Untouchable Comments

Misty Bennett

I did like the book and understand the ending although part of me wished they would have ended up together.

Oso Morado

I still haven't read the entire book yet, but from what I read it's amazing. The book is well written and the way that when you finish a chapter and want to keep reading it's an amazing feeling. Keep up the good work.

lexaxs_

Indeed, a very nice book!

Teila

I'm wondering where my prior comment went. But this chapter was a bit too heavily inspired by H2O Just Add Water. I just watched this show this morning. Author, you are a wonderful writer! Please keep things original. It's been so addicting.

is there a difference between this and Unhinged?

the best novel I read this year. once you start reading you will not be able to put it down. I've already started on the followup, UNHINGED, and hope the Kiya/Neron story never ends.

Reader-365702

I love this book Untouchable

Kirsten Burmeister

amazing book so far, but i thought neron already marked odessa before his alpha coronation when they slept together? 🤔 i really hope halima won't fall for him as it happens a lot in those rejection-werewolf books 😅

Mrs.Hyde

Neron is definitely growing on me.

Jennifer Thrash

This was a very good read!!

Dragon Icequeen

Just by reading what I could I can tell this is going somewhere. Far to many werewolf storys are about a possessive man who chases after a women who can barely resist him. It's boring and unoriginal, but thankfully this one seems different. Like a breath of fresh air, hopefully if some romance arises it will not be rushed to the point it makes me cringe, can't wait to see!

charlotte Wilson

up to chapter 69 but as soon as I try to read chapter 70 it tells me it won’t load 😫 help....

Jessica Hill

so sad

Maria Bee-bop Tipoki

please tell me theres a series and where too find!

Mackenzie Bingham

So, I read a few samples for this story and I'm absolutely in love with this story. Personally, If this was in a bookstore, I would definitely buy it.

Lorrenda Mcmurray

word not sword is sending icey chills down my back.

idonthavenuf💵4chikn

loved

Riya Ponieya

I think this book is great for a werewolf story. I have deeply connected with the characters. While reading this I could feel as though it was happening in reality. The emotions of the characters are displayed very well. I would say you keep going, this book deserves way more.

Bree Gowie

I loved the parts that I have read so far anf look forward to reading more💖😻💖

Sharon

so far it is very interesting

Agnes Bodescu

Hello the book is very interesting and the grammatik is good keep up the good work ☺️☺️

Reader-377874

any redemption codes for today’s date 12/08/2020

Luna

I read the sample and that Story is until noch so good. I love it.

Luna

These Story is so good. I love it

Nailae Lima

I love this!!

Lilly Pham

test

Selena Coemans

this is a really good story I am enjoying it so far not only that the detail is really good is like you can feel what character is going true

Victoria Watkins

love the quote of this chapter

Leesha Pelekane

trying to read the next chapter and support the writer?????

Kristy Bennett

love the book so far

d pacheco

really love the story where is book 2

Lora Lora

you have me in tears. when your writing allows your readers to feel the emotions of the characters.

Christal Hannibal

so far i like it alot and can't wait to read the rest. however i thought that the first part went so far into her abuse, like detailed, i almost gave up like it was over kill but im so mad at the pack i need to see her rise above or kill someone lol. but i loke it none the less.

Liam Malik ❤️💛

Book is really good

shannon p

Okay this book has made me cry so much already and I just started lol!

BlackMoon

OMG I could not put it down! I stayed awake two nights in a row till 2 am to read it. Love this so much. I need to know what happens in the second book. So excited.

Alpha Black Shadow

This is incredible! I love this, amazing job!

Serina Cole

really awesome book im glad she left that pack but faith however has its way of slapping the face

Sandy Veillette

I’m so addicted to Kiya and Nerons story. my heart breaks for them both. I smiled , laughed and cried. Please end then together. looking forward to finding out about Diana.

Jayden Garcia

this story is a master piece!

Reader-900659

great writing author! I’m actually quite surprised that Kiya is still fighting the bond, albeit impressed, and appreciative. Wonder how she will fare fighting it in Book 2....

so Neron finally believes she is innocent

kittyXO

thank you so much!! I love love loved everything about this story! I love the characters! I love the plot! I just totally love it!! I couldn’t put my phone down! ❤️

epicginger 123

this is great definitely loved the story for as far as I could read

parkash kaur

I'm getting confused. Who is Kiya? Is that Halima's new name/nick name?

ThePokétato

I once got bullied severely, they even tried to drown me. Then when they said they learned from their mistakes, AFTER the cops came to them, send by the headmaster himself, they had the audacity to say "We should stay away from her, right? but is there anyway we can still protect her?" protect her my ass, Toby! Just thinking of him makes me mad, not to mention he wasn't even the main bully.

Valkyrie Fatality

I absolutely loved the Halloween special. it was so well written to the point I could visual everything happening. the emotion was absolutely palpable. you're doing an amazing job

Chasity Foster

well im balling like a little baby

Harriet Fleming

Odessa suddenly becomes Ariel?

Reader-sha

did the second book come out already ?

Reader-377874

love the book, sucker made me cry. are there any other redeempton codes I can use I’m tight for cash

Cassandra

when will the final part come out I dislike waiting for the final book. it a good read I believe the owl is his sister and his father is somehow is the evil avatar or at least involved because he has been loosing his mind I also thought that once the loose the mate that they can find another mate that can help them live and not go insane or girlfriend I think he needs grandkids to help him and I hope nerro end up with kiya in the end perhaps she can learn forgive him for his abusive ways as a young stupid boy and also I thought once he rejected her and she accepted it that the bond was gone so why/how does he get to take it back his rejection? and y not have her reject him and he except it and her bond will be over instead of her linger feelings for him if she want to just move on that is why they should be together and he would worship the ground she walks and the death mark he put on will disappear from her back once they get together and have kids. when she was going thru heat she could’ve rejected him than are after and not have dealt with him ever again. does he know she was raped when she was in jail? because if the gaurd is still alive he’s a dead wolf. I believe nerro needs counseling to for his part in harming his mate and maybe have it with his kiya so they can have a kids perhaps twins lol and a HEA

Malissa Shepard

on pins and needles! I'm so excited

Lidia Bonilla

yes,yes I hope she continues being this strong in front of her ex family and ex pack too

Sarah Williams

Absolutely loved it, can't wait for the 2nd book.

Tracy Black

I am reading people's comments and there saying there is a second book, but does that involve another couple? I need to know that the first book has an ending to that couples story.

Reader-660947

Thank you for writing this book. I can’t wait to read Unhinged.

yonelisa sabalele

This is painful...

Victoria Chanel Joseph

excitedly awaiting for Unhinged when will it appear?

Lidia Bonilla

please don’t make her end up with Neron,no matter what,because what he did to her is unforgivable and unforgettable, it doesn’t matter if he or her family regret what they did to her, the damage is done

Lliira Magier

comes the second today?

Carol Moodie

these books are a drainage to ones pocket

Rachel Whitfield

👍

yonelisa sabalele

I cant stop crying! Just when i think im done, i start again😭 This is a beautiful story. Thank you .

Bhe Reyes

i hope this is not like the thousands of werewolf stories around there where they will be together at the end. seriously. the foundation of their future love was abuse, violence, and torture. No true love will stem out from it. Better have her paired with someone better. Getting them together will be disgusting and nonsensical. Mate or not.

Emma Marzin

Love this book so much!! I’m dying to read the next chapters everyday! Personally, if Kiya gives anyone in Ziron Moon a chance it should be Neron and definitely not her biological parents but that’s just my opinion. Should she live back in Garnet Mood with her true parents. Thank you so much for writing this amazing book!!!

Reader-020559

Will book 2 complete the story line...

Cheri Ingraham

The book has been interesting somewhat so far. I am waiting to see where the storyline goes.

Kait McDonough

Ahhh! I can't believe it's done. I loved it, and can't wait for book 2!!

Christy Tubbs

i love this so far

Patricia Tyler

The chapters stopped at 72...would love to be able to finish reading the rest please...

Harriet Fleming

why has Halima’s name suddenly changed to “Kiya”?

Janice Ezell

didn't get any bonus points either

Alyssa Gimeno

This is surely one of the best stories I have read

Crystal Spears

I really NEED you to finish this story!! I'm dying here! When is the rest coming? Ir have you released it and I can't find it?

Sherisa Weston

Is Kiya bisexual? I can't help but notice she admires everyone's beauty but it seems like it is mostly females probably because of her past with men maybe?

Reader-297262

-I hope there’s a part where the guard gets his due for hurting her that way.

Donnette Morrison

love you his story

anjali ajiana

Omg he said earn her heart AGAIN!!! Bish you never had it!! Men if they dont have anything they will always have the Audacity!

Victoria Richard

when is the next chapter coming out

Lidia Bonilla

wow her parents really are so despicable and selfish her family an general are so despicable and selfish only thinking about them selfs,they still want to run her life and want her to do what ever they want,like she has no choice

Katilyn Sanders

this book is awesome! I can't stop reading!

happy cat

cliche think read before

Nans Smith

this is a great story I have cried feeling her pain. cause it's so like my childhood and my young adult life

Sherisa Weston

When they shift into their werewolf forms then shift back into humans they are completely naked right?

Ladytaz76

I’m loving this book. I haven’t taken a pause to think other than must read more. then sleep but woke up to reading more and heading to do more.

Luis Garcia

Hi. Amazing book so far! Is there a way we can unlock chapters by checking in daily just like other apps? Thank you!

I really don't like Neron. He just dumped Odessa just like that? I also don't like Odessa (Nope, not a bit) but hey... They've been together for a long time. Neron just doesn't know what respect is. He was still a selfish person, going after his convenience all the time.

Monique Moses

this chapter has me in TEARS!!!

Patito소우주

I love it!!!!! 💙💙💙

ma'am i really need you to update more chapters i need to know what happens my mind is going crazy waiting lol

Beltine Bih

so good👌

Nathalie Iliana Van Kerckhoven

I love every Chapter from the Book, even the ending. I like how it not turn into a cliché end. You can't just "go on" after trauma's, and that's what's this Book is all about. Thrust is very hard to win, but very easy to loose. You Writing verry well and maybe you consider to bring these Books out? Sorry for my english.

Reader-651304

I am loving this story! something about shifters and having a mate someone who was made just for you really draws me in. I know Neron did very unforgivable things (in real life) but in the book world most loves especially mates can be saved given the right story line in my opinion. there is nothing I love more than a man that grovels when he knows he F’d up. I’m only halfway through with what you have so far, but I’m really hoping at the end they are together with lots of pups of course. Neron can find redemption and he feels the guilt of his actions. I’m gonna need him to get rid of Odessa though in the best possible giving her what she deserves.

Victoria Chanel Joseph

Hey what time will the book be released?

Reader-651304

I’m really needing more romance with Kiya and Neron. He’s proved himself to me isn’t that good enough? lol

Hauwa Ibrahim Abdulrahman

this novel is amazing, I loveit

FallenAlice

this book is amazing!! I love live Kiya! I have fully connected with her cried so many times do you have an instragram i can follow you (the writer) in?? i would love to read other books you may have

Reader-729786

Excellent book. You really pull out all the emotions. I’ve cried, laughed, etc. Well done! Can’t wait to see where you take it.

Jocelyn Hopper

Loved it. I’m rooting for Neron and Kiya! I loved Kiya’s strength and independence and I think Neron is a good example of how people can truly change if they want too. People are complex and you’ve done a great job developing these characters