Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • joesmama

    Rayne isn’t like other girlsssss she’s a straggot 🤭

    09/04/2023 07:07

  • Honey Hale

    love it

    09/04/2023 07:07

  • Nataliaa_18

    @north rose whaaaaat!?????? I want Sebastion with Rain I love Parker but ugh can’t decide I guess I’ll have to see how everything plays out!

    09/04/2023 07:07

  • plumchii

    nice story. I was directed here to read more from someone who claimed to be your editor. if you'd like to know, that person's username on wattpadd is 363-AMERICA-NOVI.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Reader-254912

    I hope you feel better real soon and I love your book and can’t wait for an update 😉😊

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Samantha packard

    does Parker keep his mate? does she end up with sebastion?

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • მარი ლელუაშვილი

    It’s great story. I really, really love paranormal stories.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Ruthie Briggs

    a trip down memory lane for some reason just the title is showing up and then it goes blank :(

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Heidi Stancliffe

    I love Rayne and Parker! I hope she is strong and rejects Sebastian! He made his bed, he can lay in it. He wouldn’t have cared 2 straws about her if he hadn’t caught Gia. He’s the weak one

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Nicole Evans

    Awesome book! When can we expect the next chapter!

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • tara straight

    so when did Arianna change? she went from a blue knee high dress to a pink slitted dress.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Bgilstrap

    I am torn between Parker and Sebastian. I want Sebastien and Rayne to be end game. But I love Parker and I think he is so good for Rayne. He was there for her when no one else was. Sebastian need a redemption scene, a good one, before he is worthy of Rayne.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    never apologize for having an illness. I suffer from Fibromyalgia along with rheumatoid arthritis and was also diagnosed with lung cancer so I do understand. Take care of yourself put yourself first you’re writing is excellent

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Vicki Trewella

    Oh darn you have me well and truly hooked now! Keel well ❤

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Nurur Rafida Yulia Astanti

    this story is great.. it's been a long time for me to find such a good story where I want to kick and slap someone.. Hahaha.. this story is easy to understand (for me who learn English as a foreign language) plus can stir my emotion.. I swear I really wanna hit someone right now after read these jerk Alphas (both Sebastian and Wilson).. 😑

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Reader-099801

    I’m pretty much a unestablished book critic. Most of these apps have the absolute worst work I have ever laid eyes on. I was surprised by how well this is written and all the twists and turns it has taken. Patiently waiting for the next update. You have a brilliant mind, chick!

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Shelly Hendren

    my main thoughts are on editing tbh the story is pretty good but I cringe at half the writing and sometimes the whole word is wrong not just misspelled however the first mystery I think is her father I mean who else could have lost their memory at the same time yet feel close to her the bag guy is obviously her old alpha who was banished but not killed who else would be coming for her

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Vicky James

    really love this story thanks so much letting me read it I do hope it's a happy ending

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Jennyfer Henry

    Need to upload new chapters quicker, like every day would be great, getting bored of having to wait so long

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Mary Brandenburg

    SPOILER ALERT!!!!!!!! After all that I can’t believe you killed him off. predictable but still

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • اديان قحطان علي D

    it’s amazing work I loved it❤️

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Elisa Y Raul Carreon

    Is there any more chapters because it can't end like this and I want to read more love it.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • mladwaj

    how often does she update? I found another book that I like, just to learn that it’s unfinished as well.. this is torture ...

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Christena Phillips

    I'm so eager to see where this story will lead. not your typical wolf romance that I've read.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Tanaka Chiro

    it is an amazing story cant wait to know what happens next

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • JamieHichew

    loving the story so far!! 😍

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Merry G.

    Does anyone else flipping love Monroe? I want a book with him and his mate!

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Kim Almendarez

    OMG HE CANT DIE😭😩

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • JamieHichew

    loving the story so far!! 😍

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Anna Vasquez

    maybe it's Wilsons spirit coming back to get revenge.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Reader-beep-boop-bop

    waah someone just give me their log in i wanna read it all😭😭im broke

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Vicky James

    o my got this story is Amazing

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Kemi Favour

    I'm enjoying this story so far i'm so excited to read on and see what's next🤗🤗

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Alaire

    I mean come on, 9 years of your friends and family and pack members saying that your girlfriend is seducing them or their mates. Sebastien is an idiot and doesn't deserve his true mate.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Alaire

    I'm team Parker. screw Sebastien.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Reader-671383

    when i realized this was the last chapter i could read until it was updated my heart just about shattered omg

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Biney Ruelas

    for anyone who wants to see Rayne with Sebastian, I want to know why? He only wants her because he found his chosen mate cheating. never did he want her before, he didn't even think of her. if he didn't find Gia cheating he would still be with her. he would have married her. he would of never thought about Rayne. he only wants her because he thinks he should be with her. is that what you guys want for her? to be a second choice. to always be second, because if she ends up with Sebastian that's all she will be. Im not saying Sebastian doesn't deserve a happying ending but he needs to choose who he loves first not because of a bond. if you guys want him with Rayne then you guys might as well say it's okay to let a guy walk all over you and take him back because he got cheated on and egrets not chosen you because you're loyal.. I'm not saying she should end up with Parker but she shouldn't end up with Sebastian either. but I do hope markers mtw is married and in love with some one else

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Reader-039177

    I don’t know what I want to see... ugh!!! live this story.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Rose

    phew! for a second there I thought Parkers mate was going to be Gia with the whole Paris plot ... unless I’ve jumped the gun and she somehow survives.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Au'Star_lie

    Damm this chapter was humorous he thought he could just waltz in like no time passed i love it.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Rose SB

    Listen, I like Parker but it’s tilt for him to find his mate and leave Rayne. Though Sebastion had been a full on ass, he and Rayne need to be together!!!

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Rose

    phew! for a second I thought Parker and Gia were going to be mates ... with the whole Paris part

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Leilani

    On a side note... did anyone else think that Arabella was going to be Rayne’s father’s second chance mate??? Didn’t he feel a pull towards her?

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Leilani

    I’m a bit conflicted. I like Rayne with Parker but I feel like the mate bond is there for a reason. Just as she declared her love for Parker over her Mate, Sebastian did the same thing... except he did it first. They both didn’t want to believe in the Mate bond. She’s doing to him what he did to her 5 years ago... knowing that Parker May leave her for his Mate. It’s the same yet different. I would love to see redemption for Sebastian and a chance at true love for them. The only way for that to happen would be for Parker to find his mate... I believe in redemption otherwise it’s just all downhill for most of us lol.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Reader-039177

    I can’t wait for more!! awesome Story.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Grace Fart

    This book is amazing can't wait till there more.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • NiCo NiCo

    Sebastian has he’s chances now he wanted her cause his lover cheated on him. hopefully she don’t go back to him. no matter he change or not he choose another women over her so he can just go back to that cheating wh*** and share her with other male. 😤

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    noooo Sebastian can’t die.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Little Luna's Safespace

    It's kinda refreshing to me

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • colie37

    yesssss thank goodness. wonder if Rayne will feel the pain of her mate being shot.

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Samantha Finlay

    Omg loving this, Can't wait to see what happens for all of them xx

    09/04/2023 07:06

  • Alex the Wolfia

    This is a really good book so far!

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Faith Hellman

    *cries in can’t like the chapter* TwT

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Abigail Akiele

    not sure about this yet..

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Acadia Green

    I love this so far. The book is well written and very detailed

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Beta_776

    you gotta love when you're name is Bridget and you see it spelled every other way except the way your name is spelled!!! 😭😭😂😂

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Toni-Dee Downer

    how often do you update?

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Wendy Syri

    Oh I so hope this won’t be a cliche book where she eventually goes back to her. Rayne and Parker deserves each other. Seb is still a selfish asshole. He moved on with his life for 5 yrs not giving a sh*t Rayne. Then when he finds out Gia is the town slut, he decides, “welp, I guess I’ll go get my true mate now”. He doesn’t love her or care about her. Why would she go live a miserable life with him, raising that hoe’s kid and being his breeder? I hope she truly rejects his ass. She’s happy now and she deserves it.

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Biney Ruelas

    I really hope he leaves her alone.. I hope Parker meets his mate but rejects her.. maybe she's with someone else, idk.. but I totally ship Rayne with Parker!!

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Paige Copeland

    I want her to be with Seb. 🤷🏻‍♀️ I get why everyone is team Parker, but there’s a reason the goddess pairs people. Perhaps had he not been a colossal ass, he would have never made all these moves to be a better man. I don’t want her to not be friends with Parker, but I think it would be cruel for Parker to reject his mate because Rayne refuses to give her mate a chance.

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Tisha Dash

    wai.. wait. why is Alec deadddd! no! ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥⌓˂̣̣̥ )‧º·˚ and author, I love this book

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Tisha Dash

    wai.. wait. why is Alec deadddd! no! ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥⌓˂̣̣̥ )‧º·˚ and author, I love this book

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Anna Kurowski

    the sun rises on the east coast not the west.

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Reader-254912

    omg 😳 I cant wait this is getting good 🙌🏼🙌🏼

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • North Rose 🌹

    Sorry everyone for the Untitled chapter. It will be called Moving Forward With Steady Resolve as soon as I can have it updated. I rushed to complete only noticing after that I didn't write in the dang title. Happy ready.

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Ruthie Briggs

    I’m really hooked when is the next update I can’t wait just binged this

    09/04/2023 07:05

  • Paige Copeland

    I want her to be with him, but not until he works his ever loving ass off to get her back. 😂

    09/04/2023 07:04

  • Taryn-Marie Jenkins

    I feel so conflicted. I really like Parker’s character but I want Sebastian and Rayne to end up together. I hope that Parker’s true mate will be introduced and Parker and Rayne remain friends. I just feel so bad for Sebastian and Rayne’s wolves. Ares has been suffering and longs for his mate while Ruby is settling and likes Parker enough but that’s not her true mate. I like the story so far which is surprising for me since I’m someone who avoids stories with love triangles. Can’t wait to read more!

    09/04/2023 07:04

  • Biney Ruelas

    wouldn’t it be crazy if Gia was Parker’s mate? it would make rejecting her so much easier

    09/04/2023 07:04

  • Jessica White

    Time to shake things up and find Parker’s mate. He seems fabulous but his mate might just be a keeper too. can’t wait to see where it goes. Sorry but I’m team Sebastian. We’ve all done stupid, ridiculous things for the love of the wrong person. He learned a lesson.

    09/04/2023 07:04

  • Jessica Flowers Althoff

    It’s a great story. I love how Parker loves her but wonder how he would be with his mate?? I don’t agree with what Seb did but she didn’t want a mate anyway. Seb has been hurt enough, as well as Rayne so they both deserve happiness. If the bond is severed, could she be the second chance mate too, proving that the Moon Goddess has plans for them regardless of what they want?? That’s a twist!! Excited for a new chapter!

    09/04/2023 07:04

  • Jessica McDuffie

    I believe the new hire is parker's mate & that is why she wore a sad face before leaving out of the bar

    09/04/2023 07:04

  • Miranda Bushie

    getting really good

    09/04/2023 07:04

  • Kera Burke

    ohhhh love this story. side thought..... how would fake boobs work in werewolf form 🤔 🤣

    09/04/2023 07:04

  • Jessica White

    Just found this story and I’m really enjoying it so far.

    09/04/2023 07:03

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    I am so sorry you are not well. please stay safe. get well soon. loving this story.

    09/04/2023 07:03

  • Ruthie Briggs

    omg can’t wait for the next update

    09/04/2023 07:03

  • Kristie Leigh Dunlop

    keen to see where the story goes - looking forward to more chapters.

    09/04/2023 07:03

  • Kris Cooper

    This is the thing I will never understand about were culture. you can be an abusive a hole and still get your mate. I am not rooting for Sebastian.

    09/04/2023 07:03

  • Naomi Reuel

    oh my gosh the part where Sebastian said those mean things to Rayne 😥😥😥😥

    09/04/2023 07:03

  • Liliane Mason

    Super appreciated how the flashback wasn’t too intense.

    09/04/2023 07:02

  • Nichole Hanson

    when are more chapters coming ? I love the book so far . It would kill me to see her go back to SEB after that but at least her learned his listen but Parker loves her

    09/04/2023 07:02

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    wow. amazing story so far. all I did was cry.

    09/04/2023 07:02

  • Ruthie Briggs

    can’t wait

    09/04/2023 07:02

  • Paige Copeland

    I love this book-well done.

    09/04/2023 07:02

  • weeniebug13

    Great read so far!!! Can’t wait for more!

    09/04/2023 07:01

  • Ruthie Briggs

    loved it so good can’t wait for more updates... her poor father

    09/04/2023 07:01

  • Biney Ruelas

    I’m seriously hoping she doesn’t end up with Seb. yeah give him a happy ending but not with her. she deserves someone who is going to choose her first. yeah forgive him but don’t go back to him.

    09/04/2023 07:01

  • Kris Cooper

    I am completely wrapped up in this story. I love character development and pace so very much. This is blossoming into a very beautiful story with thorns. 💕💕💕

    09/04/2023 07:00

  • Kris Cooper

    love the start can’t wait for update!

    09/04/2023 07:00

  • Shelly Hay

    so happy to finally have an update, thank you!! looking forward to the next one

    09/04/2023 07:00

  • Kris Cooper

    ha! love the title of latest update

    09/04/2023 06:59

  • Batyman2212 Weatherall

    ya sure know how to get a book warm hook, line, and sinker can't wait for the rest of it

    09/04/2023 06:59

  • April Selvage

    love this story, can’t wait for another update!!

    09/04/2023 06:58

  • North Rose 🌹

    Thank you, I am enjoying Rayne's journey as it unfolds in my mind. I am going to try to give daily updates. Happy reading.

    09/04/2023 06:58
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