The Alpha's Virgin Tribute Comments

omg! this is like a really long foreplay 😂😂😂 great but frustrating lol

Bri Winans

omg I'm not even that far into the book and you have me crying😭😭 you are a good writer, keep up the good work! I'm hooked so far🧡

Fiso Tusitala

next chapter plz awesome thanks

My heart breaks for Deimos. I don’t like the tradition but she could have handled it better. But because she couldn’t forgive him and move on and chose to break him, now he has to deal with his pack. She wanted him to forgive her for what she did but couldn’t do the same.

lil'momma25

what?! Noooooooooooo I am so sad and mad right now. those who have read it know why.

Bevchrismaggie Krupp

love the story ❤️ will there be more?

Hello my females ❤️ PHOBOS (King Of Beasts) has been published on AnyStories. Phobos is the older brother of Deimos. Phobos is the mate of Theia and their story will be emotional just as The Alpha’s Virgin Tribute. To find it, just click on my name and you can find the story listed below. Hope you all enjoy it, truly. Happy reading, Liz

Dominique Bristol

think God I though he was actually dead man, I'm so happy, why did the author do this she scared me to death

Curious you stated that it has been 4 months but when she talks to Luigi and Marco it's only been a month?

why is my comment going away after I post it! 😩

cinnafox

im so confused. the 1st chapters are all over the place i cant keep up or grasp whats happening. i swear ive read certain parts in a different story

reader2121

I don’t know why my comment was deleted, but I just have to say again that this is really an off brand version of the original...the plot was changed in a way that felt awkward and forced (tribute..really?) the original beginning of the story was much more convincing, and in the parts and sections that were changed there were so many errors that it was distracting. I recommend reading the original “Deimos alpha of alphas.” it is much better.

Pinky Kumawat

it's good

Reader-099242

I just finished this book in two days. I didn’t realize it was ongoing. how often does the author update?

Claire Domney

when will this be complete

Amanda Caruana

I can't believe he dies!! I'm so sad, just as they were getting together in their relationship

Christinas Death

the to heros of this story are both such @$$ #*/$. I cand tetra through the first few chapters. the story is so painful to read. If someone else edited it to make it this way, change editors. The story had a great Idea but it got lost

Ashley Reid

please please please re-read before posting. have someone proofread it and catch the simple mistakes

Shannon Paterno

You write so beautifully! I am loving this book so much.I have read so many werewolf books and this one is written so differently,it is so good!💕

Christine M

I love love love how confident she is for not wanting to share. I’d do the same! go Luna! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

so in Deimos my salvation part 1, there is discussion of a garden she is so excited to see but knew nothing about. is this the same garden they already visited earlier in the book?

I’m enjoying this book. I love how the alpha female is protrayed in the book. It speaks to me!!

she’s was definitely selfish! she should have just been honest and asked him what he wants and if he would be ok if it did happen.

lord this chapter when she goes into heat a second time! 😩🤯

I love this book! Your writing is amazing. I think they need another 🙂. One thing I didn’t get was taking a chosen…because that child still wouldn’t have been the first born or anything so why not try with your mate again? Also I was trying to understand why he was worried about it. Was her and her mom both first born Alpha females? I totally stayed up all times of the night reading this so some stuff I just could wrap my head around😂.

my heart is broken right now! poor Deimos! 💔

lord I’m over crying, because he’s leaving her. 💔

Elle 🧿

In chapter “my salvation part 2” Theia seems to think she has done so much wrong. I understand what she did at the start, but they all got past this. So has she done something else wrong, that’s why her male seems so distant with her? Love this story 😊 and going to begin Phobos and Theia journey next 😊.

Tanja Murphy

Why is the Alpha female acting like a wimp?Why tolerate soooo much mistreatment even w/a bond?

she’s weak! but I feel like he will definitely make her stronger.

Reader-371843

noooooooooooo this cannot happen!!!! he can’t just die!!!! I am crying 😭

Angela Ormrod

amazing great story

aires

is the book complete or still ongoing? some of the comments confuse me. also, is book 2 a continuation of book 1, or another story for diff characters? thanks! 😊

kitty5127

but they haven’t been together years yet. she is only in her second heat since they met. so confused.

Web Bookworm

is this book finished? I cannot start another book where I am waiting on chapters 😂 too fast of a reader!

Naomi Nuñez

she need F-ing therapy 😒.

Reader-371843

loves this book!!!!!! reading Phobos now and super impressed that you are able to give it an entirely different feel!! xx

you got me reading and crying at the same time..... I love this story

Natasha Benedet

this book was soooo amazing I could not put it down. I had so many emotions and cried many times throughout the book both happy and sad tears. such a beautiful story with a happy ending. I would love to see more of their story develope possible bless them with a female and see her reign ❤. You are a fabulous author. the layers to the emotion and story were so deep unlike others that are just cheesy love stores laced with erotica. you could truely feel and understand their emotions. love love love.

Amy Tribou

RAGON IS COMPLETELY ANNOYING

Becky Walter

I’d reject him at the point of the story I’m at

I hope Cronus finds his mate eventually ❤️

Jessica Kulick

I haven't been able to stop reading this... well done to the author 😊 it is so good

Reader-371843

omg why??? why doesn’t she tell him???? love this book!!!

when are the New chapters coming? onze, twice a week?

Krystal A Beyal

I can't read this anymore. her lack of self respect is irritating.

Lucy Xiong

this is my favorite book by far!!!! the story, the catch, the love... sooooo goood!

Reader-745128

not trying to be a hater because I am enjoying the book just a little constructive criticism, but you should definitely get a few new adjectives besides softly and gently. also some new transition words besides as. like one paragraph had the word softly in it like 8 times that’s too much you should invest in a thesaurus

Female Alpha Skye

this story 💕💕💕💕💕

Lori Platz

she needs to reject his ass!

Katy Dospoy

I think I'm done. if this isn't going to end with Diemos waking and them coming back together I'm over it. it is dragging as it is and there are too many good stories to stay with one that is so depressing and droning

Shelbie Darr

this book is crazy

Sarah Walls

thanks for the update. it was very beautiful. I loved it. they are so cute together. such a lovely family they are becoming. can’t wait to read more.

Rayne

not me crying..

Jahnitra Ritchie

I’ve cried, I’ve laughed. I loved it!

Bri Winans

author you are once again breaking my heart!!!!! 💔💔💔

Kazoua Thao

Please continue more of this book. I love it and i'm sad it has ended.

Christine Reyes

🙄😒

Lisa Mehl

so disappointing 😒 would not recommend. don't waste your time

Reader-773691

I want to start out by saying, I love this book! I haven’t been able to put it down since starting it this past week. I do have one question. I apologize if I sound ignorant, but I would love to know how to properly pronounce all the characters names. I feel like I am prouncing them incorrectly. For example; Lumina, Deimos, Aragon, Elriam, Phobos and even Kal. Maybe I am overthinking it lol, but would really like to be sure I am saying them write while reading. Thank you in advance, I can’t wait to read the rest!

Jazmine Pratt

when I'd the next update?

Bonib2

I prefer the original version of this story Lizzy. I hope it is updated soon.

Naomi Nuñez

how the heck did I make it to 27 chapters and not realize she didn’t have a name 🥴😒😪😩

are we going to find out what the tattoos on Cronous's face symbolize?

Reader-459096

spoilers: I am liking the book so far but I don’t understand the time frame. As I read it doesn’t seem like much time has passed then all the sudden she says years. So it took them YEARS to mate? I don’t understand that. How did he hold his wolf back that long? I am just not understanding the passage of time. I wish when writing you could have talked about how long it had been.

I don’t think I have ever cried so much reading a book ❤️

Will there be another chapter posted this week or is the next upload for next week? thanks

Emily Passmore

You are tearing me apart inside and it just shows how much I've fallen for these characters. It breaks my heart then builds it back up again

Fatima

I absolutely love this story! But I have to say from what I've read so far, I like the original a lot more. The original had more rich of a language and writing style. This version seem very amateur like. At least that's my view

Dona Myers

I think I have cried, laughed & felt harder with this book than any other. Thank you for sharing your gift & I cannot wait to continue reading 🥰

Ami Mamaj' Sommerfield

yeah, I'm done with this. Can't stand a story with a woman who is supposedly strong, an Alpha, who cries at the drop of a hat. And a man who obviously doesn't deserve to have ANY woman, much less a strong female Alpha. Next story...

Gina

I would just like to say. I haven't been able to stop reading and I'm now crying at 4:15 am

Reader-014654

is it just me? why is there repeats ive been four of the same paragraph and it frustrates me

Reader-176458

please bring back the original book!! many commented the original is better?

Rachel Moye

I have been completely addicted!! 😍

I understand growth & getting to know one another but 3 yrs? Then he completely evades the “pups” question by blocking her out? Then when she opens up about wanting a family it states with minds wide open??? He said nothing he didn’t say why he shut her out. I’m sorry but he needs to put his big boy panties on & act like a man who actually wants his mate

Grace Dalley

Is this the same book as "Alpha of Alpha's"?

Neva Dat

ughhh y is she sooooo stubborn I mean u almost killed his child and he forgave u get over it

She's_Loved

Ch entitled "His Song" had me singing Fugees/Lauren Hill 🎶 Strumming my pain with his fingers Singing my life with words Killing me softly with his song

Casper35

i haven't even read the book and y'all are ruining it, y'all dummies your giving it away, i dont know if want to read it now

Julian Uzi

Love this book! Love you as well! 🌸🌸

Karen Childers

I’m loving this story…. the last 3 chapters have touched my heart with the love they have!!! 🥰

M W Z

Love this Story! !!!😘😘

I truly enjoy the story and that she did not put up with the “Chosen”. I wish Lumina would have found out about the tradition with him refusing and fighting against what he knew would destroy her. In the end, all I can say is I hope they will no longer be living separately but able to fully find their way back to each other.