Untouchable Comments

Sherisa Weston

I am on chapter 2 since I recently started this book and I honestly don't understand how the entire pack even the parents think a nine year old who didn't even have her wolf yet is responsible for killing not only her best friend that she grew up with and called her sister but the Luna who is supposed to be the second most powerful in the pack after the alpha. I am convinced everyone in the pack are idiots like are they just trying to find someone to blame to help with their pain?

Jade Coombes

omg I cant get enough of this book that I don't want to put down 😍😍😍

Anna Semi

I love this story.. I literally stayed up reading it. now I cant wait for the next chapter. ❤❤

Brenda Vega

omg! spoiler alert! warning please. I'm just starting to like Neron! I think Octavius is the Uncle reincarnated somehow, maybe made a deal with the devil so he could finally get his revenge?!?

Pam Collins

This is crazy, I have purchased to read. Do you only get one chapter for 99 cents??? How much is it to read the rest of the book?

Junita Braithwaite

It's been a while since I've read a book that I didn't want to out down. And I've read my fair share of books. This is an amazing book, thank you 🙏🏾.

Donna

isn’t her name Halima

Soad Ali

Is it only me who is thinking how bad they will get it .. I want them all suffering and dead eventually 😊😇 Kwam can die without suffering

Erika Fernandez Dela Rosa

I SO MUCH LOVE THE BOOK! It took my entire 2 days off from work! 💜💜 I need to read more! I'll wait for your next update! 😊😊 Take your time 🥰

Pam Collins

I would like to finish this book. I've enjoyed it immensely..

Emma Atkins

Well that was s cliffhanger and a half to leave us on! Hoping for more chapters soon but take your time, quality over quantity and look after yourself first as I know how difficult churning out writing can be.

Mieka L

is there anymore chapters after 76, or maybe a second book that picks up where this one left off of. i really want to see what happens once Anthony is told his sister and phoebe are missing

Melanie Behles

Loving it so far!

Julie Kutz

could Octavius be the leader of the rogues? I guess we will see!

Sherisa Weston

I am definitely going to write out all these quotes I see. I love them so much

Tamara Shiver

oops my question should have went here. Does this have an HEA?

Melissa Bennet

good book ❤

J C

This is a great story, well written, and an interesting plot. However, I'm scared to keep going because I'm afraid she'll take him back. It's one thing to eventually forgive your abusers (something I'd never do) but another to take them back and love them. I'm afraid it will happen.

Rosie Andrews

sorry I'm being daft but who is Kiya?

Sierra Russell

NOOOOO...out of all people I actually started to like Neron and now he goes and dies wtf.....Seriously man. He sacrificed himself for her😭😭😭😭

Lisa Lambert

when is this book being updated. its so good

Sierra Russell

OMG......I FREAKING LOVE THIS BOOK. Like really, when do you update.... where can i follow you this book is tooooo good..Im on edge now waiting 😩 😫!!!

shona king

I came across this book yesterday and haven't put it down, but from the comments here it seems there hasn't been an update is some time ? Is the completed book available any where else?

Marii Solaria

To my readers: Untouchable’s updates will temporarily be on hold. There are a series of edits and changes that my editor and I are working on together. If you have my story bookmarked, it will notify you of updates. Please follow my IG @ mariisolaria for updates, announcements, and more! Thank you 💖

Paige Copeland

Damn, just when I thought Neron was making some headway. 😩 Still pulling for them though.

Brianna Vercher

love it

Paige Copeland

I feel like Neuron is the only one that is owning up to what he did to her in the past, her family is an absolute joke for thinking that she should just forgive them after one conversation. Her being in heat is interesting. I am actually rooting for her and Neuron, but I hope he is respectful enough to just stay by her side while she’s in pain/keep unmated wolves away from her instead of trying to sleep with her. He has to know she wouldn’t want that, and I do want them to end up together. I still think there’s a reason the Moon Goddess didn’t actually grant her wish for him to no longer be her mate, and I, for one, can’t wait to see where it goes. 🤷🏻‍♀️

Paige Copeland

I hope she heard that; that just made me so happy. 😍

littletaitai

can someone make a book where the rejected who went through such hard times with her pack finds a second chance mate and lives happily ever after, because I’m getting sick and tired of them always going back to the person who rejected them, especially when the person is like Neron. I can’t even read this book cause I already know how it ends just by reading the part where the dude has a dream, talking to the moon goddess. tell me if that’s not annoying!

Marii Solaria

Hi everyone! I want to announce that I made an author IG page. I will be posting updates, sneak previews for future chapters, post things about the subject matter and more. Follow me @ mariisolaria! Can’t wait to engage with you guys there!

Paige Copeland

wow, and there his dad goes ruining all progress Neron has worked his ass off for. 🤦🏻‍♀️

Reader-865736

It’s a great book! I hope it has a happy ending! I think her mate is going think his chances increased. .lol

Au'Star_lie

Killing them would be too easy. Nah, they need to be Totured to get a taste of what she went through cuz they don't seem to understand.

Kait McDonough

I'm actually mad at myself for finding this book before it was complete. Your storytelling is well thought out- and it's gonna kill me to wait update to update, haha. I wish I found it when it was complete so I could enjoy it all at once. I literally couldn't put it down.

😂 I love your quote! one of my favorite songs by JT music!!😋❤

KeyKirita

love it!! you’re an amazing writer

North Rose 🌹

You have me in the feels and I love it. Keep going, you are an amazing writer. Glad I opened your book toay.

mary bernard

OMG I LOVE , LOVE THIS BOOK! I wonder if she actually hurt Steven and Ashley.

MissBea Haven

really great story, am loving it

Tiarne Seckold

please update! I can't wait for more chapters! gosh I hope she doesn't go back to her old pack, even as a luna! I kind of want her and Darien to be a thing, they understand one another 😅

FantasyWORLD

Started this today and couldn’t stop!

Paige Copeland

Not going to lie, I still want them to end up together... he’s a colossal asshole for what he did, but the Moon Goddess not actually telling him flat out “No” when he wanted another chance, makes it seem like she needed him to fight. Just not literally. I absolutely love this book.

Alayna

You’re such a gifted writer. It’s a sign of a good writer to take on the seemingly impossible storyline (in this case abuse, recovery, anger, forgiveness and love) I really don’t want her to be with Nero but maybe a small part does? Gah! I feel her emotions! I cannot wait for an update, you are so talented 😊

Au'Star_lie

Finally I dont understand why they not trying to take in account of their past actions 🙄 they want her to just move on but they're not recognizing the past oh im glad she was blunt asf though this was an awesome chapter.

Au'Star_lie

YASSS FINALLY...😁 The Fight Is On..... and it was very worth the wait from the suspense and torture of these 3 days that passed; you got awesome talent can't wait for more.

corgikat

I’m back again to tell you how amazing this story and your writing is. absolutely captivating ❤️

Au'Star_lie

Yes Kiya you go girl finally👏👏👏

Devan Paige

omg AMAZING chapter!!!!! LOVED it! 💖😍🎉

Snowstorm Jinx

on a scale of 1/10 is this how You would've done , ?" "5/10 I prob would , on the flip side I would've gone on a killing spree , or run off.

Au'Star_lie

The suspense is torturous 😬 😳 😫

Reader-837796

LOVING this book! Sis you are an amazing writer! your detailing of trauma is spot-on and beautifully and painfully written. keep up the great work!

Tilly Miles

ohh whens the next update? I'm enjoying this. it also helps that its well written xx

Devan Paige

omg please update more!! love this story and can't wait til they are face to face!! 💖😉

corgikat

this is such a great story. I can’t wait for the next update. ❤️🤗

Au'Star_lie

It was an awesome chapter I'm looking forward to reading more 😁

Ashleigh Lee

hi when will there be an update please I love the book 😍😍

Beky Mba

cant wait for more 😍😍😍