Untouchable Comments
Dracø.x. Harry
so amazing I definitely recommend it as long as you are comfortable with the topics!
09/04/2023 07:42DreamGlow17
this is a very good story, thanks for recomeded this book
09/04/2023 07:42Patra John
this is a very nice story😂
09/04/2023 07:42tiffd11161
This is a good book. Financially I can't open chapters early, but it's worth waiting for. The story flows nice and is well written. Can't wait to finish it.
09/04/2023 07:42
Michelle A. Rosario-Garcia
wow
09/04/2023 07:42
Kiya you are a strong warrior you can stand your ground when asshole Alpha Neron visits
09/04/2023 07:42Samantha Fluhrer
I think that this book is very interesting, and is captivating, making people feel like they are the character
09/04/2023 07:42Reader-974933
why is her name changed
09/04/2023 07:42Reader-900659
just finishing chapter 56...she should not have denied a second chance mate. now neron’s gonna be trying to bed her. great writing author! I do sincerely hope Neron is not her end....
09/04/2023 07:41Reader-900659
just finished chapter 39. Neron is on my nerves. I sincerely hope that they do not end up together. sure, forgive him for herself, but nope. I don’t care if he’s changed. he’d have my ptsd flaring, I think, not that I’d know. just a suspicion I have.
09/04/2023 07:41
Brittney Allen
it says 1million girls binged read this in one night under untouchable lol. it's true at least I did anyway.🤣🤣🤣
09/04/2023 07:41
christina strobel
won’t let me go on to chapter 10
09/04/2023 07:41Krissy Cookie Kretchmer
kyia? where did that name come from?
09/04/2023 07:40Barbara M. Stebbins
I'm going to be upset if she goes with him..... whether he's being good to her now or not..and his bad is just looking for power
09/04/2023 07:40Kathleen Belinda Grace Hayden
love this story, kiya is such a strong woman after all she went through, not looking forward to it ending
09/04/2023 07:40
Autvmn Lee
Why didn’t she just stay dead for the better ;-;
09/04/2023 07:40Kona F.
cant stop reading！ what amazing story！
09/04/2023 07:40Zuleika Boekhoudt
Feel bad for Onyx 😂
09/04/2023 07:40
Marii Solaria
New redemption code for 12/8! KPR72T
09/04/2023 07:40Darajijo
yeah, I don't get these people's sudden love for kyia. out of the blue "I love you too much" 🙄
09/04/2023 07:40
Emma Hewitt
I love this book but i really hope she doesnt get back with him. And gets with her rejected friend instead. dnt wnt it to be a typical ending of the dam bond lol xx carnt put it down x
09/04/2023 07:40Angelina Wind
@Marii Solaria this book is beautiful. I love the female empowerment focus, the medical accuracy of her conditions growing up partnered with the consideration of the fact that she's a werewolf. I also love that you made her a character that didn't need to depend on some big mean alpha to come and make her feel better. Instead she found a new family to help her through her trauma. Thank you for such an amazing book
09/04/2023 07:40ThePokétato
Don't, DON'T- Just don't make me pity him, please- He deserves that his wolf hates him, he deserves that he himself hates him, just... Don't make me pity him over his selfreflection, just because he felt some pain over it, Halima's pain was so much worse.
09/04/2023 07:40
Charu Agarwal
very catchy
09/04/2023 07:40Crystal Cove
Being the broke person I am, I could only read the first 6 chapters. What I have read are very well written and so understandable, even for a person with no idea how the pack system works, that I don't need any in depth explanation. Great book so far! Hope to be able to read the rest soon.
09/04/2023 07:40Heather Lanerd
what is the next book from this...?
09/04/2023 07:40Candi Alley
my heart goes out to the "slave", did they even try to find the real murderers. she was only a 9 yr kid. how could she have killed a "Luna".
09/04/2023 07:40ThePokétato
*me who's sitting here in a BlackPink hoodie from "SQUARE UP"* eyyy, a Blink!!
09/04/2023 07:40
زینب یوسفی
A very clear and fascinating book The writing process was very special the way I easily communicated with it and felt myself there. It's a mysterious and interesting story. It's worth reading and having time for.
09/04/2023 07:39
Max Flanders
very nice the book was great and fantastic characters
09/04/2023 07:39
Alyssa
Some people are writing very nasty comments. The author doesn’t need your negative energy, they read these comments. it’s very disheartening for her. I really dislike a keyboard thug. Give the young lady constructive criticism and keep it moving.
09/04/2023 07:39Kayla Smeltzer
good up until the undead Frankenstein zombie wolves. thats where I lost interest. every new character after that was just thrown into the story without the attention to detail that was in the beginning chapters. its like the writer lost interest about half way through the story
09/04/2023 07:39
NOOR MASITAH BINTI ISMAIL
it was amazing story..good job..i love it so much..
09/04/2023 07:39I swear each chapter makes me cry. I will have no tears left reading this book LOL
09/04/2023 07:39Bobby Lewis
I haven't yet finished reading this yet, but so far I'm extremely impressed. I highly recommend this book for fans of paranormal romance novels.
09/04/2023 07:39rose
This book is perfect, so many details, so many well-described emotions, situations, while reading it I feel like part of the book ... Perfection
09/04/2023 07:39
Brianna Robidas
this is really good like I'm addicted
09/04/2023 07:38
RoyalGala
How many chapters are there?
09/04/2023 07:38
Lizanne Campher
Awesome book! Really decriptive and well written.
09/04/2023 07:38Reader-431760
For me I don’t like how she wasn’t more self sufficient at the beginning. I get she was being abused but for having a strong wolf she could have hunted for food. I also warn anyone who was in a previous physically abusive relationship to pass this up. I couldn’t ever think of being with my ex again and this conutied to remind me of him. and forgiving someone who was capable of what he did to her isn’t a choice. I honestly didn’t finish the book because it was giving me to much ptcd. I hope others enjoy it more
09/04/2023 07:38Tristan de Villiers
I love the amount of detail in this and I could actually picture it while reading... It is very entertaining and i really love it
09/04/2023 07:38Sheila Young
vampire or the devil himself
09/04/2023 07:38Sheila Young
she needs to control her anger
09/04/2023 07:38
Osher
Amazing story! truely captivating and I only read 8 chapters so far. I love it, and looking forward to find out how it unfolds.
09/04/2023 07:38
Patrick Weaver
This is a great story, it’s gripping and engaging with a great start. Can’t wait to find out how it all turns out.
09/04/2023 07:38
Dk_Pine
Only read a few chapters but its an amazing story so far
09/04/2023 07:38
SarriTheDoc
Oh.my.GOD! what amazing story OwO 😍
09/04/2023 07:38great writing that poor girl/wolf has to endure.
09/04/2023 07:38Debbie Delker
where is the second book
09/04/2023 07:38Luis Davis
looks like it could rival harry potter in the level of storytelling
09/04/2023 07:38
AliBi
The taste of torment. Forgiveness and repentance are his only release.
09/04/2023 07:38Rayshawn Butler
I read the introduction of your story and it really sets the dark mood of the series. I like the writing and your grammar is great. However, I tried to read your story, but every time I keep pressing on it, it wouldn't let me. Maybe I'll read on a labtop and see if that could work. I also like how the introduction sets off a dark, violent, and intense atmosphere that shows you that this isn't your ordinary fantasy story. But, even though I read the introduction today, I don't think Neron would make a good mate for the main heroine due to how violent he was towards her. Getting clenched by the throat and almost having your trachea broke is everyone's worst nightmare. Thank you for sending my your story and great job planning it out.
09/04/2023 07:38Abigail peek
So many wonderful emotions in this book and I just started reading it. I love how you wrote your story because I can feel how confident you were when you were writing it. Amazing book!!!
09/04/2023 07:38Shahidah Jabaar
how many chapters does this story have??!
09/04/2023 07:38Ash Marringle
10/10 I was very enjoyable to read this because it has so much emotion to it. it is absolutely beautiful on how detailed it is. Amazingly done.
09/04/2023 07:38Readjusts Crown
is it connected to Unhinged??
09/04/2023 07:38also, adding Kiya kinda pisses me off with blaming Neron. She was 17when she escaped and he was 21... making her 9 and him 13 when his mom and sister died. Both children, only she’s met his dad so she knows how he is. Yes, Neron could’ve said “no” but his dads alpha and nobody disobeys him so why can’t she see that. At 13, there is no way he’d known what it would do. And him exploding in anger, help his dad is a D*ck so he likely had anger issues and add the “alpha” agression thing. I’ve been beaten by someone as a teen, it is not an easy thing, neither is rape. She’s great with kids so I am stunned that she faults one and not them all.
09/04/2023 07:38souad abdallah
It's very good actually even if i've just started :)
09/04/2023 07:37
Bleh T-T
very interesting book it makes you want to continue reading all day.
09/04/2023 07:37Sheila Young
wait their fae
09/04/2023 07:37Sheila Young
vampire king
09/04/2023 07:37I am so happy for her and Armitis they finally have a family and pack
09/04/2023 07:37
Donte-highwater
it should be: blood seeps through my wounds as I lay in the dirtiest part of the cell. I can feel the phantom blows to my fragile body that was given to me by steel toed boots. if your going to say crimson liquid. just say blood. And combine the two paragraphs into one.
09/04/2023 07:37Sharon
I’m really enjoying your book.
09/04/2023 07:37Reader-045389
this is amazing but isnt the beta of the the abusive pack, her brother?
09/04/2023 07:37
Jasmine House
its not letting me read past chapter 10
09/04/2023 07:37AM Ru
Hi there, this book is really amazing. Thank you for sharing it 😊😊
09/04/2023 07:37Kristy Anderson
i love this book, I wish I nad the entire day whybook mailed.to me so I can readwithout distraction s
09/04/2023 07:37A M Archibald
Chapter 19: why did her name change? Who is Mija?
09/04/2023 07:37
Isa K. Conor
it's sooo cute...
09/04/2023 07:37Lari Bo Bari
I swear to God, if Neron and Kiya end up together, I’m rioting.
09/04/2023 07:37
hiraeth
I got shared this story on WP, The sample chaps were enough to hook me, I am almost halfway through the first chapter and I am loving it so far! I have recently started reading werewolf stories and 'Untouchable' encourages me to read more of these. (werewolf stories)
09/04/2023 07:37Marii Solaria
New redemption code for 12/7! YKB2YB
09/04/2023 07:37Brylee Earl
amazing book I couldn't stop reading it
09/04/2023 07:37
Kaitlyn
such a great book. it's totally different storyline then most ❤️
09/04/2023 07:37
jason scott
this is the best novel I've read on this site. Im eagerly awaiting the next chapter in Unhinged. Thanks for two great books!!
09/04/2023 07:37Anna Bouillon
just curious this isn't the kind of book where she does and comes back in another life?
09/04/2023 07:37ThePokétato
oh she called her my little moonray!!
09/04/2023 07:36
kit kat
the plot is well formed and the story flows with a dramatic air to it. overall its well written. there are a few points where it can be a bit clunky in writing but its very good. and the writing mistakes are small and almost unnoticeable. I recommend reading it over outloud to find the slight grammar mistakes and a few missing words.
09/04/2023 07:36Reader-167531
loving it soo far x
09/04/2023 07:36Gemma Capunitan
there's a book l can buy
09/04/2023 07:36Adriana Rueda
I have no clue how to use/ where to use the redemption code! 🤦♀️
09/04/2023 07:36ThePokétato
Is the mall dude the bad guy??
09/04/2023 07:36
Bella Jersey 2
chapter 3: you feel Hali sadness and despair. she’s a stronger woman than me
09/04/2023 07:36Bella Jersey 2
chapter 1: the alpha and his son are horrible and inexcusable and so is the rest of this god forsaken pack of disgusting people
09/04/2023 07:35
tia030
First chapter and I am crying 🥺
09/04/2023 07:35Marii Solaria
New redemption code for 12/5! QCAGEN
09/04/2023 07:35Kris Cooper
please don’t let them be together. He is an abuser. Even if he regrets his actions he is still her abuser.
09/04/2023 07:35Reader-839219
when did her name change from Halima to Kiya?
09/04/2023 07:35Bernadette Odigie
Thank You
09/04/2023 07:34Julie Harless
So far I loveeee this book even though I'm only to chapter 8 or 9. Finding a black female main character is like finding a needle in a haystack in these fictional fantasy werewolf/vampire stories. So I really appreciate you Marii Solaria for straying from the norm type of default same old same old main character type. Also, whoever the model is on the cover of this book is gorgeous, and I love that Nephron has long black hair in ponytail; my hopes of finding a guy with that look. Also, Lol, since he's an ass in the beginning so far, I refer to him as a vital part of the kidney for pissing called the Nephron.
09/04/2023 07:34Mara Sky
her name changed? after adoption or??? who is Kiya?
09/04/2023 07:34
Annabel Viravec
I have a question....is this series a romance? Or just a journey about character growth and inner battles? Hoenstly I’m fine with it either way, I just can’t really tell. 😅
09/04/2023 07:34Marina Marcucci
I love how they say the word "mistakes" when they knew exactly what they were doing. there is no excuse for abuse and negligence.
09/04/2023 07:34Hannah Munn
Absolutely loved this book!!! Any updates on the second? only thing keeping me sane with lockdown 😂
09/04/2023 07:34Mara Sky
I am so invested. like inliterally want to go get Hali and protect her.
09/04/2023 07:34Marii Solaria
New redemption code for 12/6! RHCLKN
09/04/2023 07:34Humairah Mahomedy Rangila
her parents are disgusting.her family do not deserve her forgiveness
09/04/2023 07:34
Ruth Robey
okay forgiveness is a form of closer and can create healing. so I guess ill be okay if Halima/Kyra forgive but not so much second chances to her old pack. She has a new family and new pack that lover her.
09/04/2023 07:34
Sophia Scriven
onyx plays no games
09/04/2023 07:33
