Untouchable Comments
Megan Day
I'm in love with your story. If you get it printed into a book I would 100% buy it in a heartbeat.
09/04/2023 07:20YahNi
😍 This story is amazingly beautiful and interesting I love it!
09/04/2023 07:20Ashley Dickerson
so far I like it
09/04/2023 07:20Genesis Young
I really enjoyed this book. First I love how you ended this book. Although a small part of me wanted Kiya and Neron to be together I like how you kept her character strong enough to not give into the temptation of a mate bond. I would love to see Violetta and Kiya meet again and become good friends. I cannot wait to see what book two has in store for us readers. I want her to crush Osiris’ whole life to pieces.
09/04/2023 07:20Meri
amazing read, and I hope that you continue to write. the world you created in this book is immersive and I would love to see you expand it
09/04/2023 07:20Jackie Smart
Is anyone else wondering what the purpose of the white owl earlier was???
09/04/2023 07:20Emerald Dream
OMG, this book got me crying like a new born baby! but it's such a good read and I love it!!!
09/04/2023 07:20Lauren Mansfield
when does book 2 come out?
09/04/2023 07:20Kristen Marion
when are you writing more?
09/04/2023 07:20Kasey Curtis
Thank you for Chapter 57. 💓 from a survivor.
09/04/2023 07:20Lidia Bonilla
I hope she sees and accepts Lyra and her husband as her parents and forget her real parents,her real parents don’t deserve her anyways
09/04/2023 07:20Rose SB
So is alpha Jonathon in cahoots with the zombies
09/04/2023 07:20AstarteLor
OMG. Finally caught up! Gah! Obsessed
09/04/2023 07:20Cari Woods
I'm on chapter 56, so SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS. You were warned. I really enjoy this story. I like how the protagonist has made herself stronger. If she goes back to Neron, that will be a slap in the face. How could you possibly leave a pack responsible for you pain, better yourself, then mate your abuser? She should have rejected him the moment he took back his rejection. Honestly I hope Neron dies by the end. And the protagonist ends up happy by herself or that the Moon Goddess goes "I gave you another mate anyway and this is actually a good person" But I highly doubt that *Sad Face*
09/04/2023 07:20Tico Odum
I’m sorry but is it only 80 chapters or are there more chapters to come? if so when are the updates? I literally started this book yesterday and made it to chapter 80 today... such a good book
09/04/2023 07:20waiting on chapter 79 👀👀👀👀😳😳😳 lol
09/04/2023 07:20love this book! i can’t wait for the next chapter. also, is there really going to be a book 2? i would love to follow this series.
09/04/2023 07:20Nana Afua Annoh
so kwame and his family finally found the truth.
09/04/2023 07:20_be_fooking_happy_
This chapter made me cry
09/04/2023 07:19Paige Copeland
and I’m bawling. 😩
09/04/2023 07:19Miranda Sorensen
is there any where to buy the completed book?
09/04/2023 07:19Alexa Brooke
how often do you update?
09/04/2023 07:19yonelisa sabalele
My goodness! This story has me crying like crazy. So much emotion, raw and honest - transparency in ones fears and the will to move on...wow.
09/04/2023 07:19Starr Hawkins
I love that she didn’t take him back. I love a strong woman!
09/04/2023 07:19Niecey
Why is it all the unmated wolves that went with her to Zircon found there mates at Zircon lol... *another an actual question.. just found it almost like fate. if she did Mate up with Neron... she wouldn't be lonely bc of her friends finding love there* its just amazing. perfect book
09/04/2023 07:19Sharlana Renee Clark
❤️
09/04/2023 07:19Reader-837796
great luck on your exams! you have a forever fan in me Author Solaria! I’m excited to continue to read your work!!
09/04/2023 07:19Elsa Rodarte
very well written! good luck on your exams! patiently waiting
09/04/2023 07:19Maxine Wendt Lama
I am literally waiting for book2😊 like can sunday just hurry up?😂 this girl here is not going to sleep, imma stay up all night for this book. I’m dying to read it already😭lol
09/04/2023 07:19Sarah Bakewell
I hope he doesn’t mark her as his. I want him with his true mate and Luna not her. I will just have to keep reading and hoping they end up together like they should be. I know it will take a lot to make it up to her but they are meant to be together and I hope they both relies that before more mistake are made.
09/04/2023 07:19Brenda Vega
I can't wait! This book was wonderful....hit all my feelers....
09/04/2023 07:19Lidia Bonilla
Darien doesn’t deserve Odessa as his mate she’s a mean woman and selfish,and I hope Kiya doesn’t forgive her just because she’s Darien’s mate
09/04/2023 07:19Tanya McQuillan
Will the Halloween specials be remaining on the chapters list or will they dissappear? I haven't finished the book yet but don't want to miss reading them!
09/04/2023 07:19Aniyah Bledsoe
I finished your book but I didn’t receive a code like the others...
09/04/2023 07:19Jessica Mallow
did you change her name from halima to Kira? I’m just a bit confused right now, just got done reading where the most recent ex-alpha couple was adopting her and haven’t seen where or why her name is changed.
09/04/2023 07:19Sherisa Weston
OMG Odessa's thoughts are disgusting!!! She is thinking all the men are hers and she will make sure Kiya loses everything which she means are the men. Is she insane? Of course she is. She is a slut and I can wait until she loses everything just like her wolf stated. My heart really reached out to Darian for having a shutty mate and he wolf having to deal with her
09/04/2023 07:19Reader-154013
she should have forgiven her mate!
09/04/2023 07:19Murano Aki
where to get the code? I already finished book 1.
09/04/2023 07:19is it time for book 2 yet?! lol I’ve been checking every day 😂
09/04/2023 07:19Frances Hohl
wait where did name Kiya come from???????
09/04/2023 07:19Linda Olney Meyer
why am I not able to read the next chapters
09/04/2023 07:19Rachel Whitfield
👍
09/04/2023 07:18Natane Headley
great book
09/04/2023 07:18Mikka Lopez
I think Octavious and Orisis is the sams person. hehe
09/04/2023 07:18Annithiyah Winston
I absolutely loved reading this. Halimas/Kiyas character is so moving along with all the events and other characters that surround her. I'm glad Neron can't hurt her anymore and I abhor Nerons dad. I hope that vampire that's after her and wants to destroy her birth pack doesn't succeed. That said, I can't wait for part 2 of this story to be released titled "Unhinged".
09/04/2023 07:18Jennifer Moxley
2 more days till book 2!!!! sooooo excited!!
09/04/2023 07:18Jael Brown
Does anyone know when book 2 will be released I have been waiting all week
09/04/2023 07:18priscilla yohana
this is the first time i read this novel..and i love it...but wait i haven't finished to read it...so i'm gonna go ahead..
09/04/2023 07:18what is the code for?
09/04/2023 07:18I loved this book. I almost stopped reading within the first 3 chapters and I’m so glad I didn’t. So happy the story will continue. I’ll check back in a month or so for the completed book. can’t wait to see what you have coming. great work!!
09/04/2023 07:18anjali ajiana
I don't think I can finish this, it got to cutesy. He is flirting with her and making these declarations going against her wishes like he legit didn't brutalize her for years and wasnt still banging someone else. It would be different if this horrible abuse didnt stand between them.
09/04/2023 07:18Mic
cant buy whaaaaat why now???
09/04/2023 07:18Nigella Henry
So if you a hybrid can you have 2 mates since you have a dual nature?
09/04/2023 07:18Stacie Hoffman
from one survivor to another thank you.
09/04/2023 07:18MirahLove
so sad this books over ☹️ can’t wait for the next one! please kill of Odessa 🤣🤣
09/04/2023 07:18doxielover53
oh my gosh!! I’m dying! when are the next chapters coming?? 😭😭
09/04/2023 07:18Pika Caley
ok I'm ready for the rest of the chapters, I have read them all in two days. How many chapters will be published next?
09/04/2023 07:18AstarteLor
Fabulous work! loved this novel and look forward to the next! Best of luck of your exams!!
09/04/2023 07:18Sel
Loved it!!❤🥰 Had me 😭😭 and so emotional with Kiya's transformation! Can't wait for Book 2!! Thanks for letting us be a part of your journey... with this story!!😍🥰🤗
09/04/2023 07:18Lidia Bonilla
I’m so happy she has a new and better family
09/04/2023 07:18Reader-439759
love it so far! 😍
09/04/2023 07:18Sherisa Weston
Mikhail Galen's mate is a male right because I think it was stated that he is gay?
09/04/2023 07:18Tiffany Bryant
nooo the cliff hanger 😱
09/04/2023 07:18Jennifer Moxley
I love love love this book!!! thank you for sharing your talent with us because it's amazing!! I agree with a couple comments on here, wish this was a movie as well!!
09/04/2023 07:18sarah Dossett
how often does this update with new chapters?
09/04/2023 07:18ALINE ALBUQUERQUE
where are teu book 2?
09/04/2023 07:18Victoria Richard
I think the ones that captured the avatars are the parents of Odessa.
09/04/2023 07:18Sherisa Weston
I want to know what deal is with that Owl. I am very curious about it because Kiya said Diana's energy was familiarbut she could remember from where.
09/04/2023 07:18Lidia Bonilla
Jonathan is an evil and selfish bastard
09/04/2023 07:18LucyFernandesMartins
loving the story can't wait to see what happens
09/04/2023 07:18Kira Galkina
when is next chapters due? 🤪🙂
09/04/2023 07:18Sherisa Weston
I can not wait to find out what Osiris' true goal is! He wants Kiya for himself only because she just happen to be the Moon avatar, he wants her power most likely or to use her power for revenge probably. Was he maybe in love with Selene and she rejected him or something well maybe not him directly but the god in him or maybe the god in him always wanted Selene's power but she defeated him so her avatar is the next best thing? I think Nadia stated that he is an avatar and he could not stop the influence of some god from taking over since birth so now he hunts his own kind which are the avatars to use them as tools to achieve his goal.
09/04/2023 07:18YumiDares647
💜💜💜💜💜 I’m glad to be here
09/04/2023 07:18Benedikt Ben Hierl
looking forward for the next chapters
09/04/2023 07:18Emerald Dream
I loved this book and can't wait for the next one!!!! 💖💖💖💖🥱
09/04/2023 07:18AZM24
I have to say Marii Solaria I absolutely LOVED this book. I was enthralled with the characters and what was going to happen next...I can’t wait for “Unhinged” to come out to follow Kiya and Neron’s love story (I hope I can call it that) I love these characters!
09/04/2023 07:18Sherisa Weston
Okay I am beginning to think Octavius is the guy who wants Kiya for her power. This Osiris guy I see in the comments. The goes my hope for Kiya to find a guy she actually likes and wants ughhh
09/04/2023 07:18Hey... Very nice book. Can't wait for the second book.
09/04/2023 07:18I just want to applaud you so much on this because I felt every word that you put down. I couldn't stop crying. Thank you for writing so much. You are definitely gifted. I appreciate you for talking about people going through abuse, trauma, depression, finding their purpose (finding their way), EVERYTHING and giving it a voice in a beautiful story like this. I love werewolves and all things magical and for you to put all of that in there, just made it even more beautiful. And I also relate a lot to the main character, so thank you again. I love it. ❤❤🥰🥰👏🏾👏🏾😊😊😊
09/04/2023 07:18AstarteLor
up to ch 54. really love this book and your writing style!
09/04/2023 07:18Sabrina Lawrence
will it be the whole book?
09/04/2023 07:18Lidia Bonilla
I think Octavius is not a good person and she should stay away from him, I think he’s the one who wants to have or use her
09/04/2023 07:18Reader-792709
what an amazing story!! can’t wait for the second one!! I’m still shipping for Kiya and Neron❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:18Brittany West
gosh I love this story. I can't wait until the end
09/04/2023 07:18Ladytaz76
so main character’s name was Halima and now Kiya is being used in place of Halima. did she change her name in the adoption?? that’s all I can assume.
09/04/2023 07:18Dawn DONT TOUCH Foltz,
I love this story. when will.chapter 81 be out. ?
09/04/2023 07:18ruby bell
How long will it be for the book to be completed?
09/04/2023 07:18Reader-297262
oooh it’s getting so good!!! I can’t wait!!! 💕🙌
09/04/2023 07:18Myriam Pagan Colon
hi when do you expect the next update?
09/04/2023 07:18Beatriz Valadez
wow really good descriptions
09/04/2023 07:17Feyikemi Oyinlola
This is genuinely one of the best stories I have ever read. There's so much truth to it: from the abuse, to the trauma, to the healing phase you showed how healing takes time and sometimes there are still underlying fears. You didn't rush the process and you didn't settle for the "book society's norm" of making it seem like a life long abuse can be healed, forgiven and forgotten within just a few months. What made it more interesting was how she was able to stand her ground on not wanting a relationship with Neron😅. I can't lie though, I'm a total mush☺️ and I was really hoping she'd get with Neron(still hoping) but you've made it much more captivating and I'm so hooked!!😄 I can't wait for Book 2! 🥰 Thank you so much for blessing us with such a wonderfully written book.♥️
09/04/2023 07:17ShrùTi Sharmä
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09/04/2023 07:17Lidia Bonilla
she’s Apsolutely right no sorry can change or erase what he did to her what his father did too her,what her family did to her, what the whole pack did to her,she really deserves much,much better than him and all of them
09/04/2023 07:17Nathalie Iliana Van Kerckhoven
One of my favorite's. I love every Chapter of this Book. maybe considder for bringing this out.
09/04/2023 07:17Shalyn Tackett
I feel like if they do not end up together, what was the point of writing so much emphasis about Neron going to Selene to beg for another chance, and her not granting a second chance mate?! I’m on chapter 70 and just read the comments that their relationship won’t be revealed In this book. I’m shocked because I feel like that is such a huge part of this book and I’ve been reading it non stop for days waiting for the chapter they finally end up together 🥴
09/04/2023 07:17Sherisa Weston
At the beginning of Chapter 41 who is Samantha? I don't remember her being mentioned before.
09/04/2023 07:17dailyLimz
I hope Kiya won’t kill them cause if she does then she’ll be as bad as they are.. dnt fire with fire, use water to calm the heat.. it make her feel worse and nothing will make her feel at peace..(just a thought)
09/04/2023 07:17Deidra Demens
This was such an awesome story. I can’t wait for the next book. I’m rooting for Kiya and Neron ❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:17Ema T
I loved this!!! Well done 👏🏼
09/04/2023 07:17Reader-955702
I only have up to chapter 82, was chapter 83 added
09/04/2023 07:17