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Alexandra Andrade

I loveee

Lidia Bonilla

this story was amazing, Neron really messed up at first but he really shows her that he was regretful with everything he did for he even was willing to die for her,I hope they end up together in the 2 book,I love strong women though

Dora Peters

love it.

Robin Krehbiel

I can’t wait to read more

Lidia Bonilla

POV is more understandable

I’ve read so many stories on here and I have to say yours is my favorite. You are so good at bringing people in and keeping them on their toes. I am always so excited to see what is going to happen next. The way you tell the story is beyond awesome and the literature you use is amazing. There has not been one time that I’ve gotten bored or tired of reading, such a great story! 🖤

Zara Rodwell

Great book, I'm actually a little disappointed that Neron and Kiya didn't end up together 😢 .... Will have to read the next book

June Chase

I wish kiya and neron the best ,even if they don't end up together. I sincerely hope neron (wolf)have a happy ending as well as kiya in book 2.

amy.

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 such an amazing story!!! can't wait for your next book. best of luck with your studies & future writing❤❤❤

Betty Catherwood

when is 80 chapter out

steph campbell

when's the next chapters??I'm hooked

Betty Jebakuma

I am not allowed to do any purchases today, yesterday I was able to.

Rose SB

I believe Octavius is Neron’s Uncle.

MirahLove

fallen in love with this book! so good 😍 there’s so many books on here that are better than the movies and series you get on Netflix and this is definitely one of those

Jennifer Toppin

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Lidia Bonilla

wow, I really can’t believe Rain is asking Kiya to forget what she did to her Rain is so selfish,she’s asking to forget about it because she was not one getting beat,she wasn’t the one getting the pain, she wasn’t the one getting the scars,I really hate all of them because of what they did to her

Angie O'Flaherty Thomas

marii I fel in love with this book and can't wait for the next one.

Sherisa Weston

At the beginning of Chapter 41 who is Samantha? I don't remember her being mentioned before

gwendolyn bennett

I just want to say this is a really good book. I hate how she was treated and i would loved for her to have a second chance mate. but you did a really great job showing with time everything heals. i wanted to be mad at neron but he has change. we are not are past. your writing shows understanding about time. All chaptes are long enough for the reader to get a feel that her recovery from here past wasn't easy but yet healing happened. every character showed the same growth. but there are some that change only a little and some not at all and that's exactly the way life is. thank for this book cant wait for the next update!

Lidia Bonilla

but she deserves to be happy she deserves to find and get a man who loves her value her respect her, I just really hope she doesn’t forgive her family her ex pack and her ex mate, what they all did to her was so despicable and inhuman

Sabrina Lawrence

love this . I have to load chapters before I enter the bathroom at work , due to poor service lol. 😂

I loved the book and the quotes! Especially the music quotes. Love them can't want for the next book

Chantelle Higgins

Damn I was hoping to find the completed book on another site 😭😭😭 nevermind I’ll try and wait for it to be completed. This is an amazing book x your writing is beautiful!

Jennifer Toppin

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missy jean

Uhm... I thought her name was Halima??? Now it's Kiya???

Patricia Tyler

I am ready for the next new chapters...when will they come out? Thanks

Lidia Bonilla

wow, m really desappointed, I thought this werewolves story was going to be different from others I have read,I thought she was never going to forgive him or feel the bod after everything he did to her after the Mark he put her on her back,but I was wrong and the end she’s going to forgive him

Skumring En

It's torture to wait for the update! How often do you update?

Starr Hawkins

the thought that she was sexually assaulted because of their abuse makes everything worse. they face people access to her body without a care in the world since want forgiveness

Sherisa Weston

Author have you already established if Kiya is going to accept her mate bond with Nuri and if they will be together and Kiya become Luna of that pack and they have children and all of that in book 2? Or is it still a working progress? I am not saying I want that, at least not as yet maybe. I am just wondering

ofe cortez

forgiveness is one thing. giving a second chance another. she should forgive for her own peace and heart. but I would not like her being with Neron ever. if not.. i would love an ending where she comes back as the strongest werewolf .. skilled Powerful... where she managed to kill the rouges that started all this... than slaughter her pack with Neron at the end , sparing Gamma family and than ask Gamma to kill and end her life, stating she will rencarnate as the "Cleaner" - which she was her entire young life .. who will each time swipe the evil deeds in werewolf world with her bloody swords... over and over again ^^ aaa.. that would be something different no?:)))

Anne Mccoy Wilhite

love the book and cant wait for the next one. also love how you put quotes at the beginning of each chapter. Laurell k. Hamilton os one of my favorite authors and i was delighted to see one of her quotes in untouchable.

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Wow, such a wonderful story

Tanja Zaldo Martinez

OMG! I cry like a baby 😔 this story is so heart wrenching 😔😔😔

Heidi Stancliffe

omg talk about a cliff hanger!!!! hahaha

Lidia Bonilla

I would hate if she end up with him, he’s a beast a coward selfish man who doesn’t deserve her forgiveness none of them do and I hope she doesn’t forgive them

Nicole Paige Burnette

I hope Kiya forgives them. I hope her and Neron can find peace and get back together. what Kiya went through is unforgivable but Neron didn’t know. He was in pain from losing his sister and mother at the same time. He had no clue but this does not give him the right to hurt her like he did but I hope they come together.

Oh, I so love this book! Hoping for a happy ending, and something really bad happening to both Odessa and Jonathan. ;-)

latoya armsyrong

love this book... however... I hate to wait for updates!!! I like reading from beginning to end. I cried so much reading this book... I felt her pain. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.... I NEED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS.

Kira Galkina

Can’t wait for the next chapter. it’s late Friday now and no 81 and 82 chapter yet 😔 For the author: I incredibly enjoying reading it. Thank you 😊 How many more chapters left? I bet it could be an awesome movie or episodes.

Christina Terry

when is the next chapter, please? I can’t wait!

HanaBana

Oh no! He can't die! T_T I had so much hope for them.

Roxazaloah

Man, I am on chapter 11 so far and I have been keeping a steady hand on my tissues. 😭🤧 this story breaks my heart but I can't stop reading! Your writing is so captivating and immersive.

Lidia Bonilla

how can say it hurts him knowing that his ex mate is gone but keeps saying that he loves Odessa? what coward and selfish man he is

Genesis Young

I’m so ready for the next chapters to be released. So happy I stumbled upon this book. loving it so far!

Leah

when will this book be finished? just a rough estimate 😊

MirahLove

thank you for the update! when will the next one be done?

April Howell

can you earn more points or you have to buy them love this book so far

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Wow, loving this book already.

Jess Booth

ready for 2 new chapters, especially on this long weekend! i need to know what happens

Marie Kraft

Nice story I can't wait for how it carries on

Linda Hughes

Great chapter author, More please!!!

B👑

m up to chapter 13, I really really really hope she gets justice and those who bullied her suffer. idk what happens in the future, I hope hope hope she won’t end up with Neron😭 She deserves waay better! 💜

Nigella Henry

So I'm side-eyeing Onyx now. I wondered why he never stopped Neron maybe he wasnt strong enough. But Artemis just let him know how she really feel. So both of them got a lot of atoning to do.

HanaBana

The updates leave me wanting more! I can't wait for the next chapters already. I know that we won't find out the conclusion of Kiya and Neron for a while, but I find myself rooting for him, you really have me conflicted! He will still need to do a lot of making up, but clearly Alpha Jonathan was the reason why Neron was the way he was. But I think Neron will need to have the Balls to tell him to F off now! The Moon Goddess must have paired Kiya and Neron for a reason!

Linda Hughes

Author good novel!!

ana luiza bertolozo

Omg Can she destroy that mark that idiot put on her? I can't for the next book!

Yaritza Carrero

whaaattt?!!!!! I am craving for more chapters!!!! love it! I should’ve come across this book when it is finished 😂 in that way I will not be anious to know what happens. Looking forward for the next chapters!

melissa nichols

how many more chapter to the book before it is completed

MirahLove

I can’t be the only who hopes they end up together can I lol loving this book

Lidia Bonilla

Qhat did Raina Expect from Kiya?

T Rich

This story is PHENOMENAL!!

Amanda Caruana

brilliant book !!! can not wait for the next one!!

Dee Brack

Hi, to the author did Halima’s name get changed to Kiya? It starts at chapter 25?

Romy Saltz Petersen

Absolutely LOVING this story.. Didnt realise it is ongoing.. When will there be more so I can stop obsessively checking for updates... Read all there is in 3 days 😬 Couldn't put it down and can't wait for more 🙏

Lidia Bonilla

I really like her wolf

Jess Booth

this book has been amazing but i need to know more...we need more chapters!! lol

BBH 04

I hate that she ends up with him 💀

Mari Hollway

girl beat there butts

Marii Solaria

I’m doing a giveaway for redemption codes now my IG! Go to @ mariisolaria for raffle/giveaway rules and information!

Karina Marthinsen

this is absolut one og the best stories, thank you

Jenee Johnson

The whole pack is wrong for blaming salima for the luna and her daughter death they didn't give her a chance to explain what happened

Brenda Vega

This book is incredible....I was bawling reading the scene right before she jumped and now I'm smiling after reading this last scene with Artemis and the twins' wolves.....

Brenda Vega

I am loving the story....I feel so much of Kiya's pain and anguish and anger. I understand anger taking over being a victim myself of childhood abuse thru the foster system growing up and never feeling like I had a family and then being adopted by a loving family and recently being reunited with my siblings. This story is so good and I can't wait to see what happens between Kiya and Alpha Nerun ( I know I spelled that wrong).

Emilee Barraza

Loving this book could not put it down patiently waiting for more chapters😁

Eti

heyy i'm new here and I haven't stopped reading for almost two days xD I love this story! I FINALLY CAUGHT UP~ I was just wondering what your updating schedule is like 😁 Once a week? I saw your comment of exams, just curious 🤩

dailyLimz

I love how you put quotes from writers and lyrics from singers/composers every chapters..that is neat😁

doxielover53

how many chapters are there??

Rose SB

Loving your characters. I believe “unknown” is Neron’s uncle.

Christina Depass

so just finished chapter 56. the unknown is a vampire or vampire. Nadia is his soul mate and let's watch neuron go into over drive while Kiya is in heat. am I right?

Brenda Vega

Omg! What a cliffhanger! I didn't want to put it down but I came to the last chapter.....now waiting for updates....its going to eat me up

Aileen Figueroa

chapter 32 , omg!!! I love this wolf Jacqueline. she holds nothing back! she is just saying it like it is, politely. I am rolling around in my bed screaming a joy. thank you arthur for writing such Incredibles story ;-)

Jamie Fleming

love it

Brenda Vega

I'm dying....not sure whether to laugh or cry....My heart aches for both of them....alot more for Kiya then Nerun but still it aches....I'm on chapter 72 and don't want to get to the end

Jessica B

Love this story, it’s written beautifully. I haven’t been able to put it down! Will it be updated soon? I’m dying to know what happens next

Cristin Ronqvist

Love the chapters and cant wait for more 👌❤️

Jessica King

I got to chapter 73 and then nothing. is that the last chapter for now. also this book is amazing.

Pam Collins

This is a great read and has me crying ..So true to life..We get punished in different ways in life..

Trisha Z

Ok, seriously I've read all 76 chapters in 2 days. I really hope for updates soon! It has been a long time since I've been captured by a book.

Genesis Young

This book is amazing. I can’t put it down.

Tiffany Bryant

love this book. it's very well written

Duja Alabboushi

this book got me soooo hooked up!!!! looking forward to the next chapters 😍😍

Brenda Vega

aww....he asked for a date....🤔

Ashley McKenzie

I just started reading it and now I can’t stop. This is a good book. Possibly one of my favorites. keep up the good work!

Jillian Marie

This book is truly going down as one of my favorite reads of all time. You are a gifted writer and I am thrilled to have stumbled upon your amazing work. I look forward to future chapters and any other books you write in the future!

missy jean

So I just started reading this book. And as I'm reading I'm realizing I've read it before under a different name. The names are different but the story line is pretty much the same. However on that note I will finish this book, why well because I love reading and I hate starting a book and not finishing it. No matter how it's written, even if it bored me to death.

Marsha Farnsworth

I think books are the only things I can hear to cry at and still read. This is really good so far

Marii Solaria

Another note: the chapters will look a bit weird because it is being edited and the longest chapters will be split so there will be a number increase in the chapters by the time this is finished.

Reader-777847

I love the way you write!! a book usually can not keep my attention at all I get board or lose interest I read in 2 days ,thank you

Deathlee tumftw

I'm torn...part of me hates you for leaving such a cliffhanger and the other part of me is excited I found this because it's an amazing read that held my interest from the moment I started reading the prologue...I would've read through the night if I wasn't worried about having energy for work