Untouchable Comments

Acerith 14

I've read a little bit of this and I am lovin it so far. Nice job to you!!

Spizik Tartaglia

this is very good.

paloma black

This story shows how much people can hate others for something they cant control

Malinda Hoffman

read both this one and Unhinged...... holding out hope Onyx gets his mate!

Wenny Khoo

Thank you for sharing it to me on WP😋Coming to support this and also looking forward to continue this story

Shazam

this book is amazing.. I was in tears.. I mean literally tears.. then happy tear.. I was able to get so immersed in the story that it came to life.. amazing book and a truly amazing writer.. wow

Sheila Young

if she doesn’t learn to forgive her past, not only will she fall to darkness but she will never have a future

Park Jimin😍

it's very detailed and formed. The style of writing is also really great! Keep it up!

bella

the blackpink's fan tho I can't 🤣

Jessie Rose

please release as a book so I can immortalize it into my library 😭🙏🏼‌ I don’t mind if it’s a digital library either, but apps come and go; libraries are forever, and THIS book has been such an exquisite journey I never want to forget!!!

Sandra Lesneskie

the way they treat her is a sin

Ash McEvoy

I’ve read samples and I really recommend

Genesis Young

Best supernatural book I’ve ever read. hands down!

Sharon Preece

why are chapters 7and 8 not letting me read them?

Yolanda Padrnos

This story has really kept me engaged. Very good story line. Keeps me glued to every chapter.

Reader-359499

Question, I am slightly confused by the name change in Chapter 25?

Helen Hagley

lovely story well written story

Leitha Johnson

I didn’t expect her to get bitten by whatever that is. I’m so mad. I need her to figure out how to use her powers and get out of there.

Seii Vladdy

Real good story, the writer uses good words and the storyline (beginning) is amazing! He/She is a really good author I am in love ☺️

Madeleine Oliver

ery good story. Problems with connection. Any rewards for reading?

Arlene Mccrae

I would like to read the book without stopping I love this book

Nomtha-Dez Mtambeka

I was invited by the editor to read the book. Ever since I start reading it I'm unable to stop reading. What an interesting storyline, amazing writing skills. Keep up the good work. Glad that I've accepted the invite....

Diana Yana

love the book..I wish i could finish it

Reader-440276

is the second book up?

Shell prettygirl

I read this book twice. I love it!!!

Stacey Jones

I’m actually liking this story so far.. I’m glad the author has written the lead female as a strong-willed badass, that doesn’t simper to her mate - like many others do in similar stories. It’s refreshing.

Georgia King

i.keep getting a error and I bought the chapters

lucky eve

this is a good story I can't wait to read more

Dekuxki

sis got mako mermaid powers

{ Unknown_Alpha }

I love the book so far You are doing amazing

Lachell Grimes

great book

Sierra Kaznocha

it’s so good I love it

Reader-900659

man this chapter really got me.

Nicole Pekarek

Got contacted by your editer to read and give feedback. Very good story thoroughly enjoyed it, highly recommend.

Itz Kee

this is amazing and intriguing especially if you have a great imaginative mind

Reader-516768

why isn’t it letting me read past chapter 60?

Multifandom Biased

I really like it Nice story 10/10

Malinthehouse

I love how detailed it was, with all of these details it fairly easy to make a picture of what's happening in your mind, I really loved of it was different from other books I've read before and in my preference alot better, the plot was also really interesting

miyamura's eyelashes

i rlly like the plot, it makes me want to read it more and more. thank god, i love this kind of genre soo much😭

Jennifer Zimmermann

An exciting story about werewolves and with dramatic experiences for the main character.What I especially like is the distinctive writing style that describes everything in great detail, so you can really get into the story and its plot.

Jacky Yee

Wendy Khoo, thank you for exposing me to the culture of werewolf stories. At first I thought, I wouldn't like this because there's not a whole lot of dialogue. However, 'Untouchable' does satisfy my sadistic and sexual desires. If you're like me, you need to broaden your horizons a bit more to appreciate the strange format.

Sheila Young

vampire and unless she realizes how strong she is, she will become his

Chanelle Tahir

absolutely enjoyed this! so glad it was the first book to come up, the writing details are fantastic can see time and care have been put into this, worth the read, I've not put this down since I started

Jonae Parchment

I love this, it's absolutely amazing

Sarah Jacquot

omg I love this book ! 😄

Nathalie Viquez

Love it. 😍

Rissa

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 She has a new pack, omg, I love this story so much

Haq nawaz

sexy

Rissa

Sooooo Dad is a creep. Ew

Shane Cox

what is the name of the second book

Ck carder

unknown is the Uncle

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 1: that evil bath I do really believe the father was trying to save her. I’m not sure of the gamma. the reason why her sister abuses her is and was jealousy

Bella Jersey 2

really chapter 1: how they couldn’t wake up that they were wrong and sad. I don’t have much hope for this pack in future

Dekuxki

he lost me at the mint chocolate 😭 LMAO

I don’t want her to kill her parents but I understand her rage. I know her brother said she should face her past but it looks like she is losing control of her anger and revenge.

Debra J Davis

I absolutely love this story

Kayla S Davis

Love this story so far

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 5: I guess I forgot to read the fine print at the bottom that says excluding slaves

Mrs.Hyde

Going back and rereading this it makes me want to bash Kiya sister face in and everyone else who hurt her. She went through so much abuse. My heart hurts just reading it again.

Skye Marie

it’s good so far, though I’m not one for Halima’s name. just not connecting to it for some reason. so I’ve taken to calling her Hailey instead.

Stephanie James

Did I miss where she talked about changing her name?

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 3: I think Hali was wrong about the gamma.I halfway thinking she could be forgiven and made an omega

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So finally finished reading UNTOUCHABLE and was wondering if i should read Halloween specials or just jump to UNHINGED? I want to know how important those 2 chapters are to the following.

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 4: Cassandra was alpha order to be I don’t know evil to Hali. the alpha and Nero’s crime get more more deplorable as time goes on

Divya A

I feel like this is a great book, but I hope that she leaves this pack completely and never forgives any of them. Even if people change, it doesn’t make it any less forgiveable or forgettable.

Walter Boswell

I haven’t read the entire book yet, but I must say, I would walk into any bookstore in the country and buy it so I can add it to my collection. The story is written so well and your care in the way you handle the characters is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for the honor of inviting me here to read this story.

lolliedear

Great series so far and such a diverse range of characters!

ToxicAlien15

Thx to the editor who sent me this on wattpad,this book is so amazing & I'm completely invested😌👌

Stephanie M David

is there another book or continue of the this book somewhere I can fine please help me

KatzRul

I love this book, honestly it may be one of the best that I have ever read! ♥️

mehra ali

love the story

Garland Sullivan

I read a bit of this story and so far so good. It seems like a good story and I look forward to the world building.

Hazel Robinson

love this

Leitha Johnson

I am literally in tears. Great book!

0M3G4 009

This is so good. I can fell the pain.

Tae Kookies

This is such an amazing story I can't get enough of it

I think Diana the owl is the moon godness

Jacqueline Rabb

This book is awesome, so far keep up the good work.

Ashley Lopez

to the author: out of all the reading apps, and stories I’ve read on them (especially with the premise of an abused heroine) this is the absolute best. Your talent as a writer is amazing, I love how you developed the story in such a different way than the obvious. You have so so so much potential!! happy writing

AliBi

Perhaps they might adopt her...

Chika Mercy

wow

~Doughgurl~

so far the story is really good, the way of writing is really nice to read!

Reader-191653

I liked this book, I just want them to be together lol

Crazywhovian2

I loved this book

SarriTheDoc

And this story is real cute :333 I like that! 🔥💜

Wcha

loved this chapter so sad tho but so happy for her

Emily Jones

So I don't normally comment on a story unless it has enormously impressed me. This has been one of the BEST werewolf story I have read. I've even shed a few tears at times, and I'm really not a crier lol The character development is done so amazingly, that by the end of the story I was rooting for characters that I absolutely despised at the beginning of the story. The writer is extremely talented and I am so excited to read book 2, which I normally don't read the sequel unless I really loved the first book. Well done Author, you have created a beautiful universe and I am hooked! Side note, I really like that there are quotes at the beginning of each chapter!

Cithanitz

Such a great story, loved this recommendation. I've never read a plot like this, so this is very interesting. unfortunately I can't read the rest due to the fact that I'm broke 😅

Karin Holtby

very good story so far

I’m so glad she is getting healthy and this pack is so kind

Woofersin Woof

Pretty good Story very detail and we'll made that have say

Carrie Kelly

this story is amazing so far!! I have been reading it non stop

Stacey Lynn Shepherd

love it

Christine Jacobs

i love this!!❤

Marcie ps

hes such an asshole. loving this book so much

Fale

omg I’m so reading everything till I’m happy to know they end up together 😭 one of the best werewolves stories I’ve ever read ♥️

qashreen

i'm enjoying read this storyyyyy!

Just A Random Weeb

so far from what I've seen this is amazing

Annerie Duvenage

It is a really really great story with real struggle and pain that will turn in to success and beauty.

Cindy Davis

so far im enjoying this boo