Untouchable Comments
Sherisa Weston
I am on chapter 2 since I recently started this book and I honestly don't understand how the entire pack even the parents think a nine year old who didn't even have her wolf yet is responsible for killing not only her best friend that she grew up with and called her sister but the Luna who is supposed to be the second most powerful in the pack after the alpha. I am convinced everyone in the pack are idiots like are they just trying to find someone to blame to help with their pain?
09/04/2023 07:13Jade Coombes
omg I cant get enough of this book that I don't want to put down 😍😍😍
09/04/2023 07:13
Anna Semi
I love this story.. I literally stayed up reading it. now I cant wait for the next chapter. ❤❤
09/04/2023 07:13Brenda Vega
omg! spoiler alert! warning please. I'm just starting to like Neron! I think Octavius is the Uncle reincarnated somehow, maybe made a deal with the devil so he could finally get his revenge?!?
09/04/2023 07:13
Pam Collins
This is crazy, I have purchased to read. Do you only get one chapter for 99 cents??? How much is it to read the rest of the book?
09/04/2023 07:13Junita Braithwaite
It's been a while since I've read a book that I didn't want to out down. And I've read my fair share of books. This is an amazing book, thank you 🙏🏾.
09/04/2023 07:13
Donna
isn’t her name Halima
09/04/2023 07:13
Soad Ali
Is it only me who is thinking how bad they will get it .. I want them all suffering and dead eventually 😊😇 Kwam can die without suffering
09/04/2023 07:13Erika Fernandez Dela Rosa
I SO MUCH LOVE THE BOOK! It took my entire 2 days off from work! 💜💜 I need to read more! I'll wait for your next update! 😊😊 Take your time 🥰
09/04/2023 07:13Pam Collins
I would like to finish this book. I've enjoyed it immensely..
09/04/2023 07:13Emma Atkins
Well that was s cliffhanger and a half to leave us on! Hoping for more chapters soon but take your time, quality over quantity and look after yourself first as I know how difficult churning out writing can be.
09/04/2023 07:13
Mieka L
is there anymore chapters after 76, or maybe a second book that picks up where this one left off of. i really want to see what happens once Anthony is told his sister and phoebe are missing
09/04/2023 07:13
Melanie Behles
Loving it so far!
09/04/2023 07:13Julie Kutz
could Octavius be the leader of the rogues? I guess we will see!
09/04/2023 07:13Sherisa Weston
I am definitely going to write out all these quotes I see. I love them so much
09/04/2023 07:12Tamara Shiver
oops my question should have went here. Does this have an HEA?
09/04/2023 07:12Melissa Bennet
good book ❤
09/04/2023 07:12
J C
This is a great story, well written, and an interesting plot. However, I'm scared to keep going because I'm afraid she'll take him back. It's one thing to eventually forgive your abusers (something I'd never do) but another to take them back and love them. I'm afraid it will happen.
09/04/2023 07:12
Rosie Andrews
sorry I'm being daft but who is Kiya?
09/04/2023 07:12
Sierra Russell
NOOOOO...out of all people I actually started to like Neron and now he goes and dies wtf.....Seriously man. He sacrificed himself for her😭😭😭😭
09/04/2023 07:12Lisa Lambert
when is this book being updated. its so good
09/04/2023 07:12Sierra Russell
OMG......I FREAKING LOVE THIS BOOK. Like really, when do you update.... where can i follow you this book is tooooo good..Im on edge now waiting 😩 😫!!!
09/04/2023 07:12shona king
I came across this book yesterday and haven't put it down, but from the comments here it seems there hasn't been an update is some time ? Is the completed book available any where else?
09/04/2023 07:12
Marii Solaria
To my readers: Untouchable’s updates will temporarily be on hold. There are a series of edits and changes that my editor and I are working on together. If you have my story bookmarked, it will notify you of updates. Please follow my IG @ mariisolaria for updates, announcements, and more! Thank you 💖
09/04/2023 07:11Paige Copeland
Damn, just when I thought Neron was making some headway. 😩 Still pulling for them though.
09/04/2023 07:10Brianna Vercher
love it
09/04/2023 07:09Paige Copeland
I feel like Neuron is the only one that is owning up to what he did to her in the past, her family is an absolute joke for thinking that she should just forgive them after one conversation. Her being in heat is interesting. I am actually rooting for her and Neuron, but I hope he is respectful enough to just stay by her side while she’s in pain/keep unmated wolves away from her instead of trying to sleep with her. He has to know she wouldn’t want that, and I do want them to end up together. I still think there’s a reason the Moon Goddess didn’t actually grant her wish for him to no longer be her mate, and I, for one, can’t wait to see where it goes. 🤷🏻♀️
09/04/2023 07:09Paige Copeland
I hope she heard that; that just made me so happy. 😍
09/04/2023 07:09
littletaitai
can someone make a book where the rejected who went through such hard times with her pack finds a second chance mate and lives happily ever after, because I’m getting sick and tired of them always going back to the person who rejected them, especially when the person is like Neron. I can’t even read this book cause I already know how it ends just by reading the part where the dude has a dream, talking to the moon goddess. tell me if that’s not annoying!
09/04/2023 07:09Marii Solaria
Hi everyone! I want to announce that I made an author IG page. I will be posting updates, sneak previews for future chapters, post things about the subject matter and more. Follow me @ mariisolaria! Can’t wait to engage with you guys there!
09/04/2023 07:09Paige Copeland
wow, and there his dad goes ruining all progress Neron has worked his ass off for. 🤦🏻♀️
09/04/2023 07:09
Reader-865736
It’s a great book! I hope it has a happy ending! I think her mate is going think his chances increased. .lol
09/04/2023 07:09
Au'Star_lie
Killing them would be too easy. Nah, they need to be Totured to get a taste of what she went through cuz they don't seem to understand.
09/04/2023 07:09
Kait McDonough
I'm actually mad at myself for finding this book before it was complete. Your storytelling is well thought out- and it's gonna kill me to wait update to update, haha. I wish I found it when it was complete so I could enjoy it all at once. I literally couldn't put it down.
09/04/2023 07:08😂 I love your quote! one of my favorite songs by JT music!!😋❤
09/04/2023 07:08
KeyKirita
love it!! you’re an amazing writer
09/04/2023 07:07
North Rose 🌹
You have me in the feels and I love it. Keep going, you are an amazing writer. Glad I opened your book toay.
09/04/2023 07:07mary bernard
OMG I LOVE , LOVE THIS BOOK! I wonder if she actually hurt Steven and Ashley.
09/04/2023 07:07MissBea Haven
really great story, am loving it
09/04/2023 07:06
Tiarne Seckold
please update! I can't wait for more chapters! gosh I hope she doesn't go back to her old pack, even as a luna! I kind of want her and Darien to be a thing, they understand one another 😅
09/04/2023 07:06FantasyWORLD
Started this today and couldn’t stop!
09/04/2023 07:06Paige Copeland
Not going to lie, I still want them to end up together... he’s a colossal asshole for what he did, but the Moon Goddess not actually telling him flat out “No” when he wanted another chance, makes it seem like she needed him to fight. Just not literally. I absolutely love this book.
09/04/2023 07:06
Alayna
You’re such a gifted writer. It’s a sign of a good writer to take on the seemingly impossible storyline (in this case abuse, recovery, anger, forgiveness and love) I really don’t want her to be with Nero but maybe a small part does? Gah! I feel her emotions! I cannot wait for an update, you are so talented 😊
09/04/2023 07:06Au'Star_lie
Finally I dont understand why they not trying to take in account of their past actions 🙄 they want her to just move on but they're not recognizing the past oh im glad she was blunt asf though this was an awesome chapter.
09/04/2023 07:06Au'Star_lie
YASSS FINALLY...😁 The Fight Is On..... and it was very worth the wait from the suspense and torture of these 3 days that passed; you got awesome talent can't wait for more.
09/04/2023 07:05
corgikat
I’m back again to tell you how amazing this story and your writing is. absolutely captivating ❤️
09/04/2023 07:05Au'Star_lie
Yes Kiya you go girl finally👏👏👏
09/04/2023 07:03Devan Paige
omg AMAZING chapter!!!!! LOVED it! 💖😍🎉
09/04/2023 07:03Snowstorm Jinx
on a scale of 1/10 is this how You would've done , ?" "5/10 I prob would , on the flip side I would've gone on a killing spree , or run off.
09/04/2023 07:03Au'Star_lie
The suspense is torturous 😬 😳 😫
09/04/2023 07:03Reader-837796
LOVING this book! Sis you are an amazing writer! your detailing of trauma is spot-on and beautifully and painfully written. keep up the great work!
09/04/2023 07:02
Tilly Miles
ohh whens the next update? I'm enjoying this. it also helps that its well written xx
09/04/2023 07:02Devan Paige
omg please update more!! love this story and can't wait til they are face to face!! 💖😉
09/04/2023 07:01corgikat
this is such a great story. I can’t wait for the next update. ❤️🤗
09/04/2023 07:01Au'Star_lie
It was an awesome chapter I'm looking forward to reading more 😁
09/04/2023 07:00Ashleigh Lee
hi when will there be an update please I love the book 😍😍
09/04/2023 07:00Beky Mba
cant wait for more 😍😍😍
09/04/2023 06:59
