Untouchable Comments

Sherisa Weston

Are we going to meet Violetta again like is she and Kiya going to meet again? She is interesting in a very good way

Emily Crutcher

Is Kiya, Halima? Why the name change?

Reader-857386

Where is book 2? And how do you get it?

GoddessNike

So addicted to this story. I haven’t been able to stop reading it since I started. I can’t wait for more

Lidia Bonilla

how can he feel the bond now,Supposenly it broke when he rejected her and he said he didn’t feel anything after that and she said the same,she said she didn’t feel anything for him,after their bond break she said they have nothing to do with each other after that, this is confusing

Reader-297262

Yaya thank you! that was wonderful! my heart goes out to Neron tho ;(

Lidia Bonilla

I really like the bond she has with her wolf it’s really special

Mandy Johnson

I'm surprisingly pushing for her to walk away from this mate and her pack. I would want revenge but I think she just deserves to leave and build up her life I'm only on chapter 3 so we shall see what happens

Gacha Love

so great should get recommended to more

Shayla Arhin

Girl you wrote the hell out of chapter 8 I have not cried this hard in months.

paloma black

I love this book

Monique Davis

I get it if alpha Anthony helps them for the sake of the innocents but I hope Kiya doesn’t go back to that pack, she suffered enough

Mayelin Rocio

i Love it 🤩

fantasia Henson

I love it it's beautiful.

Patricia Stansfield

From what I have read of this book, it is spectacular. the imagination and imagery of this is wonderful and it grabs the reader immediately.

Ambriana Offici

amazing story 😲

Marie Travis

enjoying the read.

Hay Lucero

i really love this story and i would have to rate it a 100000/10 wow i love it 💙!!

Reader-494667

did her name change from halima to kiya?

Christabellaleah Xo

I’m loving this book

Reader-971662

I really like this story!

Aniyah Bledsoe

Will she ever have a mate ?🥺

Jessica Mallow

“he’s also the bastard that killed my mom and sister” WHAT?!

Jenny Best Camacho

excellent story, love it!!!

Desiree Bethune

Your writing and detail is beautifully written, it’s like I can witness, feel and hear everything, I love it

Cheryl Fields

won't let me read next chapter

Michelle E Woolford

love the book , I just wish I could finish it :(

Marii Solaria

New redemption code for 12/1! TRZRVQ

modern_dancer

The story is really well written and intriguing. It captures the imagination and refuses to let go.

ZiZo ELF

Omg 🥰🥺

Marissa Margarida Raymer Alves

can someone tell me how this book ends sadly I can’t continue to read 😢

Cheri Ingraham

I like how it gives some back story as to why she is treated badly. Looking forward to seeing how this unfolds.

Becky Strong

loving this so far. great read.

Kai Lund

nice

Maria Bee-bop Tipoki

hated the ending

Mixie

only reason I’m starting to read this book coz it’s about rejection. Hope he gets run over by an aeroplane lol 🙊 too harsh? 😂

Tammy Lewis

just finished.... was not the ending i was wanting.. but confused on how she came to that decision because of what she was feeling before she was taken... in human lives, mating neron is not happening but in werewolf lives... and her an avater, i can see t happening.. but they need more time for her to forgive.. not liking mall boy...

Lanisha Almond

This was a good read. I'm looking forward to "Unhinged".

GoddessNike

This book was awesome! I can’t wait for the next book

Diana Hruby

I do have to know .. have you written other books? if so .. which ones?

Wendy Syri

Great story! Loved how you ended this with them planning to go their separate ways. I read some of the comments where ppl thought they should’ve ended up together....ugh NO! I’m glad it’s not one of those cliche ending. Lets be honest here, no one in their right mind would ever choose to stay in this place, with these ppl, who will always remind her of her personal hell. Why would she ever choose to mate with a man who was the mastermind of said hell and literally drove her to death?? Yes, he did try and did show some improvement, but that hardly scratched the surface. I mean having Odessa still all over him for a good part of her stay wasn’t really help his cause either. If she ever forgives him, that would be one thing, but it would be more realistic if they just moved on with their lives. Maybe after yearsssss of changing himself into a better and they meet again....that would be different. So yes, you did great on the ending!!

Kristy Anderson

really liking this book, except for the fact the pack and her family treats her so badly, but I enjoy reading the story

Helen Marie Lund

when does book 2 come out

Zoebia Afzal

its making my blood boil that an abuser is worming his way back to kia. There are some crimes that are unforgivable, Kia was sexually, physically and mentally abused as a child. It is just sickening Neron wants her back. It would be more satisfying if Kia fell in love with someone else.

Jacquelyn Rogers

I could not put this book down I have read the entire book in two days I loved it so much. I am so rooting for Neron right now even though in the beginning I wanted to snap his neck. This story has everything I have been searching for in a book lately.

Berry Bear

Thank you, Marii Solaria, for such a good book. It was a blessing to read... I love the characters and can't wait to read 'Unhinged'. You did a wonderful job in this book. i love it ♡

Brandy Pennington

do we know what time today the new book is coming out?

Reader-900659

soooo reading chapter 80, one would assume that Phoebe is the one that brought the dead back to life and that perhaps she’s been working with the master all along....

Sara

in which chapter was Galens mate introduced?

Deannchris

that stupid rogue who's gunning for her!!

Reader-900659

just finished 76, is it wrong of me to hope that the Zircon merged into Garnet and that kiya ends up with Darien as a second chance because her so called mate doesn’t make it and Odessa gets killed by some beast cause she’s looney toons and selfish as hell? I’m going with no. dislike me if you must...

meworks

it’s really slow. I get it. she was falsely accused. he hates her. can we move in with the plot line. geez.

MzDiva1987

Odessa is f**king punk

Shazam

brillant.. can’t wait for the next book.. this one bought me into the story, making me cry, smile, laugh and so much more... well written.. highly recommend 🥰

Angie O'Flaherty Thomas

I love this book very well written

REMANA WHAKAMOE

is there a chapter 83, what’s next and when please

Sharnice

this book has made me cry three times already

Reader-148278DebT

kind of funny to have my Hometown, Carson City and Northern NV mentioned in your book.

Reader-087914

how can I read the specials? it is blocked.

Mariah Anders

Loved it! cant wait to see whay happens with her and Neron! Poor onyx too! I really hope he gets his happy ending! Thanks for the hard work and please release the new book asap even if you only have a few chapters! I need to know what happens next! Checking daily even though I know it says November :) good luck with your exams!

Victoria Richard

I missed something who is octavious.

AmandaSegoviaKarsten

when will book 2 be released?

Bobbie Bonnie Neal

I love this story. Thank you for sharing your talent with me/us. I love how you have diversity in your story, different colors, shapes and sizes.😍 I cannot wait to read the ending. I look forward to read the second book. Once again thank you and I pray for prosperous rewards for you. Continue with what you're doing.😘

Shanna Brindley

great story! I love the ending and how they didn't end up together. I do hope for a HEA in the long run but N hasn't done enough to redeem himself yet. I feel he is falling in love with her naturally based on everything he sees but if not for the bond he wouldn't be so head over heels. I hope to see them grow as characters and fall in love regardless of the bond. I girl can dream right...

AstarteLor

I really love that you've included more unique names (I swear if I read of another Damien or Xavier, I'll lose it) & have a nice writing style with some educated and well placed references. I'm not too far into the story yet, but it's refreshing!

Nor hani

I love this book :)

Tabhata Ladrix

wow i never ride something like this, i really like it, the story is amazing 😊

UJANG ANTALAI

i really like it...

Katie Bratcher

I wish there was an option to buy the whole book at once

SabaG

Great book..when will the rest of chapters be posted?...

Savage S

when will book 2 be available

Reader-139047

I’m loving this book! wondering if there is a redemption code today 12/9?

Patricia Burnam

it's the uncle

anne allui

I love it

Lidia Bonilla

I really hate Odessa she was the one who tried to kill Kiy,i new it, she so selfish she wants her mate and wants Neron too,Odessa’s mate deserves a better mate not a selfish greedy mate like Odessa

Lidia Bonilla

I’m so happy for her, she deserves this and more

Adrick Cash

here I'm, I love it

Jess Booth

i can’t wait to find out what happens.

Leeana Odnot

very nice story i love it

When is the next update/book coming out?

Sunny

I am loving this book so much, I cant wait for the next chapter ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Escaping-Reality69😅

uuggghhh I really wanna read but its not done I don't like reading stories that aint done idk if I should but maybe I will it sounds like a good story

Sherisa Weston

ugh author why would you make an Odessa POV? As soon as I saw that my mood dampened even more.

Kayla Pierce

how come it went from Hamila to Kyia? I'm confused

Kymberley Sadler

really getting in to this

Julie C

I've enjoyed the book so far. However, you really need a better editor, there were several mistakes throughout so far and I'm only on Ch 45, missing words, misplaced words, etc. idk what ur contract says but they should be catching that stuff.

Sherisa Weston

The mate bond really kicks Kiya in the behind at times but majority of the time she really shows how mentally strong and determined she is in what she wants for herself and that is one of the things I love about her. I understand where Kiya is coming from, sometimes she submits to the mate bond with Neron like with the kisses because it feels good but that is not what she truly wants for herself, so she beats herself up for not being strong enough to resist the bond and calling herself weak and how she has not changed from her past self which is so sad. I don't really like this mate bond situation just like Kiya. On the surface the mate bond looks beautiful, being fated to someone and knowing someone is out their just for you, it is like a fairy tail but it is basically forcing you to love someone without getting to know them first and that is what Kiya does not want and I agree. She wants to find love and develop it naturally which I love. If Neron and her are to be together I would rather it not be because of the mate bond because I am going to think the mate bond is why they are together. She has such a beautiful soul, she is way too good for her world like when Neron told her to reject her but she couldn't because she does not wish that pain on anyone not even her worst enemies even if they deserve it like Neron does, but he is trying to prove to her that he is not the same as before and Kiya acknowledges that but still does not want him like that, maybe as a friend it could be possible eventually. I love Kiya so much, I want her to find happiness her own way and develop it naturally not because the mate bond compels her to.

doxielover53

I’m dying!!! just finished chapter 78!!! what happens next??? 😭😭😭

Sherisa Weston

I love how Osiris is underestimating just how much resolve and strength Kiya has. He marked her as his so that he thinks that automatically means that she will become his and Kiya will just accept that, bow and submit to him. Ugh I can't wait until Kiya rip him to shreds!! I don't want anyone else to touch him, not Neron or Anthony. This honour should be given to Kiya. Also, that werewolf that threatened to kill Femi if Kiya didn't kneel was Odessa wasn't? It seemed like was her

Sherisa Weston

I a! chapter 62 right now and I am wondering who Octavius really is like is he a potential mate for Kiya? Is he actually bad?

Reader-818440

from the comments I take it this book isn't completed

Lumi Dee

The fact that it took evidence from the gamma and not her being driven to suicide to make him sit and think that maybe a 9 yo could be innocent just dont sit right with me.

ballen282004

Awesome book by the way! I think Neron redeemed himself a little by saving her life multiple times, but he has not earned forgiveness yet. Well at least in my opinion. Onyx deserves Artemis cause he tried to stop Neron. I like Onyx the best too.Also did Osiris say he marked Kiya? If so thats messed up and I hope she rips him apart!🤬

Osiris said he marked her, but doesnt she have to concent to being marked? I didnt think it could be forced on anyone. If I am wrong they need to kill him quick!

Jess Booth

amazing book! looking forward to book too! I’m really hoping they Kiya and Neron fall in love, too!

Elise Mills

awesome that we got so many chapters all the sudden. I really want Nero and kiya to fall in love. can’t wait till that chapter comes

jw is this a bwwm book??

Lidia Bonilla

hope she doesn’t end up with Neron,I really hope she doesn’t forgive him or anyone in her pack because none of them deserve her forgiveness, I have read a lot of werewolves stories but I have never read one like this one where her mate treated her worst than a animal and sentence her to death, no woman deserves to be treated and humiliated like that,she deserves a better man a better second chance mate

Meranda Poe

this is making me so emotional!

nature

Can you turn it into a book and a tv series please!!!!!!!!!!!?