The Alpha's Virgin Tribute Comments

  • Cristina Rivera

    Perfection love love the ending thank you

    07/31/2021 03:26

  • miasiacheyenne

    this was the best ending I could have wished for this book! absolutely perfection! loved it

    07/31/2021 01:41

  • Miss Moondust

    I was so hoping that Deimos would finally have his redemption and be able to support Lumina to birth their second child. Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story Luna Liz.

    07/30/2021 20:55

  • Cassi1234

    This book was so beautifully written loved it! bye bye my Deimos and Lumina 🥺❤️

    07/30/2021 20:06

  • Wendy Thompson

    This book was definitely one of my all time favs!💕 🐺💕🐺💕 Thank you Luna for such a wonderfully written story. I will definitely search out more book’s authored by you🌸

    07/30/2021 17:40

  • Angel Kowal

    Luna have you beared babies of your own? Because your description of child birth is very realistic.

    07/30/2021 17:12

  • Carol Dionne

    Yessss! I love it 🥰 They finally have a girl in the family 💕

    07/30/2021 13:53

  • Female Alpha Skye

    😭😭😭😭so so good💕💕💕

    07/30/2021 10:39

  • Reesons

    It's so heartwarming to see how much they have grown as individuals, a couple and a family. So good to see Deimos vulnerable with his family. I enjoyed their story so much. It makes me eager to see Theia and Phobos' journey the more.

    07/30/2021 09:03

  • BexyCL

    My heart is swelled with pride!

    07/30/2021 05:05

  • MelB5

    OMG ❤️❤️❤️

    07/30/2021 01:38

  • Binge Reader

    This is just beautiful! I love the epilogues and will gladly read anything you write, whether it furthers this story or Phobos and Theia. You are a beautiful writer. There is so much depth and feeling to what you choose to share with your readers.

    07/30/2021 00:40

  • Vanessa

    Luna liz this ending was soo beautiful I cannot even put it into words!!! soo emotional it was perfect you are very talented!!!!

    07/29/2021 23:43

  • Michelle Vogt

    I never been an avid reader or who could sit and read for along period of time. You have completely changed me. There was so much eagerness that I couldn't put this down and I woke up wanting to read more. Thank you for this beautiful story.

    07/29/2021 22:58

  • Queen M

    Luna Liz you did it again. the perfect end to there journey. a little girl. I wonder what they will name her.

    07/29/2021 22:44

  • Nita

    omg! that’s a beautiful birth! 😍

    07/29/2021 22:41

  • rose

    Hello! I was hoping we’d get more updates on Theia and Phobos!! Waiting so long for updates is causing me to loose interest. Why is this book getting multiple prologues? It initially ended in a great place.

    07/29/2021 21:50

  • Kat Craneberry

    I’m getting a little frustrated with the repeated paragraphs and the names mix up.

    07/29/2021 13:04

  • Chinadoll

    BEST book ever. I enjoyed the reading so much! It's been a long time since I couldn't and didn't want to put this book down. I have loss sleep staying up reading. I give it TEN STARS! Great job Ms. Luna!! I have started PHOBO.

    07/29/2021 02:35

  • Sara Rastellini

    I'm highly disappointed strong my foot she can't even protect her pack, big talk no action. and I had such high hopes that have been dashed before the second chapter....

    07/28/2021 05:24

  • Sara Rastellini

    great another weak female heroine who can't resist a hot guy for more than a paragraph...

    07/28/2021 05:15

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I trying to get a feel for him not writing him off just as an asshole

    07/28/2021 04:02

  • Bella Jersey 2

    that had to be hard

    07/28/2021 03:53

  • Bella Jersey 2

    can’t wait to see how this goes

    07/28/2021 03:46

  • Bella Jersey 2

    who hurt her people and took advantage of the her absence? is there a traitor in the mix?

    07/28/2021 03:34

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I’m already liking this version better

    07/28/2021 03:23

  • Heather McFarland

    Very beautifully written. The characters came to life for me and there were plenty of moments that I cried along with them.

    07/27/2021 15:17

  • Luna Liz

    Hello my females ❤️ I just wished to inform you there is one last epilogue I shall put out and from there I shall publish a few DEIMOS POV chappies for you to indulge it so you can acquire a glimpse into his heart! I apologize I am not updating regularly TAVT because it is in a way complete and I am so occupied working on PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Hope you are enjoying TAVT! Thank you for your love and support 💕 Happy reading, Liz

    07/27/2021 12:01

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    their love has blossomed so strongly and Gio and Ira are a passionate couple, everything will right itself. But I would love to read another spicy scene between my favorite couple. and being wolves I can imagine an unquenchable lust, as well as many pups to come!!!

    07/24/2021 18:15

  • Kaley June Keeling

    The whole relationship between Deimos and her is like so messed up. I don’t see how this naturally unfolded, his change in character is way to abrupt, maybe it’s just because I don’t like him. She doesn’t act like a strong Alpha female, she doesn’t inspire me to feel like she’s strong or will accomplish much more. She’s more like a sad child, and I wish she would just reject Deimos and find a new mate, but I have a feeling that’s definitely not how the story will go. like he’s done nothing but embarrass, disrespect, and hurt her the entire time and we’re still supposed to like him and want them to be together? he treats her like a toy, like she’s just property to him, and now suddenly it has changed? we’re supposed to believe that he never actually had feelings for Theia? What was it all about after she attacked her then? Deimos dragged her up to the room and basically told her that he didn’t think she was worthy of being his Luna, and why the fudge was he all over her all the time if he didn’t actually like her and just wanted her to fill the Luna position? when he had already found his mate at that point? obviously that points to some kind of feeling even if it was an attatchment based off of what is most familiar to you (because they had grown up together, knew each other so long, even if that was all there was, that’s still an attatchment) so him saying all of that about how he never liked her doesn’t seem very true to me. or at the least it doesn’t seem to make sense the way it was written. it’s like Stockholm syndrome or something. every move he has made up until this point has been like some kind of power play where he demeans her and makes himself look like an asshole. I mean why would the other wolves in the pack just watch as he treats his Luna/mate that way? she’s basically their queen and he’s the king I get that but like are you going to like a king that just treats the queen like trash everyday in front of everyone? why do people respect him? what’s his redeeming qualities here? his jealousy? his possessiveness!? this isn’t sexy, this isn’t a love story, it’s just really sad.

    07/24/2021 16:51

  • Cierra Black

    I absolutely love the rawness of this book. I wouldn’t change a thing....😘

    07/23/2021 01:48

  • Traci Landry

    Let’s see if this comment actually stays up. I am really trying to stick this one out since I purchased it, but Lumina has got to be one of the most unlikeable females I have ever read. She is stubborn, immature, and just plain petty for most of the book. This is not at all the story I expected for an “Alpha” Female. As much as I would like to read Phobos because he intrigues me, I just feel like it will be a regurgitated version of this story.

    07/22/2021 19:00

  • Anna Yocum

    I started reading this book because of Phobos. I kept trying to understand how your style is so different from other authors. I MIGHT have an idea - the book doesn't relay the events from the main character's point of view, it rather relays the impressions and feelings of the main character regarding those events. Very interesting.

    07/22/2021 18:05

  • Red

    Love this book, Luna Liz! 💚🍀 I can't get enough of this story and your writing style is wonderful. Keeps me wanting to read more. I have never been as engrossed with a book as much as I am with this one. Thank you for this amazing book. 💚💚🍀🍀🍀

    07/22/2021 03:11

  • Adrianna Beans

    hi Luna Liz i have read both Deimos and this one and i have a few questions. how does ageing work for them? i know in Phobos, Deimos is 18 early on and time passes, but how old is he when he meets Lumina? and how old is she at the beginning? love ya Luna

    07/21/2021 21:27

  • Paula Lewis

    love your stories! I can’t wait to read them all

    07/21/2021 20:20

  • QueenKae

    Will we find out more about what her friend the doctor wanted? He said he wanted to talk to her about something but some drama happened shortly after. I think she went into heat maybe 🤔.

    07/21/2021 09:41

  • Tina Brooks

    I love your story so far.

    07/20/2021 22:08

  • Sky💕

    Ira and Gio story? I love your stories! Not every relationship start’s off as a fairytale. Sometimes you have to go through the hard stuff first to get to your fairytale ending. I appreciate you as a Arthur! Deimos is one of my favorite characters, I understood him. 💖💖💖

    07/20/2021 03:34

  • Jennifer Lopez C

    Hey Luna Liz in make a wise decision chappy. you have the same paragraph twice. Where Deimos is wanting a tribute and Elriam is willing to battle for her. Just wanted to let you know. Love your books I am retreading while I am waiting for i updates on the two❤️

    07/20/2021 03:05

  • Vicky Starbuck

    wish I could open more chapters:(

    07/20/2021 02:06

  • Sky💕

    yay, Gianna and Gio! ❤️ Honey Kal knows he loves his daddy! Lumina just cared him 😂. Gianna and Kal as mates? lol Already plotting! 😂

    07/20/2021 01:37

  • Victoria Meaney

    I love this book I have read it on Hinoval and it's called Deimos(alpha's of alpha's)

    07/20/2021 01:13

  • Samantha

    I’m reading TAVT and Phobos semi-concurrently and just realized my major confusion with the two stories…isn’t the oldest male (or female in TAVT) typically the Alpha? Phobos is Deimos’ older brother so do we find out why Phobos winds up not being the Alpha of Alphas? L.o.v.e the stories so far but just haven’t been able to wrap my head around that. Thank you for any clarification!😊

    07/19/2021 21:03

  • Ashley Reid

    she wants to have sex but she runs whenever he tries to initiate? I am confusion.

    07/19/2021 16:24

  • Bonnie

    this book is such a rollercoaster of emotions.

    07/18/2021 23:19

  • Reader-119061

    OMG!! I totally forgot about the epilogue and was just so catch up in Phobos and Theias stories. Loved the extra chapters!!!

    07/18/2021 20:01

  • YanyRose

    I’ve been so involved with Theia and Phobos that I forgot about Deimos’ sexiness!! 😍 thank you Luna Liz! you keep us happy!!

    07/18/2021 19:53

  • Booklover99

    Hey Luna 😘 I am waiting patiently for the next epilogue. I really love your book sooo much like I have no words to express myself. You write so emotionally that I feel it in my heart. I loved how the characters developed and how strong the female character is. I have read your book twice and I cannot stop myself from reading again. Pleasee update TAVT ASAP. I am dying 😩

    07/16/2021 23:52

  • Melissa Cotis

    wait…so he is for real dead?

    07/16/2021 06:21

  • Jennifer Lopez C

    what is the name of the next book?

    07/16/2021 04:21

  • Reader-104306

    I’m sorry bus she’s so weak, just fight, bloody kill them, she’s all bark and no biteffs

    07/15/2021 13:14

  • Sarah-jane Wilson

    I think Cronus' mate should be the warrior that she took that looked like the chosen. 🤔

    07/15/2021 09:49

  • Fiso Tusitala

    next chapter plz awesome thanks

    07/15/2021 04:47

  • Ocey

    That line at the end of Epilogue Part II ,

    07/14/2021 09:09

  • Ineedallthebooks

    I can't believe I wasted time (and money) on this drivel. I was drawn in by the allure of a strong female alpha. I expected her to be challenged by her alpha mate, but would stay true to her inherent alpha-ness. Instead I get a character that is weak, cries, and cannot find the strength within herself to help herself. I can't even say the premise was good because I could get myself to continue reading. On top of that, the grammar is awful. I understand this is a forum for aspiring writer... but the small amount of this I could read was painful.

    07/14/2021 06:52

  • Devin Dagbjorn

    lots of weird sentences. Example: Closing my eyes shut. Do you ever close something open????

    07/13/2021 19:11

  • NurseRatchet

    Enough is enough! I know the whole chosen mate thing was a slap in the face, extremely hurtful! So either leave or forgive him! This man is suffering and he clearly loves her dirty drawers. At this point, she’s just being spiteful and petty. Not a good look at all!

    07/13/2021 17:41

  • Ashley Reid

    why is it both alphas and both betas are taking a long trip? who will watch over the pack? do they not have mind link?

    07/13/2021 03:17

  • Desteni Myers

    Does she have a name or is she just called mate, luna, and Alpha throughout?

    07/13/2021 00:15

  • Namita Sycz

    Is this book competed?

    07/12/2021 17:20

  • Angel Lee Blackwell

    so far I like it

    07/12/2021 17:10

  • Sarah-jane Wilson

    bit annoyed with her! she says why did he not just once choose her over his pack but he did he chose to take the silver knife that was meant for her in Italy. surely there is no greater sacrifice he could have given?

    07/12/2021 15:26

  • XO_XV

    💔

    07/12/2021 05:47

  • XO_XV

    OMG!!!!

    07/12/2021 04:41

  • Sky💕

    I loved this book! I went from not liking Deimos to loving him. There was so much growth with him and I loved every bit of it. Growth as a man, as a father, and a lover ❤️. Let me head on over to read Phobos and Theia’s story. Hands down one of my favorite stories! 💞

    07/12/2021 01:52

  • Sky💕

    Ok. I like Thiea now lol. And I’m here for Lumina and Thies’s friendship! ❤️

    07/12/2021 00:42

  • Kitty W

    wut picture?

    07/11/2021 23:46

  • Reader-720443

    he matures a lot throughout the book and she just doesn’t 🤦🏽‍♀️

    07/11/2021 22:56

  • Sharla Pearce

    so in Deimos my salvation part 1, there is discussion of a garden she is so excited to see but knew nothing about. is this the same garden they already visited earlier in the book?

    07/11/2021 21:01

  • Kitty W

    y is the words repeated several times, its throwing the story off

    07/11/2021 20:31

  • Angel Last

    hmmm

    07/11/2021 13:27

  • Ashley Pacheco

    wait so deimos really does die?

    07/11/2021 07:00

  • Reader-009082

    so wait did he have sex with the chosen or did he just choose her with the intent to have sex if the child was not a boy?

    07/11/2021 06:35

  • Sky💕

    Deimos! 😩💞

    07/11/2021 00:51

  • Sky💕

    My heart breaks for Deimos. I don’t like the tradition but she could have handled it better. But because she couldn’t forgive him and move on and chose to break him, now he has to deal with his pack. She wanted him to forgive her for what she did but couldn’t do the same.

    07/10/2021 19:15

  • Meghan wohlscheid

    the way he treats her! I just started reading this story but so sad

    07/10/2021 11:57

  • Sky💕

    Just throw her away! I can’t stand her now! 😩

    07/10/2021 03:18

  • Nur Lights

    I love it

    07/10/2021 01:29

  • Katheryn Murry

    so far love it

    07/09/2021 21:03

  • Amanda Caruana

    I can't believe he dies!! I'm so sad, just as they were getting together in their relationship

    07/09/2021 09:21

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    07/09/2021 04:30

  • Tilly Lueloff

    skylyn just read till the end trust me

    07/09/2021 03:19

  • Sky💕

    I’m starting not to like her! I don’t like how she’s handling this. That is not just your child it’s his as well. And she was wrong for what she did at birth.

    07/09/2021 02:12

  • Sky💕

    She is a hypocrite! And I don’t like how she’s treating him.

    07/09/2021 01:45

  • Taurica Davis

    is there a way to just buy the whole book at once? I love what I’ve read thus far.

    07/09/2021 00:08

  • MaryRosa

    so damn good. one of the best stories I’ve ever read hands down. please never stop writing! you have a gift, writer!

    07/08/2021 19:50

  • Reader-593542

    love it just wish I knew how to make more points to read more. new app for me

    07/08/2021 16:15

  • Sky💕

    why is my comment going away after I post it! 😩

    07/08/2021 09:52

  • Ish Ming

    omg I’m a newbie and i love this book so far! I cannot put it down. i need to cook dinner. 😭

    07/08/2021 09:09

  • Leisa Tapsell

    omg I swear these 2 have bipolar, it’s actually getting ridiculous

    07/08/2021 08:41

  • Shade

    Only six chapters in and loving this story!

    07/08/2021 02:54

  • Miss L

    I’m on chapter 13 - A Friend In Need - I just noticed I haven’t read Luna’s name yet. Do we know her name or is that something that comes up later? No spoilers please. I’m just curious if I missed it. She is always referred to as ‘Alpha’ ‘Luna’ or ‘Mate’ always a title with no name.

    07/08/2021 02:33

  • Ashley Reid

    please please please re-read before posting. have someone proofread it and catch the simple mistakes

    07/08/2021 01:44

  • Ashley Reid

    on chapter 3 and although the plot is enticing, it’s poorly written. the writer flip flops between present and past tense verbs and expounds on unnecessaries. I’m still interested in the book but be cognizant of the way you write. no matter still a good read

    07/08/2021 01:36

  • Sky💕

    lord she done got with both the brothers now! 😂

    07/08/2021 00:21

  • Jazmine Pratt

    is this book finished now or will there be another update? *ps I loved it*

    07/08/2021 00:03

  • Sky💕

    aww, I’m going to miss Gio and Gianna and the pack. 😢❤️

    07/07/2021 23:59

  • Tina Shelton

    I loved this book. It kept me intrigued. I didn't get bored at all. I would read until i fell asleep. Great job on this one. Can't wait to read the one with his brother. Has it been written and posted yet?

    07/07/2021 12:17

  • QueenKae

    I love this book! Your writing is amazing. I think they need another 🙂. One thing I didn’t get was taking a chosen…because that child still wouldn’t have been the first born or anything so why not try with your mate again? Also I was trying to understand why he was worried about it. Was her and her mom both first born Alpha females? I totally stayed up all times of the night reading this so some stuff I just could wrap my head around😂.

    07/07/2021 00:43
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