The Alpha's Virgin Tribute Comments

  • Lexy Aliza

    what is her name, I don’t think it ever said it it did and I wasn’t paying attention

    06/05/2021 04:29

  • Christinas Death

    the to heros of this story are both such @$$ #*/$. I cand tetra through the first few chapters. the story is so painful to read. If someone else edited it to make it this way, change editors. The story had a great Idea but it got lost

    06/05/2021 04:19

  • Christinas Death

    this story is lacking all and any details about everything. The few details it shares with the reader, are repeated over and over and over again

    06/05/2021 04:13

  • Sarah Walls

    This is such a great book. I just caught up. You are doing a great job. Can’t wait to read till the end. In the mean time, I’m going to check out Phobos book.

    06/04/2021 23:32

  • Karen Cool

    I've spent the last couple of chapter bawling like a baby

    06/04/2021 23:30

  • Red

    is there a second story to this book or is it still being updated? I really liked this story, so I got there's more... even other books for his brother and childhood friend

    06/04/2021 22:23

  • Mìtsy

    I try to comment and it’s always disappearing

    06/04/2021 21:37

  • Reader-104750

    well your book has accomplished something only one other on an app like this has...made me cry because I empathized with her fear of losing him.

    06/04/2021 18:51

  • B Beau L

    I'm struggling a bit as it feels so different as it's not as worded as the original the alphas Virgin tribute (not the Deimos book)

    06/04/2021 18:06

  • B Beau L

    oh gosh I'm reading this for the third time now...from beginning and there is loads more added to the fourth or fifth chapter. it adds more to it definitely, which I like / love...but I'm feeling like I'm missing out if I skip bits now.

    06/04/2021 18:03

  • Bri Winans

    author why are you breaking my heart???😭😭💔💔 please tell me it gets happier!!!

    06/04/2021 17:59

  • Kayla Swick

    are you not posting the story on hinovel anymore? I have all of the chapters unlocked over there before I knew the story was on here and now I feel like I wasted money over there if I could have spent it over on this app.

    06/04/2021 17:45

  • Reader-459096

    spoilers: I am liking the book so far but I don’t understand the time frame. As I read it doesn’t seem like much time has passed then all the sudden she says years. So it took them YEARS to mate? I don’t understand that. How did he hold his wolf back that long? I am just not understanding the passage of time. I wish when writing you could have talked about how long it had been.

    06/04/2021 16:37

  • Angie Williams

    this is the same story as Deimos( alpha of alphas ) right?

    06/04/2021 15:36

  • Vanessa

    Will there be another chapter posted this week or is the next upload for next week? thanks

    06/04/2021 15:28

  • Janetta

    is there no way to get points without paying for them?

    06/04/2021 13:19

  • Vic Vic

    it’s annoying already why it took him so long to mate her

    06/04/2021 09:23

  • Christinas Death

    how did she get un handcuffed

    06/04/2021 08:45

  • Gina

    I would just like to say. I haven't been able to stop reading and I'm now crying at 4:15 am

    06/04/2021 08:40

  • Reader-014654

    is it just me? why is there repeats ive been four of the same paragraph and it frustrates me

    06/04/2021 07:21

  • lil'momma25

    what?! Noooooooooooo I am so sad and mad right now. those who have read it know why.

    06/04/2021 05:26

  • Christinas Death

    The poor grammer is bothering me

    06/04/2021 05:11

  • Neva Shay Spencer

    how often do you update I dont want to get side tracked and miss an update so into both of your books in this series now so amazing!!!

    06/04/2021 02:47

  • Shannon Paterno

    You write so beautifully! I am loving this book so much.I have read so many werewolf books and this one is written so differently,it is so good!💕

    06/04/2021 02:00

  • Karen Childers

    I’m loving this story…. the last 3 chapters have touched my heart with the love they have!!! 🥰

    06/04/2021 01:55

  • Rule 30

    ye guys not cool all the spoilers... even if there are plot twist it's as if ppl would scream "Jon snow died". who cares what's next. don't ruin important part of a story even if it's not the absolute end 😔

    06/03/2021 22:34

  • Tiffany Pendergrass

    How often do you put out new chapters? I just finished what is available and ready for more :). I love it, thank you!

    06/03/2021 17:32

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    this book has quickly become my favorite I love the way you write, I love how demois and Lumina communicate, the terms they use their endearment and wording is foreign and beautiful to me! I wish I spoke so much from the heart. I see you....

    06/03/2021 14:22

  • Casper35

    i haven't even read the book and y'all are ruining it, y'all dummies your giving it away, i dont know if want to read it now

    06/03/2021 13:40

  • Janetta

    awwww does he for real die

    06/03/2021 13:15

  • Dana Lynn

    will there be a second book for Deimos and Lumina??

    06/03/2021 06:34

  • Ke'Londa Escalante

    why did you kill him off without at least letting her have his pups?

    06/03/2021 06:15

  • armay buckman

    did Deimos really die..?

    06/03/2021 04:43

  • Beth Piontkowski

    did they have sex?

    06/03/2021 04:11

  • Vanessa

    are we going to find out what the tattoos on Cronous's face symbolize?

    06/03/2021 02:57

  • Lysette Nunez

    love this story

    06/03/2021 01:48

  • Mrs. Camden

    i am really liking this book. more than any other book ive read.

    06/03/2021 01:38

  • Chelsea Kimchoy

    I LOVE your book. I see and feel both sides but lumina is kind of making me upset. she is acting like a spoiled brat. Deimos is trying but she gave him hope just to rip it away the next day!

    06/02/2021 23:22

  • Dona Myers

    I think I have cried, laughed & felt harder with this book than any other. Thank you for sharing your gift & I cannot wait to continue reading 🥰

    06/02/2021 19:53

  • Rachel Moye

    I have been completely addicted!! 😍

    06/02/2021 18:36

  • Kelly Moffett

    Curious you stated that it has been 4 months but when she talks to Luigi and Marco it's only been a month?

    06/02/2021 17:25

  • Reader-099242

    I just finished this book in two days. I didn’t realize it was ongoing. how often does the author update?

    06/02/2021 13:57

  • xmistery2

    why doesn't she just reject him then, go be with Cronus girl!

    06/02/2021 11:19

  • Magdolna Szabo

    Why you put the alpha female in weak character?She most be reject him at all cost!You put her in humiliet all the time thats shame!

    06/02/2021 10:54

  • Sandra Smith Winston

    I liked the beginning it was different

    06/02/2021 00:57

  • Tasha Thomas

    why kill off deimks

    06/01/2021 23:25

  • Tasha Thomas

    why kill off dsimos I don't get it

    06/01/2021 23:22

  • sunshine

    how often are your updates?

    06/01/2021 21:31

  • Luna Liz

    Hello my females ❤️ PHOBOS (King Of Beasts) has been published on AnyStories. Phobos is the older brother of Deimos. Phobos is the mate of Theia and their story will be emotional just as The Alpha’s Virgin Tribute. To find it, just click on my name and you can find the story listed below. Hope you all enjoy it, truly. Happy reading, Liz

    06/01/2021 14:29

  • Grace Dalley

    Is this the same book as "Alpha of Alpha's"?

    06/01/2021 13:15

  • Pinky Kumawat

    it's good

    06/01/2021 11:24

  • Tammy Payne

    I love this book. I’m just said that they are always in turmoil. She wants babies. Let her have babies and be happy.

    06/01/2021 04:03

  • Lady Scorcher

    If she’s suppose to be an alpha why is it all she ever does is cry. So far all she’s done is kill that 1 female she thought he was sleeping with. where’s her dominance? I hope she asserts herself soon because I’m not having much respect for this tear filled submissive.

    06/01/2021 00:09

  • Cassie McNeely

    is it just me? what is her name? did I miss it somewhere? it's always alpha, Luna or mate.

    05/31/2021 17:44

  • Reader-180778

    this book 🥰

    05/31/2021 16:17

  • Lidiane Barros

    i don’t understand we pais for Deimos and now this one has been put on and with updates so we will have chapters here and there its not nice that we have to go from one to the other when reread it 😕 becaus I will read again as its an amazing book but now got bit confusing...and I has to find put by accident this one while waiting for updates on Deimos 😭.. also I did like the Deimos Book tittle better ...

    05/31/2021 13:49

  • Stephanie Foster

    I don’t think I have ever cried so much reading a book ❤️

    05/31/2021 13:07

  • Reader-232328

    isn’t this the same story as the one by lizy fatima, i’m confused

    05/31/2021 10:34

  • Emily Passmore

    You are tearing me apart inside and it just shows how much I've fallen for these characters. It breaks my heart then builds it back up again

    05/31/2021 10:24

  • Miss Moondust

    So much excitement when I realised a new chapter was up. I’m loving how their relationship is constantly evolving and changing x

    05/31/2021 09:25

  • Heather Wood

    I have fallen in love with these characters and can’t wait to see how their story progresses. Beautifully written-heart wrenching- this makes a good read for me. I love when stories bring out intense emotions from me.. keep up the great work, I’ll be patiently waiting for updates 💕

    05/31/2021 08:14

  • B Beau L

    hey Luna Liz 💖🌃 chapter - make a wise desicion. Deimos has grey eyes... the beginning needs a little bit of editing like the rest of the book has been done (I'm sure you wrote that you were editing it backwards to the beginning? unless I've mistaken that with another author.) I find your writing, especially the later parts to the book, brilliant. this will be my 2nd time reading it in full. I personally would love more physical description of Lumina and Deimos, ages, heights, would be a lovely addition. 💖

    05/31/2021 07:22

  • B Beau L

    the bloody battle...lumina is mentioned and her parents waving to her. is this a mistake?

    05/31/2021 06:47

  • olliesea_bengals

    why is the original Deimos Alpha of Alphas no longer available?

    05/31/2021 06:29

  • Rachel Moye

    Where did that bad a$$ b*tch that killed that female and doesn't share go? It's was truly annoying to see her turn so weak! Lacks the the strength to stand by her conviction and it's so disappointing! Cronos is awesome!!

    05/31/2021 04:50

  • Princesskarice Samuel-adams

    Cronus went straight for Deimo's kneck with his words boi 🤣🥰

    05/31/2021 04:12

  • Angela Rose

    I'm only up to Ciao, Italia and I've really enjoyed the story so far. I think you're a good writer. I would have liked to hear Deimos's internal dialogue more from the beginning to get a better understanding of his character and how he feels by this point, especially since he has had such a change in behavior. I will try to keep reading but I'm losing interest a bit with how slow their relationship is moving along (and I honestly don't really emotionally understand how they constantly exhibit loving and caring behavior but he can't make love to her yet? I'm lost there) and from what I've read in other comments it seems like I can expect more of that and then also because of the high price. But overall my eyes have been glued to this book for the entire day. ♥️

    05/31/2021 04:12

  • Neva Dat

    I wanna find out about this necklace she said she wasn’t ready for 🤫

    05/31/2021 03:14

  • S. Alkinbee

    Chapter 4, in the middle of the chapter, you repeated the same paragraph.

    05/31/2021 00:32

  • Neva Dat

    ughhh y is she sooooo stubborn I mean u almost killed his child and he forgave u get over it

    05/30/2021 22:47

  • Mìtsy

    hm I purchased the Deimos book and I’ve read it till the actual last chapter now I came to read this one and only a few things have changed so far so I’m not sure if it’s worth purchasing this one, can anyone enlighten me if there’s any significant difference between this book and the other one? thanks

    05/30/2021 08:34

  • Angel Kowal

    Luna Liz I purchased the old version Deimos, how can I download this version without having to repurchase?

    05/30/2021 01:53

  • blossom ukauka

    can i buy this is hard copy?

    05/29/2021 22:26

  • Shelby Heaton

    Can we talk about the his Chosen for a second? I am emotionally invested by this point and I was crushed right along with her! I really think it was a mistake making their pup male. The story line could have had a better development with a real choice on what to do with the Chosen once a strong female pup was born. I just feel like that really played right into his hands there. Like a "See, you don't have to worry about it. It turned out for the best anyway." Instead we have a long drawn out process of forgiveness on something that didn't actually take place but the idea of it did.

    05/29/2021 20:43

  • Animelover Calhoun

    when will we get an update

    05/29/2021 19:30

  • Vanessa

    is there an eta for the next chapter? i loved the story thus far the naked chapter was just beautiful!

    05/29/2021 18:47

  • Pamela Moores

    Deimos's immature and asshole behavior is pissing me off. wait years to have sex? Years before finally mating?! Now he's forcing her to wait even more years on having a child? He's not trying to be thoughtful or caring of Lumina, he's gaslighting her and being emotionally manipulative and abusive

    05/29/2021 15:15

  • Wendy Thompson

    I have really enjoyed this book. I love the author’s language throughout, every time Deimos speaks and says, “yes?” I melt. As this story comes to a close I really hope we hear just a smidge of Phobos & Thiea, that we get to meet Cronos mate & an epilogue with a bow on top! Thank you for a story that really had me feeling all the feels💕

    05/29/2021 14:10

  • Bri Winans

    Ugh!! What changed in Deimos's eyes????? Like... What caused him to do a 180°???? Is it ever going to explain this??!! Please tell me!!

    05/29/2021 05:57

  • Bri Winans

    I think Ragon is my favorite character lmao I love him!

    05/29/2021 05:19

  • Bri Winans

    omg I'm not even that far into the book and you have me crying😭😭 you are a good writer, keep up the good work! I'm hooked so far🧡

    05/29/2021 04:26

  • Lisa Hoops

    I am loving this read by the wY, has me hooked. Just feeling as though very unreasonably priced.

    05/29/2021 02:14

  • Bevchrismaggie Krupp

    love the story ❤️ will there be more?

    05/29/2021 02:06

  • Stephanie Foster

    I understand growth & getting to know one another but 3 yrs? Then he completely evades the “pups” question by blocking her out? Then when she opens up about wanting a family it states with minds wide open??? He said nothing he didn’t say why he shut her out. I’m sorry but he needs to put his big boy panties on & act like a man who actually wants his mate

    05/29/2021 01:42

  • Tabbydawn Louthen

    love the book good job

    05/28/2021 09:18

  • Kira Madden

    I'm confused. Is she a strong alpha or is she another whiny woman who can't do anything when it comes to a male alpha?

    05/28/2021 05:38

  • Ami Mamaj' Sommerfield

    yeah, I'm done with this. Can't stand a story with a woman who is supposedly strong, an Alpha, who cries at the drop of a hat. And a man who obviously doesn't deserve to have ANY woman, much less a strong female Alpha. Next story...

    05/28/2021 04:01

  • Kimberly White

    From the way it is written, I am going to guess that English is not this writers first language. Also, I'm getting tired of almost every werewolf story I read on these reading apps all starting off or containing a continuous theme of abusive mates. I'm over people glorifying it or using it as a crutch to propel their stories forward.

    05/28/2021 04:01

  • Sonia Punja

    Hi Liz when is the next update ?

    05/28/2021 03:29

  • feedmebooks13

    I like the story overall. It would be nice to have more information behind Deimos’ thinking sometimes. And it’s odd how suddenly they’ve been together for 3 years even though previous chapters make it seem like things have going on for maybe a year tops. Just weird to mention the timeframe so out of the blue. In later chapters the word “whilst” shows up A LOT ... would recommend a little more editing on that end as well.

    05/28/2021 01:44

  • Remy Bergez

    My heart breaks for her, legit I almost cried when her Mate continually breaks her heart and spirit and claims ignorance 💔 😢 He doesn't deserve her!

    05/28/2021 00:48

  • cinnafox

    im so confused. the 1st chapters are all over the place i cant keep up or grasp whats happening. i swear ive read certain parts in a different story

    05/28/2021 00:38

  • BluezCluez

    i noticed that this author has another book called “Deimos” that is similar to this one.

    05/27/2021 22:19

  • B Beau L

    is this still ongoing? I'm up to the latest chapter, Naked. it's flipping brilliant 🥰🥰🥰

    05/27/2021 11:02

  • Claire Domney

    when will this be complete

    05/27/2021 10:08

  • Lisa Mehl

    so disappointing 😒 would not recommend. don't waste your time

    05/27/2021 06:59

  • Jenny Best Camacho

    wow !!! is all I can say. this story with its twist and turns had me at the edge. It played with my emotions, made me fall deep into it like it was mine to live. The best story I has came across. EXCELLENT!!!!

    05/27/2021 04:02

  • Mandy Mays

    she sure did 👀.......

    05/27/2021 02:35

  • EveUwU

    so far the story is excellant. keep up the hard work.

    05/26/2021 23:23

  • Animelover Calhoun

    waiting on updates

    05/26/2021 19:11
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