Untouchable Comments

Alyssa

I’m re-reading this and smiling at the 4a hair type. I am a 4b myself. I am picturing her beautiful kinky, curly hair 😃😀😃

Destiny’s World

I’ve only read a few chapters but this book is incredible. I love reading mainly boy love books because they give a different perspective and a new set of eyes on a relationship of that nature. I’ve always hated the boy meets girls and fights, then make up and all that jazz plot line because it felt all the same, but when I read this my heart stopped... it was magical and magnificent. The way the characters are portrayed and the feelings and the pain in the words. I feel every emotion these characters show, I feel their sadness and anger and hunger.. I feel it all. So far I’m in love and I’m going to finish this.

Ashli Thompson

this is amazing ! I love this !!

Jhenna Mae P. Gayot

I really hope this story is not heading to where I think it’s heading...

FayeLadybug

she better not end up with that pack or alpha. the abuse is disgusting especially since no one will stop but instigate it. how the hell do you blame a 9 year old

Creepre Wolf

I've only read one chapter and this is great. At the end of a chapter you just want to keep reading and take in everything that is happening. Overall this is great.

Shannon Gikeneh

the book is wild

Marii Solaria, thank you for not making this the typical sex crazed mate bond werewolf book and opening some people’s eyes to physical and psychological abuse that they’d rather turn a blind eye to. With knowledge comes power. Thank you for writing Kiya the way you did.

Kyuubii No Kitsune

hi i like what i had read so far. I an looking forward to the rest.

ThePokétato

the are you ready? as ill ever be reminded me of the disney song ready as ill ever be

Jennifer Kerr

they don't let you read enough

Mochi

I am in love!! 😍 Only read through the Prologue and it got me wanting moreeee!!!😀

Marii Solaria

New redemption code for 12/3! 6978MZ

Elizabeth Kasper

untouchable ?is that the end

Monique Davis

I love this book and l would love to read more of your books, thank you soo much for the redemption codes they help a lot

Reader-148278DebT

Oh and Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family! 🍁

I loved this story I’m on book two now waiting for the new chapters! Loved the story line ,great book !

Emi

IDK kiya should've erased him completely from her mine the moon goddess should have given her a new mate

ThePokétato

i know that feeling of pride when you finally gain weight after weighting near to nothing. i weighted like 40 kg until I was 16/17. I should have weighted roughly 55 kg for my size. my small weight wasn't by choice though. anyway, it's really a big accomplishment and can fill yyou with pride. and there is a saying i heard... It went somewhat like Don't fear where you will go, fear where you were born. you will know just how much further the world can ggo, once you left those walls behind" somewhat like that, can't remember it well. anyway, i hope this saying has no meaning to anyone here.

Krystal Stanton

thank you for including her hair type in the story

ThePokétato

oh go cry a river, Raina 😒

Skylar Moncrief

its not what I thought it would be

Reader-255097

interesting story

Melanie Carrera

I don't usually read books like this, but reading this made me read more and more I think that you did a good job. When you contacted me I was surprised and you asked me to check the book and you also told me to give you suggestions and feedback, but I think that this book doesn't need that because its all completed. I loved it.❤

Ryanrossfan

Kiya is not neron's property. No-one can forgive an abuser, as they will just reoffend. Please do not pander to pro-abuse relationships as many men and women die each year from them. There is nothing romanric about these relationships. Statistics show that women are also more likely to be killed by someone they know such as their husband, partner or family member than a stranger. This is a real issue for millions of men and women in abusive toxic relationships!

Vicki Trewella

following!!!

Delete Girl

Very well written and interesting story

Jacky Yee

My bad. Wenny, not Wendy.

Lanisha Almond

Her name went from Halima, to Kia....

Jessica Wilson

I have very conflicting feelings about this book. With respect, I do not think I can read the second one. I'm so irritated with the way this one ended. I was mostly enthralled until then.

Brigid Popata

Hopefully, Octavius gets paired up with Kiya .PLEEEEAASSEEE

Rashi Malik

nice book.. but still can't figure out if Nero was so sure of his love for kiya why was he in sexual act with Odessa that day. he never put Odessa in her place once. shame on his love for his mate.

Reader-542307

it’s really good thanks for sending some chaps on wp

Puerto Rican Queen82

I feel Kiya. she was abused horrible, forgiveness is not easy and her parents and sister are fools. I feel for Kiya and Neron needs to work harder.

Gemma Capunitan

It's great story I hope l can finish reading it

Michelle A. Rosario-Garcia

wow

Susanne Self

got to the part where you introduced Violetta. That is actually my legal name. had to snicker at the name. I don’t here is very often other when someone uses it for me.

RUBY Martins

I like this story

Andreia Santos

I think that that weird howl is from the halima’s abuser as a child, he must have been kicked out from the pack and now wants her... just a theory 😬 I’ll find out soon 😁

EngelchenimHerzen

Love this story but it hurts so much. Every word is pain.. I'll continue reading your book, it's greatful. Thanks^^

Tammy Payne

Forgiveness is a powerful thing and it’s not to be underestimated. Real life relationships have been through abuse and their relationship triumphed in the end. It depends on the person and everyone can’t forgive. Life will test your resolve.

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 2: will Nero admit his mistake? not a chance in hell

Rachel Ling

I love Halima’s character development, especially after she got rejected by her mate. Though I am unable to finish the story for now, it is definitely one that I enjoy. Thank you so much for recommending this to me!

Sheila Young

I certainly didn’t like the ending, Kiya cannot fight a destined mate bond, plus she’s the most powerful and she hasn’t realized it...... ugh

Jennifer Cramer

ok so Halima changed her name to Kiya?

Chika Mercy

Thanks for recommending this book to me

Corinna Ha

i like it so far, i think sie has Potential!!!

Amal Yusuf

she's treated horribly its so sad 😭😭

Carol Johnson

It takes too long to read the stories. They start off very well. I love to read but they format is not my choice.

Zuleika Boekhoudt

Good 😃😃😃😃

Seraphina

up until now (ch 4) it is heartbreaking but very well written. I hope when continuing reading that the shewolf becomes strong and her innocent will be proven so that the whole pack will feel the guilt and regret what they have done to hear.

Abby

I've read some sample chapters from this book and I'd recommend it 100% but only for mature audiences that can handle these topics.

courtney braden

I love this book! I have cried so hard for her because she is an amazing character. the amount of love the writer put into the development just pushed that connection even further. I love your books and hope many more to come!

Rubyana Fleeks

This story is great I am enjoying it so far like the way its all put together like the details and the characters just makes it even more interesting and amazing.

MadFox

just finished it and I am blown away. amazing story and writing. very intense but I appreciate that the author got real with the main character’s experience and trauma

Essie Jenkins

I'm surprised to see my own name lol sweetness

༻ NahomiNya༺

This book was amazing! the characters, the relationships and the storyline! 10/10

Lidya Lewis

love the storyline and plot

Norma4luv

how do I buy the next chapter

YAKAMAKA

This story is amazing

Rebecca Hansen

I'm sad that she doesn't want a 2nd chance mate

Reader-857188

here from WP. how do I use the code y’all sent me to unlock more chapters tho?

Reader-857188

bro I cried so many times. hamila better have a good ending.

Kavitha M.G.Ramachandran

love it ❤️

Kaylin Joye

what is your update schedule set to?

gianna ꨄ

this boook is amazing, i love it

Debbie Delker

where is the second book

Sandra Desrochrs

this story is all right

Sheila Young

it’s the devil who wants her

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 5: to find Kwame and his family were trying to prove to alpha Hali is innocent

kittycat UwU

It's so cool and exciting ^^

Stephanie Hernandez

por pendejo

Raelin Mehlin

hello everyone. I’m guessing halima and kiya are the same person?

Patricia Dyke

good

1980z vubes

love this

Kayla

I read chapters 1-6. There is a lot of imagination here, and I love a good werewolf story, but the story also lacks many things. First off, you change from present to past tense a lot. I would pick past tense and stick with it. Secondly, I feel a lack of surroundings. I can't really picture where all of this is happening. I think you should describe the background a lot more. Thirdly, you do a lot of telling instead of showing. I especially think that you warn the reader that bad things are going to happen before they do, which kills the suspense and surprise. To make things sound a lot more interesting, SHOW don't tell. Lastly, I am having trouble connecting with the character Halimagine (I am assuming she is the main protagonist). I understand that she lives a horrible life as a slave right now, and that may make your readers sympathize, but so far I can't relate to her character because her personality is so small. Why would I want to read about a girl getting beat up? There was no point in the reading where I felt like I could back her up. She needs to shine a little more, even if she is being captive. I guess I'm trying to say make her more relatable. You can take my critique or leave it. I'm just trying to help. All the best of luck.

Rachel Julien Meronvil

I love that book I wish u will give us more chapters to read before we buy

ᏋᏰᎧᏁᎩ

this Octavius guy is obviously one of the rogues, hope he's not a vamp. I'm just wondering to myself if this is the part where i temporarily dislike Kiya because of this Octavius guy, because I'm pretty sure he's as bad as bad can get

Malcom David

very good story

Betty Davis

it's a good one so far.

Zuleika Boekhoudt

Ugh they are mates. Ugh why

Noemie Pele

I just start this book today bc someone contact me on wp and I really love the story! I hope I'll like it at all!!!

Kyasia Daniels

I love this it's so detailed

Trinity Hayes

I love this story cant wait to see what happens next

crimson canady

enjoying it so far

ᏋᏰᎧᏁᎩ

Oh my the chapter: The Dinner made me so angry. I don't think I've hated characters like i hate Kiya's biological parents, in television or in books. I absolutely HATE them, now that's one relationship i don't want for it to be repaired, EVER

Lucinda Sandidge

good story

Cheryl Fields

y can't read chapter 7

Brimmie

the fact . that there is FINALLY a character with BROWN skin 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Tracy Hamlat

Absolutely could not put this book down. glad to hear there's a further book continuing kiya and neron story. Excellent reading material Bravo

silly_fuqing_goose

I like the writing of the story and the plot is very interesting

Lisa Essler

Not bad. More editing and better word choice needed sometimes. it's hard to write.

Houa Yang

A very well thought out book! The chapters are well written. The way the writing was structured was very easy for me to read, and the organization of the writing made a much more impact, emotionally. Especially, the dialog of each character; it had its own importance. Very relatable with Halima, and also, very fascinating characters. I enjoyed every moment of reading it, and it would not waste your time. I would recommend reading it.

Author Preet Sim

I want also readers for my book😐

Marii Solaria

Hi everyone! Thank you for waiting patiently! The prologue and first six chapters of Unhinged are available to read! Click on my author name and it should take you straight to the book! I hope you all enjoy 💖

authura johnson

interesting

Kira Bobbin

I thought her name was Halima why is it now saying Kiya? x

Betty Purdes

jb n

Kona F.

so amazing！ i love your stories so much

jnissan1995

great story so far.