Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments
Lorena Hessler
the story is really good so far. It is really interesting and special. I feel like in the middle of the story with all the characters
09/04/2023 07:08
Amber Nichole
this is an amazing book I can't stop reading the chapters are a little wordy but overall one of the best books I've read
09/04/2023 07:08Heidi Stancliffe
oh my gosh!!! today’s chapter was awesome!!!! loved it!! love this story!!!!
09/04/2023 07:08
Recklessjen
if the book ends like this I'll be so sad 😥 even if Sabastian gets another mate too it won't be the same.
09/04/2023 07:08
Steve
Great story! Sorry I think Gia needs to die otherwise he will never be rid of her! I hope Parker finds a mate and he and Rayne can remain friends so they can move on. I think Sebastian needs to get the chance to apologize for his mistake, I feel she needs to know that and then they can be a couple! I love the characters and Rayne's group of friends and how the support each other.
09/04/2023 07:08itsmeluvsIxia
THIS IS AWESOME FJGDJYFUFULXTKKLYCYLDYDY
09/04/2023 07:08Halfway Foreign
SAME
09/04/2023 07:08
Sleepy_Dragon
I think this story has potential, there are a few grammar errors that are fixable. The plot is good as well as the twists you add, usually I am not the one who likes twists and turns. But with your story, I accept the twists it makes it more interesting to read. Do keep up with your writing.
09/04/2023 07:08Fetuani Lutu
Please Ms. Rose there must be more to the Rayne and Sebastion love story. Please don’t let him forget her. I think she still wants him despite the fact that he hurt her deeply. I just feel Ruby and Ares are also meant to be together.
09/04/2023 07:07Ophelia Annang
Perfect. It's lovely. A must read!
09/04/2023 07:07Kris Cooper
unicorn! or nor whale! ooh ohh jack-ah-lope! 🤭🤣
09/04/2023 07:07Yuki Kanjirose
This book is very interesting and I like it and I can't wait to read more of the chapters.
09/04/2023 07:07Okonkwo Jessica
I just started and I'm already way into the book, it's great so far and interesting. Can't wait to see how this turns out
09/04/2023 07:07
Sally Olei
why was my comment deleted?
09/04/2023 07:07Max Villasan
Hi it's me. I love this story you made. Hmmm. keep up the good work. lovelots ♥️
09/04/2023 07:07Irune Pirrone
Arianna's pack is Crimson Dawn or Redwood?
09/04/2023 07:07
Kim Almendarez
Will the book be uploaded once complete? I want to read it without waiting for chapters. It is such a good book but definitely loosing interest waiting for each chapter
09/04/2023 07:07
kookiesncream
This book was interesting from the start.
09/04/2023 07:07Vicky James
thanks so much for updating your book is amazing fantastic writing to can not went to see what happens next
09/04/2023 07:07Shadow Lights
This is a great book! :)
09/04/2023 07:07
@Bridgettehertel4
I’ve been asked to review this so here it is. I really like it albeit I’ve only read like three chapters but that’s just saying that it’s a really good book. I really liked how they didn’t like the parties they had to attend even though they have different reasons. that’s it for now and I’ll comment more as I go along.
09/04/2023 07:07Foxie V
Ooooohhhhh, this really DO look interesting...
09/04/2023 07:07
Marii Solaria
Hi there! Fellow writer here! I just want to say that your story is amazing, very well-written, and the twists and turns always leave me wanting more. Rayne is such a human character with flaws and insecurities and I can tell how much she loves Parker. I can’t wait to see the character development in Sebastion throughout the story and the adventures that lie ahead for both Rayne and Parker. The world building details are so intriguing. I can’t wait to know more! Once again, you are an amazing writer and I wish you well with your health. Always take time to focus on yourself before your writing. 💕
09/04/2023 07:07
👻SHORTIE👻
Just finished reading demons family black magic ect... I like the story so far just hate that you had to have Rayne get raped by her Alpha!! It was bad enough she was being physically abused but why write her innocence taken away from her?? Does that have anything to mold her to who she is now?? And I was wondering how an Alpha became so blinded by love of a woman and not see her true colors?? But if he truly was why didn't he give her the title of luna?? Since he rejected his true mate and left her?? Was he a really dumb Alpha just was happy for sex with a blind eye?? Took him 5 years to see her true colors??And why didn't Rayne already get a second chance mate since she was rejected?Rayne stated she never wanted a mate so did Sebastian but he lied he did want a mate he just didn't want one assigned to him by the Goddess he wanted to choose his so your story started off wrong with that!!Because if he didn't then Gia would have just been a warm bedder!!
09/04/2023 07:07Stephanie Marie Overstreet
@north rose when will you have more of it up. I love this story is their more of it because I'm at the part where he kills Gia and she shots him but I can't get no more after that.
09/04/2023 07:07andrea smillie
1976LaritaDelancey this is what they sent me on wattpad Hiiiya! Sorry for bothering you. I'm an editor, me and my writer friend are working on an amazing story. 92.9% of readers voted it as #1 Paranormal Story. We still hope to learn the most picky readers' opinions. I can see that you have a fantastic taste in books. So, well, I'm now super excited but anxious to know what will you think about it. May I send you some sample chaps?
09/04/2023 07:07
Jenifer Wilson
This is a great book I love it. It was interesting and I had a lot of fun read.
09/04/2023 07:07Michelle Foster
it was great so far but I am team sebastian so Parker need to find his mate.
09/04/2023 07:07
Nataliaa_18
every when does a new chapter get uploaded? I love it!! I need more! lol
09/04/2023 07:07Sandra Loustaunau
how often do you update? this odd getting good!
09/04/2023 07:07Jennifer Ithal
love it
09/04/2023 07:07Jennifer Ithal
good book.
09/04/2023 07:07
BizEB
I was really digging this book at first, starting to lose me a bit. The book title is a little misleading for the direction the story is going. I think everyone was trying to not get attached to Parker because we are all assuming she will end up with her mate. Bodega Bay is a strange location for this story if you’ve actually been there.
09/04/2023 07:07Estrella Bacelis
It is sad how Rayne and Sebastion ignore them wolf completely, if you are not capable of feal anything that is ok, but at least give it a chance to explore it, just pushing them away feel weak.
09/04/2023 07:07Quinn O
So will Sebastain find a mate? Also wondering if this whole mate thing is always heterosexual, like what if one of these werewolves were gay or transgender?
09/04/2023 07:07E BYRD
from what I have read this is a relatively good read.
09/04/2023 07:07
ALİME ÇELİK
i am starting now iam so excited
09/04/2023 07:07
Gladys Phiri
This is a really nice book I'm enjoying it....
09/04/2023 07:07Autumn Vaughn
I love this book so much !!!
09/04/2023 07:07Shelley Hernandez
already enjoying the book
09/04/2023 07:07
molly benjamin
omg water in my eyes as the writer made it feel so real ...good job
09/04/2023 07:07Book Talks
Just a helpful note you keep mixing up your perspectives you keep switching from third person limited to third person omniscient. Also it's a Diner not Dinner Not trying to be an asshole just trying to help honestly.😅
09/04/2023 07:07Darline Louis
Parker is very possessive of Rayne from putting out clothes for her and holder her tight when men is around them if it continues that’s going to create disaster in their relationship. Neither Rayne or Sebastion wanted the relationship to begin with what Sebastion did was for Rayne to hate him but his wolf really wanted Rayne, I really hope they get together. From other wolf stories I read the men have to be the one that rejected the mate or death for them to go their separate ways and Sebastion is not going to reject Rayne it is interesting to see how the story unfolds.
09/04/2023 07:07Cheryl Morris
, this book is all over the place
09/04/2023 07:07Kayla Mills
great book cant stop reading
09/04/2023 07:07
Bossy Rodriguez
so by skimming through your comments, I see you have a really adequate scheme for sending people DMs and imploring them to read over a few chapters in hopes that they'll follow here to finish reading. not a terrible notion but a little conniving.
09/04/2023 07:07Jennifer Ithal
so far its great
09/04/2023 07:07Kayla Mills
cant wait to c what happens next hope she finds a new home where will b treated better
09/04/2023 07:07Traci Grabeel
who wrote this book
09/04/2023 07:07Alexis Gonzalez
this is such a good story
09/04/2023 07:07
Keesha Thomas
I love the book, it's interesting can't wait to read more.
09/04/2023 07:07
Ruthie Briggs
I still can’t see the chapter for a trip down memory lane it’s just the title. is anyone else having this problem? I tried logging back in and out but still cannot see it
09/04/2023 07:07Kayla Mills
great book
09/04/2023 07:07Traci Grabeel
who wrote this book
09/04/2023 07:07Keesha Thomas
I love it, it's super interesting, can't wait to read more.
09/04/2023 07:07Kim Dinh
haha... I think i woul have liked this story more if Sebastian and Rayne end up together and Parker found his mate.
09/04/2023 07:07Kayla Mills
Poor rayne
09/04/2023 07:07Rhian Dela Cruz
nice work and good job. hope you continue to be a successful writer 🙂
09/04/2023 07:07LittleAbby Wizard kid
This story is really good so far! And it fits 4 of my 5 rules for a good book!
09/04/2023 07:07Malyssa Christyne
I'm also team Sabbie lol! I hope in the upcoming chapters Parker finally meets his mate either through his brother & his mate or a new bartender they hire! So when Sabastian goes for his final mission to take his mate home & takes it seriously by talking to her personally 1 on 1 & be truthful about his feelings & regrets & apologizes for the past mistakes & shows her the real him. not the ridiculous immature growl at everyone acting so caveman I'd be embarrassed by him lol. NO TOUCH MY MATE!!! GRRR....MINE!!!! HAHA
09/04/2023 07:07Vicky James
I really love this story thanks so much for updating amazing writing
09/04/2023 07:07Amanda Chow
I want to continue reading this!
09/04/2023 07:07Marian Jones
First off, thank you for this opportunity to read a few chapters. I enjoyed reading it. I love the characters attitude a lot, they spice things up. From what I have read I can imagine Rayne as someone who is a fighter even though she was never given the chance from a young age to show who she really is. I was really excited to keep on reading and find out what was going to happen next. Really exciting.
09/04/2023 07:07
Ash Merlin
Wilson is a real asshole
09/04/2023 07:07Ash Merlin
Sebastian sounds like Rayne. Maybe they’re mates
09/04/2023 07:07
Leia Cooper
I think its her dad! the man who carried her in 😭 i think he was hurt badly during the war but not killed 🥰 i hope ot is and thyre reunited, she deserves it!
09/04/2023 07:07
Stuff
I haven't read very much yet, but it's one of the best stories I have read so far
09/04/2023 07:07Sheila Parker
it not letting me go to next ome
09/04/2023 07:07Violet Night
I am enchanted, you have a loyal reader now <3
09/04/2023 07:07
Jessica Ramsey
how often are chapters uploaded
09/04/2023 07:07
_debbyeve
♥️♥️love the book chap I read on wattpad...I hope to enjoy the rest of book as I continue to read.
09/04/2023 07:07Viola Richards
love this book so far
09/04/2023 07:07Zino Magbegor
Story is really interesting
09/04/2023 07:07Kim Almendarez
I hope Rayne and Sebastian end up together. I could not stand him at first but I think they both have grown into different people they were when they first met. I hope Rayne will realize this!! absolutely love Parker but I have a feeling he is going to end up happy when he finds his mate
09/04/2023 07:07Lizzy-Timpy
I definitely love the way the story is written. All the little details bring the story to life. I like the concept, just don't know if it is my cup of tea. Guess I will find out if I keep on reading...
09/04/2023 07:07Lizzy-Timpy
Like the way the story is written. All the little details bring the story alive. I definitely like the concept, but am not sure if is nu cup of tea. I guess I will find out if I keep on reading...
09/04/2023 07:07
Maribel Villaruel
its nice actually
09/04/2023 07:07Ash Merlin
This is getting interesting
09/04/2023 07:07ppoggirl
i can’t believe Sebastian and Rayne may not have a happy ending together
09/04/2023 07:07Vicky James
amazing story can not stop reading fantastic writing
09/04/2023 07:07Elena엘레나
GG
09/04/2023 07:07Anna Vasquez
@NorthRose, you better hire an attorney and sue them. I loved your book. i can't wait for the next one. I for one am glad she didn't end up with Sebastian.
09/04/2023 07:07Chelsea Hughes
stupid I can’t finish it.
09/04/2023 07:07
Samantha packard
I think its time to reunite Rayne and sebastion and have Parker find his mate. hoe ironic would it be if his mate was gia.....
09/04/2023 07:07Paige Copeland
Okay so I am sad that they didn’t end up together, true. However, I’m really really wanting to know Jazmin’s story now. 😂 I love when witches and shifters get paired together, and second chance mates are always interesting/juicy. 🤷🏻♀️😂
09/04/2023 07:07Lucy Loach
It's getting so much more dramatic and twisted into its self its great
09/04/2023 07:07Alice Maciel
beautiful history I love
09/04/2023 07:07Erika Ariesgado
I thought the one who sent it to me was the writer that her story was just in here.btw it's Migdalia_Safe_Nov2 who sent it to me. I really thought I was special like what others thought lol
09/04/2023 07:07officialwerido 14
I love this story
09/04/2023 07:07Kim Almendarez
when will the next chapter be done?? so excited to read it.
09/04/2023 07:07
joesmama
only straggots would like this book
09/04/2023 07:07Teodora Balan
Great story
09/04/2023 07:07Britania Brown
im honestly loving the story and ik that her an Sebastian didn't have the most ideal start but i really hope they end up together at the end im a hopeless romantic n love happy endings n gia got wat she deserved she's mad selfish n it pissed me off.
09/04/2023 07:07joesmama
STRAIGHT MEN ARE SCARY
09/04/2023 07:07
Monica Redmon
I don’t like it that Sebastian was comfortable five years without rayne all of a sudden he find his mate cheating on him and he’s so concerned about rayne I wish he would of gotten the news first before he caught gia so I could of seen his honest reaction
09/04/2023 07:07joesmama
Lol the writer keeps deleting my comments cause they’re too scared to admit that it’s a straggot book for straggots
09/04/2023 07:07joesmama
This is why straight men scare me 😌
09/04/2023 07:07
@TZUCCI🐶
we're the same but they didn't completely claimed it theirs, they just said I have amazing taste for books so they decided to give me some chapters and I liked it so it led me here
09/04/2023 07:07Danielle Yazzie
yay. good ending.
09/04/2023 07:07Nataliaa_18
when is the next update?
09/04/2023 07:07
