

    10/02/2020 03:41

  • Nikki Globus

    I thought Parker’s brothers name was Owen???

    10/02/2020 03:01

  • Oktorahyekim

    Hello, your editor asked me to review on your book. I'm writter and reader from wattpad. I started downloading and reading your story and i found it very interesting. Makes it quite difficult for me stop reading. I like this story and i think the story genre is appropriate, but i haven't read this story very much..

    10/02/2020 02:40

  • Randomister

    Hello! its me and i just to say, wow! im happy you introduced me to this app.And the first chapter is fairly good.

    10/02/2020 02:36

  • Rredrose

    I really am enjoying the story. love the characters. Rayne and Parker OTP, although I did secretly wish for some revelation between Sabastian and Rayne. i only had a few story confusions like the birthmark, everyone questioned the kid and this birthmark didn't come up till the truth was out? also Rayne memorized Ariana's # when the knocked out Sab, but then all the sudden she didn't cuz her business card was lost long ago but that's just me being nit picky pls don't take it wrong author all in all great story live reading it

    10/02/2020 02:30

  • Crushnick Red

    i got email to read this story too.. so far, it can't pull my curiousity in to it. so many sentences with 'he', 'she', 'his', 'they' as the begining it bothered me. its like you must walking on the stair when you could just slide down.

    10/02/2020 02:29

  • Five

    I really like it 💕💕

    10/02/2020 02:22

  • Krystal7

    this is an amazing book very well done I love it

    10/02/2020 02:22

  • Morning Fin

    the story was interesting untill it got to be bland and disinteresting in sebations part and was over all just not a fan. I can see the apeal but the begining wasnt enough to really pull me into the story and world you tried to create.

    10/02/2020 02:14

  • Angel Francisco

    Hi! Someone e-mailed me last time to read this story. Her Returned Mate is a good story although only 4 of the chapters I read. So far I am enjoying this although Werewolves aren't my favorite genre. This story is eye-catching, and when you start reading this you cannot stop it. :)

    10/02/2020 02:10

  • Silly Sam 26

    This. Was. AWESOME!! You can almost FEEL the emotion from the characters! Great job, and keep up the great work!! :>

    10/02/2020 01:49

  • Jascha Franchette Canama

    i love the story!! and I can't stop reading tho.

    10/01/2020 23:51

  • Daniela A.

    I just installed this app and I am absolutely loving this story 🥺⭐️

    10/01/2020 23:16

  • Iris Van der Kolk

    Why is het named Connor now? Wasn't his name Owen lol

    10/01/2020 23:15

  • Simran Bally

    your editor asked me to right a review on your book. I'm a reader and writer from wattpad. I started it purely because I was intrigued by the sampled chapter she sent me. I would be honored to write a review. I have just begun reading and I'm in love and paranormal is not usually one of the genres I read so congrats, you got me to download this app just so I could read your book.

    10/01/2020 22:52

  • Serenity

    I’m killing Sebastian. Who’s helping?

    10/01/2020 22:31

  • jackie guenette

    so far I am really enjoying this and your descriptive narratives my only qualm so far is to clean up the grammar errors and there are some spots where it appears maybe a missing word or 2 is happening which takes away from what your are depicting.

    10/01/2020 22:27

  • jackie guenette

    lmao karma once again Sebastián may be changed but he waited 5 years sorry not sorry for his rejection lmao 😂

    10/01/2020 22:22

  • Sarah Kohn

    I am already in love! Three chapters in and I already can’t wait for more of this!!

    10/01/2020 22:20

  • Serenity

    I love this book!

    10/01/2020 22:18

  • isitalaugh123

    I love this book it gives off a cold but hartfilled vibe to

    10/01/2020 22:15

  • Rosanne van Ziel

    i feel like when the moon godess said sebby could have a second chance, she meant it would be with Rayne. she don't say a second chance mate. so maybe a second chance with his first mate? Maybe they are destined to meet again as mates. would deffo like that😄

    10/01/2020 21:46

  • amber lister

    I Like it 🤍🖤

    10/01/2020 21:13

  • rania bouziane

    loveee it

    10/01/2020 21:06

  • Lilac Bop

    great story, and I’m looking forward for more!

    10/01/2020 21:00

  • keissy perez

    it's a great book. i only have read a little but is nmm kinda eye-catching. I'm going to read this and look for other books !

    10/01/2020 20:18

  • Katie Domier

    very good book. I'm happy that you are doing more books.

    10/01/2020 20:10

  • Georgette Boerner

    like story but not sure how I am to get coins in this

    10/01/2020 20:01

  • Aracelly Papas

    like the story :3

    10/01/2020 19:53

  • KCgames X.

    Hello, I revived a message from you on wattpad. And my friend also received the same message. We read the story together and we weren't vary entertained with it. We were vary lost and confused just my the first paragraph. There was no information at the beginning of the story. And we didn't know what time period this toke place in. No information about any of the characters. And bad way to start a book and or chapter. In our honest opinion not a good book. If you have any problems with my own opinion; Text me privately. Not in the comments.

    10/01/2020 19:46

  • black eye

    I love it 🤩🥰

    10/01/2020 19:31

  • bestfangirl07

    i read it all day. It's really good! great job!

    10/01/2020 18:14

  • Savage wolf

    I love the book😁👍🏾

    10/01/2020 18:10

  • Scooby

    Really good book. Werewolves arent my favourite genre of books but i like this one so far

    10/01/2020 18:09

  • Cessy Lynn Lee Ocampo

    i love it😍😍 im enjoying reading this.

    10/01/2020 18:09

  • Serenity

    Honestly I’ve loved it since the preview I was gifted with. This book is amazing and I’m not just saying it, I really do mean it.

    10/01/2020 17:42

  • ancient_Moon

    I like it ✌💞

    10/01/2020 17:30

  • Reader-472752

    it is so good!

    10/01/2020 17:14

  • Nana_3018

    It's so very good it's captivating and the narrative transport me at the place and what's happening on the moment The history catch me so hard

    10/01/2020 16:58

  • Janet

    Now I will read your story and I will review soon 🖤🖤🖤

    10/01/2020 16:40

  • Serxeim

    I absolutely love this story ,keep up the good work. 🥰

    10/01/2020 16:27

  • jackie guenette

    love this so far also glad that Sebby got a taste of hisnown karma 😋

    10/01/2020 16:00

  • mismackenna

    POTENTIAL SPOILER WARNING. Great style of writing, nice way of portraying emotions and describing events. However, there were so, so many grammar and spelling errors throughout the story. Moreover, I felt very deceived with the direction the story went into, particularly the love story bit. If you advertise it as a love story between two characters and your blurb heavily focuses on that, why would you back off this story line? If the story was about shaping the life the way the MC wanted it to be after finding out who her mate was, then why not say so? I understand that you wanted to address toxic masculinity and show your character wouldn't give into that. However, if you advertise a story and imply how it would go, but then go the opposite direction, then that's kinda deceiving. If you mentioned a love triangle of any sort in your blurb, then that would be understandable. I wanted to read this story because I'm fascinated by fated mates in werewolf mythology. The part of breaking off the original bond and mating her with the other guy she wanted to be with seemed like such a convenient way of getting out of a dead end in the story. Ultimately I spent money and I am left very frustrated and deceived. If you do go ahead with publishing the story, I would suggest reworking your blurb to imply that it goes beyond the two fated mates and a typical love story. Put emphasis on her finding her own way, not the love story. That way you may spare disappointment to those who were attracted to the story because of the mate business.

    10/01/2020 15:35

  • Yên Hoa Bạch

    I am very like that story kind, and this story make me fell good. Well done

    10/01/2020 15:20

  • MoJo !

    Your story has an amazing storyline! I love how you give the reader a chance to see both their povs! I can't wait to see the rest of the story. Keep up the great work!

    10/01/2020 15:19

  • Castle Stalker

    Wow! the story is really wonderful Its like you can see right throught the character but at the same time they are total stranger. Thanks to your editor I wouldn't miss such a fascinating novel❤

    10/01/2020 15:11
1234567891011121314151617181920212223242526272829303132333435363738394041424344454647484950515253545556575859606162636465666768697071727374757677787980818283848586878889909192