The Alpha's Virgin Tribute Comments

  • Web Bookworm

    is this book finished? I cannot start another book where I am waiting on chapters 😂 too fast of a reader!

    06/19/2021 00:18

  • Kayla Swick

    I can't believe it's over! my heart aches because it's over with, but I am so happy for them. tears of joy for sure. they both went through so much heartache and I do believe that in the end, Deimos finally deserved her. at first, she was too good for him, but he proved over time just have much he loved her and needed her. I can't wait to continue Phobos' story and I definitely can't wait for Cronus' story. he was also a favorite of mine.

    06/19/2021 00:08

  • Miss Moondust

    I hope Cronus finds his mate eventually ❤️

    06/18/2021 21:19

  • Lori Platz

    she needs to reject his ass!

    06/18/2021 17:08

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    it was a great story, and I loved every beautiful word. I was hoping for an announcement of another pup for Diemos and Lumina though...

    06/18/2021 16:50

  • Lidiane Barros

    Beautiful

    06/18/2021 14:19

  • Lidiane Barros

    oh Liz thank you so much once again I love your writing… I hope we see a little girl coming soon on the epilogues and I am loving Phobos already! 🙏🏻❤️

    06/18/2021 14:19

  • B Beau L

    just reading the private BBQ part with Jace. is Ragon into men? sweet if he is. just wondering. also be lovely to see Elriam, Ragon and Jace with someone xxx

    06/18/2021 11:29

  • natasha wakeford

    loved it and so happy you e done another for phobo and theia xx

    06/18/2021 10:40

  • Nita

    Fantastic story totally enjoyed reading this! looking forward to reading Phobos & Theia story

    06/18/2021 05:59

  • Amy Tribou

    RAGON IS COMPLETELY ANNOYING

    06/18/2021 03:37

  • Angel Kowal

    This story is everything 💗 Thank you for writing such a beautiful heart wrenching love story! Now you can finally focus primarily on Phobos! lol 😘

    06/18/2021 03:03

  • Female Alpha Skye

    this story 💕💕💕💕💕

    06/18/2021 00:36

  • lizzylizard

    getting through a good portion of this and I realized I don’t even know the main characters name as I’ve only heard her be referred as “alpha, mate and Luna.” does she have a name??

    06/18/2021 00:21

  • Liv

    what happened to Theia? She’s suddenly gone.

    06/17/2021 16:47

  • Luna Liz

    ANNOUNCEMENT FOR NEW READERS: Please DO NOT unlock the 7th chapter ‘Pain of My Heart’ for it is a repeat chapter. I have been constantly trying to send it for editing but it has been rejected several times. The editors are waiting for me to complete the book to start on the editing process. Please be patient with me. I apologize for the inconvenience caused. Thank you for your love and support. Happy reading, Liz

    06/17/2021 13:03

  • Athena Turpin

    a repeat chapter.. how is that fair?

    06/17/2021 07:43

  • Ke'Londa Escalante

    this book has me crying so bad. why won't she just forgive him and move on?

    06/17/2021 00:42

  • Vickie Couch

    Why am I paying for a repeat chapter & this is just the beginning?

    06/17/2021 00:25

  • Shelley Sherwood

    lost track of the story waiting so long for the next chapter 🤦🏼‍♀️

    06/16/2021 19:30

  • Reader-574767

    I think this book is written in another language and then run through google translate into English. The grammar is quite jarring. I’m giving up

    06/16/2021 19:15

  • Liv

    “A friend in need” chapter - why doesn’t she reject him? this is so frustrating

    06/16/2021 17:36

  • Liv

    very disappointed with the “Seduction & Punishment” chapter when she sparred with the Kind Alpha. I expected more out of her fighting skills against him because she’s suppose to be the Alpha Female. So badass she sat in the second seat at the Alpha conference. I don’t even think the King broke out in a sweat.

    06/16/2021 16:55

  • Mama Khan

    I couldn't get through this book with all the grammar mistakes and the main character's attitude. I really tried, too.

    06/16/2021 14:34

  • Mary Alexander

    I am done reading since he died.

    06/16/2021 06:12

  • Animelover Calhoun

    waiting patiently

    06/15/2021 20:15

  • dr.penguin

    he died? well then

    06/15/2021 06:36

  • Kazoua Thao

    Please continue more of this book. I love it and i'm sad it has ended.

    06/15/2021 04:17

  • mobrandt112@yahoo.com

    I don't like her at all. At first, I felt bad for her but she's selfish and takes her anger too far to the extreme. She expects to be forgiven but can't forgive anyone else. She wants to be understood but won't try to understand anyone else. She is supposed to be a big bad alpha but she's a crybaby, cries about everything. She was a complete wimp during her pregnancy. Real women put on their "big girl" panties and work throughout their pregnancies. My ex didn't give a crap how tired or swollen I was. She was lucky to have a man that loves her and cares. I can't believe I'm reading this after the birth. I can't stand her.

    06/15/2021 02:22

  • Reader-134850

    wenn ich schon pro Kapital zahlen muss wäre es echt nett wenn die Kapitel nicht DOPPELT! wären!

    06/14/2021 05:47

  • Naomi Nuñez

    how the heck did I make it to 27 chapters and not realize she didn’t have a name 🥴😒😪😩

    06/14/2021 03:59

  • Prentella Wilkerson

    Agreed! I'm tired of being angry. Now I'm skipping chapters to find peace and change. Sure, I'll go back and read it but she goes to the extreme. She embrace and except the good, but lose her mind with the bad ways of their traditions. I agree that he needs to be punished but not completely broken.

    06/13/2021 19:18

  • Liv

    many repeated paragraphs and passages in the “would You be jealous” chapter

    06/13/2021 17:03

  • Reader-773691

    I want to start out by saying, I love this book! I haven’t been able to put it down since starting it this past week. I do have one question. I apologize if I sound ignorant, but I would love to know how to properly pronounce all the characters names. I feel like I am prouncing them incorrectly. For example; Lumina, Deimos, Aragon, Elriam, Phobos and even Kal. Maybe I am overthinking it lol, but would really like to be sure I am saying them write while reading. Thank you in advance, I can’t wait to read the rest!

    06/13/2021 16:54

  • Karina Jackson

    I have to say this has been such an amazing book. I couldn’t put it down, I cried, laughed, and imagined it all. Thank you for taking me away from reality. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    06/13/2021 14:09

  • Jessica Kulick

    I haven't been able to stop reading this... well done to the author 😊 it is so good

    06/13/2021 03:19

  • Margaret Kuntschik

    i have just started reading this book. So far I am enjoying it.

    06/13/2021 03:17

  • Lucy Xiong

    this is my favorite book by far!!!! the story, the catch, the love... sooooo goood!

    06/13/2021 02:17

  • Beckyboone1

    Do we ever find out what Jace wanted to talk to Lumina about right before her heat?

    06/12/2021 23:31

  • Jazmine Pratt

    when I'd the next update?

    06/12/2021 18:05

  • stacie williams

    I’ve finished ‘A God to His Knees’, is this the last chapter or is there more to come? Definitely will be moving into Phobos soon! enjoying your work immensely.

    06/12/2021 13:49

  • Reader-933003

    reading this is painful , started with good story line but grammar is awful, there no insight into their behaviour or back story, I’m done the grammar just makes it too difficult to read

    06/12/2021 01:05

  • Tracy Bramante Wojtaszek

    there is one more chapter?

    06/11/2021 19:42

  • Natasha Benedet

    this book was soooo amazing I could not put it down. I had so many emotions and cried many times throughout the book both happy and sad tears. such a beautiful story with a happy ending. I would love to see more of their story develope possible bless them with a female and see her reign ❤. You are a fabulous author. the layers to the emotion and story were so deep unlike others that are just cheesy love stores laced with erotica. you could truely feel and understand their emotions. love love love.

    06/11/2021 18:33

  • Julie Greenstreet

    wow thank you for this beautiful piece of work, never have I read a book that brought so many raw emotions forward , helping me release pent up emotions I never knew were within from a past betrayal. Thank you , please advise of other works of yours

    06/11/2021 15:12

  • Reader-745128

    not trying to be a hater because I am enjoying the book just a little constructive criticism, but you should definitely get a few new adjectives besides softly and gently. also some new transition words besides as. like one paragraph had the word softly in it like 8 times that’s too much you should invest in a thesaurus

    06/11/2021 14:07

  • Samantha Johnson

    Please do a book about Cronus he deserves a mate. I thought the one that looks like the chosen would be his mate.

    06/11/2021 05:04

  • Tasha Turner

    love this story

    06/11/2021 05:00

  • Samantha Johnson

    omg... You are brilliant for this book. It is beautiful!

    06/11/2021 04:58

  • Angel Kowal

    Luna Liz how long were Lumina and Deimos together before they consummated their mating bond and how long from there before she got pregnant? Timeframes are really important to me lol....Also waiting patiently for more chapters on Phobos.

    06/11/2021 01:06

  • Geli83

    loving this story so much.

    06/10/2021 21:53

  • stacie williams

    I really fell into this story and enjoyed the evolution of the relationships. one of my fav reads so far. this definitely too me on a emotional roller coaster.

    06/10/2021 19:33

  • Reader-675304

    I love this story!

    06/10/2021 18:16

  • Evelyn Kipple

    I love the name he gave her!! 🥰🥰🥰

    06/10/2021 18:13

  • Reader-200729

    Wow! I love your story!

    06/10/2021 16:25

  • raven Coleman

    Would u be jealous and my heart in pain are the same thing repeated

    06/10/2021 11:41

  • Robyn Elizabeth Dethloff

    chapter “ our farewell” has a entire section of many paragraphs that is double written the editors need to look at.... thank you

    06/10/2021 09:01

  • Saydi Hunter

    Hello Luna Liz! So I’m in love, and have already started PHOBOS! love it too! I had a question.. So Deimos never shared with us why he felt that him and Lumina were not ready for pups, thus her reasoning die thinking that he didn’t want them. I would just like a little more insight on why they went through what they did and almost lost their chances at having pups with the whole birth control pill! like what was his reasoning?

    06/10/2021 01:32

  • Katy Dospoy

    I think I'm done. if this isn't going to end with Diemos waking and them coming back together I'm over it. it is dragging as it is and there are too many good stories to stay with one that is so depressing and droning

    06/10/2021 00:28

  • Cloud

    this is a beautiful story you had me crying when he was stabbed and then the chosen one smh had my emotions all over the place…I was content with what happened to her. will there be an epilogue?

    06/09/2021 22:18

  • Michelle Reece

    I really love this book. I have never had so many emotions reading a book. Especially the chapter with the chosen in it.I found myself really upset. But why did he bring the chosen with him when she was given birth? He could have seen what the sex was and kept her at the other camp.And was he going to go through with it if she had a girl.

    06/09/2021 20:27

  • Kaye Morris

    it has been a year since I read this book as yet it still not finished and yet I'm paying again for an un finished book.... us this book ever goin to b done ??????

    06/09/2021 17:26

  • Naomi Van Santen

    when are the New chapters coming? onze, twice a week?

    06/09/2021 14:44

  • Taylor Holley

    loving this so far, slightly confused in this chapter how it went from ragon bursting in to Cronus taking her shopping tho? guessing was a name swap on accident

    06/09/2021 05:46

  • Reader-254912

    loved it great book

    06/09/2021 05:20

  • Hema Sookhoo

    great story

    06/09/2021 04:47

  • Rochelle Massey

    good book so far

    06/08/2021 23:02

  • Animelover Calhoun

    waiting patiently for more

    06/08/2021 22:34

  • Julie O'Connor

    I just used points to unlock a chapter that was identical to the chapter I read yesterday...... pain of my heart and would you be jealous

    06/08/2021 22:19

  • Tara Brown

    i purchased the whole thing. but im stopping now. cronos is gone. i dnt want to see diemos happy anymore . he was cruel.

    06/08/2021 21:36

  • Jahnitra Ritchie

    I’ve cried, I’ve laughed. I loved it!

    06/08/2021 18:07

  • Lisa Evonne Powers

    this is the same exact story of another book in reading. Did you write under a different name?

    06/08/2021 17:57

  • Kristen Dianne

    so like why do you have to unlock every chapter.. it’s annoying 💀

    06/08/2021 17:54

  • Becky Oloarte

    so it started good, it engaged me, however it quickly became repetitive, too repetitive for my taste, it makes the whole experience frustrating. I don't hate it by any means, but I'm not sure I'll finish it, It's becoming quite tiresome to read...

    06/08/2021 14:51

  • Reader-020316

    this is my first time crying to a level of sobbing because of a book after new moon and Harry potter book 7. this book is amazing so far.

    06/08/2021 07:27

  • Beverly Leech

    very good so far

    06/08/2021 06:09

  • Rayne

    not me crying..

    06/08/2021 03:09

  • Crystal

    is this book finished?

    06/08/2021 01:58

  • B Beau L

    sofa scene copies a bit of Bridgerton, Daphne and Simon bedroom scene where she gets what she wants from him 🙈 good though!

    06/08/2021 00:59

  • Christine Reyes

    🙄😒

    06/08/2021 00:14

  • Cheynne Zacharias

    I read 2 chapters back to back that were the exact same but written differently?

    06/07/2021 21:32

  • Lidiane Barros

    beautiful simply beautiful I love this book it make me cry so much but also laugh and angry so many emotions... so happy for them... I wanna a baby girl. i am not ready for the end. but want to see Elriam and Chronus mates

    06/07/2021 20:47

  • Reader-099242

    this last chapter was so amazing and everything I’ve been waiting for. their relationship has always been so special but after going through that really rough time, it makes this chapter so much more meaningful. I’m going to miss this book and these character

    06/07/2021 20:43

  • kitty5127

    but they haven’t been together years yet. she is only in her second heat since they met. so confused.

    06/07/2021 18:44

  • Kim Creamer

    This story is fabulous. It has all the ups and downs. I def would like to see Elraim and cronus mates.

    06/07/2021 16:10

  • Cristina Rivera

    you got me reading and crying at the same time..... I love this story

    06/07/2021 15:49

  • Sarah Walls

    thanks for the update. it was very beautiful. I loved it. they are so cute together. such a lovely family they are becoming. can’t wait to read more.

    06/07/2021 06:03

  • Bri Winans

    **!!**!**OKAY SPOIL ALERT. THIS COMMENT IS FOR PEOPLE WHO HAVE READ FAR INTO THE STORY**!*!*!!*!!!* I love her nickname for the chosen 'the female of sin' perfect name for the bitchface 🙄 I mean if she didn't like a total bitch at the end then I would have felt kind of bad for her considering she didn't really have a choice...... buuuuttt she ruined that. I am angry that the older females were STILL angry that she died after all of the hateful disrespectful things she said to her. like HELLO do you NOT know who she is??!!! she DESERVED to die!!!!!!!!!! yet they got angry with her??!! if that bitch talked to DEIMOS that way, they wouldn't have acted all angry!!!!!😠😠😠

    06/07/2021 05:54

  • Katie Lingefelt

    so I see people talking about an original version. is this story on this platform revised or is this a sequel? I really want to read but I don’t want to be confused.

    06/07/2021 05:27

  • Bri Winans

    author you are once again breaking my heart!!!!! 💔💔💔

    06/07/2021 03:13

  • Beckyboone1

    the latest chapter is beautiful! I am now reading through again. a random question...Will we ever find out why Ragon likes to take so many pictures of Lumina? Everytime I read that he has taken a picture it makes me laugh.

    06/06/2021 21:30

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    also how do I find the original version, is it on another platform?

    06/06/2021 18:25

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    so glad they are finding each other again!! why was he crying though, what's makes him so worried to come together?

    06/06/2021 18:14

  • Kelly Moffett

    How long hVe they been together? It seems a year but the last couple of chapters wording implies years

    06/06/2021 07:12

  • Bridgette Bastin

    When will the next update be due?

    06/06/2021 02:56

  • Bonib2

    I prefer the original version of this story Lizzy. I hope it is updated soon.

    06/05/2021 21:35

  • Melissa Lewis

    why is she torturing him. He made a mistake. she is really getting me mad.

    06/05/2021 17:00

  • kitty5127

    a Luna is equal to an alpha so why is she not acting like the alpha she is??

    06/05/2021 16:27

  • Dominique Bristol

    think God I though he was actually dead man, I'm so happy, why did the author do this she scared me to death

    06/05/2021 06:22

  • Elizabeth Stephens

    is there any way i could get my eyes on the original one that you had to remove please?? i started readin it online then got to chapter "who is she" n couldn't read it or further..... i honestly have to say I prefer how you were writin that one more than this one bein edited version

    06/05/2021 05:08
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