The Alpha's Virgin Tribute Comments

love story

Ira and Gio story? I love your stories! Not every relationship start’s off as a fairytale. Sometimes you have to go through the hard stuff first to get to your fairytale ending. I appreciate you as a Arthur! Deimos is one of my favorite characters, I understood him. 💖💖💖

Janna Clark

he is bipolar

Reader-270720

Sandra I totally agree with you . the grammar is oh so poor .

it’s such a beautiful story. I m so lovin it. weird name but great story.

Shade

Only six chapters in and loving this story!

Hello! I was hoping we’d get more updates on Theia and Phobos!! Waiting so long for updates is causing me to loose interest. Why is this book getting multiple prologues? It initially ended in a great place.

Cassia Johnston

Has Deimos really died? 💔💔 I can’t wait to find out!!

lost track of the story waiting so long for the next chapter 🤦🏼‍♀️

I’ve finished ‘A God to His Knees’, is this the last chapter or is there more to come? Definitely will be moving into Phobos soon! enjoying your work immensely.

Reader-574767

I think this book is written in another language and then run through google translate into English. The grammar is quite jarring. I’m giving up

Theresa Parent

I love the story here. did anyone else get super confused with the time jumps? did I miss it saying that it was jumping ahead?? I'm not mad about it at all I just got confused lol I kinda like that it takes them time to become a couple. to accept the bond. in most books they accept the bond quickly and move on. i like that it's essentially saying it took them time to accept it and even more to mate. this is a good read! I'll def be looking for more of your work!

Luna Liz how long were Lumina and Deimos together before they consummated their mating bond and how long from there before she got pregnant? Timeframes are really important to me lol....Also waiting patiently for more chapters on Phobos.

Queen M

Thank you Luna Liz…I feel whole.

Samantha Burnige

An absolutely amazing read. I enjoyed every last sentence in this book and I cant wait for Phobos King of beasts 😍.

Queen M

Luna Liz you did it again. the perfect end to there journey. a little girl. I wonder what they will name her.

omg! that’s a beautiful birth! 😍

lord she done got with both the brothers now! 😂

Hi Liz, why is this book of Deimos also named, the Alpha’s virgin tribute? did the chapters change somewhere? or is it all the same, because the first book of Deimos I have all chapters unlocked, until you changed it to the dark cover and I had to unlocked only the new chapters, I am just a little confused. Thanks

xlaurawr94x

I’m quite devestated with what happened to deimos. Iv cried. I don’t think I want to continue the story 😔

Tabitha Vickers

I am breathless. You words move me so much. This story is beautiful. Thank you. I am reading Phobos, King of Beasts & I desperately wait for each chapter. What an amazing author you are. Congratulations.

Rose SB

Don’t trust Deimos! What happened to the love of his life, Theia?

Christy Marie

About to read about it now

omg….Deimos 😢💔

Clarice Doctor

this story is like reading poetry. you are so elegant in your writing style and beautiful deceptions of the depth of love. thank you for writing with such fire and grace.

Cass Birch

best decision I made today was taking the day off work so I could read this book. I loved it, and that ending! 🥰🥰🥲🥲 can't wait to start reading Phobos. You're an amazing story teller, thank you for sharing 💕

Astridoll Tips

I’m waiting for Phobos sooooo impatiently

dr.penguin

he died? well then

xmistery2

why doesn't she just reject him then, go be with Cronus girl!

Cassi1234

This book was so beautifully written loved it! bye bye my Deimos and Lumina 🥺❤️

Reader-254912

loved it great book

many repeated paragraphs and passages in the “would You be jealous” chapter

Evelyn Kipple

I love the name he gave her!! 🥰🥰🥰

Bonnie

this book is such a rollercoaster of emotions.

Samantha Johnson

Please do a book about Cronus he deserves a mate. I thought the one that looks like the chosen would be his mate.

Tasha Turner

love this story

I'm struggling a bit as it feels so different as it's not as worded as the original the alphas Virgin tribute (not the Deimos book)

Hey Luna Liz in make a wise decision chappy. you have the same paragraph twice. Where Deimos is wanting a tribute and Elriam is willing to battle for her. Just wanted to let you know. Love your books I am retreading while I am waiting for i updates on the two❤️

oh gosh I'm reading this for the third time now...from beginning and there is loads more added to the fourth or fifth chapter. it adds more to it definitely, which I like / love...but I'm feeling like I'm missing out if I skip bits now.

Rose SB

You’re repeating paragraphs and it’s annoying.

Queen M

I so in love with this story and can’t wait to read the next novel...

Vicky Starbuck

wish I could open more chapters:(

Zamantuma Maphumulo

I was enjoying Alphas of Alphas and Author has made certain chapters unavailable. This book is the same with a few changes.

BexyCL

Luna Liz, I bow to you as a humble female. I can’t express the inspiration you’ve given me these past days. I respect and love you. ❤️

Sarah Walls

This is such a great book. I just caught up. You are doing a great job. Can’t wait to read till the end. In the mean time, I’m going to check out Phobos book.

Angie Williams

this is the same story as Deimos( alpha of alphas ) right?

Tabbydawn Louthen

love the book good job

she sure did 👀.......

Bella Jersey 2

that had to be hard

So much excitement when I realised a new chapter was up. I’m loving how their relationship is constantly evolving and changing x

Stephanie Diekmann

seriously?. you make her cowerdous!!! plus, theres no happy ending here... seriously disapoinred

finally! 🙌🏾💞

Melissa Lewis

why is she torturing him. He made a mistake. she is really getting me mad.

Kim Creamer

This story is fabulous. It has all the ups and downs. I def would like to see Elraim and cronus mates.

Ishmail ABI Alpha

I think this is the most exciting novel site I've ever seen.

Tracy Bramante Wojtaszek

there is one more chapter?

Animelover Calhoun

waiting patiently for more

the bloody battle...lumina is mentioned and her parents waving to her. is this a mistake?

Ke'Londa Escalante

this book has me crying so bad. why won't she just forgive him and move on?

is there a second story to this book or is it still being updated? I really liked this story, so I got there's more... even other books for his brother and childhood friend

Animelover Calhoun

waiting patiently

Bella Jersey 2

I’m already liking this version better

Mary-ann Abeñon

nice story

Pamela Moores

Deimos's immature and asshole behavior is pissing me off. wait years to have sex? Years before finally mating?! Now he's forcing her to wait even more years on having a child? He's not trying to be thoughtful or caring of Lumina, he's gaslighting her and being emotionally manipulative and abusive

This story is everything 💗 Thank you for writing such a beautiful heart wrenching love story! Now you can finally focus primarily on Phobos! lol 😘

Shelby Mckay

why does she not have a name…

what happened to Theia? All the sudden she’s a non issue? maybe it’s just me

Neva Dat

I wanna find out about this necklace she said she wasn’t ready for 🤫

Bri Winans

I think Ragon is my favorite character lmao I love him!

it’s annoying already why it took him so long to mate her

“A friend in need” chapter - why doesn’t she reject him? this is so frustrating

Sonia Punja

Hi Liz when is the next update ?

Tara Brown

i purchased the whole thing. but im stopping now. cronos is gone. i dnt want to see diemos happy anymore . he was cruel.

I’m sorry bus she’s so weak, just fight, bloody kill them, she’s all bark and no biteffs

Kylie Sky

what’s the name of the book with Phobos?

Ashley Reid

why is it both alphas and both betas are taking a long trip? who will watch over the pack? do they not have mind link?

it’s great story so far…. and I’m loving it.

ANNOUNCEMENT FOR NEW READERS: Please DO NOT unlock the 7th chapter ‘Pain of My Heart’ for it is a repeat chapter. I have been constantly trying to send it for editing but it has been rejected several times. The editors are waiting for me to complete the book to start on the editing process. Please be patient with me. I apologize for the inconvenience caused. Thank you for your love and support. Happy reading, Liz

Maricarmen Rivera

Loved this story ❤

That line at the end of Epilogue Part II ,

Saydi Hunter

Hello Luna Liz! So I’m in love, and have already started PHOBOS! love it too! I had a question.. So Deimos never shared with us why he felt that him and Lumina were not ready for pups, thus her reasoning die thinking that he didn’t want them. I would just like a little more insight on why they went through what they did and almost lost their chances at having pups with the whole birth control pill! like what was his reasoning?

Beverly Leech

very good so far

it was a great story, and I loved every beautiful word. I was hoping for an announcement of another pup for Diemos and Lumina though...

I’m over crying like a baby. Man, these last couple of chapters had me so 😭 and sad. I’m beyond happy 💞🙌🏾.

She is a hypocrite! And I don’t like how she’s treating him.

Miss L

this is such a great book!!! I’m loving the character dynamics

Angel Last

decent so far

Reader-180778

this book 🥰

Hema Sookhoo

great story

Esiquia Luna

Can we get a Cronus book also??

Natasha Murphy

when will the book be released

Patricia Grizzard Seckora

interesting and worth it

Cassi1234

loved this book! so great!! 🙌🏼🙌🏼

Hello my little wolves ❤️ DEIMOS POV chapters are finally published!! I have gifted you all a straight up ten chapters containing the development of his character and feelings at one go so you do not need to wait and can truly savour his pov! The first POV chappy is ‘The Deadly Bond’ and the last is ‘Lumina, my salvation’ With this TAVT is officially complete, I wished to say thank you to every sweet and kind wolf who has read and enjoyed my work from the beginning to the end. Thank you, truly 🙏🏽💕 If you wish to read more of my works please do show some love and support to PHOBOS (King of Beasts) here on AnyStories! Hope you shall enjoy Phobos’s and Theia’s journey 🥰 Happy reading, Liz

I swear I just cried on the last sentence I have been waiting for another little ond hopefully 💝🎀👧 - On a side note because I am addicted to your bookes I read the beginning of this one to compare with Deimos I must confess I prefer how the original started… dying for the next update of Phobos thank you for this epilogue ❤️❤️

wut picture?

Mey Volcy

there's no wall 🙄! I thought she was on a piano. when did she get on a wall?

Karina Jackson

I have to say this has been such an amazing book. I couldn’t put it down, I cried, laughed, and imagined it all. Thank you for taking me away from reality. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Shelby Heaton

Can we talk about the his Chosen for a second? I am emotionally invested by this point and I was crushed right along with her! I really think it was a mistake making their pup male. The story line could have had a better development with a real choice on what to do with the Chosen once a strong female pup was born. I just feel like that really played right into his hands there. Like a "See, you don't have to worry about it. It turned out for the best anyway." Instead we have a long drawn out process of forgiveness on something that didn't actually take place but the idea of it did.

I love this story so far but she cries a lot. I need her to pull it together and cry on the inside sometimes. This book has me going at it! lol 🙂😭🙂😭🙂😭😡😭😭😭😭