Untouchable Comments

Dracø.x. Harry

so amazing I definitely recommend it as long as you are comfortable with the topics!

DreamGlow17

this is a very good story, thanks for recomeded this book

Patra John

this is a very nice story😂

tiffd11161

This is a good book. Financially I can't open chapters early, but it's worth waiting for. The story flows nice and is well written. Can't wait to finish it.

Michelle A. Rosario-Garcia

wow

Kiya you are a strong warrior you can stand your ground when asshole Alpha Neron visits

Samantha Fluhrer

I think that this book is very interesting, and is captivating, making people feel like they are the character

Reader-974933

why is her name changed

Reader-900659

just finishing chapter 56...she should not have denied a second chance mate. now neron’s gonna be trying to bed her. great writing author! I do sincerely hope Neron is not her end....

Reader-900659

just finished chapter 39. Neron is on my nerves. I sincerely hope that they do not end up together. sure, forgive him for herself, but nope. I don’t care if he’s changed. he’d have my ptsd flaring, I think, not that I’d know. just a suspicion I have.

Brittney Allen

it says 1million girls binged read this in one night under untouchable lol. it's true at least I did anyway.🤣🤣🤣

christina strobel

won’t let me go on to chapter 10

Krissy Cookie Kretchmer

kyia? where did that name come from?

Barbara M. Stebbins

I'm going to be upset if she goes with him..... whether he's being good to her now or not..and his bad is just looking for power

Kathleen Belinda Grace Hayden

love this story, kiya is such a strong woman after all she went through, not looking forward to it ending

Autvmn Lee

Why didn’t she just stay dead for the better ;-;

Kona F.

cant stop reading！ what amazing story！

Zuleika Boekhoudt

Feel bad for Onyx 😂

Marii Solaria

New redemption code for 12/8! KPR72T

Darajijo

yeah, I don't get these people's sudden love for kyia. out of the blue "I love you too much" 🙄

Emma Hewitt

I love this book but i really hope she doesnt get back with him. And gets with her rejected friend instead. dnt wnt it to be a typical ending of the dam bond lol xx carnt put it down x

Angelina Wind

@Marii Solaria this book is beautiful. I love the female empowerment focus, the medical accuracy of her conditions growing up partnered with the consideration of the fact that she's a werewolf. I also love that you made her a character that didn't need to depend on some big mean alpha to come and make her feel better. Instead she found a new family to help her through her trauma. Thank you for such an amazing book

ThePokétato

Don't, DON'T- Just don't make me pity him, please- He deserves that his wolf hates him, he deserves that he himself hates him, just... Don't make me pity him over his selfreflection, just because he felt some pain over it, Halima's pain was so much worse.

Charu Agarwal

very catchy

Crystal Cove

Being the broke person I am, I could only read the first 6 chapters. What I have read are very well written and so understandable, even for a person with no idea how the pack system works, that I don't need any in depth explanation. Great book so far! Hope to be able to read the rest soon.

Heather Lanerd

what is the next book from this...?

Candi Alley

my heart goes out to the "slave", did they even try to find the real murderers. she was only a 9 yr kid. how could she have killed a "Luna".

ThePokétato

*me who's sitting here in a BlackPink hoodie from "SQUARE UP"* eyyy, a Blink!!

زینب یوسفی

A very clear and fascinating book The writing process was very special the way I easily communicated with it and felt myself there. It's a mysterious and interesting story. It's worth reading and having time for.

Max Flanders

very nice the book was great and fantastic characters

Alyssa

Some people are writing very nasty comments. The author doesn’t need your negative energy, they read these comments. it’s very disheartening for her. I really dislike a keyboard thug. Give the young lady constructive criticism and keep it moving.

Kayla Smeltzer

good up until the undead Frankenstein zombie wolves. thats where I lost interest. every new character after that was just thrown into the story without the attention to detail that was in the beginning chapters. its like the writer lost interest about half way through the story

NOOR MASITAH BINTI ISMAIL

it was amazing story..good job..i love it so much..

I swear each chapter makes me cry. I will have no tears left reading this book LOL

Bobby Lewis

I haven't yet finished reading this yet, but so far I'm extremely impressed. I highly recommend this book for fans of paranormal romance novels.

rose

This book is perfect, so many details, so many well-described emotions, situations, while reading it I feel like part of the book ... Perfection

Brianna Robidas

this is really good like I'm addicted

RoyalGala

How many chapters are there?

Lizanne Campher

Awesome book! Really decriptive and well written.

Reader-431760

For me I don’t like how she wasn’t more self sufficient at the beginning. I get she was being abused but for having a strong wolf she could have hunted for food. I also warn anyone who was in a previous physically abusive relationship to pass this up. I couldn’t ever think of being with my ex again and this conutied to remind me of him. and forgiving someone who was capable of what he did to her isn’t a choice. I honestly didn’t finish the book because it was giving me to much ptcd. I hope others enjoy it more

Tristan de Villiers

I love the amount of detail in this and I could actually picture it while reading... It is very entertaining and i really love it

Sheila Young

vampire or the devil himself

Sheila Young

she needs to control her anger

Osher

Amazing story! truely captivating and I only read 8 chapters so far. I love it, and looking forward to find out how it unfolds.

Patrick Weaver

This is a great story, it’s gripping and engaging with a great start. Can’t wait to find out how it all turns out.

Dk_Pine

Only read a few chapters but its an amazing story so far

SarriTheDoc

Oh.my.GOD! what amazing story OwO 😍

great writing that poor girl/wolf has to endure.

Debbie Delker

where is the second book

Luis Davis

looks like it could rival harry potter in the level of storytelling

AliBi

The taste of torment. Forgiveness and repentance are his only release.

Rayshawn Butler

I read the introduction of your story and it really sets the dark mood of the series. I like the writing and your grammar is great. However, I tried to read your story, but every time I keep pressing on it, it wouldn't let me. Maybe I'll read on a labtop and see if that could work. I also like how the introduction sets off a dark, violent, and intense atmosphere that shows you that this isn't your ordinary fantasy story. But, even though I read the introduction today, I don't think Neron would make a good mate for the main heroine due to how violent he was towards her. Getting clenched by the throat and almost having your trachea broke is everyone's worst nightmare. Thank you for sending my your story and great job planning it out.

Abigail peek

So many wonderful emotions in this book and I just started reading it. I love how you wrote your story because I can feel how confident you were when you were writing it. Amazing book!!!

Shahidah Jabaar

how many chapters does this story have??!

Ash Marringle

10/10 I was very enjoyable to read this because it has so much emotion to it. it is absolutely beautiful on how detailed it is. Amazingly done.

Readjusts Crown

is it connected to Unhinged??

also, adding Kiya kinda pisses me off with blaming Neron. She was 17when she escaped and he was 21... making her 9 and him 13 when his mom and sister died. Both children, only she’s met his dad so she knows how he is. Yes, Neron could’ve said “no” but his dads alpha and nobody disobeys him so why can’t she see that. At 13, there is no way he’d known what it would do. And him exploding in anger, help his dad is a D*ck so he likely had anger issues and add the “alpha” agression thing. I’ve been beaten by someone as a teen, it is not an easy thing, neither is rape. She’s great with kids so I am stunned that she faults one and not them all.

souad abdallah

It's very good actually even if i've just started :)

Bleh T-T

very interesting book it makes you want to continue reading all day.

Sheila Young

wait their fae

Sheila Young

vampire king

I am so happy for her and Armitis they finally have a family and pack

Donte-highwater

it should be: blood seeps through my wounds as I lay in the dirtiest part of the cell. I can feel the phantom blows to my fragile body that was given to me by steel toed boots. if your going to say crimson liquid. just say blood. And combine the two paragraphs into one.

Sharon

I’m really enjoying your book.

Reader-045389

this is amazing but isnt the beta of the the abusive pack, her brother?

Jasmine House

its not letting me read past chapter 10

AM Ru

Hi there, this book is really amazing. Thank you for sharing it 😊😊

Kristy Anderson

i love this book, I wish I nad the entire day whybook mailed.to me so I can readwithout distraction s

A M Archibald

Chapter 19: why did her name change? Who is Mija?

Isa K. Conor

it's sooo cute...

Lari Bo Bari

I swear to God, if Neron and Kiya end up together, I’m rioting.

hiraeth

I got shared this story on WP, The sample chaps were enough to hook me, I am almost halfway through the first chapter and I am loving it so far! I have recently started reading werewolf stories and 'Untouchable' encourages me to read more of these. (werewolf stories)

Marii Solaria

New redemption code for 12/7! YKB2YB

Brylee Earl

amazing book I couldn't stop reading it

Kaitlyn

such a great book. it's totally different storyline then most ❤️

jason scott

this is the best novel I've read on this site. Im eagerly awaiting the next chapter in Unhinged. Thanks for two great books!!

Anna Bouillon

just curious this isn't the kind of book where she does and comes back in another life?

ThePokétato

oh she called her my little moonray!!

kit kat

the plot is well formed and the story flows with a dramatic air to it. overall its well written. there are a few points where it can be a bit clunky in writing but its very good. and the writing mistakes are small and almost unnoticeable. I recommend reading it over outloud to find the slight grammar mistakes and a few missing words.

Reader-167531

loving it soo far x

Gemma Capunitan

there's a book l can buy

Adriana Rueda

I have no clue how to use/ where to use the redemption code! 🤦‍♀️

ThePokétato

Is the mall dude the bad guy??

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 3: you feel Hali sadness and despair. she’s a stronger woman than me

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 1: the alpha and his son are horrible and inexcusable and so is the rest of this god forsaken pack of disgusting people

tia030

First chapter and I am crying 🥺

Marii Solaria

New redemption code for 12/5! QCAGEN

Kris Cooper

please don’t let them be together. He is an abuser. Even if he regrets his actions he is still her abuser.

Reader-839219

when did her name change from Halima to Kiya?

Bernadette Odigie

Thank You

Julie Harless

So far I loveeee this book even though I'm only to chapter 8 or 9. Finding a black female main character is like finding a needle in a haystack in these fictional fantasy werewolf/vampire stories. So I really appreciate you Marii Solaria for straying from the norm type of default same old same old main character type. Also, whoever the model is on the cover of this book is gorgeous, and I love that Nephron has long black hair in ponytail; my hopes of finding a guy with that look. Also, Lol, since he's an ass in the beginning so far, I refer to him as a vital part of the kidney for pissing called the Nephron.

Mara Sky

her name changed? after adoption or??? who is Kiya?

Annabel Viravec

I have a question....is this series a romance? Or just a journey about character growth and inner battles? Hoenstly I’m fine with it either way, I just can’t really tell. 😅

Marina Marcucci

I love how they say the word "mistakes" when they knew exactly what they were doing. there is no excuse for abuse and negligence.

Hannah Munn

Absolutely loved this book!!! Any updates on the second? only thing keeping me sane with lockdown 😂

Mara Sky

I am so invested. like inliterally want to go get Hali and protect her.

Marii Solaria

New redemption code for 12/6! RHCLKN

Humairah Mahomedy Rangila

her parents are disgusting.her family do not deserve her forgiveness

Ruth Robey

okay forgiveness is a form of closer and can create healing. so I guess ill be okay if Halima/Kyra forgive but not so much second chances to her old pack. She has a new family and new pack that lover her.

Sophia Scriven

onyx plays no games